I'm getting quite swept up in this! It's delightful! I love the methodical manner in which Julian is investigating. Ah, the old soldier professionally conducting her JAG investigation. Lots to love.
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“Please, call me Julian, sir,” I said, putting a slight pleading note in my voice. I was getting pretty tired of this hero stuff. “I’m no hero, just an old, broken-down soldier looking for a new reason to live.”
Beneath his steel helm, the Watchman’s teeth gleamed in a grin. “I hear you, Julian,” he answered, his voice warming. “Please, how may I help you?”
Beautifully done, with the ring of truth. I loved that you gave the watchman a name. And I was gratified to see the small investment in a relationship pay off for Julian as the guard walked away so Julian could do her business.
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He smiled crookedly at me. “That’s why it’s cheap,”
I see the rules of real estate pertain, even in Cyrodiil - location, loction, location.
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Studying the dark windows of Jenseric’s house, I realized they were uncovered.
Julian! You go, girl!
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I drew out a couple of lockpicks and tickled the lock into submission.
This wonderful passge quite tickled my fancy.
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A folded parchment fluttered to the floor when I picked up the book.
Just a gem of a great description - fluttered to the floor.
