Lots of background filled in here. I'm impressed with Jauffre's network of intelligence. It would seem appropriate for the head of the Blades, and is a wonderful tool to help flesh out our modest Julian.
You also make it clear that Martin does indeed have a past. His knowledge of Daedra and sigil stones is impressive.
I loved using the flashback to introduce the horror of clannfears and the loss of Julian's shield. Unless I'm reading too much into things, it also hints at how Julian is growing in her game. Clannfears (or their runts) imply a character with a few levels behind them.
I'm so pleased that it seems our poor hero may finally get some significant relief for that knee.
Wonderful, Rider!
