The Arena, A Poem Options

[mALX]

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The Arena Gladiator

The roar of the crowds kept me on my feet,
but I swayed and darkness hedged my vision.
Blood streamed in my eyes, I could not see.
One more wound, one more minute...I might be done,
when the match ends there can only be one.

The hilt of my sword was slippery and wet,
Sweat mixed with blood dripped on my hand.
My opponent should be just as injured, and yet
another blow on me he was able to land;
and without much trouble managed to stand.

Weakness overwhelming, sapping strength;
The blade in my hand too heavy to lift.
He had moved in close, barely an arm's length.
My parry was sloppy, I thrust and missed.
His slid through my belly with an icy hiss.

His eyes apologized as he twisted the blade,
I was too numb by then to feel the pain.
He thrust upwards, waiting for the sound to be made
that would tell him my lung was beginning to drain.
When he didn't hear it he thrust up again.

I heard it then, my lung tore with a "pop."
The blood coming out was bubbling with air.
Inside me I wanted to beg him to stop.
It was too late now, and I just didn't dare.
I felt my eyes freezing into a glassy stare.

My knees hit the ground first with a thud,
my bowels spilling out in a nasty pile.
Then my face plowed straight into the mud
I think I still breathed for a little while.
Then I heard the voice of Clavicus Vile

When I joined the Arena I always knew
that this day would eventually come.
When you enter those gates what they say is true,
Only one will go home when the day is done...
Today was the day that I wasn't the one.

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This post has been edited by mALX: Jun 26 2011, 12:57 AM

[ureniashtram]

Thanks mALX! Having read 'Paradise Lost' I just felt that I should make a poem regarding the fallen ones. The way John Milton potrays the Morning Star as a charismatic being was just epic! 'Heaven out of Hell, and Hell out of Heaven' was the thing that hooked me to that guy. WOW!

Well, my poem itself isn't even close to 'good'. First time, actually. You can actually see mistakes on that. I won't edit it, though. So you can see my mistake! Learn from it! Laid bare before you! Naked in the eyes of criticism!

(groans) I really shouldn't take this poem thing so seriously. Next thing you know, I'll be mowing this entire forum down with a barrage of poems, coming from the minigun of my mind!

Ugh! lol

This post has been edited by ureniashtram: Oct 15 2010, 05:31 PM