Jerric's Story, A Nord's Adventures in Cyrodiil Options

[Grits]

Hi folks. This is my first attempt at fiction, and I welcome any criticism from the smallest nit to the most sweeping remarks on writing in general.

My version of Tamriel is a little bigger than the game’s, but I’m trying to fill in some of the blanks rather than re-imagine the place. I have taken liberties with the order of some events, but the main quest will stand. Mostly.

I feel especially weak in the lore and action sequence departments. If you should suggest a resource, I will certainly seek it out in the hope that my next effort will be less cringe-worthy!

So welcome to Jerric’s story, and thank you for joining us.

(Edit: Darnand started as Arnand, so comments may reference his old name.)

July 24, 2014: Hi again. Having learned much in the last couple of years I’m revisiting early chapters and giving them a very light edit. Regrettably there may be some inconsistencies in style as I work my way through. Sorry about that, and thank you very much for reading!

Jerric

The whole story is contained in this thread, but here are some links to the beginning of each chapter within this thread.

Table of Contents

Chapter 1 Working Vacation
Chapter 2 On the Gold Road
Chapter 3 Welcome to the Imperial City
Chapter 4 All’s Well in Aleswell
Chapter 5 Unloading the Amulet
Chapter 6 Going Home
Chapter 7 Kvatch
Chapter 8 Running
Chapter 9 Anvil
Chapter 10 Septims
Chapter 11 Holidays
Chapter 12 Return to Kvatch
Interlude:Abiene’s Letters
Chapter 13 Skingrad
Chapter 14 The Imperial City
Chapter 15 Chorrol
Interlude: Abiene
Chapter 16 Valley of Hopes
Chapter 17 Bruma


The Darnandex

Appendix One: The People of Jerric’s World
Appendix Two: Jerric’s World Terms
Appendix Three: Map of Game Quests Within Jerric’s Story
Appendix Four: Geography
Appendix Five: Timeline

Chapter 1: Working Vacation

Darnand Penoit had hoped to spend the afternoon studying with the delicious Abiene, but instead he was in the hills above Anvil searching for goldenrod plants with this hulking nitwit. They were working their way through the meadow side by side so as not to miss any. Darnand straightened to ease the kink in his back. He shot a glance at his partner.

Jerric stood thigh deep in the golden grass, eyes closed and face raised to the sun. He had pulled off his shirt and tucked it into the back of his breeches where it hung down like a ridiculous tail. His head looked like a shock of wheat.

Idiot, Darnand thought. Every night he has to heal his own sunburn. Jerric held a wicked looking blade in one hand and a white seed pod in the other.

“I feel just like a loaf of bread,” Jerric said to the sky.

“Felen is waiting for these pods,” Darnand snapped. What is this lump doing in the Mages Guild, anyway? he wondered. He did not grow those arms by turning pages.

Jerric laughed. “No he’s not. He’ll have his nose in a book by now and he won’t look up until long after dark.” The Nord tucked the pod into his bag and looked down for another goldenrod plant.

“You missed one,” Darnand said. He pointed to the plant at Jerric’s feet. “If you are not going to work, why did you bother to walk this far?”

“Because this is my assignment.” Jerric nudged the plant with his boot. “I never take all of the seed pods from any plant. Where do you think the plants come from? If you take all of the pods, no more goldenrod.”

Darnand could identify most of the alchemical plants in Cyrodiil from his books, but he had given little thought to how they grow.

Jerric stepped forward and stooped, cutting pods from another plant.

“What kind of mage would bring a dagger,” said Darnand. He snapped a pod from its dry stem to make his point.

“It’s a knife.” Jerric tossed it into the air and caught the blade between his thumb and finger. “My hand just likes to hold it. Try it,” he offered, extending the hilt toward Darnand.

“A real mage is his own weapon,” Darnand sniffed.

The two worked in silence for some time. Darnand was beginning to feel unpleasantly warm under his robe, and Jerric was positively streaming. The man’s sweat smelled unpleasantly familiar.

Sharing the Mages Guild common quarters with Jerric was a trial. He was noisy, his gigantic boots were always in the way, and he treated every day like Jester’s Day. Just last night while Darnand lay in bed reading Jerric had jumped under the blanket with him. He had let loose some wind then held Darnand’s head beneath the covers. The visiting mages had laughed like a pack of teenagers. One of them had wet herself.

Worst of all, Abiene seemed to like him.

“Feh, you smell like an animal,” Darnand muttered.

Jerric straightened and turned toward Darnand, a grin on his lips. Then he froze, eyes widening. “Boar,” he said.

“Oh really,” Darnand snapped, “Well I think you are the bore, Nord!”

Darnand faced his opponent, ready to deliver his come-uppance. Jerric whipped a ball of frost at him, faster than Darnand could think. It landed behind him with a hollow boom and an enraged squeal.

Comprehension dawned. Boar! Darnand sprinted toward Jerric, readying his fire spell. He whirled some distance behind the Nord in time to see the boar charge.

Jerric switched the knife to his right hand and hit the boar with frost from his left. When he lunged to the side the boar almost missed him with its yellow tusks. Jerric tackled the boar just as Darnand let go with his fire.

The Nord, the boar, and the ball of fire disappeared into the tall grass. Dust, squeals, and a death scream rose from the thrashing mayhem. A moment later all was still.

Darnand stood in horror at what he had done. By the Nine, I have killed him! I shall certainly be expelled from the Guild.

Jerric popped up from the grass, streaked with blood and crowing in triumph. He wiped his blade on his breeches.

Darnand searched him for signs of immolation. He appeared whole, apart from a steady stream pumping out of a wound in his thigh. “Erm ...” Darnand said, pointing.

Jerric held his skin together through the tear in his breeches and sent healing light swirling down his body. He looked at Darnand, grinning. “Did you hit me with a flare, soldier?”

“Please do not tell Carahil,” Darnand blurted. He took a deep breath to steady his nerves. “Why did the spell not burn you?”

“I can thank the stars for that.”

Atronach, thought Darnand. That explains a lot.

“New plan, Breton! Grab my bag, will you? I don’t want to get blood on Felen’s flowers.” Jerric lifted the boar carcass to his shoulders with a grunt, hardly staggering. “Good thing this was a small one.”

Jerric started down the hill toward Anvil. Against his better judgment, Darnand picked up the bag and followed.

___

“But how did you know she would have seed pods to sell us?” Darnand asked. His companion had sold the boar to a butcher, then bought enough white seed pods from a woman on the street to finish filling both their bags. Jerric had taken the first offer from both merchants, like some rube. Now they were entrenched at The Flowing Bowl with just enough coin to get them into trouble.

“She sells anything she can get for free,” Jerric said. “This time of year she has to have white seed pods, and cheap.”

“But she is a beggar. She does not have anything.”

“She has what she needs,” Jerric pointed out. “Don’t you think that if she was really planning to buy shoes, she would have them by now?”

“How do you know these things?” Darnand demanded. “You do not even reside in Anvil.”

“How do you not know them? Don’t you ever talk to people?”

Darnand took sip of beer and winced at the bitter taste. He was not sure how he ended up on the waterfront in the middle of the afternoon drinking with the person he liked least in all of the Mages Guild. The person he had almost incinerated only a few hours ago. He was beginning to worry about payback for that incident.

“Are you sure you are not angry about the ...” Darnand could not bring himself to say it.

“No harm done,” said Jerric. “I’m just glad you didn’t set the grass on fire. Besides, you would have healed me, right? Abiene said you’ve nearly reached Journeyman in Restoration.”

Darnand inhaled some spit. “Abiene talks about me?” he choked.

“Yeah,” Jerric replied with a twist of his lips. “She says, ‘Oh that Darnand, how does he get his hair that way, it looks sooooo pretty.’”

Darnand gritted his teeth and stared into his beer.

Jerric thumped his arm.

“Easy with the ham fist, I am not a snow bear,” Darnand complained.

“I’m a Nord, Darnand. Get over it. Anyway I’m not even that big. You should see my Pa, he has a neck like a minotaur.”

Darnand looked at Jerric for a long moment. “Did you have a point?”

“Look over there.” Jerric gestured at a slim, dark, Imperial woman. “What do you think of her?”

“She has a face like a weasel. I think you have a good chance with her.”

“No, for you! She’s been looking over here a lot.”

Darnand was amazed. “Are you procuring women for me, now?”

Jerric shrugged. “You seem tense.”

The door opened and closed with inn traffic.

“Drink up,” Jerric said. “The sun’s going down. We have to hurry and get loaded so we can sober up before dinner.”

___

Darnand carefully ran his knife up the center of the aloe vera leaf. He opened the skin to expose its juicy pulp then slid his knife down the inside at an angle, folding the skin back as he went. After he repeated the cut on the other side, he viewed the flattened leaf with satisfaction.

A groan and thump broke his concentration. Darnand glanced across the room where Jerric sat at another work table. Bloody scraps of cloth and empty potion bottles littered the surface. The Nord’s forehead was on the table. His fingers clenched in his hair.

Darnand wiped his knife, put it down on its cloth, and picked up the wooden spatula. He slowly ran the spatula’s blade down the butterflied leaf, collecting the pulp without picking up any of the fibers that clung to the inside of the skin. He plopped his harvest into a clay storage jar, then carefully repeated the process.

“Darnand,” Jerric said.

Darnand scraped another spatula load of pulp from the leaf. He placed it in the jar.

“Darnand,” Jerric said again.

Darnand wiped the spatula and placed it on its cloth. He folded the empty leaf skin and set it aside. “I am busy.”

“It’s important.”

Darnand picked up another leaf and placed it in the ready position in front of him. He picked up the knife. “So is this.”

The knife slid down the plump leaf in a perfect line. Darnand braced himself for Jerric’s reply. Something about him squeezing his own juice, Darnand guessed.

Jerric picked up his chair and carried over to Darnand’s table. He put it down and took a seat across from Darnand. “I’m running out of time,” he said.

“I need to finish this,” replied Darnand without looking over. He makes more noise than a Billy on a wooden bridge. He scraped the leaf.

“I’ll do it for you later,” said Jerric. “I need your help.”

“You will pull up too many fibers. ‘Quick and dirty’ is not an alchemist’s motto.” He wiped his spatula and placed it on its cloth.

“Darnand,” Jerric said.

A note in his voice made Darnand look at him. Jerric’s raised face wore a solemn expression. Candlelight made his eyes look like honey. No doubt he uses that technique to lure women.

“No more tricks,” said Jerric. “I’m running out of time. I really need help.”

Darnand folded the leaf skin and placed it aside. He hooked a chair leg with his foot and sat down.

“Your healing spell?” he surmised.

“I’m just not getting it. I have the magicka but I can’t get it all into the spell. I know how it’s supposed to work. I just can’t do it.”

Darnand considered. “When you healed where the boar slashed you, you sent your spell over your whole body. Did you mean to do that?”

Jerric looked blank.

Darnand tried to explain it another way. “Do you focus your spell on a specific injury, or do you just cast the spell?”

“I just cast the spell, and then I feel better.”

“You are wasting your magicka,” Darnand said. “You will never get your spell stronger until you learn to focus. You know how to heal a wound on another person, do you not?”

“Yeah, but I’m not very good at it.”

“Think about how it feels when you cast that spell. The pain you feel from the other person that tells you where to send your magicka. It is the same thing.”

Jerric looked blank again, and miserable. His fingers twisted on the edge of the table.

Darnand was surprised. His patience with Jerric was growing, not racing away as it usually did. “Do you feel the pain from the other person, or do you just cast your spell over them?” he asked.

“I feel it, but I don’t know how to use it,” said Jerric. “Please don’t give up on me. I know I can learn this.”

Darnand decided to change his plans for the evening. “I shall render my assistance. First, show me how you heal yourself.”

Jerric picked up Darnand’s knife.

“Gaaaah!” cried Darnand, throwing out his hands. He snatched his knife back, wiped it, and placed it precisely on its cloth. “Over there,” he said, pointing at Jerric’s table. “And go get a hammer so you will bleed less. You were making a mess.”

___

Darnand entered the common living quarters and halted in surprise. A man stood at the end of the room in a steel breastplate and mail with a long sword on one hip and a short blade on the other. He was lifting a steel shield out of the open cabinet. A full pack rested at his feet. Jerric.

Darnand approached. He felt oddly distressed. “What is this?”

“My uniform,” Jerric replied with a smile. “Did you think I was a professional student? I’m a caravan guard. See?” He pointed at his chest where a shape was embossed onto the metal. “Running Wolf Postal and Freight. That’s my family’s business.” Jerric pulled on his gauntlets. “My break is over. I have to get back to work.”

“An armored guard. But what kind of a...” Darnand began. He looked at Jerric, and for the first time his own expression matched the Nord’s.

“Battlemage,” they finished with a grin.

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This post has been edited by Grits: Jul 24 2014, 07:35 PM

[Grits]

ureniashtram:I’m glad you’re reading! Thank you for your comments. Maglir is fun, he keeps giving himself more to say.

haute ecole rider: Thank you! Skingrad was a fun place to watch Jerric explore. I think in the future he’ll be a little less reckless, though!

SubRosa: I enjoyed writing about Skingrad. There are such interesting folks there. Thank you, SubRosa! Looks like I ran afoul of the paragraph editing again. D’oh! Thank you for pointing it out so I could fit it.

Acadian: Thank you, Acadian! In this case I have to give Valus Odiil the credit for thinking of growing Nirnroot as a crop, Jerric was asking on his behalf. I have given Jerric kind of a different way of thinking, thank you for noticing!

mALX: “Fisto,” OMG! Thanks, mALX!!

Jacki Dice: LOL! He says he’s done talking about it.

Thomas Kaira: We’ll be here whenever you can get to us. I’m glad you’re still reading!

I had days of trouble over the little tussle in this post. Thank you so much for your help, Foxy!!!



Chapter 6: Going Home Part 6

Jerric and Flash walked along the Gold Road alone in the sunshine. They had left Skingrad with a group of travelers, but all of them had turned off the road or fallen behind. He thought they were approaching Ra’sava Camp. The large rocks ahead on the right looked like an excellent place for an ambush. Jerric took his shield from Flash and wished once again that he had his team of scouts and archers. He asked Flash to wait while he walked ahead.

He wasn’t surprised when a Khajiit wearing fur armor stepped out in front of him. “You’re using my road. The fee is one hundred gold. Pay up, or else,” he said. He had a short sword in his right hand and a dagger in the other.

“Who walks around with a hundred gold?” Jerric moved so that he could see the other side of the rocks. “I don’t have it.”

“Your fee just went up. Put down your sword and leave the horse. Or this one will take your life.” The Khajiit’s teeth were bared in contemptuous grin.

“No good.” Jerric looked around and didn’t see anyone else. “Are you sure you want to die over this?”

“We can play it that way if you like. In fact, that’s how this one prefers it.” His grin widened to a snarl and his ears flattened back as he smoothly advanced in a balanced crouch. He kept his head and shoulders bobbing and weaving to confuse Jerric, and it worked. Jerric drew Chillrend and backed away to open the space. The Khajiit simply flowed into it with feline grace. His fluid motion now included his wrists, and Jerric couldn’t keep up with the multiple angles of his attack. The highwayman’s grin widened to a sneer. “The prey is as slow as it is stupid,” he taunted.

Jerric wished again for the familiar long sword that waited for him at home in Kvatch, and then he realized even that wouldn’t be enough against this enemy. He didn’t have a chance to cast a spell, the Khajiit’s continuously flicking blades kept him far too busy. He knew he was outmatched, and cold fear rose up in his gut.

The highwayman slapped Jerric’s first real thrust away with his sword, swaying aside without moving his feet. His dagger hand was perfectly balanced for the lightening fast counterstrike, and Jerric saw it flash under his shield before he could think to move it. His mind exploded with white-hot pain.

The Khajiit’s dagger had slammed into his side low in the gap where the plates didn’t meet. Jerric’s breath left him, and he reeled with the pain. The highwayman yanked out his blade as he twisted behind Jerric, and he slashed through the unprotected back of Jerric’s thigh even as he whirled past.

Jerric went down heavily onto one knee, and when he couldn’t get back up he knew what the pain was telling him. He’s behind me, Jerric thought. I’m finished.

Then the Khajiit was in front of him again, and Jerric saw that he wanted to face him for the kill. “Now who is going to die over the horse?” he sneered. His jaws were open in a mocking grimace.

I have a chance as long as he wants to play, Jerric thought. Just one chance. “Hey, fur licker,” he wheezed, and that was the limit of his creativity. The second’s pause let him call his Nordic Frost up from deep inside.

“The prey should have stayed home with its mother!” howled the Khajiit. His sword slashed toward his head, and as Jerric ducked down and took the blow on his shield he reached out in a last desperate strike. His hand found the Khajiit’s leg. Frost boomed, and Jerric saw the dagger slice the air in front of his face as the Khajiit flew backward onto the grass beside the road. He followed his frost with lightning spells until he saw that the Khajiit was not going to rise.

Jerric put down his shield and held his side, bracing his other hand against the ground. He closed his eyes to concentrate and felt through the wounds with his magicka, then he healed himself. It took a few potions before he was able to get his leg under him again.

He glanced back to check on Flash, then he walked over and looked down at the Khajiit. His yellow eyes were open and his shallow breaths hissed rapidly through his teeth. Ice glittered over his leg and up his body, and the blood on his lips told of the damage inside. Usually folk were crying out or struggling at the end, and Jerric was fascinated by the ones who were calm.

Jerric picked up the Khajiit’s sword. He didn’t need Chillrend for this. He wondered what would pass through his own mind at the end, or if he would even know it was happening. This time the thought that it was over had come to him as a fact, but then his mind had filled with survival.

The highwayman didn’t flinch when Jerric opened his neck. Jerric stepped back and waited for the life to drain out of him. He watched for the moment when the Khajiit left and the meat stayed behind, but he didn’t know it had happened until he heard the final breath rattle out. Jerric had been told what to believe, but he wondered what it was like to lie on the warm grass one moment and then be somewhere else entirely. He supposed that the dead Khajiit knew the answer now. He dropped the sword when he started shaking.

He went about the chores that come after a kill, pausing to empty his stomach onto the grass. Flash walked over when he whistled, and Jerric gave him a carrot and a long scratch on the withers under the saddle blanket. He adjusted Flash’s packs for the weight of his new salvage, and Flash held still when Jerric rested his face against the horse’s forehead. Jerric missed his team’s noise and camaraderie. He decided that being alone had given him too much time to think.

___

By afternoon they had reached the path to Gnoll’s Meeting Camp. Jerric had slinked out of there with Velwyn like a chastened puppy. That was no way to behave, he thought, even if your most recent acts had likely been vile or at the least disgusting. He gathered his courage and turned down the track.

Flash didn’t flinch when they passed the gallows with their decorative occupant, so Jerric led him down into the camp. He spotted Carmia tending the cook fire and watching the entrance. “I’m looking for a toothless, dirty woman. Have you got one?” he called out in a voice that carried.

Carmia let out her deep belly laugh. “If it’s Foul Festia you want, you’ll be disappointed, she’s moved on. She left word for you, though. She says you’ve ruined her for other men. She says when she sees you next, she’s going to ride like she’s late for market day.”

“Sweet Mara,” said Jerric. “I’ll settle for just a dirty one, then.” Carmia laughed again, and Jerric hugged her around her neck. She smelled of onions, and her breath could knock a mudcrab off a manure pile. With a woman like Carmia, you just had to keep her pointed in the right direction.

“It’s still early. You staying?” she asked.

“Not this time, I’m going to push on until I drop. I think I can make Kvatch by lunch tomorrow if the weather holds. Where’s Lavina? I brought something for her.”

Carmia called her daughter, and she came running barefoot over the dirt. “Jerric the Nord!” she shouted.

Jerric laughed. “I’m sure you’ve met more Nords by now, Lavina.”

Carmia snorted. “You’re The Nord, don’t you know. Not many pay her any mind, and no girls her age to play with.”

Jerric pulled the goods out of his day pack and knelt down. “The doll or the sling?” he asked her.

Lavina stood thinking. Her fingers pulled at her lip, and she looked back and forth between his hands. She started to reach for one, then she reached for the other. “The doll!” she finally decided, and Jerric handed both to her.

“Practice every day with your sling, and you’ll never go hungry,” he told her. “Yours is just like your brother’s, he can show you.” Lavina jumped up and hugged him, then she clutched the doll to her chest. “Any more loose teeth? Show me. Hanging by a thread, ugh. Say, that’s a nice doll. What’s her name?”

“Jerric,” Lavina announced proudly. “Jerric the Doll.”

Jerric shook his head. “All right then, now don’t cry when Jerric gets dirty, just take her to the stream and wash her.” Another squeeze from Lavina and she scampered off.

“You remembered her birthday.” Carmia was pleased.

“It’s in Heartfire, same as my Ma’s. I don’t remember yours though, so don’t get any ideas.”

“It’s First Seed the fourteenth,” she said, and she gave him a playful bump with her hip.

Jerric pointed to his face. “This is what I look like when I’m forgetting.”

Lason had ambled up with a sly grin on his face, and Jerric braced himself. The Redguard didn’t waste any time on preliminaries. “I never took you for a troll-humper, Jerric.”

Jerric gritted his teeth under his smile. “If she’s willing. Who’s your alchemist?”

“Sa-Teega, he’s off somewhere. What do you want?”

“Tell him he better have some pretty words ready when I meet him, or his name will be Eats-My-Fist. I left a trail all the way to Skingrad, and that’s not funny.”

“Hah! It sure sounded like you were having a good time, though.”

“Stendarr’s balls, I did not need to know that.”

“Who improved your looks for you?”

Jerric felt his wreck of a nose. “I wish I remembered so I could thank him. I have to go this time, but I’ll see you soon.”

Lason nodded at Flash. “Aren’t you going to introduce your new girlfriend?”

“Do not disparage my horse.”

Matilene had joined them, and she had some news for Jerric. “Rothmund came around asking about you. I guess you went for a walk and forgot to tell him.”

“Something like that. I was a guest of the Watch. Fetching Imperials, no sense of humor. No offense, Carmia.”

“None taken,” said Carmia.

Lason tapped his knuckles on Jerric’s iron plate. “Where’s your shiny suit? Looks like you’ve come down in the world.” He was enjoying himself.

“It needed some alterations. My stick keeps getting bigger.” He looked around and didn’t see any more of the camp’s residents. “Next time, Matilene.” He took a breath and hugged Carmia again, then he and Flash headed back to the road. He was sure that Carmia, Lason, and Matilene would tell the tale of his shameless return, and he could hold his head up on his next visit.

This post has been edited by Grits: Jan 25 2011, 10:57 PM