 Old Habits Die Hard Part Three, The old dog practices new habits |
| haute ecole rider |
 Aug 18 2010, 03:46 PM
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 Master  Joined: 16-March 10 From: The place where the Witchhorses play  |
Here is the first of a third thread for Old Habits Die Hard. I appreciate all of you staying with Julian and I this far, and hope you stick with us to the end!
For those who want to go back to the beginning, here you go: Old Habits Die Hard Chapters 1 - 7 Old Habits Die Hard Chapters 8 - 13 -------------------- |
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| Acadian |
Sep 3 2010, 05:49 PM
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 Paladin  Joined: 14-March 10 From: Las Vegas |
Well done. Very powerful, and very Julian.
You handled her fall into unconsciousness and recovery in a wonderfully immersive manner. I could feel what Julian did. So, now we know that our hero has been 'intercepted' by a few more gates - that of course required her action. It seems Martin understands and Jauffre. . . not so much. Very creative that you are displaying quite different reactions from the two men to the same words. My money's with Martin. He's a Septim for a reason. As always, just a joy to read!  This post has been edited by Acadian: Sep 3 2010, 06:56 PM -------------------- |
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haute ecole rider Old Habits Die Hard Part Three Aug 18 2010, 03:46 PM
haute ecole rider Now Julian has to confront her old nemesis.
*****... Aug 18 2010, 04:04 PM D.Foxy Strange that I had just watched, and liked, ... Aug 18 2010, 04:23 PM hazmick Hurrah for Carandial. Hurrah for Marz. Hurrah for ... Aug 18 2010, 04:27 PM SubRosa So Carandial is sweet on Julian! *imagines all... Aug 18 2010, 05:07 PM Acadian I'm glad that you displayed Neen-Zun as an exa... Aug 18 2010, 06:08 PM treydog Another wonderful entry. And you capture the comp... Aug 18 2010, 07:55 PM Olen Good show on that chapter though I suspect that th... Aug 19 2010, 05:30 PM haute ecole rider @Foxy: Thanks for pointing out that even old women... Aug 20 2010, 04:03 PM SubRosa Poor Ursanne, going back to face her is always so ... Aug 20 2010, 04:16 PM haute ecole rider Thanks, SubRosa.
I just wanted to let everyone kn... Aug 20 2010, 04:26 PM SubRosa That comes out much more organically. The added de... Aug 20 2010, 04:40 PM hazmick No, I don't have a twin. Why do you ask? All... Aug 20 2010, 04:47 PM Acadian I went back and read the revision of Neen-Zun. Yu... Aug 20 2010, 05:03 PM treydog A sad but necessary task, telling Ursanne that wha... Aug 20 2010, 05:07 PM mALX Well I for one always thought Julian was beautiful... Aug 20 2010, 05:56 PM Destri Melarg Chapter 14.1 Skooma Cravings
Neen-zun’s story is ... Aug 20 2010, 06:42 PM haute ecole rider @SubRosa: I’m glad you liked the rewrite of ... Aug 22 2010, 07:11 PM treydog I wondered how the cool, rational Julian would far... Aug 22 2010, 07:28 PM hazmick would that be the occupational safety and health a... Aug 22 2010, 07:43 PM mALX I love this quest! Can't wait to see the ... Aug 22 2010, 09:51 PM Acadian Fun and variety!
Ah, the dilemma of not qu... Aug 23 2010, 01:29 AM SubRosa Hmm, now I am wondering if Julian will meet Wrothk... Aug 23 2010, 01:33 AM Olen That quest is by far my favourite, brilliantly fun... Aug 23 2010, 11:31 PM Winter Wolf I am still here, reading along, and enjoying this ... Aug 24 2010, 01:57 AM haute ecole rider @treydog: For a long time I wondered how Julian wo... Aug 24 2010, 05:00 PM hazmick living in England, I'm not that knowledgeable ... Aug 24 2010, 05:27 PM Olen I enjoyed the conversation at the end, it did well... Aug 24 2010, 05:43 PM treydog Adding in the concern that Paint might be in jeopa... Aug 24 2010, 06:29 PM SubRosa Poor Julian. I never liked that quest either, for ... Aug 25 2010, 01:07 AM mALX I'll bet that is a hard quest for you to enjoy... Aug 25 2010, 01:46 AM Acadian Superbly done, Rider.
Initially that quest seem... Aug 25 2010, 02:28 AM haute ecole rider @hazmick: Yes, both Julian and I would feel less g... Aug 26 2010, 02:48 PM treydog Now that is Julian at her scary, ex-Legion best... Aug 26 2010, 03:09 PM Acadian Thanks for breakfast in Weye, and glad to see Pain... Aug 26 2010, 03:11 PM D.Foxy Hautee....
Ever consider a career as a bill coll... Aug 26 2010, 03:23 PM hazmick I wouldn't want to mess with Julian, powerful ... Aug 26 2010, 04:06 PM SubRosa I thought you all call me sage because I remind yo... Aug 26 2010, 04:33 PM
mALX
I thought you all call me sage because I remind y... Aug 26 2010, 06:25 PM Olen I had wondered how you would resolve that quest. ... Aug 26 2010, 04:56 PM haute ecole rider @trey: I see you thought the relationship between ... Aug 28 2010, 05:27 PM mALX Woo Hoo !!!!! Deep Throat, hu... Aug 28 2010, 06:47 PM hazmick I was just playing through this mission this morni... Aug 28 2010, 06:54 PM treydog Little to add to what has already been noted. Jus... Aug 28 2010, 07:11 PM Olen I like this quest, and I suspect Julian will too, ... Aug 28 2010, 07:27 PM SubRosa As Julian admitted herself, she just cannot say no... Aug 28 2010, 10:13 PM haute ecole rider Now there's a tempting thought!
No, hones... Aug 29 2010, 12:00 AM mALX
Now there's a tempting thought!
No, hone... Aug 29 2010, 12:06 AM Acadian Julian has really good spider senses and and power... Aug 29 2010, 02:15 AM D.Foxy Deep throat...
I wonder what that is???
I am SO... Aug 29 2010, 03:06 AM mALX
Deep throat...
I wonder what that is???
I am S... Aug 29 2010, 03:09 AM haute ecole rider @mALX: There were things I didn’t notice whe... Aug 30 2010, 04:37 PM mALX Oooh, you have really made this quest personalized... Aug 30 2010, 04:55 PM treydog You capture the oppressive atmosphere of Seridur’s... Aug 30 2010, 04:59 PM mALX
[b]the underclass (Khajiit and Argonians in th... Aug 30 2010, 05:03 PM treydog
[b]the underclass (Khajiit and Argonians in t... Aug 30 2010, 05:23 PM SubRosa Poor Julian, found out as the Hero of Kvatch once ... Aug 30 2010, 05:02 PM hazmick good chapter, once again. It's good to see Ju... Aug 30 2010, 07:02 PM Acadian I'm getting quite swept up in this! It... Aug 30 2010, 08:03 PM Olen I think I've said it before but I'll say i... Aug 30 2010, 10:01 PM Remko I always enjoyed killing Seridur...... slowly........ Aug 31 2010, 03:43 PM haute ecole rider @mALX: I knew that about the Brotherhood. Vampire ... Sep 1 2010, 02:13 PM hazmick A good portrayal of ardaline and varmori, a slight... Sep 1 2010, 02:31 PM treydog The scene between Vamori and Ardaline was just won... Sep 1 2010, 03:21 PM D.Foxy Two words, Hautee. Only two words.
HELL YEAH... Sep 1 2010, 03:23 PM D.Foxy And ESSS for YOU, Trey, all I can say
is what the ... Sep 1 2010, 03:24 PM Remko Aaah, now we see Lerus' "incompetence... Sep 1 2010, 04:32 PM Olen A most satisfying part. The resolution to the bra... Sep 1 2010, 05:29 PM mALX OOOOHHHH! A deviation from Bethesda's min... Sep 1 2010, 06:57 PM Acadian Two wonderful segments. :P
Ardaline's staf... Sep 1 2010, 09:43 PM SubRosa Don’t worry, the Brotherhood quest will be complet... Sep 1 2010, 09:46 PM haute ecole rider @hazmick: Thanks for the vote of approval on the f... Sep 3 2010, 04:47 PM mALX BWAAAAH! After all she's done they are go... Sep 3 2010, 06:34 PM SubRosa On Lerus, I do not see how she is recruiting Julia... Sep 3 2010, 07:24 PM hazmick Wow, powerful stuff Haute. I'm on the edge of ... Sep 3 2010, 07:38 PM Olen Well first all from head and not influenced by the... Sep 3 2010, 08:13 PM treydog A part of me wants to wring Jauffre's neck- a ... Sep 3 2010, 11:08 PM haute ecole rider @Acadian: I’m glad that you are enjoying my ongoin... Sep 5 2010, 04:52 PM hazmick Jauffre! that sly fox, he knows more than he... Sep 5 2010, 05:38 PM mALX ARGH! Finally she is going to get her knee fi... Sep 5 2010, 05:45 PM Acadian Lots of background filled in here. I'm impres... Sep 5 2010, 06:16 PM SubRosa formerly a munifex in the Legio I
This little pass... Sep 5 2010, 06:24 PM treydog You managed to save Jauffre from a fate worse than... Sep 5 2010, 09:05 PM Olen Now there was some development of Julian. I liked... Sep 5 2010, 09:17 PM Remko Pfff. tell me about it, dislocated my left shoulde... Sep 6 2010, 11:06 AM haute ecole rider @hazmick: You’ve nailed it! Jauffre plays his ... Sep 7 2010, 02:38 PM hazmick *Thud* Ow, that was so intense I fell out of my ch... Sep 7 2010, 03:04 PM treydog Oh my. The “dream sequence” (or was it something ... Sep 7 2010, 03:19 PM SubRosa That dream sequence was not only beautiful, but it... Sep 7 2010, 04:48 PM mALX ARGH!!!!!!! Don... Sep 7 2010, 06:54 PM Olen Now there was a part which really shines out even ... Sep 7 2010, 08:09 PM Destri Melarg Okay, I’m back with my obligatory wall of te... Sep 7 2010, 09:37 PM Acadian Magnificent, Rider. Powerful, beautiful, revealin... Sep 7 2010, 10:59 PM D.Foxy This was so good, I have even exiled Mr. Dhertee I... Sep 8 2010, 01:43 AM Remko The dream sequence part was very vivd. It felt a l... Sep 8 2010, 11:47 AM haute ecole rider @hazmick: I hope you didn’t have to go to the ER... Sep 9 2010, 03:11 PM Remko I liked "Gladiator" entirely but that... Sep 9 2010, 03:40 PM treydog
Yes, there are all kinds of “safety” and “comfor... Sep 9 2010, 03:54 PM SubRosa A nice simple segment that both brings us up to sp... Sep 9 2010, 04:02 PM |
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