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Zalphon
post Aug 28 2010, 03:51 AM
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Prologue

I kneeled before Emperor Pelagius, we all did. The year was 4E 575. He had come to greet the Imperial Legion’s soon-to-be soldiers in Morrowind. The Great Houses were back to their former power, thanks to Divayth Fyr’s work to restore it to what it was before Lie Rock hit.

The cities were gone, but some were rebuilt. We were going to Morrowind, to defend against the Argonians who were trying to take it again. I was one of the battle-mages to be going to Vvardenfell.

Pelagius stated, “You are the Empire’s Finest. The Marsh Knights as they call themselves try yet again to take Morrowind. Some of you will go to the Main Land to defend against their forces; others will go to Vvardenfell to keep order.”

“Listen up, soldiers,” Knight of the Dragon Trask Gro-Tralog barked. “Once we win this war and the Marsh Knights are captured, we’re all coming back here to Cyrodiil as war heroes.”

We all cheered and raised our blades with enthusiasm. About five-thousand of us stood in the streets of the Imperial City at the Palace District. We wore suits of Imperial-Steel Armor, while the officers wore suits of Templar Armor made from ebony, but painted to be gold.

After the Emperor left, my friend, Saraya smiled, “You looking forward to going to your homeland, you Ashen-Born son of a vampire?” Her smile revealed brilliant white teeth. She was an Imperial raised in Elsewyr, which made it strange her teeth were so clean due to all the sugar.

“Do khajiit smoke Skooma?” I asked rhetorically. Saraya smiled at me gently. We had known each other since we enlisted five years ago. She was my bunk mate and she was one in a million of friends.

“Kalarn,” she sighed with a grin. “You always mock Khajiits. Did one of those mean khajiits get your tongue when you were little?”

I simply chuckled, “Funny, now I need to go.” I walked away, wading through the streets of the Imperial City. Hundreds of people looked at me, some saluted, some scowled, and others paid no notice. I was a hero at least to some. The Marsh Knights hated all Dunmer.

The moon rose and the streets emptied. In an alley, I noticed a young Breton girl casting a spell and a Skooma pipe lighting up. A tear burned my eyes, another life lost to the drug.

Imperium Tong twenty-five years ago had a lot of it in the circulation, and then some Bosmer single-handedly took them out with the help of an Argonian and a khajiit. At least that’s what the history books said.

I found myself crawling to a tavern, it was warmly, quiet, and tranquil. The Tavern Keeper smiled. An aging imperial dressed in a blue shirt and black pants smiled. “Can I get a room?”

He nodded and as I pulled out my coin-purse, “Sorry, Soldier. Your money’s no good here. The bed is upstairs to the left, here’s the key.” I snatched the key and headed up the stairs to blissful sleep.

Tomorrow, Vvardenfell awaited me. Champion Kalarn Dralas of the Imperial Legion. Five years ago, I was just a recruit, but my outstanding duty has earned me a position right below the Knights.

My mind faded into the dream world. Vaermina’s realm...


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post Sep 24 2010, 02:41 AM
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I'm also writing a short story for the school literary journal (an actual book of stories and stuff), it's called "Dementia." Once I finish, I'll post it for all who want to read. I want it to be at least 40 pages long.

Edit: But before I'm tarred and feathered, I'm only working on it at lunch and during my spare time at school!

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Zalphon   Blood and Corruption   Aug 28 2010, 03:51 AM
hazmick   :D I am gonna love this. Marsh Knights sound grea...   Aug 28 2010, 11:04 AM
Acadian   Nice start. Your hero seems to have some depth th...   Aug 28 2010, 01:17 PM
mALX   I have to agree with Acadian - really nice start -...   Aug 28 2010, 01:20 PM
treydog   This has a lot of promise. Interesting characters...   Aug 29 2010, 03:43 AM
Zalphon   Hazmick, this is almost six-hundred years later. ...   Aug 29 2010, 04:37 AM
Zalphon   Chapter One: Voyage to Vvardenfell I awoke to t...   Sep 1 2010, 07:40 PM
hazmick   ooh, another good chapter. We can see small parts ...   Sep 1 2010, 07:50 PM
mALX   I have to agree with Hazmick, this chapter was ver...   Sep 1 2010, 11:37 PM
Acadian   Nice. I see a revealing flashback. Also what app...   Sep 2 2010, 01:01 AM
Zalphon   Chapter Two: Nightmares When we reached Vvarden...   Sep 7 2010, 04:01 PM
hazmick   A strange dream is the best way to start an advent...   Sep 7 2010, 04:37 PM
mALX   Woo Hoo! I am intrigued by the shared dream -...   Sep 7 2010, 09:10 PM
Destri Melarg   ‘Strike and J’Cat are back! At least this tim...   Sep 8 2010, 09:40 AM
Acadian   So Vvardenfell is different, but just as dangerous...   Sep 9 2010, 03:26 AM
Zalphon   Thanks, Acadian. A Kwama Worker? Remember, this ...   Sep 9 2010, 04:31 AM
Zalphon   Chapter Three: Divayth’s Tower J’skooma telepor...   Sep 11 2010, 01:11 AM
Acadian   Uh-oh. Shadow Racers. Tome of. . . a mystery...   Sep 11 2010, 03:23 AM
mALX   Uh-oh. Shadow Racers. Tome of. . . a mystery...   Sep 12 2010, 05:15 AM
Zalphon   Sorry it has been so long lately. I've been b...   Sep 22 2010, 02:18 AM
mALX   Sorry it has been so long lately. I've been ...   Sep 22 2010, 03:47 AM
Acadian   Thanks, Z for checking in and letting us know what...   Sep 22 2010, 04:00 AM
Zalphon   Chapter Four: Discovery and Despair The ghosts ...   Sep 28 2010, 04:40 AM
mALX   My fave part in this is the letter from Divayth Fy...   Sep 28 2010, 01:48 PM
Acadian   My goodness. This episode is some your finest wri...   Sep 28 2010, 03:41 PM
Destri Melarg   I agree with Acadian. All of this was good, but t...   Sep 29 2010, 05:21 PM
Zalphon   Thanks guys :)   Sep 30 2010, 01:46 PM
Zalphon   Chapter Five: Aboard the Dragon’s Moon I awoke ...   Oct 7 2010, 02:29 AM
Acadian   Poor QS. His young charges never seem to learn. ....   Oct 7 2010, 02:38 AM
Destri Melarg   It seems that Quick-Strike has overestimated Divay...   Oct 7 2010, 09:53 AM
Zalphon   Divayth Fyr, we knew you well... You cured our co...   Oct 8 2010, 01:56 AM
mALX   I'm in tears over poor Divayth's head...GA...   Oct 8 2010, 03:44 AM
Zalphon   Chapter Six: Knight-Captain Raynil Sarethi I aw...   Oct 9 2010, 02:32 AM
mALX   Your writing feels natural, I saw several places I...   Oct 9 2010, 02:36 AM
Acadian   A rather dire situation here. . . gulp indeed...   Oct 9 2010, 03:19 AM
Zalphon   Good point, Acadian. And Malx, I'm glad you...   Oct 9 2010, 06:12 AM
Zalphon   Chapter Seven: The Transformation I stood there...   Oct 12 2010, 02:51 AM
mALX   Your timing, descriptions, dialogue - everything i...   Oct 12 2010, 09:24 AM
Zalphon   Good news, guys! Oblivion's Edge is going...   Oct 13 2010, 02:18 AM
mALX   Congrats, Zalphon !!!!   Oct 13 2010, 02:45 AM
Acadian   Chapter 7: Out of the frying pan into the fire. ...   Oct 13 2010, 03:16 AM
Zalphon   Chapter Eight: Reborn I awoke in a dark, dome-l...   Oct 16 2010, 04:12 AM
mALX   WOOOOOOOOOOOOOT !!!!!! I...   Oct 16 2010, 06:38 AM
Acadian   WooHoo! Kalarn joins the dark side! Hmm,...   Oct 17 2010, 12:18 AM
Zalphon   Chapter Nine: The Elders I looked into the mirr...   Oct 18 2010, 01:42 AM
mALX   Oh, it was the blade talking !!!!...   Oct 18 2010, 01:47 AM
Acadian   Clever to riposte with the talking sword! :P   Oct 18 2010, 02:23 AM
Zalphon   Chapter Ten: The Beginning of a New Empire Soul...   Nov 4 2010, 03:44 AM
mALX   NOOOOOOOOO!!!!! Don't let...   Nov 5 2010, 01:19 AM
Acadian   The talking sword is very clever - and what a wond...   Nov 6 2010, 01:27 PM
Zalphon   Anyone noticed this is an anti-hero fanfic, yet?   Nov 6 2010, 05:40 PM
Zalphon   Chapter Eleven: Heritage I looked into the mirr...   Nov 11 2010, 11:39 PM
Acadian   Nice flashback. Sheds some light on the past.   Nov 12 2010, 01:30 AM
mALX   Really great flashback! But would J'Skoom...   Nov 12 2010, 06:56 PM
Zalphon   Zalphon still lived, until the strike by our heroi...   Nov 12 2010, 07:06 PM
Zalphon   Chapter Twelve: Heritage II – Pilgrimage “Your ...   Nov 28 2010, 11:01 PM
mALX   Really powerful ending on that - Kalarn is impress...   Nov 29 2010, 03:04 AM
Acadian   I still like the talking sword. Some effectivel...   Dec 2 2010, 03:19 AM
Zalphon   Thank you, Acadian and Malx :) Well, well...Obliv...   Dec 2 2010, 04:45 AM
mALX   Thank you, Acadian and Malx :) Well, well...Obli...   Dec 2 2010, 04:49 AM
Zalphon   Not by anyone important, just by the school magazi...   Dec 2 2010, 04:50 AM
mALX   Not by anyone important, just by the school magaz...   Dec 2 2010, 04:56 AM
Zalphon   They may not, because it's so big.   Dec 2 2010, 05:02 AM
mALX   They may not, because it's so big. Can it ...   Dec 2 2010, 05:04 AM
Zalphon   They want around 5-10 pages, that'd mean cutti...   Dec 2 2010, 03:27 PM
Zalphon   Chapter Thirteen: Magicka Nightmare stopped at ...   Dec 2 2010, 03:29 PM
Zalphon   Epilogue Kalarn died in the Castle of the Black...   Dec 2 2010, 03:31 PM
mALX   Holy Cow, Zalphon !!!!! The e...   Dec 2 2010, 04:30 PM
Zalphon   FYI, just because in (i.e.) New Skyrim doesnt mean...   Dec 3 2010, 03:31 AM
mALX   FYI, just because in (i.e.) New Skyrim doesnt mea...   Dec 3 2010, 03:36 AM
Acadian   A rather epic ending, Zalpon. Well done! :)   Dec 3 2010, 04:09 AM
Zalphon   Eastern Skyrim is New Skyrim, silly Malx :) I...   Dec 3 2010, 04:16 AM
mALX   Eastern Skyrim is New Skyrim, silly Malx :) I...   Dec 3 2010, 04:29 AM
Zalphon   Well here it's safe for Zalphon. Over there m...   Dec 3 2010, 04:33 AM
mALX   Well here it's safe for Zalphon. Over there ...   Dec 3 2010, 04:36 AM
Zalphon   Just read it Malx! I think I may submit it to...   Dec 3 2010, 04:40 AM
mALX   Just read it Malx! I think I may submit it t...   Dec 3 2010, 04:53 AM
Zalphon   Two Worlds in the Bethsoft forums.   Dec 3 2010, 04:58 AM
mALX   Two Worlds in the Bethsoft forums. Before I re...   Dec 3 2010, 05:00 AM


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