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Olen
post Sep 4 2009, 10:34 AM
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A Final Embrace


Tad ignored the wintry blast which fell on Dagon Fel from the north. The spume from a wind whipped sea clung like spittle to his unshaven face. He bent to pick up another piece of driftwood. As he did a tear fell, a rogue drop of warmth amid the cold spray. She was dying. The priest spoke of prayers and miracles but the truth was clear in his eyes. She had the wasting sickness and soon it would be over. Tad straightened and started back with the bundle of firewood. His shack looked across the sea through windows rimmed with sleet, but he could not meet its gaze. Icicles hung like waiting daggers from the eves. Would it be this time?

It was.

She lay by the low fire as she had since the sickness began. But she didn't shiver in spite of the draughts and leaks he had not the money to repair. There was no need the test her pulse, but he did anyway. Nothing. She was dead. Tad fell to his knees and cursed. He cursed the storm which had wrecked his boat. He cursed the ash which poisoned his guar and drove it mad, the rot which spoilt his barley and the cold which took his wife. But mostly he cursed the gods.

The priest found him the next morning still kneeling by the ashes of the fire and rocking back and forth and muttering. He clutched his wife's cold hand. A limpet grasping a hull, even as the boat drifts to sea, and like the limpet he only grabbed tighter when the priest tried to prize him away. At the mention of burial he chased the priest from the shack. Outside the weather still raged. He faced the sea and roared his bitterness and despair As his eyes turned heavenward they crossed the raven's tower. It stood strong and solid, black against the conspiring stormclouds. It had been there as long as he could remember, as had it's occupier. Sorkvild the Raven. His refuge stood firm against the ravages of the sea and against the strangling rumours which entwined it like ivy.

The had gods mocked and abused him, and Tad hated them. In that long black finger he saw his revenge, he would stand against their will and take what had been his. The new purpose steeled him and he strode back into his shack leaving the door open to wind and water. He scooped up his bride, now so light from the ravages of the fever, and kissed her forehead. Soon they would be together again.

The path up to the cliff-top was steep and slick with mud but even though his knees were scraped and bloody he stood again with every fall. Never once did he drop his love, though his wished a thousand times that he might be in her place. Soon they would be together again, the sweet hysteria drew him to the tower like a lodestone to the north. All their plans and dreams, deformed and shattered into sharp shards of nightmare by the sickness, would be bound there. He was close now and could see golden candlelight though the high window like a small sun for their new dawn. The dwemer metal was purple: the colour of love.

He banged on the door violently. When it drew open his knuckles too were skinned but he didn't feel. He did it for hope, for grief and love and mainly for her. A strange figure stared at him through a dark mask.

"For what do you disturb me?" demanded Sorkvild, his tongue flickered between the black lips.

"My wife," said Tad, his desperate eyes stared at the tall figure, "I think you are the only one who can let us be together now." What thoughts passed behind that mask Tad couldn't fathom, but he knew the wizard would help, just knew it. This was his only hope, and he laid everything on it.

"I can have you feel her embrace again," replied the necromancer, "But there is a price."

"What? Anything, everything. Name it and I shall pay immediately."

"No need," could the strange mask smile? Surely just a trick of the shadows, "I would not spoil your time together. All I ask is when you die your soul and remains are mine."

"Yes," nodded Tad, "Yes. Yes, they are yours, now please cure her. I would be with her again."

With a sweep Sorkvild waved him inside. The clang of the door closing echoed, a cold knell in the bare tower. Tad followed the wizard up a ladder, the corpse of his beloved over his shoulder. Soon she would wake and they would be together. In the high room he laid her out on the table. "My dear, my lovely," her murmured, "Soon my dear, soon we shall speak and dance and laugh. Yes soon."

Sorkvild pulled back his sleeves to reveal bony arms with yellow skin stretched over them like ancient parchment. He placed seven black candles around the corpse and Tad shrank back, his mutterings silenced. The air became blistering and slick on his tongue, like breathing hot oil. Then Sorkvild began to chant, his voice grew to a thousand in unison reverberating around the chamber. The incantation was strong liquor which intoxicated Tad's senses. He was disgusted and fascinated, aroused and repelled. The swirling sounds were joined by wheeling shadows which danced and frolicked about the chamber cast by nothing, circling like a whirlpool drawn to his beloved. There was a black madness to these forces, they stood beyond the jurisdiction of man or god. But if that was the cost of his lover's embrace so be it.

As one the candles died and the flickering madness ceased. A crashing silence fell upon the chamber. "It is done," said Sorkvild.

Tad drew forward excitedly. As his wife sat up he let out a cry of delight and stepped closer. She turned at the sound and he paused. Her eyes were rolled back in her head. Two white orbs met his beseeching stare, empty but for the resonating madness of a hollow mind, her tongue lolled between lips bloated with disease and split from cold. A gurgling rattle escaped them.

"Go to her, she desires you," urged Sorkvild.

Tad started forward. Surely this would pass, she had been raised from the dead, to expect her to be fine right away was too much. He stepped next to her and her arms flopped up as if on the strings of a drunken master. She did desire him. His heart swelled and a smile spread on his face. He fell into her embrace and hugged her. She squeezed him back with cold inhuman strength. He coughed as the air was driven from him. She tilted her head to kiss his neck, just as she had done the night they'd met. He leant in to do the same.

As his lips met her clammy dead skin so her teeth plunged into his throat ripping and tearing. His eyes widened in shock. They last thing they saw was Sorkvild's grin and the black gem he held.


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Petra Arkanian
post Dec 29 2010, 02:42 AM
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ooh, I like the short story. Very creepy dark. If you're entering the contest, this is gonna at least get 2nd place! Nice.

Srry I'm a little late on posting this just go around to reading it. I'm on a fanfic spree biggrin.gif


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Olen   A Final Embrace   Sep 4 2009, 10:34 AM
treydog   Nicely told. The atmosphere and description put m...   Sep 4 2009, 04:16 PM
Olen   Nicely told. The atmosphere and description put ...   Sep 5 2009, 07:54 AM
Colonel Mustard   That was just plain nasty...   Sep 4 2009, 05:38 PM
saqin   This indeed was an interesting story. Proving that...   Sep 23 2009, 06:07 PM
Remko   That was bone-chilling... loved it B)   Jun 22 2010, 11:54 AM
SubRosa   Well done! Very dark and moody. As ever, you u...   Jun 22 2010, 04:40 PM
Acadian   A very dark and tragic love story. Well told, Ole...   Jun 23 2010, 03:07 AM
Ornamental Nonsense   The description and atmosphere that you created in...   Jul 26 2010, 05:07 PM
mALX   This gave me chills Olen! You could win that ...   Aug 7 2010, 10:42 PM
Olen   Well this piece seems to raise it's head fairl...   Aug 7 2010, 11:21 PM
mALX   Well this piece seems to raise it's head fair...   Aug 7 2010, 11:44 PM
Rachel the Breton   Well this piece seems to raise it's head fai...   Aug 25 2010, 12:59 AM
mALX   [quote name='mALX' post='117103' date='Aug 7 2010...   Aug 25 2010, 01:33 AM
Rachel the Breton   No, I personally went to Darkom's topics and...   Aug 25 2010, 01:37 AM
mALX   No, I personally went to Darkom's topics an...   Aug 25 2010, 01:43 AM
mALX   I notice while I was on hiatus the last couple mon...   Aug 25 2010, 05:12 PM
Jacki Dice   Oh my I absolutely loved this! ♥ So roma...   Jan 3 2011, 05:40 AM
Grits   I first read this story a few years ago, and it ha...   Feb 7 2013, 03:32 PM
Eva   I first read this story a few years ago, and it h...   Feb 7 2013, 04:51 PM


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