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sford564
post Sep 5 2010, 07:04 AM
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Okay, I already posted this on fanfiction.net, but I've revised it a little now. Soooo... here it is. biggrin.gif It starts out a little dark and gets lighter as it goes.


Chapter 1: Fulfilling a Promise

The Nord made his way through the forest toward the traveling entertainers’ carts. There were all sorts of low lives of every race in this little gathering. Some of the scum wanted to see the bear baiting or to bet on the pit fights. Others wanted to buy slaves. Others still came to have sex with or buy some of the kidnapped girls the travelers had with them.

Sure, slavery was illegal, but it didn’t matter as long as you didn’t get caught. After Emperor Martin’s sacrifice, everyone’s attention was focused on cleaning their world up again from the Oblivion scum and rebuilding it again. Then, when things began to settle down, the talk of the new emperor exploded into several skirmishes, until most citizens didn’t care who ruled, as long as the deaths stopped. Now that the new High Chancellor took over rule, things were peaceful again for the moment. Alas, though, with all the strife that had taken place, the High Chancellor didn’t have enough time or man power to take care of every problem across the land, which meant that slavers began to rise up here and there in various parts of the world.


The Nord shivered a little and pulled the cloak further over his head so that no one could see him as he rode up to the camp. He had promised the dying Khajiit that he’d find her daughter, but he never expected to find her in a place like this. Still, though, he didn’t have as hard a time finding her as he had expected. It seemed that the sight of the four-eared half breed Khajiit made a lot of stir in every town she was brought to.

As soon as he entered the camp, he was surrounded by a group of dangerous looking men. “I’m looking for a Khajiit half-breed. Four ears,” he informed them.

“We have nothing like that here,” one of the men told him, not liking the looks of the Nord.

“Ahhh, so you’re the one asking around, are you?” another asked.

“What do you want, stranger?”

“I want to buy her,” the Nord answered.

“She’s not for sale!”

“She will be,” the Nord assured, slipping off his horse next to them. The vagabonds backed away a little, as the Nord towered over most of them. “Take me to her,” he demanded. No one moved.

The Nord slipped off his hood, and everyone backed away even more, horrified. There was no real face on the Nord; instead, there were two black eyes and two ears in a mass of scarred and torn flesh. He looked inhuman enough to be one of the Oblivion spawns he had hunted many years ago.

“Now,” the Nord growled. The group instantly spilt away from him and one vagabond, too scared to disobey, made his way through camp – nearly running to get away from the Nord – to where the Four-eared Khajiit was locked.

There was a small group of laughing, jeering people in front of the cage. They didn’t even notice as the Nord walked behind them.

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post Oct 8 2010, 08:06 PM
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Okay, this chapter is more fluff than anything else, but I wanted to show more of them together. The idea was actually inspired by a picture I saw a long time ago of an actor who was strong enough to let the actress he had just starred with sit on and stand on his arm... I always thought that was cool...

haute ecole rider: Thanks. biggrin.gif I’m glad you liked the part explaining his scars. I figured I had to explain those, but I wanted him to be able to tell the story. It would be easier for him to talk about something so traumatic to Mara, because she also went through episodes of hardships and torture in her life. Also, I thought that if he actually did tell her, it would be something that would help her understand and like him more.
Remko, thanks. biggrin.gif I fear poor Mara is always going to have her feral Khajiit moments. tongue.gif
mALX, hehe, I’m glad you like Four Ears. She’s the most unusual character I’ve ever written..but my favorite. biggrin.gif



Chapter 15: Playing in the Snow

Falkreath was a cold and barren looking place. To the Nord, this hard land and way of life seemed just fine – he was used to hardships and he loved the solitude. Also, it was in his blood to be immune to such low temperatures. His thick skin and many furs kept him warm and happy, but the poor thin-skinned, petite Bosmer-Khajiit couldn’t stand the cold.

She wore her two dresses over her pants and shirt, and then wore her cloak, his cloak, and an extra shirt of his, but she still shivered uncontrollably.

“Mara cold,” she cried.

“It’s Skyrim.”

“It’s cold.”

“No, it’s Skyrim.”

“Skyrim cold. Mara hate Skyrim. Sun hate Skyrim. Run from Skyrim.”

The Nord just laughed.

“Mara cold!” she cried again.

“Then maybe you should walk – it will make you warm.”

“Mara no want to walk,” she whined. “Mara get colder. Get snow in feet. Freeze legs. Then Mara freeze – die in cold.”

The Nord sighed. “Hold on for a second,” he told her. He climbed onto the horse beside her and, wrapping her up in his arms, told her, “Here this will keep you warmer.”

They rode on like that for the next few days and nights. Mara slept in the Nord’s arms whenever she was tired, and, even if she wasn’t sleeping, she usual was in his arms to keep her little body warm. She hated all the snow, so when she wasn’t riding on the horse or sleeping in his arms, she would climb onto his back so that he could carry her through it.

It soon became a great source of entertainment for her during the long cold days to bother him. She’d pull and tug on his hair until he became mightily annoyed. She’d blow on his ears and even occasionally lick them just to make him holler at her. She’d laugh so hard that she’d nearly fall off him. Every time she became too restless, he’d drop her into the snow and then stop her from getting onto the horse. She’d jump and cringe and whine so much that she’d soon promise not to bother him again as long as he got her out of the horrible snow. He did, of course, but it would be no more than thirty minutes later that she started more trouble.


One time when he had knocked her into the snow, she jumped up immediately and grabbed onto his arm, lifting herself off the ground. He threw his arm to side hoping to knock her off, but she not only managed to stay on, but also to climb up onto it.

He would have tossed her into the snow again, if she had not declared with excitement that he was able to hold her up with his arm.

“Of course,” he told her. “You’re really small, but I’m afraid –”

“No!” she cried. “Mara see how long Nord keep on arm.” She giggled a little and bounced up and down to see if his arm would give out under her weight. It did not. He walked along, his arm extended and the little Four-eared Khajiit sitting on it, laughing.

“Mara see if can kneel on arm. No drop Mara,” she told him. Leaning her body against his neck for support, she carefully knelt down on his arm. Giggling with glee, she bounced up and down on his outstretched arm.

“Mara stand!” she told him. Once again using the Nord, who sighed profusely but smiled secretly, to keep herself balanced, she stood on his arm. If she was not a very agile, careful creature, she would have fallen as he trudged through the thick snow. But she was very careful and was soon standing on his outstretched arm.

“Haha! Mara fly! Mara fly!” she cried, waving her arms about. She was so excited that she lost balance and fell. Squealing, she quickly jumped up and climbed onto the Nord’s back.

“Nasty snow! Go in Mara’s shirt.”

“Well then maybe Mara shouldn’t play around.”

“Nord really strong. Hold Mara on one arm. Nord hold Mara on hand?”

“Probably, but you’d have to stay really still.”

“Mara stay still if Nord lift up in one hand.”

“Okay then, get off.”

“What?! No!”

“Get off,” he instructed pushing her off with his shoulders.

Turning around toward her, he put his hand in front of her to let her know she couldn’t climb on him. Squatting in the snow, he had her stand on his knees. “Feet together,” He instructed. “That’s right. On this leg. Okay, now stand on my hand. I’m going to lift you – stay completely still.”

Her two little feet stood perfectly still on his open palm and he slowly lifted his hand off his knees and out to the side.

“Oh! Oh!” Mara cried with delight.

“Careful. Stay still.” He slowly rose from his knees.

Mara was completely delighted. Realizing that she wasn’t going to be able to stay still as she was too excited, she jumped off his hand and quickly climbed onto him, clinging to his neck as she kissed his face all over.

“Nord strong!” she declared. “And handsome. Handsome and strong.”

The Nord pushed away from her. “Don’t lie,” he instructed. “And get off.”

Mara just shook her head and continued to kiss him. The Nord lifted her off him and put her back on the horse. “We need to keep going,” he told her.

“Why?”

“Your mother is waiting for you.”

This put Mara in a more serious mood, but she still looked over longingly at the Nord – who tried to avoid her gaze – and later had him carry her on his outstretched arm, much to her delight.

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sford564   The Nord and the Four-Eared Khajiit   Sep 5 2010, 07:04 AM
sford564   Chapter 2: The Feral Khajiit The Four-eared Khaj...   Sep 5 2010, 07:05 AM
hazmick   awesome. I think i'm going to like this story....   Sep 5 2010, 12:34 PM
mALX   Whew! I was not expecting that at all! A...   Sep 5 2010, 03:41 PM
sford564   Hehehehe. Thanks for the comments guys! :D Gla...   Sep 6 2010, 02:55 AM
sford564   Okay, so I'm not the best at fight scenes... T...   Sep 6 2010, 02:57 AM
Acadian   Welcome to the forums! Now. SLOW DOWN, pleas...   Sep 6 2010, 03:35 AM
mALX   I held my breath through the last two chapters...   Sep 6 2010, 04:03 AM
hazmick   I love the fight scene, very nicely done. I'm ...   Sep 6 2010, 11:33 AM
Remko   ......eagerly awaiting more......   Sep 6 2010, 12:38 PM
mALX   I couldn't stand the suspense, I went to the F...   Sep 6 2010, 06:26 PM
sford564   Acadian, thanks for the advice. I’ll slow down a l...   Sep 9 2010, 04:58 PM
hazmick   “The flesh is torn off the ears – it will be sca...   Sep 9 2010, 05:50 PM
sford564   “The flesh is torn off the ears – it will be sc...   Sep 9 2010, 06:10 PM
mALX   You brought out a truism in this story - a lot of ...   Sep 9 2010, 05:32 PM
sford564   You brought out a truism in this story - a lot of...   Sep 9 2010, 06:04 PM
mALX   You brought out a truism in this story - a lot o...   Sep 9 2010, 06:24 PM
Acadian   Excellent sobering aftermath where your characters...   Sep 10 2010, 02:48 AM
Remko   I really liked the last part but I would have love...   Sep 10 2010, 10:21 AM
sford564   Thanks for all the responses ya'll! :D Ch...   Sep 11 2010, 08:27 PM
sford564   Chapter 7: Baths After washing his hair and scr...   Sep 11 2010, 08:28 PM
haute ecole rider   I've waited to comment until I had a good feel...   Sep 11 2010, 08:45 PM
Acadian   This is. . . lovely! And developing very slow...   Sep 12 2010, 02:50 AM
mALX   The baths is my favorite chapter - Four Ears playf...   Sep 12 2010, 05:00 AM
Rachel the Breton   * stomps foot and wags tail in annoyance * Well?...   Sep 19 2010, 08:09 PM
sford564   Thank you, haute ecole rider, I’m glad you enjoy i...   Sep 20 2010, 07:10 PM
sford564   Chapter 9: A Name for the Khajiit The Khajiit was...   Sep 20 2010, 07:11 PM
haute ecole rider   I'm still enjoying this! one nit: it...   Sep 20 2010, 07:20 PM
mALX   I loved it when Four Ears started talking - not ju...   Sep 21 2010, 03:21 PM
sford564   haute ecole rider: Thanks - fixed that one. :P :D ...   Sep 25 2010, 05:18 AM
sford564   Chapter 11: Punishment It rained all that evening...   Sep 25 2010, 05:20 AM
mALX   I love it when she talks in third person !...   Sep 25 2010, 06:47 PM
sford564   Chapter 12: Crossing the River The lightning stor...   Oct 1 2010, 03:51 AM
Rachel the Breton   "No drop," she reminded him. It took h...   Oct 1 2010, 04:42 AM
haute ecole rider   That sums up their developing relationship at th...   Oct 1 2010, 04:22 AM
mALX   I loved this chapter !!!! Nord s...   Oct 1 2010, 04:24 AM
sford564   @ All: Thanks for the comments - I tried really ha...   Oct 4 2010, 04:38 AM
sford564   Chapter 14: Scars from the Past After they had le...   Oct 4 2010, 04:45 AM
mALX   You have a tremendous ability to bring out the emo...   Oct 4 2010, 10:24 AM
sford564   You have a tremendous ability to bring out the em...   Oct 4 2010, 08:07 PM
mALX   You have a tremendous ability to bring out the e...   Oct 6 2010, 06:35 AM
haute ecole rider   I read your post this morning but didn't have ...   Oct 4 2010, 10:13 PM
Remko   I agree with the ladies. Wonderful characterisatio...   Oct 6 2010, 09:49 AM
mALX   One of my fave chapters, the playfulness of Four E...   Oct 8 2010, 08:13 PM
sford564   Chapter 16: Igor’s Inn The Nord didn’t bother tr...   Oct 8 2010, 08:19 PM
mALX   Nord jealous of Igor, ROFL !!!! I...   Oct 8 2010, 08:37 PM
Rachel the Breton   Good stuff! I admit, I too cheated on fanficti...   Oct 9 2010, 05:03 AM
sford564   Chapter 17: Jo Dar They set out again after an ho...   Oct 11 2010, 06:53 PM
sford564   Chapter 18: Life after Death After learning of h...   Oct 11 2010, 06:53 PM
sford564   Chapter 19: Trouble at the Temple The priests at ...   Oct 11 2010, 06:54 PM
mALX   Even on the second read I cried when her mother di...   Oct 11 2010, 07:14 PM
sford564   @ Rachel. Ahhh, good, you had better. ;) Hmm... d...   Oct 15 2010, 07:36 PM
sford564   Chapter 21: Returning to the Imperial City When ...   Oct 15 2010, 07:37 PM
haute ecole rider   So now we see the paths of Mara and the Nord begin...   Oct 15 2010, 08:17 PM
mALX   You show the gamut of the lower end of true human ...   Oct 15 2010, 10:25 PM
sford564   Chapter 22: Troubled Sleep The mage brought the N...   Oct 18 2010, 05:46 PM
mALX   You catch human emotion as well as you do feline -...   Oct 18 2010, 05:56 PM
sford564   Chapter 23: The Mages’ Celebration A mage info...   Oct 20 2010, 01:35 AM
haute ecole rider   Aww! I thought you rushed things a little in ...   Oct 20 2010, 01:44 AM
mALX   I could kick Nord in the last couple chapters, but...   Oct 20 2010, 03:49 AM


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