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Kazaera
post Aug 18 2010, 06:37 PM
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Welcome, all and sundry, to Sleeper in the Cave - the tale of Adryn, a... you know, any capped biography I give you here won't do her justice. Instead, have the...
Summary: Adryn really doesn't know what she's doing on this land with oversized wildlife, natives who think giant fleas are good forms of transport, and Imperial spymasters so skooma-addled they think she's spy material, but she has every intention of surviving the rampant stupidity of everyone around her. However, she doesn't know that by setting foot on the island she's set into motion events that cannot be stopped...

I'm trying to make this easier to read in one go, so... chapter links follow, each chapter will have the different parts linked, and each section will have a link to the previous and next unless I forget. You can also read the whole thing on Fanfiction.net or the Archive of Our Own, but note that those will generally be lagging behind the Chorrol thread in terms of updates (I only post a chapter once it's been posted in total here, and sometimes I forget).

Chapter 1: 1.2, 1.3, 1.4, 1.5, 1.6, 1.7, 1.8, 1.9
Chapter 2
Chapter 3
Chapter 4
Chapter 5
Chapter 6
Chapter 7
Chapter 8
Chapter 9
Chapter 10
Chapter 11
Interlude I

Now, with no further ado:

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Chapter 1

I was dreaming.

Most people cannot tell when they are dreaming, and I admit I am usually inexcusably lax when it comes to this matter as well. Why, just a few weeks ago I had dreamt of being Archmage of the Mages' Guild and ordering all my underlings to pick cats from trees when they were ripe because we needed new apprentices... and not realised the impossible nature of it all until after I'd woken up. Shameful! However, this time there were several things that led me to cleverly deduce I was, in fact, asleep and my current situation a product of my subconscious mind.

First of all, I was in the middle of a mountain range, looking at a large volcano. The ground was grey and ashy, the only vegetation twisted trees, black branches grasping at the sky. Lava pools dotted the landscape, giving the whole scene an eerie glow.

Now, although it all looked rather fantastic I was perfectly happy to accept this place might exist somewhere, but my presence in it was another matter. I should not be seeing anything except my own personal cell in the Imperial City prison, and very occasionally my jailer - much though I'd rather forget that sight. Let me just say the sloppy gruel I was served twice a day, with its unidentifiable lumps and disturbing tendency to seem to move every time I looked away, was infinitely more attractive and charismatic. And although I'd told him I'd appreciate a change of decor, I'd more been thinking of wallpaper and maybe a potted plant.

Secondly, the sky was red. And by that I don't mean some poetic exaggeration of a sunset - the entire sky was a bright, vivid, uniform crimson. It looked as if someone had spilled a sea of blood among the stars. Wisps of grey clouds raced across it, forming strange patterns. For a moment, I thought I saw a face, screaming...

Apparently, I'd been so occupied keeping my track of my conscious thoughts that I'd sorely neglected my unconscious. If it was going to throw blood skies and clouds in agony at me, we were definitely going to have to have a talk.

Lastly...

I looked down. Several hundred feet below me, a tree looked as if it was about to rip itself out of the ground and hunt unwary passersby for dinner.

If I could fly, I really thought I would have noticed that earlier.

"You know," I said out loud, "If I'm going to dream, I would like to dream about something pleasant. Something like... Summerset Isle." I'd seen a drawing of it in a book once and been struck by the beauty. "Although I suppose it must be full of snooty Altmer. Or I could dream about managing a daring escape from prison underneath the guards' noses. Or... I know! A secret tunnel built into my cell and a bunch of... Blades, yes, Blades need to use it, and I escape behind them." That seemed the right sort of incredibly improbable fantasy for a dream.

I closed my eyes, focused on the image of the wall of my cell swinging back and a group of Blades and... why not, if you're going to fantasise you might as well do it properly... the Emperor dashing through it. Opened them again.

Volcano.

I shook my head at it sadly. "This really won't do, you know. You seem to be misunderstanding something here - I'm the one that makes the rules. I'm sure you're a very nice volcano, but I'd like to see daring escapes. This is my dream and I don't hold with rebellion."

"Your dream?"

I shrieked. The voice was just a sibilant whisper, but it seemed to be coming from everywhere and nowhere at once, seemed to be composed of thousands of voices all layered on top of each other, and even after it had finished speaking the echoes lingered in the air.

"This is not your dream, foolish child. I am the one that has brought you here and you. Will. Listen." The voice kept growing, filling the air like a gong. I clapped my hands over my ears, but to my horror it didn't do anything - it was as if the sound was coming from inside my head.

"I'm listening! I'm listening!" I screamed. My voice sounded tinny and hollow compared to the... other one.

"Good." The voice paused for a moment. My panting breath echoed loudly in the stillness.

"Wake up!" Another voice, this one, as hollow as mine - a pebble compared to an avalanche, impossible to focus on.

"The preparations are complete. You have been taken from the Imperial City, to the east, as it should be. Fear not, for I am watchful." I could barely think, but managed to dimly wonder how exactly that last sentence was supposed to make me feel less afraid. "Soon, you will arrive. Soon, you will fulfill your promise."

That was too much. "What promise?" I shouted, hands dropping from my head to ball into fists at my side. "I haven't promised you anything! I don't make promises as a matter of principle, it can't possibly have been me who, who did whatever you're talking about you have the wrong person-"

"It has already begun." Despite the sheer overpowering alien nature of the voice, I could tell there was a strange note of satisfaction in it.

A soft crackling noise made me glance down - then I stared in horror. My hands were changing. The very bones were shifting, cracking and then rehealing as they grew in ways nature had never meant them to. My skin was writhing, puffing outwards and its colour was slowly, ever-so-slowly growing lighter, yellowish, metallic-

"You're dreaming, wake-"

"Wake. Up."

I came awake with a start, still caught in the dreamworld. That changed when I jerked myself into a sitting position and-

"Ow!"

I let myself fall back onto the floor with a groan and rubbed my head with one hand - although on the whole stars were preferable to volcanos, I'd prefer not to see either when I closed my eyes. Apparently, my cell had suddenly gained a very low ceiling.

"Typical. Sleeps through the entire voyage, including the storm last night where I thought the ship was about to go under, and then decides to get up the precise instant I'm leaning over her. Just typical." Or maybe it wasn't the ceiling I'd cracked my head against.

Or, for that matter, my cell I was in.

"Sorry about that," I croaked. My throat felt as though I had screamed myself hoarse.

"You almost broke my nose," the voice complained. Dimly, I recognised that it was the second voice from the... dream. "Do you know how long it took me to get it into this shape? Just crooked enough to be mysterious and give me the look of a proper, dashing rogue straight out of the romance novels without being disfiguring. You almost ruined it!"

"Are you saying," I asked weakly, "that you break your nose regularly? For the sake of... attracting ladies?"

"And now you're insinuating I'm crazy enough to break my nose on purpose!" A pause. "I got a friend to do it."

The stars were gone, so I felt quite justified in carefully opening an eye and gauging the appearance of my new, eccentric, roommate. Immediately after, I opened the other one to stare.

The man – no, the mer – was leaning against a wall. His head was bald and covered in tattoos, his nose slightly crooked without being offputting, giving him – I admit – a rather debonair look, even if the rough clothes detracted from it somewhat. His eyes-

And here came the reason I was staring. His eyes were as red and his skin as grey as my own.

Fragmented images from the nightmare swirled back into my mind and I stopped gawking in order to chance a quick glance down at myself. Yes, my skin was still grey, my hands the same shape they'd always been. Gawking could resume presently.

"Your judgement of the matter, m'lady?" the other dark elf said, and I realised he thought I'd been staring at his nose.

"It suits you," I told him quickly. Considering how fed up I'd always become when people stared at me, I didn't want to do the same to anyone else. Especially considering he was the same race I saw every time I looked in the mirror, even if I didn't often see it outside of one. How embarrassing! "Good look, although the clothes don't exactly scream 'storybook hero'. And if you really got someone to break your nose for it, you're mad."

"Unfortunately, prisoners have never been given the finest selection of clothing. It's always 'sack, sack with holes or sack with more holes – take your pick.' Terrible shame, that," he answered, his face falling mournfully. "And as for the nose, well... I did – in a way. A friend certainly did break my nose, and he informed me later that I had been asking for it. Namely, by saying what I said about his sister, and by being too drunk to dodge."

"What you said about his sister? If it was some slander, I may have to stop speaking to you," I said, raising an eyebrow.

"I was perfectly courteous!" he protested. "Well, perhaps a bit too courteous, if you understand what I mean. My friend has always been a bit... overprotective, and when I expressed interest..."

"Say no more." I could imagine the scene very clearly in my mind's eye, and suddenly had a difficult time suppressing laughter.

"Indeed, I shall stop dwelling on such past flames and give proper attention to the present one." He bowed, a gesture that looked particularly ridiculous given his clothes, my clothes (in no better condition than his) and our surroundings, which, although not my cell, were just as bare of any amenities - I sadly noted the lack of wallpaper and potted plant. I'd really wanted that potted plant. "My name is Jiub. What would yours be, oh fair lady Nosebreaker?"

"Adryn. And I didn't break your nose!" I protested.

"Came very close, if my chin hadn't been in the way... anyway," Jiub sighed, the comedic manner dropping away, making him look much older and more tired. "We should be reaching Morrowind soon. I'm sure they'll let us go."

It was my second big shock in as many minutes. "Excuse me, did you just say Morrowind?"

"Well, obviously, since that's where the ship's bound for – oh wait, you've been asleep since before you boarded, haven't you?"

"There may have been some magic involved," I said defensively.

"Oh, I was sure that there was magic involved. Or possibly that you were on the brink of death. We've been travelling for three days now, you see."

The news that I'd slept for three days – at least – wasn't nearly as disturbing as it should have been; I suppose three shocks in as many minutes were where my mind went on strike.

"Anyway, yes. This ship is headed for Morrowind."

Morrowind. I stared – past Jiub this time. It was a place I knew next to nothing about. I knew it was in the far north-east of the Empire, one of the remotest provinces. And, of course, I knew one other thing, one that had always fascinated me deeply – it was the home of the dark elves.

I hadn't the faintest idea why I was on a ship – and now that Jiub had told me, I realised the shape of the room we were in and the rocking motion should have told me immediately that was where I was; I blamed grogginess from the long sleep – heading to Morrowind of all places.

Heading east.

I shivered as the words from my dream floated to the top of my mind... you have been taken to the east. You will fulfill your promise. then shook my head, trying to drive them out of my thoughts. It wouldn't matter at all where we were heading, I told myself. One Imperial prison was much like another, after all, and as for the dream? I'd probably just reacted badly to the magic they'd used to induce sleep.

It has already begun...

Just my imagination, I told myself firmly.

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post Aug 25 2010, 06:35 PM
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Am home! Home home home! (Am also jetlagged and ill with a very nasty cold, but at least it didn't get really bad until I was home, where I can curl up with a cup of tea, a thick blanket and a plushie white blood cell and feel thoroughly sorry for myself.) This should be celebrated by more Adryn. I might have to slow down on the posting, though, as "editing chapter 1" has apparently turned into "rewriting chapter 1 entirely and possibly making it twice the length" and I'm not that far ahead of my posting right now.

Also, I uploaded some screenshots of Adryn (they're a bit dark, sorry about that, next time I'll up the gamma beforehand): Ignoring Socucius Ergalla
Unrepentant in front of the scene of her crime
Talking to Sellus Gravius
In front of Arrille's tradehouse, with the lighthouse in the background
and not a screenshot of Adryn herself, but for fun: Her stats. I'm not sure these are entirely accurate - had difficulty picking between Mercantile and Speechcraft for one of the major skills (Adryn's Speechcraft is difficult to decide on, it's as if it's very high but half the time she hits "Taunt" instead of "Admire" by accident) and I'm not sure Destruction is actually one of her minors, but given that she has no weapons or armour skills whatsoever I had to give her SOMETHING so she wouldn't get killed by the first mudcrab she came across.

@hazmick - yeeaah, I think Adryn just proved why she should be escorted every step of the way. XD

@haute ecole rider - I am lucky enough not to have that much to do with bureaucracy, but the parts I do need to deal with make me very unhappy indeed. I feel for your friend, believe me!

@treydog - the whole 'grabbing everything in the room, waltzing out and selling it next door with no repercussions' thing is not particularly realistic, no! I thought for a while on how I could have Adryn get away with the loot (because hey, that's the classic way to start the game! And totally IC for her, I should add) while not making it seem as if she was, well, in a video game. tongue.gif As far as telepathy goes... I haven't actually played Oblivion, but Morrowind also has a few quests where it seems like the questgiver was spying on you the whole time.

@SubRosa - Adryn may occasionally overestimate her skills a little. Occasionally. wink.gif

@Acadian - thank you! smile.gif I'm glad you're enjoying it, as this story is... not particularly plot-driven. Adryn has this tendency to ignore quests, wander off and do her own thing. (Difficulty with non-adventurer or starting out as non-adventurer characters...)

@Olen - well, I think she's coming round to its use as a torture method but I don't think that's what you meant. tongue.gif And I don't think any outlander could NOT gape at the giant flea, really!

@mALX - thanks!

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Chapter 1, part 4

Studying my sack of loot in the bushes, I no longer felt quite so cheerful.

It wasn't that it hadn't survived the fall, which I'd worried about earlier. In fact, the fall had done even less damage than I'd expected; only one flask had broken, and that one had been empty anyway. No, my plan had worked perfectly.

Unfortunately, I'd come to the conclusion that the plan had been slightly short-sighted.

I now had my ill-gotten goods, in a bush outside the Census and Excise office, and myself outside the Census and Excise office, and hopefully not fingered as potentially in possession of said ill-gotten goods. However, now came the question – what do I do with the goods?

It was, after all, broad daylight. There were quite a few people wandering around on the street. Worse yet, there were quite a few guards wandering around on the street. The bush was, thankfully, away from the main bit of traffic and shielded behind several trees, so no one had noticed the dark elf rooting through shrubbery.

Yet.

I couldn't very well grab the sack and walk straight through the village, either to the tradehouse on the other side or (since fencing stolen goods at the tradehouse next to the place I'd stolen them from in the first place wasn't the best of ideas) to the road leading out of the village.

Ordinarily, this turn of events would require waiting until dark and sneaking in to recover the items then. However, part two of my brilliant master plan, looking steadily less brilliant by the minute, meant that the guards would probably have finished figuring out that yes, someone had stolen their food, their silverware and (crime of all crimes!) all their alcohol for that week and would be out in force. Chances were, they'd discover the sack well before nightfall.

Really, my best option was high-tailing it away before Gravius added up a newly released dark elf, a sack placed precisely where someone might throw it from the top of a wall and the possibility of a childhood spent climbing trees and came up with the name Adryn.

Most of me rebelled at the idea. Hadn't I managed to get this far, after all? And besides, this was my first taste of freedom and a new life! It should start on a high note, with me leaving the town with everything and sticking out my tongue at Ergalla and Gravius as I went.

"Stealing from the Imperials, eh?"

The voice behind me made me try to jump a foot and freeze in terror simultaneously, which made for some rather odd movements. In the end, I lost my balance and barely managed to keep myself from pitching face-first into the bush.

Once I was steady on my feet again I turned around, horrified at having been caught. My fear was only lightened slightly when I saw the person behind me wasn't, in fact, an Imperial guard but rather a Bosmer.

"Don't worry. I won't say a word. We all hate them here in town." Slowly, my heart-rate returned to its normal speed. "Me especially, they keep beating me up and stealing my things. Just the other day, they took my ring! It's not worth that much, but it's a family heirloom, one of the only things I've got of them so far away from home, so it's really precious to me."

I fished around in the sack. "Would this be it?" I asked, cutting off the stream of words and handing him the green ring I'd found earlier. I was rewarded by seeing the Bosmer's eyes light up.

"Why, that's it exactly! Thank you so much!" He took the ring eagerly and pressed it to his chest.

Now, lest anyone get the wrong impression I should add that I am not, as a rule, all that altruistic. Especially when it comes to rings with healing magic, given my tendency to attract trouble through, I would like to emphasise, absolutely no fault of my own. However, I've learned that it pays to keep anyone who can call the guards on you as happy as possible.

"I was afraid I'd never see it again. I won't forget this! I'll put in a good word for you with Arrille at the tradehouse, just you see. And..." the Bosmer looked from me to the sack in the bushes and back again. Clearly, the predicament I was in was becoming clear to him. "I think I have an idea."

A few minutes later, I was strolling across the village to the tradehouse, Fargoth – that was the Bosmer's name – by my side. The sack was thrown carelessly over my shoulder, and Fargoth made sure to mention loudly how very grateful he was for my helping him carry some of his old things over to his good friend Arrille's, he couldn't have managed so much himself...

It would have seemed ridiculous that I, skinny little scarecrow of a dark elf – and we're not known for our upper body strength in the best of times – straight out of prison would be engaged for heavy lifting. Luckily, Fargoth was a Bosmer. I'm small for a dark elf, but Fargoth was still a head shorter than me.

The tradehouse was well-furnished, with hangings on the walls and various wares spread out on polished wooden tables and a counter. Several people seemed to be browsing, and there was an Altmer standing behind the counter; I surmised this was Arrille. Fargoth had gone ahead of me when we reached the narrow stairs, and he was now whispering intensely with Arrille. When I arrived, they stopped. Arrille came over to me and winked.

"I hear you're helping Fargoth with his things," he said in a drawl that was definitely not a Summerset accent. "Always told him he was a packrat and that one day that shack of his wouldn't be large enough anymore! Good for him I have a storage room free here, hm? If you follow me there, I'll show you where to put them, and give you some advice on Vvardenfell while you're at it."

"Don't listen to a word he says," a Redguard woman who had been looking at a selection of bows interrupted. "Last time he 'gave some advice', the man actually tried to go rob one of the tombs in the swamp. He ended up getting lost, wandering around after dark trying to find his way back, and finally tripped and broke his leg. And I was the one who had to rescue him." She glared at Arrille.

"Elone, I'm insulted!" Arrille gave a mock gasp. I was suddenly reminded of Jiub, and wondered with a pang what had happened to him. It had looked as though I was the only miraculous releasee. "I'll let you know my advice was fine. It's not my fault the fool decided that by 'ancestral tombs' I meant 'excellent way to make money.' And what about that Redguard girl I helped out a while back? Last I heard she was doing perfectly well."

"Only because I caught her afterwards and explained why everything you'd told her was nonsense. It looks as though I'll have to do the same with this one too." Elone looked at me critically. I stared back, shifting my sack of loot. It was heavy and my arms were getting tired. I decided that if the two of them didn't stop acting as if I was a soulless, mindless automaton I'd brain them both with my illicit gains.

Perhaps she read some of my hostile intentions from my face, because she just sighed and said, "Well, off you go. Drop off... Fargoth's belongings." I had the sudden impression that our little charade hadn't fooled her at all. "Arrille, I'll watch the shop for you. Girl, remember to come speak to me afterwards and I'll set you straight. I'm a scout, it's my job."

"Thank you kindly, Elone. Come, it's-"

"Wait a minute!" Fargoth interrupted. He'd been hovering near the doorway and now stepped forward. "I'll come with you. There are fragile things in there, I have to make sure you don't break them."

A nearby Nord let out a loud, braying laugh. "Fussy Fargoth needs to make sure you put every bleedin' thing down just right. Kid, you picked the wrong person to run errands for - you'll be lucky if you get out before nightfall." He did not seem at all abashed by suddenly being the target of three hostile glares - Fargoth's, Arrille's and Elone's. "If you want a real job, with real pay, come to me afterwards. Name's Hrisskar Flat-Foot, I'll be up at the bar."

"As if you're ever not at the bar, drunkard." Elone's tone was waspish. "Girl, don't listen to him, that one's no good through and through."

"Okay, that's it." I said loudly. All people arguing stopped and turned their heads to look at me. I found myself in awe at my apparent skills at crowd control - now if only I could do that on purpose... "My name is Adryn. Not girl, kid, child, or anything like that. Ad. Ryn. It's only two syllables, it's not that difficult. And my arms hurt and I am about to drop this sack and if I am forced to drop it I will use my last strength to aim at one of you lot, so could we save the manly posturing - or womanly posturing," I corrected myself, looking at Elone, "for another time?"

"Girl has spirit. I like that." Hrisskar snickered. I recalled my earlier conversation with Jiub and wondered just how hard I would have to punch him in order to break his nose - and not in a dashing storybook rogue way either.

Arrille coughed. "She does have a point, even if she phrased it a little... interestingly. We all have things we need to be getting back to, so best to get this out of the way. Here, the storage is up these stairs."

Stairs. I looked at them sadly, then promised my aching muscles it would be over soon, gritted my teeth and started walking.

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Kazaera   Sleeper in the Cave   Aug 18 2010, 06:37 PM
hazmick   Hello, this a really good start to what I hope is ...   Aug 18 2010, 07:09 PM
haute ecole rider   Though I've never played MW, I've read eno...   Aug 18 2010, 07:56 PM
treydog   Already I am in love with this story. And it usua...   Aug 18 2010, 09:31 PM
Helena   Ah, another humorous Morrowind story! I have c...   Aug 18 2010, 09:39 PM
SubRosa   A fun start to what looks like a very enjoyable ro...   Aug 18 2010, 10:24 PM
Kazaera   @everyone - thank you for the feedback! :D I...   Aug 18 2010, 11:32 PM
haute ecole rider   To answer your question, I update mine every other...   Aug 19 2010, 12:59 AM
Acadian   Welcome to the Arena, Kaz. Nicely done. I enjoy ...   Aug 19 2010, 02:00 AM
hazmick   I posted my first 3 installments in quick successi...   Aug 19 2010, 02:01 AM
SubRosa   As h.e.o. said, I also update mine every other day...   Aug 19 2010, 02:04 AM
Olen   Excellent piece, another funny one which is nice t...   Aug 19 2010, 08:35 PM
Kazaera   Thanks for the info, everyone! I think I can m...   Aug 20 2010, 06:46 AM
Helena   The bureaucrat, an elderly Imperial, started talki...   Aug 20 2010, 08:36 PM
Olen   But Adryn is missing the point... beaurocracy is f...   Aug 20 2010, 11:03 AM
hazmick   A brilliant depiction of the guards. Olen is right...   Aug 20 2010, 01:33 PM
haute ecole rider   Your description of the whole arrival on the islan...   Aug 20 2010, 03:53 PM
treydog   Note to self- remember to NOT read this at work...   Aug 20 2010, 04:09 PM
SubRosa   Another fun episode. Ergalla and legionary really ...   Aug 20 2010, 04:37 PM
mALX   A fun read! I know very little about Morrowin...   Aug 20 2010, 07:38 PM
Acadian   Let me ask your forgiveness and thank you for you...   Aug 20 2010, 11:22 PM
Kazaera   @Olen - Adryn doesn't agree with you, I'm ...   Aug 22 2010, 10:27 PM
hazmick   brilliant, Adryn is left alone for a few minutes a...   Aug 22 2010, 10:55 PM
haute ecole rider   And I'm sure a lot of senior NCO's share ...   Aug 23 2010, 12:05 AM
treydog   You skewer yet another inconsistency perfectly- th...   Aug 23 2010, 12:47 AM
SubRosa   Clever plan by Adryn to rob the Census office blin...   Aug 23 2010, 01:40 AM
Acadian   So THAT's why she should be guarded and escort...   Aug 23 2010, 01:58 AM
Olen   :D I laughed numerous times. Adryn is a great ch...   Aug 24 2010, 11:41 AM
mALX   Really good character development !!!   Aug 25 2010, 01:36 AM
hazmick   Brilliant, I think Adryn has made quite an impress...   Aug 25 2010, 06:47 PM
haute ecole rider   Welcome home! Now get better! The verb te...   Aug 25 2010, 07:00 PM
treydog   First- get well soon! 'Cause if you'r...   Aug 25 2010, 07:55 PM
Olen   I liked this, I even liked Fargoth, if that's ...   Aug 25 2010, 09:12 PM
Acadian   What better foundation for a story could there po...   Aug 26 2010, 02:34 AM
SubRosa   I couldn't very well grab the sack and walk st...   Aug 26 2010, 05:13 PM
Kazaera   All right, there might be something of a wait befo...   Aug 31 2010, 12:18 AM
SubRosa   Lots of fun, and a clever plot by Arille and Fargo...   Aug 31 2010, 01:32 AM
mALX   This gets better with each chapter! Your char...   Aug 31 2010, 01:34 AM
treydog   First- Adryn and Maxical- together? :blink: :...   Aug 31 2010, 01:36 AM
haute ecole rider   You had me at Then it only got better. I see tre...   Aug 31 2010, 03:01 AM
Acadian   Yes, still bubbly delightful. :P   Aug 31 2010, 03:24 AM
hazmick   Hilarious, my laptop is now covered in tea. :lol:   Aug 31 2010, 11:48 AM
Olen   Well all my favourite lines have been quoted so I ...   Aug 31 2010, 12:11 PM
Remko   I love your interpretation. Can't wait for her...   Sep 1 2010, 11:55 AM
treydog   It has come to this- I am reduced to rhyme. The o...   Sep 15 2010, 01:04 PM
Kazaera   Remember me? ...thought not. :-/ :-/o I am real...   Aug 7 2011, 08:07 PM
treydog   Remember? Did you say “remember”? I am thrilled...   Aug 7 2011, 10:03 PM
haute ecole rider   ninja'd by treydoggie again! Course I rem...   Aug 8 2011, 12:04 AM
Grits   Oh my gosh, hilarious. I love Adryn’s tone. I woul...   Aug 8 2011, 05:45 PM
Kazaera   @everyone - thanks for reviewing, and I am honoure...   Aug 8 2011, 06:25 PM
haute ecole rider   Hey! I wanna know why it took Adryn ten whole ...   Aug 8 2011, 08:45 PM
Kazaera   @Haute - you'll see in this post! She woul...   Aug 10 2011, 11:16 PM
haute ecole rider   Tell me about the backlog! I wrote the first 2...   Aug 11 2011, 12:48 AM
treydog   First- the greatest hits. Well- no. Actually, th...   Aug 11 2011, 01:37 AM
Kazaera   Hmm. This is tricky because I also don't want ...   Aug 12 2011, 11:42 PM
haute ecole rider   I see that Adryn is capable of finding beauty in t...   Aug 13 2011, 12:13 AM
Kazaera   @Haute - yep, Adryn was very lucky! Although p...   Aug 15 2011, 07:23 PM
Kazaera   ...so is anyone still reading this? :huh: Last ...   Aug 18 2011, 06:32 PM
haute ecole rider   Oh, don't worry! I'm still reading...   Aug 18 2011, 09:13 PM
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Kazaera   @Grits - glad to know you're still enjoying it...   Aug 25 2011, 12:02 AM
Grits   I'd been expecting an enchanted carpet at the ...   Aug 26 2011, 01:57 AM
Kazaera   @Grits - Well, Adryn has certain *expectations* of...   Aug 27 2011, 11:26 PM
Grits   Now, I admit I was judging on first sight so maybe...   Aug 29 2011, 02:08 PM
Kazaera   @Grits - yeah, I think Adryn is really starting to...   Aug 30 2011, 11:07 PM
haute ecole rider   I have soooo enjoyed Adryn's induction into th...   Aug 31 2011, 01:48 AM
Grits   I took a moment, then realised that 'the Dunme...   Aug 31 2011, 06:23 PM
Kazaera   @haute ecole rider Adryn is ecstatic that for once...   Sep 2 2011, 10:53 PM
haute ecole rider   You're entitled to some leeway! After all,...   Sep 3 2011, 12:03 AM
Kazaera   @haute: Adryn has this amazing ability to screw up...   Sep 5 2011, 08:17 PM
haute ecole rider   An all-too-familiar feeling after seven years of ...   Sep 5 2011, 10:11 PM
Grits   I surprised myself with how intensely I enjoyed th...   Sep 6 2011, 02:33 PM
Kazaera   @haute: Not something I can say from experience, b...   Sep 8 2011, 09:52 PM
Grits   "She says it is a secret recipe." ...   Sep 10 2011, 12:41 AM
Kazaera   @Grits: Two kindred spirits have found each other,...   Sep 11 2011, 09:13 PM
haute ecole rider   Hey! Never apologize for spending time on what...   Sep 11 2011, 09:54 PM
Grits   Most of my favorite episodes in peoples’ stories c...   Sep 12 2011, 04:14 PM
Kazaera   Glad to know everyone is enjoying this and I'm...   Sep 14 2011, 11:27 PM
haute ecole rider   That old Dunmer's about as adept at navigation...   Sep 15 2011, 02:07 PM
Grits   I'd really hoped to be able to stay in town fo...   Sep 17 2011, 02:41 PM
Kazaera   @Haute: Trust me, Adryn wishes she were that nice....   Sep 17 2011, 11:44 PM
Grits   Argh! Well at least Adryn didn't get an op...   Sep 19 2011, 11:52 PM
Kazaera   @Grits - ...I should probably point out here that ...   Sep 21 2011, 11:27 PM
Grits   And some rocks thrown into the lake, although I di...   Sep 24 2011, 01:46 PM
Kazaera   @Grits - yeeaaah, Adryn doesn't do outdoors ve...   Sep 25 2011, 06:53 PM
haute ecole rider   I truly hate these "Special" powers...   Sep 25 2011, 09:10 PM
Grits   "Do all the work for me while I take a nap s...   Sep 28 2011, 02:54 PM
Kazaera   @haute ecole rider - I know! I'm dreadful ...   Sep 30 2011, 08:39 PM
haute ecole rider   Hey! It's okay to hijack NPC's! If...   Sep 30 2011, 09:52 PM
Grits   I imagined a really big bumblebee the first time I...   Oct 1 2011, 12:10 PM
Kazaera   @haute ecole rider: Oh, I'm not apologising...   Oct 4 2011, 08:21 PM
Grits   I heartily endorse cooking any dead animal that lo...   Oct 5 2011, 10:52 PM
Thomas Kaira   Ah, I love me some humorous Morrowind storytelling...   Oct 9 2011, 03:45 PM
Kazaera   @Grits: I'm sort of undecided as to whether ma...   Oct 10 2011, 09:53 AM
Grits   I had the same thoughts about how to write element...   Oct 10 2011, 11:52 AM
Thomas Kaira   Yes, my stab at the dreugh who walks of land was a...   Oct 10 2011, 08:42 PM
Kazaera   Thanks for the links on land dreugh! And - I a...   Oct 14 2011, 01:13 PM
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