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Dec 6 2010, 10:16 PM
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From: Stuck in The Planes Of Oblivion

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Ok. First, I need to know if this is where i post my fanfic. I'm gonna continue my story here anyway, but please, someone tell me if it's not. Okay. For the story. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Written By Petra
PART 1
The last thing I remember is a member of the Imperial Guard staring down at me. He was glaring (although I couldn't really be sure, as his helmet was blocking my view of everything) at me, with a sword in his hand, and a shield strapped to his arm. It was then that I passed out.
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When I came to, I was lying on a small, uncomfortable cot. In a jail cell.
Not good, I thought. Not good at all. I had never been the follow-the-law-to-the-ends-of-Tamriel type, of course, but I knew a few basic rules.
1: Do not get put in jail.
Well, okay, that's the only one I know. But still.
"Ahh, you're a pretty one, aren't you? A Nord, no? But it is all wasted. You're going to die in here! Don't you see? Die, Nord, die!"
The blue-skinned Dunmer ranted on for some time, his loud voice echoing through my prison cell, and amplifying his overly-annoy, nasaly-sounding voice.
'Just my luck,' I thought. 'Not only do I have to be next to this stupid Dunmer, but my cell has to have good accoustics, too!'
As soon as I decided that I would punch him when he next spoke, the sound of footsteps drowned out his rant, taking my opportunity of violence with it.
"Hurry up, Barus! I won't risk the Emperors' life on your slow gait!" snapped a bossy Breton female. But why was she talking about the Emperor ? That was madness! Even I was taught to show respect to him, and here she was, mentioning his name as causually as if...
Oh. The woman stepped forward, and behind her was a Redguard. And behind HIM was the Emperor. Nevermind, then.
"Oh, Captain Renevault, I highly doubt that I am in any danger with you three around," said the Emeror, sounding amused. The man in front of the Emperor chuckled. Then the Breton (Captain Renevault, I assumed) saw me.
"What's this prisoner doing in here?!" she barked, spitting the word 'prisoner' out of the back of her throat, as if it were something nasty she had found on the back of her shoe. "This cell is supposed to be off limits!"
"Usual mix-up at the Watch, probably," said the Redguard, Barus, sounding exasperated. Renevault fingered a key, and opened the door.
A man appeared behind the Emperor, and I barely had enough time to gasp before he attacked him. Surprisingly, the Emperor held his own, until the attacker, who was wearing shiny silver armour, slashed across his face.
But Captain Renevault threw herself in front of him, and the sword connected with her head. She cried out in pain, and looked at me eyes pleading, although I had no idea what for. Until I realized that she was looking at her sword. I scooped it up, and stabbed the attacker in the heart.
This post has been edited by Petra Arkanian: Dec 7 2010, 01:26 AM
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Dec 20 2010, 08:48 PM
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Joined: 6-December 10
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PART 10
It was dark. That was the first thing that I noticed when I came to. The second thing that I noticed was that it ws relatively silent, except for the sound of Seth's labored breathing. It also reeked of trolls. We were in a cave, I could tell that much. I waited for my eyes to adjust to the darkness, and began counting the drops of water coming from a stalactite nearby. One, two, three, four, five, six... my eyes still weren't used to the dark, and it was the six-hundred and twenty-third drip. Suddenly, the silence was interrupted.
"...They harmed?" The voice was rough, so I figured that they were used to speaking a different language.
"No, sir. Well, the girl has a broken nose... but other than that, they're fine."
"Good. Mankar Camoran wants them unharmed." the voices then faded into the distance, leaving me with a few other snatches of informatation, such as sacrifices, rituals and blade. None of them sounded good.
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Seth was awake. And he knew where they were. They were in Lake Arrius Caverns. In a dank cell that he had been in only once before. It was the west wing, near the Mysterium Xarxes. The lock was probably average, but that wouldn't matter, as a guard would be posted outside the door. And they had no weapons.
'It's my fault,' he thought bitterly. 'If I hadn't come, they couldn't have tracked me, and found Alex. My fault.'
"Alex!" Seth hissed. Alex sat upright, and stared at him.
"You're alive?" she asked in a hushed tone. Seth nodded, and put a finger to his lips. Alex nodded.
"Listen,"he whispered. "My parents were once Mythic Dawn followers. I was raised here. Ran away when I was ten, after seeing a little kid get sacrificed. I've been here before, know this place inside out."
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My eyes narrowed. "Why should I trust you, Dormor?" He looked pained.
"Because. I an get you out of here."
"And you can also get me killed," I pointed out. Why should I believe his story? Absolutely no reason at all. Then again, if I was going to get killed anyway...
"You can turn invisible, right?" Seth nodded. "So you can turn me invisible, too, right?" Another nod. "In that case, you turn us invisible. We scrounge for weapons. We pick the lock, kill the guard, then we're outta here."
"We don't have any lockpicks."
I held up a small, thin bone. "Not a problem."
"We don't have any weapons."
"I can break his neck." Seth nodded, and shut his eyes.
"I love you, Alex," he whispered, and cast a spell. I was invisible. I was also in shock. He loved me? Impossible. Whatever.
I picked up the bone, sneaked toward the door, picked it in less than a second, and jumped onto the guards shoulders. From there, it was a simple matter of twisting my knees to the right, and jumping off the guard before he hit the floor, dead. Not a sound, not an ounce of blood. My master would have been pleased.
I checked his pockets for potions, weapons, or other useful items. I found 3 health potions, two hunting knives, twenty-five gold, and a pear. Then I had an idea.
"Seth, put on his robe. You will be escorting me to a prison cell. And take this knife." Seth pulled the Mythic Dawn robe over his head, strapped the knife to his waist, and grabbed my arm. He lead us down the dark tunnels, until I began hearing conversations.
"Get the prisoners. The time is near!"
"Turn around, Seth!" I hissed.
"No, I have to get the Mysterium Xarxes!" I had no idea what that was, but it sounded very insignificant, and a complete time-waster.
"Come on!" he whispered as he pulled me toward the noise.
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Petra Arkanian Concerned, But Powerless Dec 6 2010, 10:16 PM Tulustan Yup this is where you put your fan fic!
Nice... Dec 6 2010, 10:42 PM Petra Arkanian Thanks! Yeah, I've played the intro so man... Dec 6 2010, 10:53 PM SubRosa Hi Petra!
I enjoyed your protagonist's sa... Dec 7 2010, 12:25 AM Petra Arkanian I am indeed looking for a critic. Pick apart away,... Dec 7 2010, 12:28 AM SubRosa Ah, in that case I noticed several spelling errors... Dec 7 2010, 12:45 AM Petra Arkanian Thank you subrosa. For the tamriel part, I am fami... Dec 7 2010, 01:03 AM Petra Arkanian I think I got everything. Thank you! And NOW, ... Dec 7 2010, 01:28 AM Petra Arkanian Part 2
"Is she dead?" The Emperor's... Dec 7 2010, 01:52 AM Tulustan Wow, very young. Pretty strong to be able to kill ... Dec 7 2010, 02:10 AM Petra Arkanian Ahh, you're right, Tulustan. A good idea. And ... Dec 7 2010, 02:29 AM mALX Welcome to the forums! Dec 7 2010, 02:46 AM Zalphon Albeit short chapters, they're well-done. If ... Dec 7 2010, 03:12 AM Acadian Welcome to our wonderful fan fiction forum, Petra... Dec 7 2010, 03:32 AM SubRosa Off to a roaring start! You continue to change... Dec 7 2010, 06:41 PM Petra Arkanian SubRosa: Thank you so much, I do need a critic. Th... Dec 7 2010, 08:29 PM Destri Melarg Hi Petra, welcome to the forums. I see that you h... Dec 8 2010, 02:58 AM mALX
I hope these comments don’t seem overly harsh. T... Dec 8 2010, 03:06 AM Petra Arkanian Destri Melarg: Thank you, you are right. The gobli... Dec 8 2010, 03:05 AM Petra Arkanian Okay, here's my post for today. Hope there are... Dec 8 2010, 05:15 AM SubRosa Poor Baurus, not only dead but goblin food! Ew... Dec 8 2010, 08:46 PM Acadian Here we learn that as good as Alex seems to be wit... Dec 9 2010, 02:28 AM Destri Melarg Now I can see it. We know that the Dark Brotherho... Dec 10 2010, 02:27 AM Petra Arkanian Yes, that is what I was thinking.But... don't ... Dec 10 2010, 09:44 PM SubRosa You mean Baurus will return from the grave to wrea... Dec 10 2010, 10:26 PM mALX Amazing improvements in your story and writing in ... Dec 11 2010, 04:03 AM Petra Arkanian Okay, guys. part 5. Enjoy.
PART 5
I shivered vio... Dec 12 2010, 08:16 PM SubRosa My that drunk's accent was so think an elephan... Dec 12 2010, 08:59 PM Acadian So, our rather mature wine-sipping twelve year lea... Dec 13 2010, 02:47 AM Destri Melarg Whew, it seems that Baurus survived. That was a p... Dec 13 2010, 08:58 PM Petra Arkanian SubRosa: Oops, you're right! Sometime spel... Dec 13 2010, 09:39 PM Petra Arkanian Okee, ladies and gents! Part 6, coming your wa... Dec 13 2010, 10:21 PM Acadian Three comments here:
1. What a wonderful method ... Dec 14 2010, 03:28 AM mALX
Three comments here:
1. What a wonderful method... Dec 14 2010, 04:55 AM Petra Arkanian Acadian: 1; Thx! :D 2; Thanks! my sister w... Dec 14 2010, 01:24 PM Petra Arkanian Okay! The bio on everything that has happened ... Dec 14 2010, 02:10 PM mALX
. Her father (who was more a scoundrel than anyth... Dec 14 2010, 03:59 PM Petra Arkanian okay. Nevermind. :D sorry. Dec 14 2010, 02:20 PM Petra Arkanian Wow, Thanks, mALX! I just kinda went along wit... Dec 14 2010, 08:14 PM mALX
Wow, Thanks, mALX! I just kinda went along wi... Dec 14 2010, 08:24 PM Petra Arkanian Wow. So, thanks for your support!
PART ... wh... Dec 14 2010, 08:48 PM mALX The repartee between Seth and Alix is really well ... Dec 14 2010, 09:45 PM Acadian Yes, some brisk and snappy dialogue between Seth a... Dec 15 2010, 01:34 AM Petra Arkanian Yes, have been reading other fanfics (yours is be... Dec 15 2010, 06:10 AM mALX
Yes, have been reading other fanfics (yours is b... Dec 15 2010, 06:17 AM Destri Melarg I completely agree with everything that mALX and A... Dec 15 2010, 09:43 AM Petra Arkanian Destri Melarg: I believe the reason that Alex sacr... Dec 15 2010, 07:34 PM Petra Arkanian PART 8
I was looking around the Merchants Inn, wo... Dec 15 2010, 08:15 PM mALX Yeah !!! You got your avatar fixed ... Dec 15 2010, 08:55 PM Petra Arkanian mALX: Yes, this is the avatar you sent me! Thx... Dec 15 2010, 10:12 PM mALX
mALX: Yes, this is the avatar you sent me! Th... Dec 15 2010, 10:15 PM Petra Arkanian Okay, guys. Part 8
PART 8
It was nighttime. I h... Dec 17 2010, 04:49 AM mALX
...er...huh? Is he...er...uh...mating with she... Dec 17 2010, 04:05 PM Petra Arkanian No, mALX :closedeyes:, he's trying to get insi... Dec 18 2010, 02:00 AM mALX
No, mALX :closedeyes:, he's trying to get ins... Dec 18 2010, 02:05 AM Petra Arkanian You guys crack me up.
PART 9
I yawned. The sun s... Dec 18 2010, 05:26 AM mALX GAAAAH !!! A cliffhanger !!... Dec 18 2010, 07:38 AM mALX WOOOOOT !!!! Huge background you... Dec 20 2010, 10:57 PM Petra Arkanian where are all my nit-finders?
PART 11
"Seth... Dec 22 2010, 06:59 AM mALX
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~... Dec 23 2010, 12:56 AM Shadowgale Hey, this is a really good read! And it's ... Dec 22 2010, 07:14 AM Petra Arkanian Welcome, Shadowgale! A nit-finder is someone l... Dec 22 2010, 07:49 PM Petra Arkanian PART 12 A
Seth hit the ground with a dull thud.
... Dec 23 2010, 02:08 AM mALX GAAAAH!!!! Is he like the other ... Dec 23 2010, 02:48 AM Petra Arkanian Ok, so I'm really bored right now, so I'm ... Dec 23 2010, 05:08 AM Petra Arkanian Ok, guys. After the next post, I'm moving on t... Dec 23 2010, 05:09 AM Petra Arkanian It is technically tomorrow yesterday, so, here... Dec 23 2010, 01:43 PM mALX
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