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Zalphon
post Jun 3 2010, 02:00 PM
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Prologue

Five hundred years after the Oblivion Crisis...

Many years ago, the Champion of Cyrodiil stopped the daedra from invading. The hordes of infernal dremora and vicious daedroth. When he left Mankar Camaron's Paradise, people viewed him as a hero. However, he had become much darker.

He then went to the Shivering Isles in search of power. When he returned, any traces of humanity had left him. In his demented rage, he slaughtered the Blades, and began a crusade of crimes. However, an Argonian assassin stopped him.

After that, the Argonian and his Khajiiti companion came to the ruins of Morrowind to regain their thoughts. For after they killed the Champion, their long-lost Dunmeri friend arrived in a new-found body of a lich. They killed him and ever sense held a deep sense of remorse.

For some time they stayed in the blackened remnants of the Dunmeri homeland, but left. The despair that filled their hearts from seeing the remains of where they met their friend caused them to leave. They were never seen again.

There is rumor in the streets of the Imperial City of a daedric cult with the power to weaken, or even destroy the seal from our world and theirs. The Champion of Cyrodiil rose up before, I must rise up now. After the Mede empire fell, a daedra-worshipper conquered Tamriel.

When I was a squire, they taught me the skills of swordplay, ettiquette, archery, and restoration. Now I guess I'll have to put my skills to the test. I must walk in his footsteps, but I must remember the teachings of the Dunmer, the Argonian, and the Khajiit.

The time is near, I must stop time from repeating itself...


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post Jul 4 2010, 07:22 PM
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Chapter Twenty: The Shrine of Hircine

A long week's travel followed that night. Quick-Strike told me how I was distant, Evangeline also noticed it. J'skooma was even gloomy during our travels. He had no amusing conversations with cheese as we walked through the forests, instead he argued with himself.

When we reached the shrine, it was cracked, moss was growing, and it depicted a stag-headed man with a spear in his right hand and a dog in the other. "Hircine, it I, the Champion of Nirn," I called out. "What must I do to earn your favor?"

"Prove your skill in the hunt," his echoing voice invaded. "The most powerful prey, is the one with reason. Evangeline is your target. If you succeed, then I will send one-thousand were-beasts to aid you. As well as give you something else."

"Evangeline," I hissed. "You shall fall to my hand."

The woman walked towards me and kneeled. I was about to behead her, but for some reason I missed. I tried and tried, but every time had the same results. "Sanctuary spells," she girlishly giggled. "You'll not be killing me."

With a tear in my eye, I said a prayer to Arkay. My sword hit her neck, perfectly. A clean kill. "Impressive," Hircines' voice flattered. "My werewolves will aid you, but Kalian... Beware, I fought Zalphon hundreds of years ago. He almost banished me, but I used my werebears and werewolves. Remember, Kalian... You are the Champion of Nirn, but you are still semi-mortal." On the shrine appeared a furry-cuirass. The Savior's Hide.

I took off my breast-plate, chain-mail shirt, and cloth shirt. I put it on, took off the cloth shirt, put on the chain-mail shirt, and finally the breast-plate. A little itchy, but it would protect me from the spell-casters of Nirn. "The nearest shrine is that of Sheogorath," Quick-Strike insighted. "The Mad God can do amazing things."

I nodded. Night came when we found the abandoned city of Border Watch. Legend said that a plague of rats came, the sheep died, and flaming dogs fell from the sky. Being this close to the Shrine of Sheogorath makes sense that strange events would occur.

I headed for the inn and took a bed. Sleep came hastily, yet I awoke in the middle of the night to hear Quick-Strike and J'skooma downstairs.

"The High Watcher will want to meet us here at sun-rise," Quick-Strike sighed. "In the letter I recieved, he was most pleased about Kalian's progress."

"We should probably rest," J'skooma replied. "We needn't irritate the High Watcher." I let sleep consume me. When I awoke, the sun shined in my face. I heard three voices. I walked to the staircase. My two friends and a humanoid in black robes, with black boots, black gloves, and his hood up.

"High Watcher Magnus," Quick-Strike deeply bowed. "We are most sorry for this foul residence."

"J'skooma is deeply sorry," J'skooma said. "Forgive J'skooma."

"All is forgiven, Watchers," Magnus nodded. "I would like to say how well you've done with Kalian. I figured he wasn't the one of the prophecy. I do believe it's almost time to induct young Kalian into the Watchers."

"The Watchers hold many secrets," the Argonian verbally riposted. "He must complete the tasks set before him, first."

"Indeed, but perhaps I should give infuse his blood with the a fraction so small of the power of Aetherius it would seem non-existent."

"That may help," Quick-Strike agreed. "He should be asleep."

"He's not. I can sense his energy. He is up the stairs watching us," Magnus pointed. "Come down, Kalian."

Obediently, I came down. "What is thou will," I asked. "I will serve you until my dying breath, and even after if you so choose."

He pulled an eight-sided shard of his pocket. It glowed bright blue, almost blindingly so. The High Watcher put it to my chest and instantly I fell to the ground, unconscious...



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Zalphon   Oblivion's Edge   Jun 3 2010, 02:00 PM
mALX   Yeah! It's a sequel !!!!...   Jun 3 2010, 07:16 PM
Verlox   That was actually a fairly good prolouge, and I wa...   Jun 4 2010, 01:58 AM
Zalphon   Chapter One: A Harbinger I walked blissfully down...   Jun 7 2010, 12:54 AM
mALX   A cliffhanger! Awesome Write Zalphon!   Jun 7 2010, 04:08 AM
Zalphon   Thanks, Malx. Did you like the red text to emulat...   Jun 8 2010, 12:12 AM
Zalphon   I think I may have a new antagonist. He is inspir...   Jun 9 2010, 01:02 AM
Nikaya   I think I may have a new antagonist. He is inspi...   Jun 29 2010, 11:43 AM
Zalphon   Chapter Two: The Assassin and the Wizard When I f...   Jun 9 2010, 01:52 PM
Acadian   I like that you are using the first person POV. T...   Jun 9 2010, 08:26 PM
Zalphon   Zalphon will always have a firm foothold. And we ...   Jun 10 2010, 12:35 AM
Zalphon   Chapter Three: The Gateway We walked for hours. ...   Jun 11 2010, 02:36 PM
Zalphon   Chapter Four: Oblivion When I entered the portal,...   Jun 12 2010, 04:25 PM
ureniashtram   How can you even kill a Daedra Prince? I mean kill...   Jun 13 2010, 08:53 AM
Zalphon   How do you destroy a daedric prince? The same way...   Jun 13 2010, 04:23 PM
ureniashtram   Zalph, Umaril ain't no Daedric Prince. He...   Jun 14 2010, 07:43 AM
Zalphon   Well in that case, by banishing them from Nirn and...   Jun 14 2010, 11:58 PM
Zalphon   Chapter Five: Innate Power I awoke from dead-slee...   Jun 16 2010, 12:21 AM
Acadian   Plenty of action here! Still weaving Zalphon ...   Jun 16 2010, 02:53 PM
ureniashtram   Not a bad idea! Yeah, not a bad idea at all....   Jun 16 2010, 02:55 PM
Zalphon   Noted Uriena. And don't worry Acadian. You d...   Jun 17 2010, 05:19 PM
Zalphon   My apologies readers, I am currently experiencing ...   Jun 18 2010, 03:13 PM
Acadian   No worries, been there, done that. :P There i...   Jun 19 2010, 02:53 AM
Zalphon   Chapter Six: The Necromancer When we left after m...   Jun 20 2010, 10:44 PM
Acadian   Good decision, Kalian!!!! WooHoo...   Jun 21 2010, 02:27 AM
Zalphon   This is ret-conned Evangeline, heh.   Jun 21 2010, 02:54 AM
Zalphon   Chapter Seven: The Tormented A knight in steel-ar...   Jun 21 2010, 04:34 AM
Acadian   What a fascinatingly motley band! Each a full...   Jun 22 2010, 02:22 AM
Zalphon   Baldur's Gate: Dark Alliance II? Sir Kalian...   Jun 22 2010, 08:24 AM
Zalphon   Chapter Eight: My Followers When I awoke, I heard...   Jun 22 2010, 09:06 PM
ureniashtram   Ah, yes. Fights between companions before their jo...   Jun 23 2010, 02:19 AM
Acadian   Thanks for the summary of your party make up. Nic...   Jun 23 2010, 03:14 AM
Zalphon   Funny isn't it? A Vampire and a Necromancer h...   Jun 23 2010, 04:58 AM
Zalphon   Chapter Nine: The Vampire's Tale The stars we...   Jun 25 2010, 09:30 PM
Acadian   Ah, more answers. And more flesh added to Kalin...   Jun 25 2010, 10:11 PM
Zalphon   Quick-Strike is a over five-hundred years old. An...   Jun 26 2010, 03:39 AM
Zalphon   Chapter Ten: The Old Code We rested in a nearby m...   Jun 26 2010, 08:44 AM
Acadian   Interesting background and creatively presented du...   Jun 26 2010, 03:39 PM
Zalphon   Yes, Acadian. Diablo 2 did have some of my though...   Jun 27 2010, 11:47 AM
Zalphon   Chapter Eleven: The Holy Grounds For weeks we stu...   Jun 27 2010, 03:23 PM
Acadian   I quite liked this. The Nine are the Nine, so reg...   Jun 27 2010, 07:11 PM
Zalphon   The Nine indeed are the Nine. However, you'd ...   Jun 28 2010, 01:19 AM
Zalphon   Chapter Twelve: The Champion of Nirn As I reached...   Jun 28 2010, 06:57 AM
ureniashtram   An interesting chapter. Aedra and all the Princes ...   Jun 28 2010, 09:09 AM
Acadian   Nicely done, Zalphon. I liked how the tests relat...   Jun 28 2010, 02:21 PM
Remko   I totally agree with Urianas. I like your ideas bu...   Jun 28 2010, 02:56 PM
Zalphon   Julianos was testing his heart, to see if he was t...   Jun 28 2010, 06:32 PM
Destri Melarg   First I just want to say that this is the best wri...   Jun 29 2010, 12:21 AM
Zalphon   I understand constructive criticism, and the secre...   Jun 29 2010, 01:42 AM
Zalphon   Chapter Thirteen: The Daedric Pilgrimage Begins W...   Jun 29 2010, 02:09 AM
Acadian   On the road and already under attack. More insigh...   Jun 29 2010, 04:08 AM
Zalphon   To be honest, I think this is my best story so far...   Jun 29 2010, 06:32 AM
Zalphon   Chapter Fourteen: The Map The sun was beginning t...   Jun 29 2010, 08:09 PM
Destri Melarg   Good description of the Explorer’s Guild banners o...   Jun 30 2010, 01:20 AM
Acadian   The rich detail you are now weaving in is great...   Jun 30 2010, 03:30 AM
Zalphon   By intricate, I did mean carved. Destri, I'll...   Jun 30 2010, 03:51 AM
Zalphon   Chapter Fifteen: The Shrine of Molag Bal When we ...   Jun 30 2010, 10:01 PM
Acadian   You have several wonderful characters here. In th...   Jul 1 2010, 03:02 AM
Zalphon   I actually was really sad to get rid of Adam. I r...   Jul 1 2010, 04:28 AM
Zalphon   Chapter Sixteen: The Shrine of Sanguine We walked...   Jul 1 2010, 09:17 AM
Acadian   This was wonderful! The task with Sanguine wa...   Jul 1 2010, 06:14 PM
Zalphon   Thank you, I wonder what Malx will say when she ge...   Jul 1 2010, 06:51 PM
ureniashtram   I expected a bit more from the God of Debauchery (...   Jul 1 2010, 07:03 PM
Zalphon   The ale was so powerful it'd kill any mere mor...   Jul 1 2010, 08:54 PM
ureniashtram   Whoah, did I just read that one part right or have...   Jul 1 2010, 10:08 PM
Zalphon   Well, good thing I didn't name te priestess, h...   Jul 1 2010, 10:34 PM
Zalphon   Chapter Seventeen: The Shrine of Clavicus Vile Wh...   Jul 1 2010, 11:18 PM
Remko   Well done Z! I particularly like the hint at t...   Jul 2 2010, 01:17 PM
Acadian   You are doing a nice job, and I'm pleased to s...   Jul 2 2010, 06:18 PM
Zalphon   Chapter Eighteen: The Shrine of Meridia When we ...   Jul 2 2010, 08:35 PM
Acadian   Ev-Evangeline is gone. :O I'm heartbroken...   Jul 3 2010, 02:17 PM
Zalphon   I was expecting one sentence of sadness and a lot ...   Jul 3 2010, 06:10 PM
Zalphon   Chapter Nineteen: The Shrine of Malacath After I...   Jul 3 2010, 10:54 PM
Acadian   To grow old in love together is to experience neve...   Jul 4 2010, 02:31 AM
Zalphon   It's really enlightening on their past since m...   Jul 4 2010, 03:28 AM
Acadian   Kalian seems to believe his quest justifies the ch...   Jul 4 2010, 08:26 PM
Zalphon   Let me ask you this, would you take a life to save...   Jul 4 2010, 08:35 PM
ureniashtram   What the- You killed Evangeline Mortalitis, for ...   Jul 5 2010, 08:50 AM
Zalphon   Kalian was so depressed over what happened to Evan...   Jul 7 2010, 12:42 AM
Captain Hammer   Kalian was so depressed over what happened to Eva...   Jul 7 2010, 01:06 AM
Zalphon   Noted, Captain Hammer.   Jul 7 2010, 01:28 AM
Zalphon   Chapter Twenty-One: The Shrine of Sheogorath Whe...   Jul 7 2010, 07:04 AM
Acadian   Ahah! I knew if I whined enough, you would br...   Jul 7 2010, 04:01 PM
Zalphon   Did you not notice what Sheogorath called J'sk...   Jul 7 2010, 07:27 PM
Zalphon   Chapter Twenty-Two: The Shrine of Sheogorath II ...   Jul 8 2010, 12:44 AM
Acadian   Mania - nicely captured! Fun and crazy. Cl...   Jul 8 2010, 06:25 PM
Zalphon   Chapter Twenty-Three: The Shrine of Nocturnal I ...   Jul 8 2010, 07:13 PM
ureniashtram   Daedric Civil War, so original, right? Where...   Jul 9 2010, 02:34 AM
Zalphon   Actually no. I wasn't referencing an ingame b...   Jul 9 2010, 03:01 AM
ureniashtram   Then what, pray tell, are you mentioning? A story ...   Jul 9 2010, 03:12 AM
Zalphon   You mentioned some things, I'm not sure if the...   Jul 9 2010, 03:19 AM
Captain Hammer   I'm not seeing any real challenge here. Kalian...   Jul 9 2010, 03:36 AM
Zalphon   Nocturnal is awefully thankful of her subjects. D...   Jul 9 2010, 03:46 AM
ureniashtram   Sure, sure. Methinks is ok. Jar-Jar go away now. (...   Jul 9 2010, 03:53 AM
Zalphon   That was a bit before my time Urenia. I only came...   Jul 9 2010, 04:03 AM
Captain Hammer   There's more to the whole plot coupon thing. ...   Jul 9 2010, 04:56 AM
Zalphon   Chapter Twenty-Four: The Shrine of Peryite The t...   Jul 9 2010, 06:56 AM
Acadian   Nocturnal. Once again, Kalian's allies and th...   Jul 9 2010, 12:31 PM
Zalphon   Chapter Twenty-Five: The Tournament of the Nine Bl...   Jul 10 2010, 12:54 AM
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