Haa-Rei the Marsh Ranger Options

[hazmick]

Chapter 1.0

I ran from the Merchants Inn as fast as I could. Holding tight to the precious bounty I had wrapped in cloth, ignoring the angry shouts behind me. I dipped into an empty side street and paused to look around before examining my prize, a large loaf of bread covered in melted cheese. Deeh would not believe that I had stolen some food without his help, I couldn't wait to get back to Leyawiin and tell him.

The bread was warm out of the oven and tasted delicious as I hungrily crammed it into my mouth. Before I could finish, I heard a rattle of armour and a wall of iron in the shape of a legionnaire crashed down the alley towards me. My hand found the hilt of my dagger but I decided against fighting this particular soldier. If only I had a bow.

“Stop right there pondscum!” his voice was like thunder and echoed about the grubby walls surrounding me. The only exit was behind me. I made a run for it but the soldier was too fast and grabbed my arm in a bone breaking grip.

“I assume you don’t have 5 septims?” This time his voice was lower but still sounded loud in the cramped alleyway.

I quickly swallowed the bread in my mouth, “I…no,” my mouth was dry and my voice croaked, if I was a man or mer my face would be bright red with embarrassment and fear.

“Come with me,” The soldier secured the irons tightly on my thin wrists, cutting off the circulation. Minutes later we arrived at the imperial prison, it’s walls were darker than those of the other city districts and corpses in various states of decay hung from atop it’s large spire.

Once inside I was lead down a short tunnel, light seemed to fear this place as it grew darker and darker the deeper we descended. One of the rusty cell doors was open, I assumed this was mine.

Sure enough on reaching the cell, an iron clad hand grabbed me by the neck and pulled me closer to the soldier.

“ I hope you rot, criminal scum,” His voice was a low growl with an edge of disgust which most people had when talking to me and the other beggars. The soldier threw me into the cell, my head colliding with something hard. Everything went dark.

This post has been edited by hazmick: Aug 17 2010, 03:56 PM

[SubRosa]

I thought that was a good touch when Haa-Rei looked at his reflection and found his scales were grey. That is an excellent way to portray the health of an Argonian.

“Methredhel, you don’t have any children. A good actor though,”


Gaeleg was certainly a friendly fellow. And surprisingly sane, considering he is a male Bosmer! Sorry, could not resist the barb, considering how high-strung that Bethesda tends to portray them.

Falling asleep in the tub was an excellent touch. I really enjoy seeing the extra bit of effort you are going to in writing an Argonian character, by playing to the differences in physiology. It always seemed odd to me in the game how they and the Khajiit are so much like everyone else (wearing the same clothes, eating the same food, keeping the same schedules, etc...). For example, if Khajiit are anything like cats, then they would be sleeping about 18 hours a day. Likewise, if Argonians are like crocs and other reptiles, they can sit absolutely still for extremely long periods.

nits:
The white stones of an Ayleid ruin were reflected in the deep azure
Did you mean to say "deep azure waters" perhaps?

This post has been edited by SubRosa: Aug 28 2010, 10:30 PM