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mALX
post Sep 24 2010, 06:12 AM
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The Arena Gladiator



The roar of the crowds kept me on my feet,
but I swayed and darkness hedged my vision.
Blood streamed in my eyes, I could not see.
One more wound, one more minute...I might be done,
when the match ends there can only be one.

The hilt of my sword was slippery and wet,
Sweat mixed with blood dripped on my hand.
My opponent should be just as injured, and yet
another blow on me he was able to land;
and without much trouble managed to stand.

Weakness overwhelming, sapping strength;
The blade in my hand too heavy to lift.
He had moved in close, barely an arm's length.
My parry was sloppy, I thrust and missed.
His slid through my belly with an icy hiss.

His eyes apologized as he twisted the blade,
I was too numb by then to feel the pain.
He thrust upwards, waiting for the sound to be made
that would tell him my lung was beginning to drain.
When he didn't hear it he thrust up again.

I heard it then, my lung tore with a "pop."
The blood coming out was bubbling with air.
Inside me I wanted to beg him to stop.
It was too late now, and I just didn't dare.
I felt my eyes freezing into a glassy stare.

My knees hit the ground first with a thud,
my bowels spilling out in a nasty pile.
Then my face plowed straight into the mud
I think I still breathed for a little while.
Then I heard the voice of Clavicus Vile

When I joined the Arena I always knew
that this day would eventually come.
When you enter those gates what they say is true,
Only one will go home when the day is done...
Today was the day that I wasn't the one.



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post Sep 28 2010, 08:11 AM
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Wow, first the epic (as usual, of course) poem from our great Foxy and then a cool battle ballad from Acadian. Ha, ha !! Anything is possible at Chorrol.emot-ninja1.gif

mALX, half the reason I have been quiet later is that I am playing too much Beth. I have a new +5 build Dunmer that is doing the MG recommendation and I am also pushing my 21st level sniper character through the quests in FO3 that I never completed before. All DLC done except for MZ. Never did buy it. cool.gif

I cant wait for Fallout Vegas. It will be awesome.
I shall keep an eye out for Acadian. I am sure he will be in the background somewhere!!

My poem -

A SAD DEMISE

The lightning cuts a jagged edge
across the leaden sky
A lonely man stands atop a ramp
waiting for his chance to die.

The wind buffets him against a pylon
and whips up his hair
The crowd roars behind him
a reminder that no one cares.

The world slowly spins
within the circus of his mind
A glazed eye now looks
at the world he has left behind.

But the honest man's feelings
are soon swept beneath the page
A sad hopeless tale
to be told be another sage.

And so he steps to the edge
to kiss goodbye the day
And like a true warrior
he faces whatever may.



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mALX   The Arena   Sep 24 2010, 06:12 AM
Remko   :O :O Loved it mALX!   Sep 24 2010, 10:31 AM
mALX   :O :O Loved it mALX! Thanks Remko ...   Sep 24 2010, 12:13 PM
ureniashtram   Are you sure you're our Resident Kitty? 'C...   Sep 24 2010, 12:17 PM
mALX   Are you sure you're our Resident Kitty? ...   Sep 24 2010, 12:23 PM
ureniashtram   ( the prey's eyes glanced to and fro, its inst...   Sep 24 2010, 12:34 PM
mALX   ( the prey's eyes glanced to and fro, its ins...   Sep 24 2010, 12:42 PM
Acadian   I'm not a fan of poetry . . . most of it caus...   Sep 24 2010, 04:20 PM
mALX   I'm not a fan of poetry . . . most of it cau...   Sep 24 2010, 04:30 PM
treydog   Not usually a fan of rhymed verse (except finding ...   Sep 24 2010, 06:07 PM
mALX   Not usually a fan of rhymed verse (except finding...   Sep 24 2010, 06:11 PM
Destri Melarg   OPTIMISTIC?! Which part? The part where the l...   Sep 24 2010, 08:58 PM
mALX   OPTIMISTIC?! Which part? The part where the ...   Sep 24 2010, 09:03 PM
mALX   * [u][b]The Chute It's like being born...   Sep 25 2010, 10:39 PM
Winter Wolf   Awesome poem mALX!!!! You have ca...   Sep 26 2010, 03:27 AM
mALX   Awesome poem mALX!!!! You have c...   Sep 26 2010, 03:38 AM
Destri Melarg   I want the thread to be an open place anyone can...   Sep 26 2010, 10:37 AM
D.Foxy   Well...before I go off TDY - here is something, of...   Sep 26 2010, 02:49 PM
mALX   WOO HOO!!! AWESOME FOXY !!...   Sep 26 2010, 04:01 PM
mALX   (Edit) - Thanks Destri !!!   Sep 26 2010, 06:02 PM
Acadian   Here is the one poem I have written. I wrote it a...   Sep 26 2010, 07:49 PM
mALX   Here is the one poem I have written. I wrote it ...   Sep 26 2010, 07:57 PM
mALX   WHEW !!! Winter Wolf, that was AWESOM...   Sep 28 2010, 01:22 PM
Destri Melarg   Foxy: Do us all a favor and start writing from the...   Sep 29 2010, 05:50 PM
mALX   Foxy: Do us all a favor and start writing from th...   Oct 1 2010, 03:18 PM
ureniashtram   Hey, got room for one more? First things first, th...   Oct 15 2010, 05:07 PM
mALX   Hey, got room for one more? First things first, t...   Oct 15 2010, 05:15 PM
ureniashtram   Thanks mALX! Having read 'Paradise Lost...   Oct 15 2010, 05:31 PM
mALX   Thanks mALX! Having read 'Paradise Lost...   Oct 15 2010, 05:34 PM
ureniashtram   Oh, be careful what you wish for, dear Resident Ki...   Oct 15 2010, 05:43 PM
mALX   Oh, be careful what you wish for, dear Resident K...   Oct 15 2010, 10:22 PM
ureniashtram   Can a poem be a poem when it doesn't rhymes? ...   Oct 15 2010, 11:23 PM
mALX   Can a poem be a poem when it doesn't rhymes? ...   Oct 15 2010, 11:30 PM
ureniashtram   Thanks, yet again, mALX!   Oct 15 2010, 11:35 PM
mALX   Thanks, yet again, mALX! Thank you for post...   Oct 15 2010, 11:39 PM
mALX   * [u][b]The Warrior's Friend [indent] The ...   Jun 26 2011, 01:29 AM
King Coin   Holy crap mALX! These poems blew me away!   Jun 26 2011, 02:08 AM
Acadian   Stunning, mALX! What a poignant tale of tru...   Jun 26 2011, 02:14 AM
mALX   @ King Coin - Thank you so much King Coin !...   Jul 1 2011, 12:35 AM
minque   Hah! Just found this thread! AWESOMEEEEEEE...   Jul 12 2011, 08:59 AM
mALX   Thank you so much Minque !! I just hope t...   Jul 17 2011, 02:53 PM


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