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haute ecole rider
post Aug 18 2010, 03:46 PM
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Here is the first of a third thread for Old Habits Die Hard. I appreciate all of you staying with Julian and I this far, and hope you stick with us to the end!

For those who want to go back to the beginning, here you go:
Old Habits Die Hard Chapters 1 - 7
Old Habits Die Hard Chapters 8 - 13


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Destri Melarg
post Aug 20 2010, 06:42 PM
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Chapter 14.1 Skooma Cravings

Neen-zun’s story is heartbreaking. Once again you have crafted an Argonian with whom it is impossible not to sympathize. I think when you finish Julian’s story your next character should be from Black Marsh (maybe in the Shivering Isles, or as the Divine Crusader biggrin.gif ).
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The flickering light of candles. The acrid taste of the skooma. The warmth cascading around me, enveloping me, shielding me from the world. The easing of the constant pain. The silencing of the smith’s hammer. The sensation of floating a meter above the malodorous bedroll I lay on. The stretching of time and space. Finally, limbo.

This was a perfect description of the lure that leads one to addiction. I like the fact that you chose limbo over Oblivion. An addict is never seeking Hell, an addict is seeking escape.

Chapter 14.2 Bearer of Bad News

I am beginning to agree with ‘Rosa from a few chapters ago. I find it maddening that Captain Lerus knows so much about the goings on in her city, yet had no idea people were being ferried out to Fort Grief. Even Marz knew about that! Okay Marz might be a bad example, given her perceptive nature, but you get the point I am making. Her guards are giving all these reports, yet she does nothing about them. It sounds more and more like Lerus is all talk and gruff posturing while she waits for someone else to do her job. Even her grudging respect at the end rubbed me the wrong way. Julian closes the Oblivion Gate outside the city and stops gro-Dragol’s murderous Hunter’s Run while Lerus sits scowling in her office, and Lerus finally deigns to shake Julian’s hand? It is not in her nature, but I would have cheered if Julian had spit on the offered appendage!


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haute ecole rider   Old Habits Die Hard Part Three   Aug 18 2010, 03:46 PM
haute ecole rider   Now Julian has to confront her old nemesis. *****...   Aug 18 2010, 04:04 PM
D.Foxy   Strange that I had just watched, and liked, ...   Aug 18 2010, 04:23 PM
hazmick   Hurrah for Carandial. Hurrah for Marz. Hurrah for ...   Aug 18 2010, 04:27 PM
SubRosa   So Carandial is sweet on Julian! *imagines all...   Aug 18 2010, 05:07 PM
Acadian   I'm glad that you displayed Neen-Zun as an exa...   Aug 18 2010, 06:08 PM
treydog   Another wonderful entry. And you capture the comp...   Aug 18 2010, 07:55 PM
Olen   Good show on that chapter though I suspect that th...   Aug 19 2010, 05:30 PM
haute ecole rider   @Foxy: Thanks for pointing out that even old women...   Aug 20 2010, 04:03 PM
SubRosa   Poor Ursanne, going back to face her is always so ...   Aug 20 2010, 04:16 PM
haute ecole rider   Thanks, SubRosa. I just wanted to let everyone kn...   Aug 20 2010, 04:26 PM
SubRosa   That comes out much more organically. The added de...   Aug 20 2010, 04:40 PM
hazmick   No, I don't have a twin. Why do you ask? All...   Aug 20 2010, 04:47 PM
Acadian   I went back and read the revision of Neen-Zun. Yu...   Aug 20 2010, 05:03 PM
treydog   A sad but necessary task, telling Ursanne that wha...   Aug 20 2010, 05:07 PM
mALX   Well I for one always thought Julian was beautiful...   Aug 20 2010, 05:56 PM
haute ecole rider   @SubRosa: I’m glad you liked the rewrite of ...   Aug 22 2010, 07:11 PM
treydog   I wondered how the cool, rational Julian would far...   Aug 22 2010, 07:28 PM
hazmick   would that be the occupational safety and health a...   Aug 22 2010, 07:43 PM
mALX   I love this quest! Can't wait to see the ...   Aug 22 2010, 09:51 PM
Acadian   Fun and variety! Ah, the dilemma of not qu...   Aug 23 2010, 01:29 AM
SubRosa   Hmm, now I am wondering if Julian will meet Wrothk...   Aug 23 2010, 01:33 AM
Olen   That quest is by far my favourite, brilliantly fun...   Aug 23 2010, 11:31 PM
Winter Wolf   I am still here, reading along, and enjoying this ...   Aug 24 2010, 01:57 AM
haute ecole rider   @treydog: For a long time I wondered how Julian wo...   Aug 24 2010, 05:00 PM
hazmick   living in England, I'm not that knowledgeable ...   Aug 24 2010, 05:27 PM
Olen   I enjoyed the conversation at the end, it did well...   Aug 24 2010, 05:43 PM
treydog   Adding in the concern that Paint might be in jeopa...   Aug 24 2010, 06:29 PM
SubRosa   Poor Julian. I never liked that quest either, for ...   Aug 25 2010, 01:07 AM
mALX   I'll bet that is a hard quest for you to enjoy...   Aug 25 2010, 01:46 AM
Acadian   Superbly done, Rider. Initially that quest seem...   Aug 25 2010, 02:28 AM
haute ecole rider   @hazmick: Yes, both Julian and I would feel less g...   Aug 26 2010, 02:48 PM
treydog   Now that is Julian at her scary, ex-Legion best...   Aug 26 2010, 03:09 PM
Acadian   Thanks for breakfast in Weye, and glad to see Pain...   Aug 26 2010, 03:11 PM
D.Foxy   Hautee.... Ever consider a career as a bill coll...   Aug 26 2010, 03:23 PM
hazmick   I wouldn't want to mess with Julian, powerful ...   Aug 26 2010, 04:06 PM
SubRosa   I thought you all call me sage because I remind yo...   Aug 26 2010, 04:33 PM
mALX   I thought you all call me sage because I remind y...   Aug 26 2010, 06:25 PM
Olen   I had wondered how you would resolve that quest. ...   Aug 26 2010, 04:56 PM
haute ecole rider   @trey: I see you thought the relationship between ...   Aug 28 2010, 05:27 PM
mALX   Woo Hoo !!!!! Deep Throat, hu...   Aug 28 2010, 06:47 PM
hazmick   I was just playing through this mission this morni...   Aug 28 2010, 06:54 PM
treydog   Little to add to what has already been noted. Jus...   Aug 28 2010, 07:11 PM
Olen   I like this quest, and I suspect Julian will too, ...   Aug 28 2010, 07:27 PM
SubRosa   As Julian admitted herself, she just cannot say no...   Aug 28 2010, 10:13 PM
haute ecole rider   Now there's a tempting thought! No, hones...   Aug 29 2010, 12:00 AM
mALX   Now there's a tempting thought! No, hone...   Aug 29 2010, 12:06 AM
Acadian   Julian has really good spider senses and and power...   Aug 29 2010, 02:15 AM
D.Foxy   Deep throat... I wonder what that is??? I am SO...   Aug 29 2010, 03:06 AM
mALX   Deep throat... I wonder what that is??? I am S...   Aug 29 2010, 03:09 AM
haute ecole rider   @mALX: There were things I didn’t notice whe...   Aug 30 2010, 04:37 PM
mALX   Oooh, you have really made this quest personalized...   Aug 30 2010, 04:55 PM
treydog   You capture the oppressive atmosphere of Seridur’s...   Aug 30 2010, 04:59 PM
mALX   [b]the underclass (Khajiit and Argonians in th...   Aug 30 2010, 05:03 PM
treydog   [b]the underclass (Khajiit and Argonians in t...   Aug 30 2010, 05:23 PM
SubRosa   Poor Julian, found out as the Hero of Kvatch once ...   Aug 30 2010, 05:02 PM
hazmick   good chapter, once again. It's good to see Ju...   Aug 30 2010, 07:02 PM
Acadian   I'm getting quite swept up in this! It...   Aug 30 2010, 08:03 PM
Olen   I think I've said it before but I'll say i...   Aug 30 2010, 10:01 PM
Remko   I always enjoyed killing Seridur...... slowly........   Aug 31 2010, 03:43 PM
haute ecole rider   @mALX: I knew that about the Brotherhood. Vampire ...   Sep 1 2010, 02:13 PM
hazmick   A good portrayal of ardaline and varmori, a slight...   Sep 1 2010, 02:31 PM
treydog   The scene between Vamori and Ardaline was just won...   Sep 1 2010, 03:21 PM
D.Foxy   Two words, Hautee. Only two words. HELL YEAH...   Sep 1 2010, 03:23 PM
D.Foxy   And ESSS for YOU, Trey, all I can say is what the ...   Sep 1 2010, 03:24 PM
Remko   Aaah, now we see Lerus' "incompetence...   Sep 1 2010, 04:32 PM
Olen   A most satisfying part. The resolution to the bra...   Sep 1 2010, 05:29 PM
mALX   OOOOHHHH! A deviation from Bethesda's min...   Sep 1 2010, 06:57 PM
Acadian   Two wonderful segments. :P Ardaline's staf...   Sep 1 2010, 09:43 PM
SubRosa   Don’t worry, the Brotherhood quest will be complet...   Sep 1 2010, 09:46 PM
haute ecole rider   @hazmick: Thanks for the vote of approval on the f...   Sep 3 2010, 04:47 PM
Acadian   Well done. Very powerful, and very Julian. You ...   Sep 3 2010, 05:49 PM
mALX   BWAAAAH! After all she's done they are go...   Sep 3 2010, 06:34 PM
SubRosa   On Lerus, I do not see how she is recruiting Julia...   Sep 3 2010, 07:24 PM
hazmick   Wow, powerful stuff Haute. I'm on the edge of ...   Sep 3 2010, 07:38 PM
Olen   Well first all from head and not influenced by the...   Sep 3 2010, 08:13 PM
treydog   A part of me wants to wring Jauffre's neck- a ...   Sep 3 2010, 11:08 PM
haute ecole rider   @Acadian: I’m glad that you are enjoying my ongoin...   Sep 5 2010, 04:52 PM
hazmick   Jauffre! that sly fox, he knows more than he...   Sep 5 2010, 05:38 PM
mALX   ARGH! Finally she is going to get her knee fi...   Sep 5 2010, 05:45 PM
Acadian   Lots of background filled in here. I'm impres...   Sep 5 2010, 06:16 PM
SubRosa   formerly a munifex in the Legio I This little pass...   Sep 5 2010, 06:24 PM
treydog   You managed to save Jauffre from a fate worse than...   Sep 5 2010, 09:05 PM
Olen   Now there was some development of Julian. I liked...   Sep 5 2010, 09:17 PM
Remko   Pfff. tell me about it, dislocated my left shoulde...   Sep 6 2010, 11:06 AM
haute ecole rider   @hazmick: You’ve nailed it! Jauffre plays his ...   Sep 7 2010, 02:38 PM
hazmick   *Thud* Ow, that was so intense I fell out of my ch...   Sep 7 2010, 03:04 PM
treydog   Oh my. The “dream sequence” (or was it something ...   Sep 7 2010, 03:19 PM
SubRosa   That dream sequence was not only beautiful, but it...   Sep 7 2010, 04:48 PM
mALX   ARGH!!!!!!! Don...   Sep 7 2010, 06:54 PM
Olen   Now there was a part which really shines out even ...   Sep 7 2010, 08:09 PM
Destri Melarg   Okay, I’m back with my obligatory wall of te...   Sep 7 2010, 09:37 PM
Acadian   Magnificent, Rider. Powerful, beautiful, revealin...   Sep 7 2010, 10:59 PM
D.Foxy   This was so good, I have even exiled Mr. Dhertee I...   Sep 8 2010, 01:43 AM
Remko   The dream sequence part was very vivd. It felt a l...   Sep 8 2010, 11:47 AM
haute ecole rider   @hazmick: I hope you didn’t have to go to the ER...   Sep 9 2010, 03:11 PM
Remko   I liked "Gladiator" entirely but that...   Sep 9 2010, 03:40 PM
treydog   Yes, there are all kinds of “safety” and “comfor...   Sep 9 2010, 03:54 PM
SubRosa   A nice simple segment that both brings us up to sp...   Sep 9 2010, 04:02 PM
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