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DarkZerker
post Jul 22 2010, 10:00 PM
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Um so here I am. I was going to say one month but what the heck, I just started up Oblivion since my Oblivion save file and all my Microsoft Word files were wiped. Thank god I had both my Fallout 3 fan fiction saved on a USB so does my Oblivion ASSASSIN save file.

This is the new Riden Snowe as my new thumbnail and signature suggests. This was actually my first real roleplaying type character. An assassin based off the "Assassin's Creed" games(at least the armor and hidden blade). Since I have better writing skills, it will be better. Bladesong rewrite! Annoying but what the heck.

Chapter One, Corruption is the root of my money.

I looked down at my latest contract given to me by the corrupt Count Regulus of Bravil. Sipping some tea in the local tavern, I readied my weapons. As usual, the target was very paranoid. I couldn't get a good look on the man's face but during one of my stakeouts on a bench nearby, it was clear that he was an Argonian.

I sighed at the Count's racism to beastfolk but shrugged it off, the pay will be amazing. The Argonian started running and I raised an eyebrow.

Behind him were three people in armor flanking him. The Argonian stopped and started talking to them calmly. I didn't get a single word but it was clear what he wanted them to do, Attack anybody following him.

With a grumpy huff, I climbed my way up on the housetops and started following him from above. Even then, I had a few close calls as the man's bodyguards looked up occasionally. I had probably followed him for an hour before the bodyguards left. I got out my secret weapon, the Hidden Blade.

I jumped down a couple feet behind him. As I crept up, the bodyguards started to return. Noticing me, they yelled to the man, "Usheeja! Behind you!" But it was too late. I sank my knife in his throat and laid him down peacefully. I took off running with three very angry bodyguards behind me.

They were pretty determined to kill me. I spent probably a good thirty minutes trying to avoid them before I was boxed into a corner. One of the men swung his battle axe like a madman trying to make contact with me. After the display of madness, I realized that these guards were very unskilled.

Another one with a hammer rushed and came down at me with all his strength. With quick footing, I barely dodged the heavy lump of steel. With the huge power came a long recovery time. Enough for me to slash with my trusty sword, Gwilth. He fell while the other two guards started to question if attacking me was a good idea.

The one with the battle axe charged at me and slashed. Obviously not learning from his comrade, I jumped back and rushed forward with Gwilth. With a thrust, he also fell. The last one with the sword was smart enough to run. Feeling generous, I let him go.

After a small trek through the streets of Bravil, I headed to the castle. The guards immediately stopped me before the Count nodded to let me through. I whispered, "It's done."

The Count nodded and tried not to smile. He grabbed my arm and handed me a pouch with a letter in it. I greedily snatched the pouch and left. When I was safely back at the tavern, I opened the pouch. Inside was a huge pile of gold and a letter sitting on top of the mound. I grabbed the letter and started to read it.

Dear Riden Snowe,
I'm very happy to hear word of your success. I have no more contracts for you and the Dark Brotherhood is after my head since I'm contracting a rogue assassin instead of them. If you have any friends, I'll be more than willing to pay you an extra five hundred gold to bring them here to guard me. Oh and have fun with the 1000 gold I gave you.

Your client, Count Terentius


I smiled at the gold and threw out the letter to keep the "where did you get that gold" question a mystery. The gold weighed me down a bit but it didn't stop me from packing up my weapons and venturing back to the Imperial City, my base of operations.
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Yeah yeah, Kinda redundant and a bit short. Not to mention that the whole "Imperial City" thing was from my last story.

My roleplaying is pretty standard when it comes to the first chapter of my story or in game. I rushed QUITE A BIT. Took me a good 20 minutes to finish off this. Not long...

Remember to Read and Review. R&R


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Acadian
post Jul 28 2010, 04:24 PM
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Oh, this was great! Nice job with fast travel. The ring explains why everyone is not popping all over Cyrodiil all the time. Good job with the healer. Oh my, cliffhanger indeed. We have healed Tess, but what have we created? I flash back to Tess' reluctance to talk about her past.

This was fascinatingly fun to read!


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DarkZerker   Riden's NEW Journal of Cyrodiil   Jul 22 2010, 10:00 PM
Acadian   In your comments after your stories, you tend to ...   Jul 23 2010, 12:59 PM
DarkZerker   I bad mouth my stories mostly because I really do ...   Jul 23 2010, 05:06 PM
Acadian   I think you may be expecting too much from yoursel...   Jul 23 2010, 05:28 PM
DarkZerker   Thanks. I have quite a bit of stuff to do. I spend...   Jul 23 2010, 06:41 PM
haute ecole rider   DZ, there is no real hurry to post here. Some of t...   Jul 23 2010, 07:20 PM
DarkZerker   Yeah...I'm very skilled in documents and repor...   Jul 23 2010, 10:39 PM
DarkZerker   First time I’m not rushing a story. OMG a miracle...   Jul 24 2010, 12:18 AM
Acadian   I liked it! :P There is still much to lear...   Jul 24 2010, 02:15 AM
DarkZerker   Thanks for the words of advice. Carbon is just goi...   Jul 24 2010, 02:51 AM
DarkZerker   I have lots of time now! So look forward to a ...   Jul 24 2010, 05:58 AM
Winter Wolf   Welcome to the land of fan-fics! I must say I...   Jul 24 2010, 09:18 AM
Acadian   Oh, I wasn't talking about Riden's reacti...   Jul 24 2010, 03:04 PM
DarkZerker   Yes, I will try to incorporate “emotion...   Jul 24 2010, 07:08 PM
Acadian   I liked it Zerker! :) Nice job. It seemed ...   Jul 24 2010, 10:46 PM
DarkZerker   The line you're talking about from Tess was in...   Jul 24 2010, 10:54 PM
DarkZerker   Acadian is my only supporter. T_T...I need fans, t...   Jul 26 2010, 06:00 PM
DarkZerker   Chapter 5! I’m writing this because it’s reall...   Jul 28 2010, 04:00 AM
DarkZerker   Yep, I’ve gotten to work on Chapter 6 the moment I...   Jul 29 2010, 07:20 AM
Destri Melarg   Hello ‘Zerker. I have just finished reading Riden...   Jul 29 2010, 10:45 AM
Acadian   This was fun to read! You are still moving a ...   Jul 29 2010, 03:44 PM
DarkZerker   Yeah, my second arc will be slowed down very signi...   Jul 29 2010, 04:43 PM
DarkZerker   SECOND ARC!! Woot! Anyways, this arc w...   Jul 30 2010, 06:30 AM
Acadian   Gracious humilitiy in an author is a wonderful thi...   Jul 30 2010, 12:33 PM
Remko   I will echo Acadian. The discussion of these thing...   Jul 30 2010, 01:43 PM
DarkZerker   I really did think it was utter shite. It was mean...   Jul 30 2010, 06:02 PM
Destri Melarg   Despite your protestations there was quite a bit t...   Jul 31 2010, 12:40 AM
DarkZerker   Wow...I never thought of the 18 years of annoyance...   Jul 31 2010, 02:37 AM
DarkZerker   Alright, this is my real first chapter of the seco...   Aug 2 2010, 03:21 AM
Acadian   Very typical and real arguments and concerns withi...   Aug 2 2010, 03:45 AM
DarkZerker   Yup! Extortion! The X makes it sound cool...   Aug 2 2010, 03:50 AM
Destri Melarg   There were a few things that seemed a little too c...   Aug 2 2010, 09:33 AM
ureniashtram   Wow :O Geovanni Auditore Geovanni's father is...   Aug 2 2010, 12:13 PM
DarkZerker   One word, extortion!! The X makes it sou...   Aug 2 2010, 06:08 PM
mALX   You are really doing a better job of building your...   Aug 7 2010, 11:55 PM
DarkZerker   Alright, I have to address this three times. EXTOR...   Aug 15 2010, 01:05 AM
DarkZerker   Alright, I have to address this three times. EXTOR...   Aug 15 2010, 01:06 AM
Acadian   This is fun, and the relationship between Riden an...   Aug 15 2010, 03:35 AM
mALX   There are some huge gaps in time there, they crawl...   Aug 20 2010, 07:29 PM
DarkZerker   This is now on official HIATUS until further notic...   Sep 4 2010, 12:28 AM
Acadian   Ok, Zerker. Thanks for letting us know what's...   Sep 4 2010, 01:04 AM
DarkZerker   The Hiatus period is now over. I will return to ma...   Oct 4 2010, 01:40 AM
Linara   Yay, Riden's back!   Oct 14 2010, 07:30 PM
DarkZerker   Meh...screw the date. I'm just going to post w...   Oct 20 2010, 03:07 AM
ureniashtram   Maybe the reason for that is because your writing ...   Oct 20 2010, 11:07 AM
DarkZerker   Lol...cross universe writing...epic.   Oct 23 2010, 04:57 PM
DarkZerker   This story is now discontinued. I will continue a ...   Oct 30 2010, 04:36 PM
Acadian   Ok, Zerker. Thanks for letting us know. Best of ...   Oct 30 2010, 04:41 PM


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