 Old Habits Die Hard Part Three, The old dog practices new habits |
| haute ecole rider |
 Aug 18 2010, 03:46 PM
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 Master  Joined: 16-March 10 From: The place where the Witchhorses play  |
Here is the first of a third thread for Old Habits Die Hard. I appreciate all of you staying with Julian and I this far, and hope you stick with us to the end!
For those who want to go back to the beginning, here you go: Old Habits Die Hard Chapters 1 - 7 Old Habits Die Hard Chapters 8 - 13 -------------------- |
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| Acadian |
Aug 20 2010, 05:03 PM
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 Paladin  Joined: 14-March 10 From: Las Vegas |
I went back and read the revision of Neen-Zun. Yummo!
 Three scenes. I. Yay, it sounds like Julian will get to meet Sinderion at some point! II. Oh my. Your whole scene with Ursanne was masterful. Not only did it convey your intent, but I was quite struck at your brilliant use of dialogue and speech tags and the like to bring it to life. In fact, I read it twice - the second time to learn from you.  III. Respect slowly earned seems somehow more valuable. It seems the two ladies have a better understanding of each other. I very much liked thier interaction - especially the unspoken parts. Julian has quite the full dance card in the Niben Bay area it seems. Lucky me! This post has been edited by Acadian: Aug 20 2010, 05:06 PM -------------------- |
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haute ecole rider Old Habits Die Hard Part Three Aug 18 2010, 03:46 PM
haute ecole rider Now Julian has to confront her old nemesis.
*****... Aug 18 2010, 04:04 PM D.Foxy Strange that I had just watched, and liked, ... Aug 18 2010, 04:23 PM hazmick Hurrah for Carandial. Hurrah for Marz. Hurrah for ... Aug 18 2010, 04:27 PM SubRosa So Carandial is sweet on Julian! *imagines all... Aug 18 2010, 05:07 PM Acadian I'm glad that you displayed Neen-Zun as an exa... Aug 18 2010, 06:08 PM treydog Another wonderful entry. And you capture the comp... Aug 18 2010, 07:55 PM Olen Good show on that chapter though I suspect that th... Aug 19 2010, 05:30 PM haute ecole rider @Foxy: Thanks for pointing out that even old women... Aug 20 2010, 04:03 PM SubRosa Poor Ursanne, going back to face her is always so ... Aug 20 2010, 04:16 PM haute ecole rider Thanks, SubRosa.
I just wanted to let everyone kn... Aug 20 2010, 04:26 PM SubRosa That comes out much more organically. The added de... Aug 20 2010, 04:40 PM hazmick No, I don't have a twin. Why do you ask? All... Aug 20 2010, 04:47 PM treydog A sad but necessary task, telling Ursanne that wha... Aug 20 2010, 05:07 PM mALX Well I for one always thought Julian was beautiful... Aug 20 2010, 05:56 PM Destri Melarg Chapter 14.1 Skooma Cravings
Neen-zun’s story is ... Aug 20 2010, 06:42 PM haute ecole rider @SubRosa: I’m glad you liked the rewrite of ... Aug 22 2010, 07:11 PM treydog I wondered how the cool, rational Julian would far... Aug 22 2010, 07:28 PM hazmick would that be the occupational safety and health a... Aug 22 2010, 07:43 PM mALX I love this quest! Can't wait to see the ... Aug 22 2010, 09:51 PM Acadian Fun and variety!
Ah, the dilemma of not qu... Aug 23 2010, 01:29 AM SubRosa Hmm, now I am wondering if Julian will meet Wrothk... Aug 23 2010, 01:33 AM Olen That quest is by far my favourite, brilliantly fun... Aug 23 2010, 11:31 PM Winter Wolf I am still here, reading along, and enjoying this ... Aug 24 2010, 01:57 AM haute ecole rider @treydog: For a long time I wondered how Julian wo... Aug 24 2010, 05:00 PM hazmick living in England, I'm not that knowledgeable ... Aug 24 2010, 05:27 PM Olen I enjoyed the conversation at the end, it did well... Aug 24 2010, 05:43 PM treydog Adding in the concern that Paint might be in jeopa... Aug 24 2010, 06:29 PM SubRosa Poor Julian. I never liked that quest either, for ... Aug 25 2010, 01:07 AM mALX I'll bet that is a hard quest for you to enjoy... Aug 25 2010, 01:46 AM Acadian Superbly done, Rider.
Initially that quest seem... Aug 25 2010, 02:28 AM haute ecole rider @hazmick: Yes, both Julian and I would feel less g... Aug 26 2010, 02:48 PM treydog Now that is Julian at her scary, ex-Legion best... Aug 26 2010, 03:09 PM Acadian Thanks for breakfast in Weye, and glad to see Pain... Aug 26 2010, 03:11 PM D.Foxy Hautee....
Ever consider a career as a bill coll... Aug 26 2010, 03:23 PM hazmick I wouldn't want to mess with Julian, powerful ... Aug 26 2010, 04:06 PM SubRosa I thought you all call me sage because I remind yo... Aug 26 2010, 04:33 PM
mALX
I thought you all call me sage because I remind y... Aug 26 2010, 06:25 PM Olen I had wondered how you would resolve that quest. ... Aug 26 2010, 04:56 PM haute ecole rider @trey: I see you thought the relationship between ... Aug 28 2010, 05:27 PM mALX Woo Hoo !!!!! Deep Throat, hu... Aug 28 2010, 06:47 PM hazmick I was just playing through this mission this morni... Aug 28 2010, 06:54 PM treydog Little to add to what has already been noted. Jus... Aug 28 2010, 07:11 PM Olen I like this quest, and I suspect Julian will too, ... Aug 28 2010, 07:27 PM SubRosa As Julian admitted herself, she just cannot say no... Aug 28 2010, 10:13 PM haute ecole rider Now there's a tempting thought!
No, hones... Aug 29 2010, 12:00 AM mALX
Now there's a tempting thought!
No, hone... Aug 29 2010, 12:06 AM Acadian Julian has really good spider senses and and power... Aug 29 2010, 02:15 AM D.Foxy Deep throat...
I wonder what that is???
I am SO... Aug 29 2010, 03:06 AM mALX
Deep throat...
I wonder what that is???
I am S... Aug 29 2010, 03:09 AM haute ecole rider @mALX: There were things I didn’t notice whe... Aug 30 2010, 04:37 PM mALX Oooh, you have really made this quest personalized... Aug 30 2010, 04:55 PM treydog You capture the oppressive atmosphere of Seridur’s... Aug 30 2010, 04:59 PM mALX
[b]the underclass (Khajiit and Argonians in th... Aug 30 2010, 05:03 PM treydog
[b]the underclass (Khajiit and Argonians in t... Aug 30 2010, 05:23 PM SubRosa Poor Julian, found out as the Hero of Kvatch once ... Aug 30 2010, 05:02 PM hazmick good chapter, once again. It's good to see Ju... Aug 30 2010, 07:02 PM Acadian I'm getting quite swept up in this! It... Aug 30 2010, 08:03 PM Olen I think I've said it before but I'll say i... Aug 30 2010, 10:01 PM Remko I always enjoyed killing Seridur...... slowly........ Aug 31 2010, 03:43 PM haute ecole rider @mALX: I knew that about the Brotherhood. Vampire ... Sep 1 2010, 02:13 PM hazmick A good portrayal of ardaline and varmori, a slight... Sep 1 2010, 02:31 PM treydog The scene between Vamori and Ardaline was just won... Sep 1 2010, 03:21 PM D.Foxy Two words, Hautee. Only two words.
HELL YEAH... Sep 1 2010, 03:23 PM D.Foxy And ESSS for YOU, Trey, all I can say
is what the ... Sep 1 2010, 03:24 PM Remko Aaah, now we see Lerus' "incompetence... Sep 1 2010, 04:32 PM Olen A most satisfying part. The resolution to the bra... Sep 1 2010, 05:29 PM mALX OOOOHHHH! A deviation from Bethesda's min... Sep 1 2010, 06:57 PM Acadian Two wonderful segments. :P
Ardaline's staf... Sep 1 2010, 09:43 PM SubRosa Don’t worry, the Brotherhood quest will be complet... Sep 1 2010, 09:46 PM haute ecole rider @hazmick: Thanks for the vote of approval on the f... Sep 3 2010, 04:47 PM Acadian Well done. Very powerful, and very Julian.
You ... Sep 3 2010, 05:49 PM mALX BWAAAAH! After all she's done they are go... Sep 3 2010, 06:34 PM SubRosa On Lerus, I do not see how she is recruiting Julia... Sep 3 2010, 07:24 PM hazmick Wow, powerful stuff Haute. I'm on the edge of ... Sep 3 2010, 07:38 PM Olen Well first all from head and not influenced by the... Sep 3 2010, 08:13 PM treydog A part of me wants to wring Jauffre's neck- a ... Sep 3 2010, 11:08 PM haute ecole rider @Acadian: I’m glad that you are enjoying my ongoin... Sep 5 2010, 04:52 PM hazmick Jauffre! that sly fox, he knows more than he... Sep 5 2010, 05:38 PM mALX ARGH! Finally she is going to get her knee fi... Sep 5 2010, 05:45 PM Acadian Lots of background filled in here. I'm impres... Sep 5 2010, 06:16 PM SubRosa formerly a munifex in the Legio I
This little pass... Sep 5 2010, 06:24 PM treydog You managed to save Jauffre from a fate worse than... Sep 5 2010, 09:05 PM Olen Now there was some development of Julian. I liked... Sep 5 2010, 09:17 PM Remko Pfff. tell me about it, dislocated my left shoulde... Sep 6 2010, 11:06 AM haute ecole rider @hazmick: You’ve nailed it! Jauffre plays his ... Sep 7 2010, 02:38 PM hazmick *Thud* Ow, that was so intense I fell out of my ch... Sep 7 2010, 03:04 PM treydog Oh my. The “dream sequence” (or was it something ... Sep 7 2010, 03:19 PM SubRosa That dream sequence was not only beautiful, but it... Sep 7 2010, 04:48 PM mALX ARGH!!!!!!! Don... Sep 7 2010, 06:54 PM Olen Now there was a part which really shines out even ... Sep 7 2010, 08:09 PM Destri Melarg Okay, I’m back with my obligatory wall of te... Sep 7 2010, 09:37 PM Acadian Magnificent, Rider. Powerful, beautiful, revealin... Sep 7 2010, 10:59 PM D.Foxy This was so good, I have even exiled Mr. Dhertee I... Sep 8 2010, 01:43 AM Remko The dream sequence part was very vivd. It felt a l... Sep 8 2010, 11:47 AM haute ecole rider @hazmick: I hope you didn’t have to go to the ER... Sep 9 2010, 03:11 PM Remko I liked "Gladiator" entirely but that... Sep 9 2010, 03:40 PM treydog
Yes, there are all kinds of “safety” and “comfor... Sep 9 2010, 03:54 PM SubRosa A nice simple segment that both brings us up to sp... Sep 9 2010, 04:02 PM |
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