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sford564
post Sep 5 2010, 07:04 AM
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Okay, I already posted this on fanfiction.net, but I've revised it a little now. Soooo... here it is. biggrin.gif It starts out a little dark and gets lighter as it goes.


Chapter 1: Fulfilling a Promise

The Nord made his way through the forest toward the traveling entertainers’ carts. There were all sorts of low lives of every race in this little gathering. Some of the scum wanted to see the bear baiting or to bet on the pit fights. Others wanted to buy slaves. Others still came to have sex with or buy some of the kidnapped girls the travelers had with them.

Sure, slavery was illegal, but it didn’t matter as long as you didn’t get caught. After Emperor Martin’s sacrifice, everyone’s attention was focused on cleaning their world up again from the Oblivion scum and rebuilding it again. Then, when things began to settle down, the talk of the new emperor exploded into several skirmishes, until most citizens didn’t care who ruled, as long as the deaths stopped. Now that the new High Chancellor took over rule, things were peaceful again for the moment. Alas, though, with all the strife that had taken place, the High Chancellor didn’t have enough time or man power to take care of every problem across the land, which meant that slavers began to rise up here and there in various parts of the world.


The Nord shivered a little and pulled the cloak further over his head so that no one could see him as he rode up to the camp. He had promised the dying Khajiit that he’d find her daughter, but he never expected to find her in a place like this. Still, though, he didn’t have as hard a time finding her as he had expected. It seemed that the sight of the four-eared half breed Khajiit made a lot of stir in every town she was brought to.

As soon as he entered the camp, he was surrounded by a group of dangerous looking men. “I’m looking for a Khajiit half-breed. Four ears,” he informed them.

“We have nothing like that here,” one of the men told him, not liking the looks of the Nord.

“Ahhh, so you’re the one asking around, are you?” another asked.

“What do you want, stranger?”

“I want to buy her,” the Nord answered.

“She’s not for sale!”

“She will be,” the Nord assured, slipping off his horse next to them. The vagabonds backed away a little, as the Nord towered over most of them. “Take me to her,” he demanded. No one moved.

The Nord slipped off his hood, and everyone backed away even more, horrified. There was no real face on the Nord; instead, there were two black eyes and two ears in a mass of scarred and torn flesh. He looked inhuman enough to be one of the Oblivion spawns he had hunted many years ago.

“Now,” the Nord growled. The group instantly spilt away from him and one vagabond, too scared to disobey, made his way through camp – nearly running to get away from the Nord – to where the Four-eared Khajiit was locked.

There was a small group of laughing, jeering people in front of the cage. They didn’t even notice as the Nord walked behind them.

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post Sep 9 2010, 04:58 PM
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Acadian, thanks for the advice. I’ll slow down a little now. Sorry. tongue.gif I’m glad you liked the fight scene. Lol. It gave me great difficulty, so I’m usually more critical of things that don’t come as easy.
hazmick, Remko, thanks so much for the comments. biggrin.gif
mALX, I’m glad you were able to find it on fanfiction.net, and thanks so much for all the comments and suggestions you gave me there! biggrin.gif




Chapter 5: Her Three Choices

The Nord fell to his knees. The Khajiit jumped to the ground before he landed, crying softly at the pain in her legs. She looked in amazement and horror at the warrior in front of her. His face was pale now, his body was covered in his own and many others’ blood, and his sword had fallen from his hand.

The Four-eared Khajiit slowly dragged the heavy sword away from his grasp. He did not protest, but just look up at her, waiting for her to make her move.

After several seconds she slowly lifted the blade up with both arms, cradling it for extra strength, and placed it in his lap. She drew back a little.

“Come,” he commanded weakly. With great effort he rose, sword in hand, and went to the carts of slaves. The slaves backed away as he swung his blade against the lock. After a few hits, it broke open.

“Search the bodies and free the others,” the Nord commanded. “And one of you bring me fresh water and bandages for myself and the Khajiit.”

The newly freed slaves scrambled to do as they were told. Any slavers still alive were killed, and the Nord commanded that all the bodies were searched for any valuables. All good clothes were to be stripped off them and cleaned in boiling water.

There were two groups of slaves. The men, who were used as cheap work hands, were mostly Khajiit, Orcs, and Argonians – people who would not be missed. The women were of all races, most of them very young and beautiful. They were to be sold as “wives”.

Both groups of slaves did as they were told, and brought clean water and bandages for the Nord. The Four-eared Khajiit nearly ran several times when the others came near her, but the Nord tightly held onto her hand, keeping her beside him all the while. She could have broken free from him if she really tried to, but his firm grasp seemed to reassure her as much as it scared her.

The Nord had the Khajiit help him remove his clothing and give it to the freed slaves to be cleaned. He then had her wash out his cuts. She obeyed, though she cringed and ducked every time he hissed or cursed in agony.

The Nord then made the Four-eared Khajiit sit down as he examined her wounds. He washed the blood off her, and, after cleaning each wound, and dabbing them with a stinging substance he put on a little, clean rag, he made her drink a strange liquid from a strange looking vial.

“This will heal you,” he explained as he took one for himself.

Alas, when he examined her second pair of ears, his vile, powerful potion would only close the tears. “The flesh is torn off the ears – it will be scarred for the rest of your life,” he gently told her. She seemed too much in pain to worry about that, though.

One of the wounds she received in the side of her stomach hurt a great deal more than the others. When he brought the clean cloth across it, she cried out and, jumping back a little in her seat, hissed threateningly. The Nord ignored this though.

“Shut up,” he told scolded. “Do you think I liked getting an arrow in my chest to save your skinny little self? No. So you don’t complain about a little pain like this. If it gets too bad as I clean these out, dig your fingernails into the chair and cry. Understand? Now don’t worry, I’m going to give you something to heal these up. I just need to clean them first.”

His voice was so serious that the half-breed Khajiit felt she had to obey him, but there was something more, too. There was a softness in his black eyes and a gentleness in his deep, harsh voice that made her trust him. She very reluctantly slid back in her chair, and, digging her fingernails into it, allowed him to continue.

“I want you to talk to me,” he told her as he worked on. “I don’t want you hissing at me. If something is hurting you, I need you to tell me. Hissing and growling isn’t going to let me know what you think or feel.”


That night as everyone slept, the Four-eared Khajiit slowly crawled out from under the thick blanket the Nord had put her in. He told her that he wouldn’t put her in a cage, but that he didn’t trust her yet, so he had her hands tied in front of her and a rope tied around her waist. The rope was connected to his wrist so that if she made any fast movement, he’d know.

She observed that he had his sword and a dagger close at hand.

It was very easy to slip out of the ropes because he didn’t tie them as tightly as he should have; he didn’t seem to want to hurt her.

She carefully slipped the dagger away from his hand. She now had three choices in front of her:

Firstly, she could stay. He seemed to be nice to her. But what if that changed? Would she get another opportunity to escape after this? Now he was still wounded and sleeping; escape would be easy.

But when he was no longer wounded, what would happen then? He was so much bigger and stronger than she, and a fighter like none other that she had ever seen. Escape from him would be impossible.

Still, she had never known what it was like to be alone and to fend for herself. Even worse, she was a half-breed birth defect with four ears. All anyone wanted to do was laugh and throw things at her. What did he want with her? Did he intend to hurt her? Did he want a servant? Did he want a wife? Would being the wife of a big monster like him really be that bad if he was nice to her? Yes, he was ugly and deformed looking, but that didn’t mean he was bad. She was ugly and deformed, and she wasn’t bad, was she?

She shook her head and pondered that for a while.

Then, secondly, she could run away. She could try to escape as he was wounded and slept. But, still, there were many creatures out there. She didn’t really know how to protect herself. And, of course, he’d come after her. If he could kill all those men, then he could definitely hunt her down.

Or, thirdly, she could kill him and run away. That was the best choice. If he was dead, he couldn’t come after her. She’d feel much better if all she had to fight were the many beasts of the forest instead of the barbarian Nord and said beasts.

She sat beside the sleeping Nord pondering all of these thoughts. The dagger lay ready in her hand, and a couple times she raised it above his chest. Something always made her pull away, though.

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sford564   The Nord and the Four-Eared Khajiit   Sep 5 2010, 07:04 AM
sford564   Chapter 2: The Feral Khajiit The Four-eared Khaj...   Sep 5 2010, 07:05 AM
hazmick   awesome. I think i'm going to like this story....   Sep 5 2010, 12:34 PM
mALX   Whew! I was not expecting that at all! A...   Sep 5 2010, 03:41 PM
sford564   Hehehehe. Thanks for the comments guys! :D Gla...   Sep 6 2010, 02:55 AM
sford564   Okay, so I'm not the best at fight scenes... T...   Sep 6 2010, 02:57 AM
Acadian   Welcome to the forums! Now. SLOW DOWN, pleas...   Sep 6 2010, 03:35 AM
mALX   I held my breath through the last two chapters...   Sep 6 2010, 04:03 AM
hazmick   I love the fight scene, very nicely done. I'm ...   Sep 6 2010, 11:33 AM
Remko   ......eagerly awaiting more......   Sep 6 2010, 12:38 PM
mALX   I couldn't stand the suspense, I went to the F...   Sep 6 2010, 06:26 PM
hazmick   “The flesh is torn off the ears – it will be sca...   Sep 9 2010, 05:50 PM
sford564   “The flesh is torn off the ears – it will be sc...   Sep 9 2010, 06:10 PM
mALX   You brought out a truism in this story - a lot of ...   Sep 9 2010, 05:32 PM
sford564   You brought out a truism in this story - a lot of...   Sep 9 2010, 06:04 PM
mALX   You brought out a truism in this story - a lot o...   Sep 9 2010, 06:24 PM
Acadian   Excellent sobering aftermath where your characters...   Sep 10 2010, 02:48 AM
Remko   I really liked the last part but I would have love...   Sep 10 2010, 10:21 AM
sford564   Thanks for all the responses ya'll! :D Ch...   Sep 11 2010, 08:27 PM
sford564   Chapter 7: Baths After washing his hair and scr...   Sep 11 2010, 08:28 PM
haute ecole rider   I've waited to comment until I had a good feel...   Sep 11 2010, 08:45 PM
Acadian   This is. . . lovely! And developing very slow...   Sep 12 2010, 02:50 AM
mALX   The baths is my favorite chapter - Four Ears playf...   Sep 12 2010, 05:00 AM
Rachel the Breton   * stomps foot and wags tail in annoyance * Well?...   Sep 19 2010, 08:09 PM
sford564   Thank you, haute ecole rider, I’m glad you enjoy i...   Sep 20 2010, 07:10 PM
sford564   Chapter 9: A Name for the Khajiit The Khajiit was...   Sep 20 2010, 07:11 PM
haute ecole rider   I'm still enjoying this! one nit: it...   Sep 20 2010, 07:20 PM
mALX   I loved it when Four Ears started talking - not ju...   Sep 21 2010, 03:21 PM
sford564   haute ecole rider: Thanks - fixed that one. :P :D ...   Sep 25 2010, 05:18 AM
sford564   Chapter 11: Punishment It rained all that evening...   Sep 25 2010, 05:20 AM
mALX   I love it when she talks in third person !...   Sep 25 2010, 06:47 PM
sford564   Chapter 12: Crossing the River The lightning stor...   Oct 1 2010, 03:51 AM
Rachel the Breton   "No drop," she reminded him. It took h...   Oct 1 2010, 04:42 AM
haute ecole rider   That sums up their developing relationship at th...   Oct 1 2010, 04:22 AM
mALX   I loved this chapter !!!! Nord s...   Oct 1 2010, 04:24 AM
sford564   @ All: Thanks for the comments - I tried really ha...   Oct 4 2010, 04:38 AM
sford564   Chapter 14: Scars from the Past After they had le...   Oct 4 2010, 04:45 AM
mALX   You have a tremendous ability to bring out the emo...   Oct 4 2010, 10:24 AM
sford564   You have a tremendous ability to bring out the em...   Oct 4 2010, 08:07 PM
mALX   You have a tremendous ability to bring out the e...   Oct 6 2010, 06:35 AM
haute ecole rider   I read your post this morning but didn't have ...   Oct 4 2010, 10:13 PM
Remko   I agree with the ladies. Wonderful characterisatio...   Oct 6 2010, 09:49 AM
sford564   Okay, this chapter is more fluff than anything els...   Oct 8 2010, 08:06 PM
mALX   One of my fave chapters, the playfulness of Four E...   Oct 8 2010, 08:13 PM
sford564   Chapter 16: Igor’s Inn The Nord didn’t bother tr...   Oct 8 2010, 08:19 PM
mALX   Nord jealous of Igor, ROFL !!!! I...   Oct 8 2010, 08:37 PM
Rachel the Breton   Good stuff! I admit, I too cheated on fanficti...   Oct 9 2010, 05:03 AM
sford564   Chapter 17: Jo Dar They set out again after an ho...   Oct 11 2010, 06:53 PM
sford564   Chapter 18: Life after Death After learning of h...   Oct 11 2010, 06:53 PM
sford564   Chapter 19: Trouble at the Temple The priests at ...   Oct 11 2010, 06:54 PM
mALX   Even on the second read I cried when her mother di...   Oct 11 2010, 07:14 PM
sford564   @ Rachel. Ahhh, good, you had better. ;) Hmm... d...   Oct 15 2010, 07:36 PM
sford564   Chapter 21: Returning to the Imperial City When ...   Oct 15 2010, 07:37 PM
haute ecole rider   So now we see the paths of Mara and the Nord begin...   Oct 15 2010, 08:17 PM
mALX   You show the gamut of the lower end of true human ...   Oct 15 2010, 10:25 PM
sford564   Chapter 22: Troubled Sleep The mage brought the N...   Oct 18 2010, 05:46 PM
mALX   You catch human emotion as well as you do feline -...   Oct 18 2010, 05:56 PM
sford564   Chapter 23: The Mages’ Celebration A mage info...   Oct 20 2010, 01:35 AM
haute ecole rider   Aww! I thought you rushed things a little in ...   Oct 20 2010, 01:44 AM
mALX   I could kick Nord in the last couple chapters, but...   Oct 20 2010, 03:49 AM


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