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Acadian
post Jun 16 2010, 11:52 PM
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Welcome to the adventures of Buffy the Bowgirl!

My name is Acadian. Buffy is an elven mystic archer that I have the pleasure to travel Tamriel with.

This is Book 1 of her journal. It begins with Buffy being briefly incarcerated in the Imperial Prison, and ends as she attempts to bring freedom to the city of Kvatch. It is a sprawling story that will require 176 episodes, spread over five threads. Appropriately, I have nicknamed Book 1, 'Do You Know the Way to Kvatch?'

Buffy's personal journey is more important than her destination. Our writing style is character-driven. I help Buffy write her journal because I have a truckload of passion for her, not because I am a writer. We take plenty of liberties with quests and NPCs, but only few liberties with game mechanics because there is an aspect of 'how to / mystic archer guide' woven into her stories. Therefore, we tend to eschew earthly things and stick rather closely to Nirnian physics. In Buffy's world for example, a skilled archer can 'zoom in' on her target and cause her enemies to 'turn green' with poison. Buffy has never been to medieval Europe or ancient Rome, and her world does not resemble those places.

I thank you so much, should you find our humble effort earns and maintains your readership. My hope is that Buffy will worm her way into your heart, as she has mine. tongue.gif

Edit: Buffy has completed this book as of August 2012, and I would like to think that the reading of it is a satisfying experience - both complete as well as suggestive of sequels. For those newer readers who would like to catch up to us in one short sitting, you might find this helpful: Buffy – The Executive Summary Thread.

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post Jul 13 2010, 03:50 PM
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In Chapter 7.2, Buffy learned how to identify necromancers, and that they are hostile. It is a lesson she will remember. She emerged from the bowels of Vilverin with an Ayleid enchanted bag of holding (mod).

Olen- Danger and frivolity. Thank you for that perfect characterization. At this young age, her mind is a swirling stew of the exhilaration she feels using her bow, protective loyalty to friends, terror, overconfidence, vengeance, and. . . yes, what shoes to wear. All simmering within the broth of youthful naivete.

Rider- Oooh! Thank you for picking up on the early indicators of the 'Buffy Doctrine'. And of course, the high priority she gives to wardrobe considerations. I suspect she would quickly be rejected by the Legion, based on what Mrs. Acadian calls being 'lethally blonde'.

SubRosa- Yes, I agree on detect life. I think of it as shorthand for life force or spiritual presence or such. 'Soul trappable' is a good acid test, as you say.

Buffy's dilemma over identifying the black-robed figure was new in this version, and I think more realistic, given her age and lack of 'Nirnliness'. You did a masterful job of dealing with this in a different manner in TF.

Thank you also for picking up on the cuddly rattlesnake with a fashion fetish.

Foxy- Thank you for those kind and insightful words! She will learn better and safer arcane ways to identify her targets in the future than blurting, "Hi, I'm Buffy".

DarkZerker- I am so pleased that you found your way over here. Yes, Buffy is quite the chatterbox over there on the Bethesda Oblivion forums. She is indeed an unusual 'crossover' between both the game and fanfic forums. In fact, she was originally forged as a training aid on those forums to discuss mystic archery and rapidly developed her own persona. It was heartening indeed to hear that Buffy has influenced your own game play.

Zalphon- Thank you for those very kind words. I'm sure I could never write anything except the journal of Buffy - so it's wonderfully rewarding to hear that you think we have some talent for that.

Wolf- Yes, necromancers have joined Buffy's list of varmints. Despite a short attention span, she does have a long memory. Thank you.

Destri- Thank you. Stubborn? Yes, 'guiding' Buffy along is akin to herding cats. I'm so pleased that you find the 'mystic archer how to' aspects of interest. That was the original genesis of her stories and we are proud to say, aspects of it will always remain.

* * *

8 Water Makes Her Clothes Fall Off

Earana towered over me in her green silk finery, seething. "You gave 'Fingers of the Mountain' to Teekeeus? Stupid girl! I don't care how you get it, but I want that book! Despite your incompetence I'll even still give you the reward I promised."

"If you want me to choose loyalties between a rogue mage with a bad attitude or my guild, you lose," I snapped angrily. "That book is the property of the Mages Guild now."

Earana's face contorted into a mask of hatred and her golden Altmeri skin reddened. "You just earned yourself a dangerous enemy, little one."

Bristling, I instinctively raised my left hand towards my bow. Just as quickly I stopped myself and slowly lowered it. I was intimidated by the Altmer mage and pretty sure that she would win if it came down to a fight in the open. It didn't matter though, as, from the corner of my eye, I saw the guard under the Great Oak. The message his hand sent as it moved to rest upon the pommel of his sword was unmistakable. I didn't want to get into a fight with a guard either. I figured he just had a job to do and maybe even a family. Besides, my last confrontation with a soldier only lasted a second or two and didn't go well at all for me.

"W-we're done here, Earana." I promptly wheeled around and stepped off towards the North Gate trying to display confidence instead of fear. It might have worked had I not stuttered like a pathetic child. If I were an an Argonian, I'm sure my tail would have been between my legs. I sure hoped that guard intimidated Earana as much as he did me. I figured he was the only thing preventing a fireball in my back.

Luckily for me, the only things that flew my way from Earana were threats. "You think we're done?" she hissed. "Far from it, tree elf. The guards can't protect you forever"

I paused briefly, torn between the fear and anger that swirled within me, then forced myself to continue walking away. I whispered, "Nor can they protect you from what you will never see, Earana."

Approaching the guard on duty at the North Gate, I forced a smile his way, then exited the city of Chorrol.

With the comfort of forest in front of me and city gate pressed firmly against my back, I allowed some of the fear I had felt during my encounter with Earana to flood over me. I began to shake. It would not be safe to visit Chorrol again as long as she lived. I knew that I lacked the skill to survive a fair fight. That's not the kind I had in mind though. Let it go, Buffy - for now.

Superian was grazing outside the gate, as I absently rubbed my fingertips together. Magic can be quite disconcerting for horses, yet she travelled with a mage and it was important for her to be comfortable around spell casting. We had worked together, gradually and carefully. She had gotten used to seeing me cast detect life spells, and even disappearing and reappearing next to her. She had never been the target of my spells though. I hoped we were ready for this next step.

Channeling magicka into my hand, I released a small swirling green trail at Superian. When it struck, she was bathed in a soft glow and her head popped up from grazing. She immediately came running. I gave her a hug, then positioned my hands on her neck to assess her condition. I smiled as I sensed her calmness. "Thank you for your trust, my friend." I unsheathed my hunting knife and sliced an apple, which we shared.

As we munched our snack, I could see the trail winding north from Chorrol that led to Cloud Top. During our trip there two days ago to recover that troublesome book, the sound of moving water had drawn me off the trail to a pair of ponds connected by a cascading stream. The falling water cleverly concealed a cave called Black Rock Caverns. I didn't care about the cave, but I now felt the call of those beautiful waterfalls.

Superian insisted she get the last piece of apple, then we rode the short distance to the falls, and climbed to the upper pond. I removed the leather keep from my ponytail and shook my hair loose. After carefully placing my bow, quiver, clothes and pack on the ground, I dove into the cool water.

After a short swim, I climbed out of the pond and sat next to my pack. I basked in the sunshine now drying my skin and hair. A lazy breeze helped the tree branches above gently dance to the calming sounds of rushing water. Superian was peacefully grazing on the same carpet of green softness that tickled the backs of my legs. I just needed to revel in being a wood elf, even if for a short time.

I counted off the recent cities, extending my thumb, then a finger for each one - Bravil, Leyawiin, Cheydinhal, Bruma, Chorrol. After five guild recommendations, this break was welcome. No trudging off to the next town for another silly fetch and carry task. Not yet.

I was sure Acadian had probably placed some blue mark on my map. I hadn't looked, and right now, didn't care. The map could wait.

The golden warmth felt delicious on my skin. It was such a contrast to the cold and snow. Sunshine was supposed to be warm. I suspected the sun they had in Bruma was pretend though. It was bright alright, but had no warmth to it at all. I had to wear an ugly fur cuirass, along with leathers and boots on my legs and feet to keep warm. The views of the Imperial City were spectacular though, and Bruma was a good area to find milk thistle and wormwood.

The guild recommendation there had been a simple matter, really. There was the absent-minded guild head with perhaps not the highest level of skill, a pair of silly boys pulling an immature prank, find this, get that. . . . Well, it wasn't all bad I guess. I found Volinaro, the Altmer jokester, to be kind of attractive and rather charming. Oh, and he did help me to get better at using spells to coax open locks.

Ultimately though, Jeanne Frasoric, the guild head, said she would forward a recommendation to the University, and assured me it would carry great weight with the admissions magisters. I left Bruma as soon as I could. I guess wood elves just weren't made for the cold.

Noticing that the warm sun above Chorrol had dried my skin, I grabbed my journal and exchanged affectionate glances with Superian.

The road from Bruma to Chorrol had been uneventful. When danger approached, Superian simply broke into a run until the threat was well behind us. As we had neared Weynon Priory I remembered the Emperor's amulet, still in my pack. I vividly recalled some of his words about his own death, "No trophies of my triumphs shall precede me. But I have lived well, and my ghost shall rest easy." Smiling to myself, I hoped he was indeed resting easy. The Emperor had been kind to me and I was happy to try and deliver his amulet.

Jauffre had been upstairs, seated at his desk reading a book. I recalled what Baurus had said, "He is the grandmaster of my order, although you might not know it to look at him. He lives quietly as a monk at Weynon Priory." I decided the description was accurate. One had to look carefully past the advancing years, balding head and simple brown robe to see that he appeared to be a powerful man.

"The Emperor sent me," I said simply. "I have the Amulet of Kings."

"Who are you?" Jauffre barked, visibly shaken. "What do you know of the Emperor's Death?" Then he sternly continued, "The Amulet of Kings? I don't believe you. You'd better start explaining right now, young lady!"

Instantly, I disliked this man. I pulled the large red amulet from my pack and dropped it on his desk.

"By the Nine!" exclaimed Jauffre. "This is the Amulet of Kings!" His wide open eyes shifted from the amulet to me, then narrowed sharply, "How did you get this?"

Resenting his interrogation, I wondered if he meant that a simple she-elf from Bravil was not worthy of touching the Amulet of Kings, or perhaps he thought I stole it? Defiantly, I lifted my chin and stated, "The Emperor gave it to me." I then curtly described Uriel Septim's last hours and words.

Jauffre told me the story of Martin, the Emperor's illegitimate son. He said Martin had last been seen living as a priest in Kvatch. Then it came: "You must find Martin!"

I snapped back angrily, "No I mustn't! The only reason I am here is because the Emperor and Baurus asked me to deliver this amulet. Both those men were kind and courteous to me. You are neither of those things. You're the boss of the Blades, so send one of them." I planted my hands on my hips and added, "You're not the boss of me!" With that, I walked straight out the door, mounted Superian and continued to Chorrol.

Sitting by the pond, I watched the beautiful cascading water for awhile longer. I leaned over to fill my water bag, and stared at the reflection. My hair was still down, so I pulled it back to see better. I frowned at my big ears. Normally, I tried to hide them a little by pulling my hair back over them into a pony tail. I giggled as I thought that they looked like Superian's ears, and made silly faces at my reflection. And so the beautiful afternoon continued, until the sun nestled into the branches of the trees. I then set up my camp and gathered some firewood.

I hated to see the day I had enjoyed in this place end. I giggled again, "Ok Buffy, that's enough time playing naked wood nymph." I tied back my hair and pulled on a hunters outfit and leather boots, then shouldered my quiver. Grabbing my bow, I set off on foot, hunting for dinner.

Two hours later I was back, sitting in front of a cheerfully crackling campfire. I savored the smell of venison cooking with fresh herbs, and the calming sounds of the falls. The clear sky was full of sparkling stars, and light from Masser and Secunda reflected off Superian's glossy black coat. My bedroll was waiting next to the fire.

I could sense that even Acadian had enjoyed our day here. The hardships of my recent travels had been washed away.

I reached for my map.

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Acadian   Buffy the Bowgirl, Book 1, Thread 1   Jun 16 2010, 11:52 PM
Acadian   1 Buffy Goes to Prison City Swimmer grabbed...   Jun 16 2010, 11:53 PM
SubRosa   Buffy is Back! I loved this: Maybe I needed b...   Jun 17 2010, 12:50 AM
D.Foxy   EX-Ce-llent old friend!!! YAY!...   Jun 17 2010, 02:11 AM
haute ecole rider   Nah, the afro wouldn't work. If Buffy wears he...   Jun 17 2010, 03:42 AM
Remko   Let me put my down feelings on how I feel you retu...   Jun 17 2010, 09:44 AM
Zalphon   Buffy is a good character, heh. She needs to find...   Jun 17 2010, 02:36 PM
treydog   The old dachshund limped to the door of the small ...   Jun 17 2010, 07:36 PM
MyCat   Buffy's back! (I was working on a picture...   Jun 18 2010, 03:55 AM
Destri Melarg   Merandil’s voice cut through the smoke and embers,...   Jun 18 2010, 11:24 PM
Acadian   Chapter One found Buffy on the losing end of a con...   Jun 19 2010, 05:02 PM
haute ecole rider   Ach, Julian would like to forget that headache, th...   Jun 19 2010, 06:17 PM
Zalphon   Wow, I loved how you didn't use completely ing...   Jun 19 2010, 06:27 PM
SubRosa   I really can see the difference in editing. Especi...   Jun 19 2010, 06:38 PM
Olen   Good to see the legendary Buffy being posted. I...   Jun 19 2010, 07:01 PM
Destri Melarg   Haute beat me to the passage that I was going to q...   Jun 19 2010, 10:19 PM
Acadian   Chapter 2 (part 1) chronicled Buffy's progress...   Jun 22 2010, 05:24 PM
haute ecole rider   Just one question: Did she leave enough water to...   Jun 22 2010, 06:51 PM
Zalphon   Buffy, Buffy, Buffy... To write the whimsical tal...   Jun 22 2010, 08:57 PM
Olen   Great stuff, this piece has a unique tone which I ...   Jun 22 2010, 11:08 PM
SubRosa   The Buffster is back! And it is Ardaline who...   Jun 23 2010, 12:32 AM
Destri Melarg   There they are, Buffy and Baurus, standing in the ...   Jun 23 2010, 08:58 AM
Remko   It would seem Buffy's been taking cooking less...   Jun 23 2010, 10:32 AM
Winter Wolf   On this new and fantastic day let me quote some Po...   Jun 25 2010, 08:25 AM
Acadian   In Chapter 2 (part 2), Buffy witnessed the death o...   Jun 25 2010, 02:58 PM
SubRosa   Once again, I can see the improvement over the ori...   Jun 25 2010, 04:33 PM
D.Foxy   (Grumble) Rosa has hogged all the lines I was gonn...   Jun 25 2010, 05:09 PM
haute ecole rider   I really liked this chapter a great deal. Adding...   Jun 25 2010, 05:16 PM
Zalphon   Buffy the Prostitute... That'd be an interest...   Jun 25 2010, 08:59 PM
Winter Wolf   Such a smooth and beautiful chapter. Using Thoro...   Jun 26 2010, 08:16 AM
Acadian   In Chapter 3, selling items from her Imperial Pris...   Jun 28 2010, 03:09 PM
SubRosa   "We'll toss ye in the drink as we draw ab...   Jun 28 2010, 05:41 PM
haute ecole rider   I loved that you introduced us to Diana at this po...   Jun 28 2010, 05:49 PM
Zalphon   I enjoyed this chapter, very well written.   Jun 28 2010, 07:12 PM
Winter Wolf   The way you have captured Buffy's naivety was ...   Jun 29 2010, 07:33 AM
Olen   I like Buffy and I like this story, I think she...   Jun 29 2010, 10:02 AM
Destri Melarg   3. Buffy Fights Her Way Home The first thing that...   Jun 30 2010, 01:27 AM
Acadian   In Chapter 4, Buffy returned home to Bravil, caugh...   Jul 1 2010, 04:09 PM
haute ecole rider   QFT! And very classic of Buffy! I hope Ac...   Jul 1 2010, 04:43 PM
ureniashtram   Voices in... Buffy's head? Well, I have one to...   Jul 1 2010, 04:48 PM
SubRosa   To start with, I love the title! Starting in ...   Jul 1 2010, 04:51 PM
Winter Wolf   Such a clever idea to weave the Acadian / Buffy ...   Jul 2 2010, 06:57 AM
Remko   Hey, the part with Dagail recognising Acadian insi...   Jul 2 2010, 01:03 PM
Olen   Great stuff, normally I'd have been unsure abo...   Jul 3 2010, 04:28 PM
enclave_private   :D Just got your message today. Glad to see Buffy ...   Jul 4 2010, 04:29 PM
Acadian   In Chapter 5, Buffy completed her second recommend...   Jul 4 2010, 05:54 PM
haute ecole rider   How wonderful that Buffy gains a new traveling com...   Jul 4 2010, 06:09 PM
Zalphon   I enjoyed this chapter Buffy, very much in fact.   Jul 4 2010, 06:42 PM
SubRosa   Welcome to Cheydinhal, and Falcar. Talking with De...   Jul 4 2010, 06:45 PM
Winter Wolf   This part of the story really threw me. I was ex...   Jul 5 2010, 06:58 AM
Alchemist.   Wow, fantastic! I like Buffy a lot, she seems ...   Jul 5 2010, 09:33 AM
Olen   Good stuff. I enjoyed how you introduced the hors...   Jul 5 2010, 03:34 PM
Acadian   In Chapter 6, Buffy obtained her third recommendat...   Jul 7 2010, 03:06 PM
haute ecole rider   Do I detect our little Buffy degenerating into cl...   Jul 7 2010, 03:38 PM
SubRosa   We will keep Buffy's little secret between us ...   Jul 7 2010, 10:01 PM
Destri Melarg   5 You Hear Voices Too? I agree with all the comme...   Jul 9 2010, 11:52 PM
Zalphon   Hey, you're scaring the children with gameplay...   Jul 10 2010, 04:43 AM
Acadian   Chapter 7.1 found Buffy deep within the Ayleid rui...   Jul 10 2010, 04:03 PM
Olen   Excellent stuff, you capture so much in this piece...   Jul 10 2010, 08:41 PM
haute ecole rider   Now we start to see Buffy's Doctrine crystall...   Jul 10 2010, 09:37 PM
SubRosa   I have thought about the whole detect life and und...   Jul 10 2010, 09:49 PM
D.Foxy   *grumble* I was about to rush into praise for you...   Jul 11 2010, 03:26 AM
DarkZerker   Hey, I just started reading the Buffy the Bowgirl ...   Jul 12 2010, 06:45 AM
Zalphon   Does it ever get better? No, it's already per...   Jul 12 2010, 06:57 AM
Winter Wolf   That chapter was a treasure trove of fun! Loo...   Jul 13 2010, 07:38 AM
Destri Melarg   Arrow, Cobra’s Dance, second arrow . . . dead Redg...   Jul 13 2010, 09:44 AM
D.Foxy   Unbowed (well, at least outwardly) and Unbossed is...   Jul 13 2010, 05:24 PM
SubRosa   Hmm, given the title, I suspect a lot of guys (and...   Jul 13 2010, 06:10 PM
enclave_private   I'll keep it simple. Fantastic :bigsmile:   Jul 13 2010, 06:22 PM
haute ecole rider   Once again I enjoyed Buffy's encounter with Gr...   Jul 13 2010, 07:54 PM
DarkZerker   Lol. This is my second time reading this and it...   Jul 14 2010, 01:07 AM
Zalphon   Buffy, you make the rest of us feel like amateurs....   Jul 14 2010, 02:05 AM
Olen   I like how you handled the chorrol quest, focusing...   Jul 14 2010, 12:12 PM
Winter Wolf   Where do I start with this one? My fav chapter so ...   Jul 15 2010, 10:55 AM
Destri Melarg   I think we’ve all wanted to tell Jauffre off at on...   Jul 16 2010, 12:56 AM
Acadian   Chapter 8 found Buffy in Chorrol, having just comp...   Jul 16 2010, 02:40 PM
SubRosa   The title for this always makes me think of the Im...   Jul 16 2010, 05:09 PM
haute ecole rider   I'm with Buffy there - anyone who abuses an an...   Jul 16 2010, 06:48 PM
Olen   That chapter had some great lines in it. And some...   Jul 16 2010, 11:01 PM
Winter Wolf   As an outside observer I must say that this chapte...   Jul 17 2010, 05:34 AM
Acadian   In Chapter 9, a friendly Legion rider helped Buffy...   Jul 19 2010, 02:57 PM
Olen   To Skingrad... you caught how unwelcoming the guil...   Jul 19 2010, 03:21 PM
SubRosa   Ahh, goblins camped out on the road. The way from ...   Jul 19 2010, 03:47 PM
D.Foxy   I'm sure whichever male tries to crawl uninvit...   Jul 19 2010, 04:10 PM
haute ecole rider   Ahh, I see Buffy made it past the monsters of Gree...   Jul 19 2010, 04:57 PM
Winter Wolf   This sentence sent a shiver up the spine. That Bu...   Jul 20 2010, 07:41 AM
Remko   I agree with the above, Superian feeles even morte...   Jul 20 2010, 11:10 AM
Zalphon   Buffy, you're really good at entertaining us, ...   Jul 21 2010, 12:41 AM
Destri Melarg   9 Ride Fast and Shoot Straight Like Winter Wolf I...   Jul 21 2010, 05:59 PM
DarkZerker   Buffy is probably the most well written character ...   Jul 21 2010, 06:54 PM
Acadian   In Chapter 10.1, Buffy and Superian battled goblin...   Jul 22 2010, 04:28 PM
haute ecole rider   Oh, how wonderful! I loved Sinderion, his char...   Jul 22 2010, 04:55 PM
SubRosa   Interesting story about Rislav the Righteous (if h...   Jul 22 2010, 05:18 PM
Olen   I like you're characterisation of Sinderion, b...   Jul 22 2010, 07:16 PM
DarkZerker   Lol. "You don't look like much of a mage...   Jul 22 2010, 11:52 PM
D.Foxy   Sub Rozza must have caught the Foxy wordplay disea...   Jul 23 2010, 03:21 AM
Winter Wolf   Many thanks for the history lesson that you snuck ...   Jul 23 2010, 07:33 AM
Destri Melarg   A history lesson from the old paladin! I need ...   Jul 23 2010, 11:34 PM
Acadian   In Chapter 10.2, Buffy paused during her Skingrad ...   Jul 25 2010, 04:17 PM
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