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Zalphon
post Jun 3 2010, 02:00 PM
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Prologue

Five hundred years after the Oblivion Crisis...

Many years ago, the Champion of Cyrodiil stopped the daedra from invading. The hordes of infernal dremora and vicious daedroth. When he left Mankar Camaron's Paradise, people viewed him as a hero. However, he had become much darker.

He then went to the Shivering Isles in search of power. When he returned, any traces of humanity had left him. In his demented rage, he slaughtered the Blades, and began a crusade of crimes. However, an Argonian assassin stopped him.

After that, the Argonian and his Khajiiti companion came to the ruins of Morrowind to regain their thoughts. For after they killed the Champion, their long-lost Dunmeri friend arrived in a new-found body of a lich. They killed him and ever sense held a deep sense of remorse.

For some time they stayed in the blackened remnants of the Dunmeri homeland, but left. The despair that filled their hearts from seeing the remains of where they met their friend caused them to leave. They were never seen again.

There is rumor in the streets of the Imperial City of a daedric cult with the power to weaken, or even destroy the seal from our world and theirs. The Champion of Cyrodiil rose up before, I must rise up now. After the Mede empire fell, a daedra-worshipper conquered Tamriel.

When I was a squire, they taught me the skills of swordplay, ettiquette, archery, and restoration. Now I guess I'll have to put my skills to the test. I must walk in his footsteps, but I must remember the teachings of the Dunmer, the Argonian, and the Khajiit.

The time is near, I must stop time from repeating itself...


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post Jul 3 2010, 10:54 PM
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Chapter Nineteen: The Shrine of Malacath

After I went to sleep that night, all I saw was Evangeline being tormented by Aurorans. Them just cackling maniacally. I tried to help her, but it was as if a spell were cast on me to keep me paralyzed. The tears rolling down her cheeks, like the Niben River.

Quick-Strike awoke me. "We must continue walking," he commanded. "It is important." Obediently, I put on my armor and we started walking towards the Shrine of Malacath. The head of the shrine was gone, so it depicted only a cracked, gray humanoid with a hammer.

I knelt, "What must I do to earn your favor, Trinimac."

"That is a name I haven't been called by in eons," the Echoing Voice laughed. "The Champion of Nirn, wow I am impressed. If you succeed in my duty, I will send one-thousand ogrim titans to assist you in the Deadlands."

"What is the test?" I asked.

"You are a Dunmer," he growled. "Defeat my Ogrim Titan with only your hands and you shall have my favor."

A giant, green, bloated ogre-like creature came from behind the shrine. I threw down my sword and punched at it. It sent ripples through the fat of the creature and I looked up. A fist came into my face. The blinding-blow left me just that, blinded and stunned. I wildly kicked and to my surprise, hit it in the groin.

"Me kill," the Ogrim Titan roared. "Me kill pointy-ears." I jabbed at its chest. I whispered a prayer to Stendarr as I punched. When I pulled back, I saw a hole through the Ogrim's chest. It grabbed where its heart should've been and fell to its knees.

"You're the strongest Dunmer I've met since the Nerevarine," Malacath said in amazement. "The ogrim titans will be waiting."

I nodded respectfully and bowed. "The nearest shrine is about a week's travel, it's Hircine's," Quick-Strike said. J'skooma and I nodded. By time we stopped, we saw the Serpent in the sky. We stopped in a forest-clearing. My mind was soon victim to sleep. Then I awoke and heard them talking.

"J'skooma, do not worry," Quick-Strike calmed his friend down. "Kalian grows stronger with each passing day. He'll needn't fear Dagon by time the Trials of the Champion are complete. I can sense his power growing."

"J'skooma can hear movement," the Khajiit warned. "Be ready." I looked around and saw a Breton in torn, black robes and dirty hair.

With haste I stood up and hugged the female Breton. "Evangeline," I exclaimed with joy."

"How did you escape?" Quick-Strike inquisitvely probed. "The Auroran Guardians are very powerful."

"I learned secrets of mysticism I never thought possible." she replied. "How long was I gone?"

"A few days," I answered. Tears streamed down my face. Tears of joy, she was back.

"Only a few days?" Evangeline asked. "It has been years, I was beaten by the Aurorans for fifteen or more years." She lit a torch and showed her face. Her hair was graying, her skin showed more signs of age, she had dark circles and bags around her eyes.

"E-E-Evangeline," I whispered. "How did they do that to you."

"Kalian," she smiled. "For fifteen years I have suffered. I am free. My bones have been shattered, my skin has been sliced open, I have lived on rats for years."

"J'skooma thinks Evangeline needs to rest," J'skooma blurted. "She looks tired."

"In a bed?" She asked enthusiastically. "Or on the soft grass. I have slept on cold-stone for over a decade, anything would be an improvement."

"The grass," Quick-Strike stated. "It's very soft."

The aged Evangeline looked to be about thirty or more years of age. The intensity of her age must have been done by the stress. Finally, she layed on the grass. I tried to say, "Good night." However, she was already asleep.

I layed next to her with a tear in my eye. They owed me a blood vendetta. They changed Evangeline from the meek girl I fell in love with, to the strong and enduring woman she is now. The love I felt for Evangeline was gone. I was no longer 'in love' with her, rather I 'loved' her, but there was a severe difference.

Sleep filled my mind again...


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Zalphon   Oblivion's Edge   Jun 3 2010, 02:00 PM
mALX   Yeah! It's a sequel !!!!...   Jun 3 2010, 07:16 PM
Verlox   That was actually a fairly good prolouge, and I wa...   Jun 4 2010, 01:58 AM
Zalphon   Chapter One: A Harbinger I walked blissfully down...   Jun 7 2010, 12:54 AM
mALX   A cliffhanger! Awesome Write Zalphon!   Jun 7 2010, 04:08 AM
Zalphon   Thanks, Malx. Did you like the red text to emulat...   Jun 8 2010, 12:12 AM
Zalphon   I think I may have a new antagonist. He is inspir...   Jun 9 2010, 01:02 AM
Nikaya   I think I may have a new antagonist. He is inspi...   Jun 29 2010, 11:43 AM
Zalphon   Chapter Two: The Assassin and the Wizard When I f...   Jun 9 2010, 01:52 PM
Acadian   I like that you are using the first person POV. T...   Jun 9 2010, 08:26 PM
Zalphon   Zalphon will always have a firm foothold. And we ...   Jun 10 2010, 12:35 AM
Zalphon   Chapter Three: The Gateway We walked for hours. ...   Jun 11 2010, 02:36 PM
Zalphon   Chapter Four: Oblivion When I entered the portal,...   Jun 12 2010, 04:25 PM
ureniashtram   How can you even kill a Daedra Prince? I mean kill...   Jun 13 2010, 08:53 AM
Zalphon   How do you destroy a daedric prince? The same way...   Jun 13 2010, 04:23 PM
ureniashtram   Zalph, Umaril ain't no Daedric Prince. He...   Jun 14 2010, 07:43 AM
Zalphon   Well in that case, by banishing them from Nirn and...   Jun 14 2010, 11:58 PM
Zalphon   Chapter Five: Innate Power I awoke from dead-slee...   Jun 16 2010, 12:21 AM
Acadian   Plenty of action here! Still weaving Zalphon ...   Jun 16 2010, 02:53 PM
ureniashtram   Not a bad idea! Yeah, not a bad idea at all....   Jun 16 2010, 02:55 PM
Zalphon   Noted Uriena. And don't worry Acadian. You d...   Jun 17 2010, 05:19 PM
Zalphon   My apologies readers, I am currently experiencing ...   Jun 18 2010, 03:13 PM
Acadian   No worries, been there, done that. :P There i...   Jun 19 2010, 02:53 AM
Zalphon   Chapter Six: The Necromancer When we left after m...   Jun 20 2010, 10:44 PM
Acadian   Good decision, Kalian!!!! WooHoo...   Jun 21 2010, 02:27 AM
Zalphon   This is ret-conned Evangeline, heh.   Jun 21 2010, 02:54 AM
Zalphon   Chapter Seven: The Tormented A knight in steel-ar...   Jun 21 2010, 04:34 AM
Acadian   What a fascinatingly motley band! Each a full...   Jun 22 2010, 02:22 AM
Zalphon   Baldur's Gate: Dark Alliance II? Sir Kalian...   Jun 22 2010, 08:24 AM
Zalphon   Chapter Eight: My Followers When I awoke, I heard...   Jun 22 2010, 09:06 PM
ureniashtram   Ah, yes. Fights between companions before their jo...   Jun 23 2010, 02:19 AM
Acadian   Thanks for the summary of your party make up. Nic...   Jun 23 2010, 03:14 AM
Zalphon   Funny isn't it? A Vampire and a Necromancer h...   Jun 23 2010, 04:58 AM
Zalphon   Chapter Nine: The Vampire's Tale The stars we...   Jun 25 2010, 09:30 PM
Acadian   Ah, more answers. And more flesh added to Kalin...   Jun 25 2010, 10:11 PM
Zalphon   Quick-Strike is a over five-hundred years old. An...   Jun 26 2010, 03:39 AM
Zalphon   Chapter Ten: The Old Code We rested in a nearby m...   Jun 26 2010, 08:44 AM
Acadian   Interesting background and creatively presented du...   Jun 26 2010, 03:39 PM
Zalphon   Yes, Acadian. Diablo 2 did have some of my though...   Jun 27 2010, 11:47 AM
Zalphon   Chapter Eleven: The Holy Grounds For weeks we stu...   Jun 27 2010, 03:23 PM
Acadian   I quite liked this. The Nine are the Nine, so reg...   Jun 27 2010, 07:11 PM
Zalphon   The Nine indeed are the Nine. However, you'd ...   Jun 28 2010, 01:19 AM
Zalphon   Chapter Twelve: The Champion of Nirn As I reached...   Jun 28 2010, 06:57 AM
ureniashtram   An interesting chapter. Aedra and all the Princes ...   Jun 28 2010, 09:09 AM
Acadian   Nicely done, Zalphon. I liked how the tests relat...   Jun 28 2010, 02:21 PM
Remko   I totally agree with Urianas. I like your ideas bu...   Jun 28 2010, 02:56 PM
Zalphon   Julianos was testing his heart, to see if he was t...   Jun 28 2010, 06:32 PM
Destri Melarg   First I just want to say that this is the best wri...   Jun 29 2010, 12:21 AM
Zalphon   I understand constructive criticism, and the secre...   Jun 29 2010, 01:42 AM
Zalphon   Chapter Thirteen: The Daedric Pilgrimage Begins W...   Jun 29 2010, 02:09 AM
Acadian   On the road and already under attack. More insigh...   Jun 29 2010, 04:08 AM
Zalphon   To be honest, I think this is my best story so far...   Jun 29 2010, 06:32 AM
Zalphon   Chapter Fourteen: The Map The sun was beginning t...   Jun 29 2010, 08:09 PM
Destri Melarg   Good description of the Explorer’s Guild banners o...   Jun 30 2010, 01:20 AM
Acadian   The rich detail you are now weaving in is great...   Jun 30 2010, 03:30 AM
Zalphon   By intricate, I did mean carved. Destri, I'll...   Jun 30 2010, 03:51 AM
Zalphon   Chapter Fifteen: The Shrine of Molag Bal When we ...   Jun 30 2010, 10:01 PM
Acadian   You have several wonderful characters here. In th...   Jul 1 2010, 03:02 AM
Zalphon   I actually was really sad to get rid of Adam. I r...   Jul 1 2010, 04:28 AM
Zalphon   Chapter Sixteen: The Shrine of Sanguine We walked...   Jul 1 2010, 09:17 AM
Acadian   This was wonderful! The task with Sanguine wa...   Jul 1 2010, 06:14 PM
Zalphon   Thank you, I wonder what Malx will say when she ge...   Jul 1 2010, 06:51 PM
ureniashtram   I expected a bit more from the God of Debauchery (...   Jul 1 2010, 07:03 PM
Zalphon   The ale was so powerful it'd kill any mere mor...   Jul 1 2010, 08:54 PM
ureniashtram   Whoah, did I just read that one part right or have...   Jul 1 2010, 10:08 PM
Zalphon   Well, good thing I didn't name te priestess, h...   Jul 1 2010, 10:34 PM
Zalphon   Chapter Seventeen: The Shrine of Clavicus Vile Wh...   Jul 1 2010, 11:18 PM
Remko   Well done Z! I particularly like the hint at t...   Jul 2 2010, 01:17 PM
Acadian   You are doing a nice job, and I'm pleased to s...   Jul 2 2010, 06:18 PM
Zalphon   Chapter Eighteen: The Shrine of Meridia When we ...   Jul 2 2010, 08:35 PM
Acadian   Ev-Evangeline is gone. :O I'm heartbroken...   Jul 3 2010, 02:17 PM
Zalphon   I was expecting one sentence of sadness and a lot ...   Jul 3 2010, 06:10 PM
Acadian   To grow old in love together is to experience neve...   Jul 4 2010, 02:31 AM
Zalphon   It's really enlightening on their past since m...   Jul 4 2010, 03:28 AM
Zalphon   Chapter Twenty: The Shrine of Hircine A long wee...   Jul 4 2010, 07:22 PM
Acadian   Kalian seems to believe his quest justifies the ch...   Jul 4 2010, 08:26 PM
Zalphon   Let me ask you this, would you take a life to save...   Jul 4 2010, 08:35 PM
ureniashtram   What the- You killed Evangeline Mortalitis, for ...   Jul 5 2010, 08:50 AM
Zalphon   Kalian was so depressed over what happened to Evan...   Jul 7 2010, 12:42 AM
Captain Hammer   Kalian was so depressed over what happened to Eva...   Jul 7 2010, 01:06 AM
Zalphon   Noted, Captain Hammer.   Jul 7 2010, 01:28 AM
Zalphon   Chapter Twenty-One: The Shrine of Sheogorath Whe...   Jul 7 2010, 07:04 AM
Acadian   Ahah! I knew if I whined enough, you would br...   Jul 7 2010, 04:01 PM
Zalphon   Did you not notice what Sheogorath called J'sk...   Jul 7 2010, 07:27 PM
Zalphon   Chapter Twenty-Two: The Shrine of Sheogorath II ...   Jul 8 2010, 12:44 AM
Acadian   Mania - nicely captured! Fun and crazy. Cl...   Jul 8 2010, 06:25 PM
Zalphon   Chapter Twenty-Three: The Shrine of Nocturnal I ...   Jul 8 2010, 07:13 PM
ureniashtram   Daedric Civil War, so original, right? Where...   Jul 9 2010, 02:34 AM
Zalphon   Actually no. I wasn't referencing an ingame b...   Jul 9 2010, 03:01 AM
ureniashtram   Then what, pray tell, are you mentioning? A story ...   Jul 9 2010, 03:12 AM
Zalphon   You mentioned some things, I'm not sure if the...   Jul 9 2010, 03:19 AM
Captain Hammer   I'm not seeing any real challenge here. Kalian...   Jul 9 2010, 03:36 AM
Zalphon   Nocturnal is awefully thankful of her subjects. D...   Jul 9 2010, 03:46 AM
ureniashtram   Sure, sure. Methinks is ok. Jar-Jar go away now. (...   Jul 9 2010, 03:53 AM
Zalphon   That was a bit before my time Urenia. I only came...   Jul 9 2010, 04:03 AM
Captain Hammer   There's more to the whole plot coupon thing. ...   Jul 9 2010, 04:56 AM
Zalphon   Chapter Twenty-Four: The Shrine of Peryite The t...   Jul 9 2010, 06:56 AM
Acadian   Nocturnal. Once again, Kalian's allies and th...   Jul 9 2010, 12:31 PM
Zalphon   Chapter Twenty-Five: The Tournament of the Nine Bl...   Jul 10 2010, 12:54 AM
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