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Thomas Kaira
post Dec 23 2010, 09:45 PM
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It's getting close to Christmas, and I'll be away on Holiday to New York for a few days, so I decided to post this now so that you know I am at work. Enjoy!

Chapter 1: Black and White


The suffocating darkness was broken only by the soft blue glows of unnaturally luminescent crystals. The high vaulted ceilings may have leant a feeling of grandeur before, but now felt strangely claustrophobic, as if the walls would close in and crush you at any moment. I was gliding softly through the blackness, guided only by the winking blue lights, following them through what seemed a maze of corridors and passageways.

Suddenly, the walls opened, and in front of me stood a grand chamber, it would have been spectacular had it not been so sinister. The entire chamber was bathed in red light, and strange, black figures were moving about, neither knowing nor caring where their feet carried them. In the center stood a high raised platform, and there another figure stood, emblazoned in armor that seemed sucked the light in from around him, and I was moving towards him. Try as I might, I could not fight the savage need to know whom this man was. I wanted to cry out, scream for help, but my tongue had become iron.

Closer…closer…ever closer I inched, feeling the icy metal flood to my limbs. The figure turned to face me, his eyes glowed a fiery red…



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Ice cold sweat drenched my face as my head soared from my pillow, my breathing shallow and ragged. Feeling something in my hand, I looked down to see my steel dagger in my hand… how did it get there? Did I pull it out of my pack in my slumber?

I dropped the dagger to the floor, returning my head to the pillow. All a dream, I thought, just a dream, another dream. Calm down Derelas, it’s nothing to worry about. Old news.


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The Imperial City was only half a day’s journey from Wawnet Inn, as the publican told me over breakfast. Just follow the high street out of town to the Great West Bridge over Lake Rumare, and follow the road from there straight to the gates. It was a lovely clear day outside, and the bridge was not hard to find when I left, the white marble spires framing the road practically burned new holes in my eyes.

The morning bustle was only just beginning as I made my way forth. A balding fisherman was making his way home with his morning catch of some of the biggest Slaughterfish I’ve ever seen. Many of the travelers who slept the night here were gathering their horses and pack mules to continue on to wherever it was they were going. Many others still were filing into the small stores nearby. It was a simple, yet elegant, vista of pastoral harmony.

Forcing my eyes away from the scene, I directed my feet toward the Great Blinding Bridge and made a silent note to thank Y’ffre if I could still see after crossing.

The bridge led to a switchback road up the steep incline of the Imperial Isle, many rocks blocking my view of the city proper. It was just after midday when I finally crested the hill. I was greeted with… more whitewashed walls. It might have been an awe-inspiring sight had I been able to see anything at all, but I ended up having to walk the whole rest of the way with my arm up shielding my eyes because of how brightly polished the marble was. I know this city is supposed to be the shining beacon of the Empire and all, but wow... you think you might be taking this a bit too far? I was quite thankful to finally reach the gates proper, just to be able to see again.

Once I closed distance with the walls, though, the blinding marble gave way to gray granite. Still not to be outdone, the stone was impeccably carved and rose into an imposing Gothic archway housing a raised portcullis and a well-polished bronze gate flanked by two men in flashy steel armor, flaming red feather plumes rising from their helmets… Imperial Legion Centurions.

“Welcome to Cyrodiil City.” One of them voiced to me. They then marched in unison to the great bronze doors and threw them open with an impressive flourish. “Enjoy your stay, citizen.”

I passed through the gates to a scene unlike I’d ever seen before. Instead of the peaceful maritime bustle of Weye, here it was an outright cacophony of voices, footsteps, shrieks, and hoof beats as people large and small jostled this way and that about their daily lives. The huge crowd, from the super-rich in fine linens to the street urchins with no more than stained sack cloth, pattered every which way you could think of past white marble buildings so tall they seemed to wall away the sky. Such a dizzying sight made me begin to wonder if I could ever find the Arcane at all, so I ducked into a shaded back street to pull out my map.

“Looking for something, citizen?” A passing legionary inquired.

“Yes, I’m looking for the Arcane University.” I responded, hoping this guy might be able to make some sense out of this madhouse.

“You’re in Talos Plaza," the legionary told me, indicating a gold sign nearby:

“Talos Plaza. IMPERIVM AD VITAM AETERNAM”

“Just follow Septim Way through Talos Plaza, take a right on Green Emperor Way, follow it around until you reach Stendarr Loop, and it will take you straight to the University.”

Follow who-da, take a right on what-da until I reach where-da? Thankfully, the guard noticed my blank look and handed me a new map, this time of the city itself, and noted everything he told me on it.

“Thanks.”

“We’re here to serve.” The guard brought two fingers to his helmet in salute before clanking away. I started to wonder why guards weren’t this helpful all the time, given my experience at the customs office on my way in from Valenwood, but soon did a double take. This was the Imperial City, after all. The Empire does have an image to maintain.

It took another hour just to find Green Emperor Way. I got lost twice in the crowds and at one point found myself filing my way down Septim Ave. rather than Septim Way, causing me to mumble curses under my breath for the Empire’s shameless lack of originality as I turned back. I eventually fought my way through the chaos of Talos Plaza, and the astounding noise of the crowd died instantly as I crossed the threshold of Green Emperor Way, giving way to a subdued, formal silence, and I felt a strange, liquid-like sensation pass over my skin, probably a spell to help keep the noise out.

“Please show your respect for the Imperial Palace by keeping your voice down.” A guard in blazing white armor decorated with dragons told me as I entered, and I joined the now near-silent crowd making their way along the road. Most of the time my view of White Gold Tower was blocked by the many high-rising buildings, mostly fine hotels and apartments for the city’s wealthiest citizens surrounding the Palace Road, but every so often I would pass a colossal iron gate barring the way to the Palace proper, and was able to steal a glance of the immense structure beyond the veil. It seemed to rise forever towards the heavens, perhaps ascending to touch the face of Aetherius itself, the marble walls were so well polished and maintained it was no wonder I was blinded on my way in, and almost completely blocked by the rest of the city, I could make out the royal graves. Such a sight, already breathtaking from here, must inspire awe when seen from outside the walls; a way of saying: “We are the most powerful society in this land today. To challenge us is to challenge the will of the Nine themselves.”

I felt myself smiling faintly as I turned onto Stendarr Loop.


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Two shrouded figures crested a flight of stairs bathed in crimson light, where another shadowy figure sat upon a throne of black stone signaled them halt. They obeyed, and then sunk into a low bow.

“What news?” His voice rang with command as he spoke.

“Derelas just arrived yesterday.”

“And now?”

“He left for the Imperial City this morning.”

The cloaked man frowned, this might complicate things a bit; our kind is not welcome there. But no matter, he won’t stay forever.

“What else did you discover?”

“He’s searching for them, and he wants the Mages Guild’s help.”

Mages Guild? The shadowed man smiled, his red eyes lit aflame with amusement at the very idea. The Mages were fools. They had no idea what they were allowing to happen under their very noses. To think they could keep us at bay locked away like dogs. They would be in for a rude awakening, and soon.

“Good. Keep an eye on him. I want to know the instant he leaves.”

“As you wish, Lord.”

The two shrouded figures bowed again, then turned to leave themselves. The red-eyed man smiled to himself. Soon the pieces would be in place. The 433rd Year of the Third Era would soon become forever etched in history.


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Thomas Kaira
post Jan 23 2011, 12:35 AM
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@Acadian: Keeping you guessing is my business. Glad to see you're enjoying yourself. smile.gif

@SubRosa: Thank you for the styling suggestions, they are always welcome and only ever helpful. I'm using this story as a means to refine my fiction writing skills as well as to entertain you, so any suggestions you may have that will help improve the writing are greatly appreciated. Thanks for the vote of confidence, as well.

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@All: Thank you for your continued support.

Next: News arrives from the Imperial City, and Dere's adventure begins.


Chapter 2-2: Assassinations and Proclamations



ETHEBRIDGE MILL
Welcome to County Chorrol


The dense green forests of the Heartlands gave way to the rugged yellow grasslands and evergreens of the Colovian Highlands. The brook marking the county border babbled away beneath the small stone bridge across, its speed becoming that of a frenzy having finally been freed of the millpond just northward. The mill wheel creaked slowly and gutturally as it turned, and the faint sound of grindstones could be heard from within. To complete the picture, a huge rocky peak rose beyond the watchtower, the sandy stone cliffs occasionally broken by colossal caverns housing ancient carved stone structures. The moist, heavy air became lighter and drier the further I traveled over the past two days, and now my head was beginning to twinge rather uncomfortably. Probably just from all the travel, I told myself, it’ll get better after a good night’s rest. The walls of Chorrol were just visible over the rocky hilltops; I should be able to make it by sundown.



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“Welcome to Chorrol,” one of the guards outside greeted me as he lit his lantern. “I suppose you’re looking for a place to stay for the night?”

“As a matter of fact, yes,” I replied.

“The Oak and Crosier is a fine place,” the guard began, “Talasma is very friendly and keeps a good clean house. As a matter of fact, she’s probably serving dinner right now, so best you hurry along if you don’t want to miss out.”

“Where can I find the place?”

“Just inside the gates off to the left of the Saint Statue Plaza. Should be packed right about now, so you can’t miss it.”

Not exactly the atmosphere I was looking for, I would have preferred some place where I could sleep off this headache in peace.

“Is there any place else, maybe somewhere a bit quieter?”

“Only the Gray Mare,” the guard told me, his face stiffening, “but all you’ll find there is cheap ale and raving drunkards.” That statement did wonders for making up my mind. Better loud and sober than sick and drunk.

“Right, Oak and Crosier it is.”

“Have a good night.”

The guard touched two fingers to his helmet as I made my way through the portcullis. It was getting too dark at this point to see much of the city, but I could make out the shadow of a statue by the light of a large building buzzing with activity to the left behind it. Deciding that must be place the watchman recommended, I made my way inside.

“Welcome to the Oak and Crosier, this one is Talasma, at your service. Looking for something to eat, or perhaps a place to rest?” A smiling Khajiit dressed smartly in blue suede greeted me warmly as the door swung closed behind me. The room was filled with men and mer wining, dining and chattering away, and while noisy, the effect was not unpleasant, rather it added a warming atmosphere. I made a silent note to thank the watchman next time I saw him, but in the meantime, I had dinner to worry about….

“Perhaps,” I replied, “what do you have?”

“Today we are serving boar; it’s been rubbed with sage, garlic, and a touch of clove and slow-roasted. That comes with a baked potato with butter, sour cream, and Cheydinhal Cheddar and a skillet-seared mushroom stuffed with tomatoes and caramelized onions,” she quickly recited. There was passion in her voice accented by her perked-up ears, telling me she really did love her work. She certainly knows how to get her customers' mouths watering.

“Sounds delicious,” I returned, “How much for that and a bed for the night?”

“20 Drakes,” she responded. I handed her a small handful of silver coins.

“Thank you. Now, there should be a free seat over this way, follow me….”



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Warm sunbeams fell across my bed as I started up. My head had stopped aching and better yet, no night terrors. It would have been a perfect start to the day if there was not something that didn’t seem to fit about this morning. The inviting murmur of the evening meal had given way to an oddly stiff silence that seemed to compress the air within the lodge, making it seem oddly difficult to breathe. After a quick visit to the washroom, I made my way downstairs, and was greeted by an empty room. Not even Talasma was present. Something was very wrong with this picture now. The publican was not serving the breakfast fare, and the entire city was dead silent when it should be buzzing with the morning activity. Since I was obviously not going to get any questions answered in here by myself, I thought it best to go outside and see what was going on.

“…under his rule we saw 65 years of peace and prosperity, and many grave threats to the Imperial throne quashed.”

A booming voice greeted me as I made my way out the door. What looked to be the entire city’s population was gathered in the Statue Plaza, where a herald dressed entirely in black velvet was speaking from a raised wooden podium. Every face that I could see looked thunderstruck, and I could also hear the occasional sob. I noticed Talasma nearby and made my way to her, hoping to get a better idea of what happened.

“Excuse me, what’s going on here?” I whispered to her, making her jump before she quickly turned to face me.

“Goodness, you startled me,” She replied, “Umm… sorry, what did you ask, again?”

“What happened?” I repeated to her, doing my best to keep my voice down so to not disturb anyone else.

“Oh, yes,” She began, her voice higher than usual and quavering oddly, “Its… It’s the Emperor… He’s dead.” On speaking that last word, she gasped as if she hardly dared believe what she had just said. The air vanished from my lungs and electricity surged through my body as if I had been lightning-struck. I immediately turned my full attention to the herald, wanting just as much as everybody else to know what had happened.

“His passing marks a dark day indeed for the Empire, for the eternal flame of Akatosh, the light by which we all owe our lives to, grows dark. Today has been proclaimed a day of mourning by the Elder Council, who, until a decision as to who shall next attain the throne, shall take control of the Empire. They will do the best they can to maintain order until a new Emperor can be crowned. Her lordship Countess Arriana Valga would now wish for you to join her in a moment of prayer for the loss of such true-hearted men.” He then proceeded to help an elderly woman, also dressed in black velvet for the occasion, to the stand.

Wait, what? This makes no sense. Didn’t he have any heirs? What happened to them? Shouldn’t the Elder Council be searching them out? What else did I miss? How did he die? My mind buzzed with questions as the crowd bowed their heads and brought their hands together.

“Thank you,” the herald broke the silence after several minutes and helped the countess back down, where she moved to rejoin her guard at the head of the crowd. “If anyone wishes to know more, the Black Horse Courier is available here. Funeral processions will be held a week from today in Cyrodiil City.”

He then stepped down himself, and the entire square erupted into a maelstrom of confused voices as the crowd gradually dispersed. It took me several minutes to fight my way through to the makeshift newsstand that had been erected. Once I finally managed, all of my questions were answered with two drakes:



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Emperor and Heirs Assassinated in the Night!


It is with great regret that we inform you today of the tragic passing of His Majesty Uriel Septim VII, 87, and his three sons (Geldall Septim (56), Enman Septim (55), and Ebel Septim (53)) at the hands of a mysterious group of assassins on the night of Last Seed the 27th. This means for the first time in recorded history, the Dragon Throne lies empty with no heir to claim it, and many eyewitnesses have reported that the Eternal Flame of Akatosh in the Temple of the One has been extinguished.

“Normally when the Emperor passes, the flame simply dims until one of his heirs binds himself to the throne in the Coronation Ceremony,” Temple primate Tandilwe stated during interview with Black Horse Courier reporter Hassiri, “for it to go out completely would be unthinkable.”

But unfortunately, it has. With the Dragonfires darkened, the people of the Empire have erupted into a mass of confusion and hysteria. Many doomsayers have begun to hold this event as a portent to the end of all things.

“The Compact has broken,” One told our reporters, “The power of the Nine has failed! The signs have never been clearer! Soon the jaws of Oblivion shall open, and the Daedra will roam free across the land!”


What a load of horse manure… the Emperor was assassinated not much more than two days ago and already we have idiots like these doing nothing more than add fuel to fire beneath the boiling cauldron! If the Elder Council is doing everything they can to hold Tamriel together right now, it sure won’t help with fools like these trying to get everyone to blow their tops just to keep the sales up. Crumpling the paper in my hands, I stuffed it as far as I could to the bottom of my pack so I might never see it again. Taking a quick look around, I noticed several of the shops around town were beginning to open. Assured that business was not being hampered by the tragedy today, I returned to my original task.

Following the posted signs up Great Oak Lane brought me to the similarly named Great Oak Plaza. The first thing that caught my eye was the tree growing in the center; it was huge! Its trunk towered over even the tallest buildings and the leafy canopy spread its shade to every corner of the rotunda, bringing back visions of the woods back home. The encircling road was now bustling with people moving every which way now that the herald was finished. Occasionally, a few would stop to chat, probably speculating about what will happen now that the Empire had lost its leader, but no one stood in the same place for long. Those who were here to relax were spread out upon the grassy knoll beneath which the great tree spread its roots, or sitting upon one of the many mahogany benches encircling it.

It was tempting to just throw my head back beneath the shade of the broad leaves for the day and let everything sink in, but I knew better. I wouldn’t get any closer to the University doing nothing. After a few more minutes of searching, I finally noticed the blue eye denoting the location of the guild, and made my way to the oaken doors.




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“Hello, welcome to the Chorrol Mages Guild,” I was promptly greeted by the lightly hissing voice of an Argonian clad in indigo robes, “I am chapter Magister Teekeus. Are you here to join, or perhaps for one of these ‘Recommendations’ I’ve been hearing so much about?”

“Both, actually,” I replied, digging into my pack to remove the papers I brought with me from the Imperial City. He sounded like he was rather grumpy, and I couldn’t help but notice the irritation in his low voice when he said “Recommendation.”

“You won’t need those just yet,” Teekeus stopped me, causing me to look quizzically into his unreadable eyes. “First we need to give you a quick aptitude examination.”

“What? What test?” I asked indignantly. I thought anyone was allowed to join? Why do I need to take some dumb test?

“Don’t worry, it’s just for evaluation. It won’t affect your standing,” There was that irritated voice again, which did nothing to reassure me. I wasn’t sure if I liked him all that much. “I just need to know what schools of magic you are experienced in so we can better plan for your needs.”

“Illusion and Alchemy,” I quickly recited. I just wanted to get this over with, seeing as there was so much I’d rather be doing right now than listen to some crotchety lizard-man preen about my experience.

“OK, perhaps you show me a spell from the Illusion school?”

Repressing a sigh, I closed my eyes, imagining the lights had all gone away. I then fixed my mind on a desire to bring light to the darkness as I tensed my arm and clenched my fist. Soon I felt energy surge to my palm, and I held it in as long as I could before letting my hand fly open, releasing the Magicka in the form I desired…

*ROAR*

Oh, gods, did I just start a fire or something? My eyes flung open to the sight of another Bosmer, his hair ablaze, sprinting for the front door as fast as his legs could carry him. My stomach plummeted.

“HE’S OUT OF CONTROL, SOMEONE GET A LEASH ON HIM!” He cried out as he threw himself outside. I then saw a strange creature prance out of the neighboring room. It looked like a goblin, except he had black scales instead of green skin, long pointy ears, a maw full of sharp teeth, and a fireball building in one hand. With a quick motion, Teekeus cast a ball of purple light at the creature, causing it to dissolve into nothingness.

“Sorry about that,” he replied nonchalantly, “now, that was a Light spell, right?”

“Wait, hang on, that wasn’t me, was it?” I sure hoped it wasn’t. I don’t think I would be able to stand the shame.

“No, Erthor just has a bit of trouble controlling his summons,” Teekeus replied uninterestedly.

I raised an eyebrow at his response, but decided it would be best not to continue this discussion. “Yes, it was a light spell,” I replied to Teekeus’s original question. I then heard the door open as the Bosmer named Erthor returned, now bald and with his face sopping wet. It was all I could manage to resist laughing as he stomped upstairs, slamming the door behind him.

“Okay, now for Alchemy. Wait here.” He made his way into the neighboring room and returned a couple minutes later with a mortar and pestle, a white mushroom cap, a small cut of meat, and a vial of water. He then laid them on a small table next to a window and turned back to me. “Show me what you can do with those.”

A quick examination of the ingredients told me the mushroom was Cairn Bolete and the meat was venison. I then took the ingredients and began to crush them together with the mortar and pestle, not stopping until they had become a bright pink paste. I then slowly added in the water, stirring constantly, until the contents of the pestle flashed and shone with magical power. I then handed Teekeus the finished product, which he quickly appraised.

“A simple restorative draught,” he declared, “crude, but acceptable. Now, is there anywhere else you have magical skill in?”

“Nope,” I replied honestly.

“Very well. Hand me that application you had earlier.”

I handed him the leaflet of parchment, he then made a quick motion with his hand, causing a quill to appear out of nowhere, and began scratching away.




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“Welcome to the Mages Guild, Associate,” Teekeus said as I handed him back his quill, which promptly vanished.

“Thanks,” I replied, “Now, I don’t mean to rush anything, but about that recommendation….”

“Oh, that,” Teekeus quickly looked out the window and I could swear I saw his scales darken as his eyes narrowed, “well, thankfully for you something’s just come up. I need you to find out what Earana is doing here.”

“Who is Earana?” I inquired, unsure how I fit into whatever was happening between them.

“Let’s just say we have a history together,” Teekeus replied, “She doesn’t put much by the rules of the guild and has taken to interfering with my research. I need you to speak to her, find out what she’s doing in Chorrol, and then come back here and tell me.”

I had to bite my tongue on the several questions I had, particularly why he just wouldn’t go outside and ask her himself. It probably wouldn’t be a very good idea to antagonize him right now, considering how on-edge and grouchy he looks. Instead, I wordlessly made my way outside, and immediately noticed a sandy-blond Altmer in a bright green dress making a beeline for me.

“Pardon me, are you new to the guild?” she immediately asked. This must be Earana, I thought; time to play along. At the very least I could answer this question honestly.

“Yes, actually, I am,” I told her.

“Ah, good,” she replied, a shifty grin crossing her face, “then you’ll do just fine. My name is Earana, and I have a job for you. It pays well, and it will most assuredly assist you in your education.”

“Depends on the job,” I told her, noticing the ghost of irritation flash through her eyes at my response. It would seem she was expecting someone a bit more enthusiastic.

“Oh, it’s not difficult at all, if that’s what you're wondering,” she replied, quickly recovering her haughty demeanor, “I just need you to find a book for me.”

“Okay then, what is this book you want?”

“It’s called ‘Fingers of the Mountain,’” she told me, placing heavy emphasis on the title that sounded mighty close to reverance, “it is of no use to you, you will not be able to read it. I, however, can, and would very much like to. Go to the ruins of Cloud Top in the Colovian Peaks to the north, find this book, and bring it back to me.”

“Okay, I’ll do my best,” I replied, “I just need to head back inside for a bit and get ready,” I then turned to leave, but was stopped by a sharp grip on my shoulder.

“Whatever you do, do not tell anything about our arrangement to Teekeus. It would be… unhealthy for you if you did,” she told me in a low, dangerous voice before letting me go. I left her side without a single glance backward, hoping she didn’t see the uneasy look on my face.




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Thomas Kaira   Light through Darkness   Dec 23 2010, 09:45 PM
SubRosa   Half a day from Wawnet to the Imp City? I like the...   Dec 23 2010, 11:38 PM
Thomas Kaira   Nits are picked (and another you didn't list w...   Dec 24 2010, 12:03 AM
D.Foxy   Ahh, so Thomas finally starts writing! Welcome...   Dec 24 2010, 01:39 AM
mALX   You have brought the Imperial City to life in a wa...   Dec 24 2010, 02:27 AM
Acadian   Welcome to the Arena! What a wonderful start...   Dec 24 2010, 03:17 AM
Thomas Kaira   I ninja'd the typo before you finished posting...   Dec 24 2010, 03:39 AM
Grits   I love the way you bring the Imperial City to life...   Dec 31 2010, 03:16 AM
Thomas Kaira   Postcards from the Imperial City (to tide over unt...   Jan 13 2011, 08:59 AM
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SubRosa   Neat pics! What mod are you using to change th...   Jan 13 2011, 05:47 PM
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mALX   I love that fountain !! Did "Better ...   Jan 14 2011, 08:54 AM
Thomas Kaira   @SubRosa: The focus problem was most likely an art...   Jan 16 2011, 11:11 AM
mALX   The scene as students are signing up for classes a...   Jan 16 2011, 08:05 PM
SubRosa   the longest of which was for “Financial.” Yep, tha...   Jan 16 2011, 08:17 PM
Thomas Kaira   To all who previously read: After a bit of collus...   Jan 17 2011, 01:04 AM
mALX   To all who previously read: After a bit of collu...   Jan 17 2011, 01:18 AM
Acadian   Don't worry about posting slowly if that is wh...   Jan 17 2011, 03:16 AM
Thomas Kaira   @mALX: Kittens will be kittens, that much is certa...   Jan 20 2011, 02:41 AM
Acadian   You're a tease! Lots of answers, but even...   Jan 20 2011, 03:14 AM
SubRosa   once again sweating ice. This is a very evocative...   Jan 20 2011, 03:25 AM
mALX   This chapter was Huge with emotions. You set the ...   Jan 20 2011, 04:03 AM
mALX   What a wild introduction to the Chorrol Mages Guil...   Jan 23 2011, 02:54 AM
haute ecole rider   TK, I like how this story is developing so far. Th...   Jan 23 2011, 02:55 AM
Acadian   Rider was right! You served chow, and here I ...   Jan 23 2011, 03:36 AM
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Thomas Kaira   @mALX: Thank you. @haute ecole rider: Glad to see...   Jan 26 2011, 01:23 AM
haute ecole rider   And Faith saves the day! Honestly I liked how...   Jan 26 2011, 02:02 AM
SubRosa   what’s gotten beneath his scales? A wonderful sett...   Jan 26 2011, 03:24 AM
Acadian   Oh that's right! I remember now about you...   Jan 26 2011, 03:35 AM
mALX   GAAAAH !!!! How did I miss that ...   Jan 29 2011, 03:51 AM
Grits   I love the humor! Your Reynald is even more hi...   Jan 30 2011, 04:33 AM
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Thomas Kaira   @haute ecole rider: Isn't it fun writing drunk...   Jan 30 2011, 06:57 PM
haute ecole rider   And here comes the Highwayman again! At least...   Jan 30 2011, 08:02 PM
SubRosa   if he’s not redecorating the cobblestones. Ewwww...   Jan 30 2011, 08:20 PM
mALX   This chapter was HUGE in detail and emotions. The...   Jan 30 2011, 10:23 PM
Acadian   I very much enjoyed this! 'the moment I...   Jan 31 2011, 03:38 AM
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Thomas Kaira   @haute ecole rider: Well, you knew he had to die s...   Feb 2 2011, 08:36 PM
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Thomas Kaira   @naughty haute: The main reason I skimmed over the...   Feb 6 2011, 03:57 AM
mALX   SPEW !!!! How could I not love ...   Feb 6 2011, 04:37 AM
Acadian   Two distinct scenes, and both very enjoyable. * ...   Feb 6 2011, 04:55 AM
SubRosa   “Yes, is there some astoundingly important reason ...   Feb 6 2011, 05:08 AM
haute ecole rider   I agree with the others, the second part told from...   Feb 6 2011, 07:10 PM
Captain Hammer   And, another Oblivion-centric fanfic I'm final...   Feb 6 2011, 09:11 PM
Thomas Kaira   @mALX: Yup, there indeed be another plug at the mi...   Feb 8 2011, 09:15 PM
SubRosa   I agree that it seems odd that a state-sponsored c...   Feb 8 2011, 10:01 PM
mALX   I absolutely love what you have done to this quest...   Feb 9 2011, 01:01 AM
King Coin   I'll have to read this one too, but I think I...   Feb 9 2011, 01:43 AM
Acadian   I thoroughly enjoy Derelas' take on things her...   Feb 9 2011, 03:14 AM
Thomas Kaira   @SubRosa: Quick, we need Lassie... err... Chevy...   Feb 12 2011, 07:14 PM
haute ecole rider   Do I understand that last scene correctly?? Mehru...   Feb 12 2011, 08:17 PM
SubRosa   who doesn’t give a cliffracer’s beak An excellent...   Feb 12 2011, 08:34 PM
Thomas Kaira   For clarification: I am deviating from the game...   Feb 12 2011, 08:35 PM
Captain Hammer   Ooh, a mystery. How exciting! Loved the part ...   Feb 12 2011, 08:56 PM
mALX   WOO HOO! Awesome foreshadowing in the segment...   Feb 12 2011, 10:02 PM
TheOtherRick   All caught up again now. This story has definitely...   Feb 12 2011, 11:45 PM
TheOtherRick   Double post ... sorry ... internet issues from tim...   Feb 12 2011, 11:46 PM
Acadian   Nice development of the Cheydinhal guild. Good ch...   Feb 13 2011, 03:52 AM
Grits   Well wasn’t that a waste of time, the drawers were...   Feb 13 2011, 01:25 PM
Thomas Kaira   Before we continue, this statement: I am retracti...   Feb 15 2011, 10:08 PM
haute ecole rider   And while Derelas has not yet participated fully i...   Feb 15 2011, 10:20 PM
TheOtherRick   I really like the use of the paper to keep us abre...   Feb 15 2011, 10:42 PM
Acadian   I echo the fabulous use of the Black Horse Courier...   Feb 16 2011, 02:22 AM
SubRosa   Another good episode. As the others have said, the...   Feb 16 2011, 03:26 AM
Captain Hammer   Wow. Talk about getting proved right. I wonder if ...   Feb 17 2011, 01:58 AM
Grits   The leaves did not dance for me on this day, but r...   Feb 17 2011, 04:44 PM
mALX   Hugely powerful impact in this chapter! The u...   Feb 18 2011, 03:29 AM
Thomas Kaira   @rider: High praise indeed from you. I wasn't ...   Feb 18 2011, 08:33 PM
haute ecole rider   And so an entirely new adventure begins! I...   Feb 18 2011, 08:49 PM
mALX   What a scene !! This paragraph surpasse...   Feb 18 2011, 10:16 PM
TheOtherRick   Bats, a black wolf, and then a troll make for a ve...   Feb 18 2011, 11:19 PM
SubRosa   Lovely description of the Ancient Yews. It really ...   Feb 18 2011, 11:37 PM
Thomas Kaira   Mod. As you can see, I didn't choose the name...   Feb 18 2011, 11:44 PM
Acadian   A delightfully foreboding place, full of danger. ...   Feb 19 2011, 02:51 AM
Captain Hammer   Hey, nobody needs to know about your bet. That...   Feb 19 2011, 06:15 AM
Thomas Kaira   @rider: We shall take yo to the farthest ends of t...   Feb 21 2011, 10:54 PM
SubRosa   Ewww, spiders! Yuck. An interesting little cav...   Feb 21 2011, 11:27 PM
haute ecole rider   That cave-woman makes me think of Ayla and Baby. H...   Feb 22 2011, 02:06 AM
Acadian   An interesting setting and some fine character dev...   Feb 22 2011, 02:56 AM
Captain Hammer   Here, let me help you out. My birthday is the Th...   Feb 22 2011, 03:03 AM
mALX   I suspect the bear-hugger's last name is Draco...   Feb 22 2011, 03:41 AM
TheOtherRick   Great bit of character building. These two are goi...   Feb 23 2011, 07:40 PM
Thomas Kaira   @SubRosa: There be plenty of creepy-crawlies out t...   Feb 24 2011, 11:32 PM
Captain Hammer   4 down, (n) to go! Sorry, I'm starting a ...   Feb 25 2011, 06:43 AM
SubRosa   Ash-Breather A good epithet! I am a shepherd...   Feb 25 2011, 12:05 AM
TheOtherRick   Really cool chapter here. It keeps the hook firmly...   Feb 25 2011, 12:41 AM
Thomas Kaira   I assume that the conversations that occur betwee...   Feb 25 2011, 12:49 AM
Acadian   Very interesting to read. And enjoyable. I parti...   Feb 25 2011, 03:16 AM
mALX   This is absolutely my fave chapter of all so far, ...   Feb 25 2011, 08:22 AM
Thomas Kaira   @SubRosa: As I explained in the PS edit, Kynareth ...   Feb 27 2011, 06:42 AM
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