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saqin
post Sep 25 2009, 05:21 PM
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In this thread you will find the first two chapters in the history about the assassin Felisa Serhas, the khajiit scout Sa'Quira and Gasheera, who remembers nothing of his former life. This history tels the tale about how Gasheera came to be one of the greatest heroes of Cyrodiil, and how the trio went about to make it happen. Because when the jaws of Oblivion open, noone ever thinks the thought that the one that's saving them is lying.

Chapter One: Beginning of the End



My head ached as I arose from the hard stone floor. I waited for the dizzines to disapear as I looked around in the room. Just then I noticed it wasn't a room, and the events of the last few days came rushing back at me.

I sank down towards the wall and managed to close my eyes. The stench picking at my nose, and thoughts whirling all around my head. It was indeed cold in the cell, and the only things I'd have any use of in here was a stool, a small table, a bucket and a bedroll. I would have thought they could at least give me some water. For the soreness of my throat was increasing.

A while later a noice from another cell made me open my eyes. Sighing at the thought of how long I'd have to be here, I looked out through the steel bars of the cell and saw another dunmer in the one across.

He had a few wrinkles and his hair was grey. At the moment he was leaning against the bars of the cell door, his red eyes staring almost hysterically, at me. But soon his eyes went back to normal, as if he'd just finished evaluating me. He looked strong, but it was noticeable that he had spent much time in the cell.

"Well that's somethin' ya' don't see every day. What a pretty face." He finished his sentence with a smile, and I returned it carefully. Not yet sure of what to think. I then got up and put my hands on the cell door, looking at him.

"Ya' know, one of those guards owe me a favor, I could maybee get us put in the same cell." He said, still smiling." Ya' know, it gets pretty cold down here during the nights." I rolled my eyes, looking up in the roof before turning my eyes on him again.

"That's all you can think about? Getting someone to spend the night with?" Now I sat down on the floor, feeling how much my strength had been drained during the last hours. Though how many it had been since I fell asleep, I did not know.

"Hmph, you'll find it gets pretty lonely down here. Trust me, in a few months, you'll be asking me." He answered and chuckled. I sighed and tilted my head backwards again.



"Could you maybe tell me what time it is? You see, I don't have a window in my cell." I looked up and saw him watching me. Nodding slightly I arose from the floor and moved the stool to stand beneath the small window. Then I got up on it and looked out.

The sun shone clearly, almost enlightening the trees, and lake Rumare. It was a fine day, and had I been out there, I would probably have taken a swim in the lake. But, as I remembered myself over and over again, I wasn't.

"The sun is high in the sky, so I would say around twelve." When I'd told him I put the chair back and laid down on the bedroll. I was way to pained by the thought of the sun being on the other side of the wall, so I couldn't really stand the sight of it.

"What's your name?" He asked, and it took me by suprise. I hadn't thought he was still looking at me. But I sat up and looked at him across the cell.

"Felisa. Felisa Serhas. That is my name." He nodded and it took a while for me before I continued. "What is yours?"

"My name? It is Valen Dreth."

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A short beginning, I know. But I do not have time to write more today.

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post Jan 27 2011, 08:44 PM
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mALX: It makes sense that you'd want Janus Hassildor in bed with Maxical(sounds strange saying it XP), but then I've read about it, and their relationship would seem much stranger if they never managed to get into bed with each other.

Acadian: Thanks, it doesn't really make sense that you can't use telekinesis for what Felisa does in the game, I mean, the dead actually are wearing clothes, and clothes in any other circumstance can be moved. Also, horses are so much more than ways to get around, as you've managed to show perfectly in your story about Buffy, they can be your best friend if you treat them well.

TheOtherRick: Thanks ^^

I feel so mean... My last update was in November! My mind have been completely dry, but now I've finally got an idea yay! biggrin.gif It'll take a while to write though, but I'll give you the small piece that I've actually managed to write this far.

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It was early the next morning when I pulled him out of his bed and took him outside the city. North on the imperial isle we stood at 4 am. Both of us had laced leather pants, wool shirts and leather shoes. I'd already rid the island of the few bandits whom inhabited it.

“Today, we're going to exercise blocking and deflecting strikes, because when it comes down to it, you might be dead because you never learned how to block right.” I spoke until he closed his eyes, and then I felled him with the broadside of my blade. “You can't ever do that when fighting someone, okay? Because you'll be dead.” He nodded at my statement, and I smiled slightly. Gods, it must be humiliating for him to be brought down by me again, and I simply couldn't avoid feeling smug about it.

We continued until noon, me coming at him numerous times and correcting him when he did something wrong, there were several moments when I though he'd collapse during the training, but as it turned out, he was a bit tougher than that.

“Okay, you've deserved some food. You can let your guard down.” Okay, so he actually collapsed when I told him that, and I burst out laughing, but at least he held his ground until the danger was gone. That's a good sign of a lot of willpower, isn't it?

When he came to, his eyes were slightly hazy, and I had a feeling that he'd crash when the night came. I hadn't moved him from his position though, so he was very sore. I served him a plate with the venison and potatoes that I'd just cooked over a camp fire, and then I sat down to eat myself. It was quiet for a while before he spoke.

“Thank you.” And that was all there was. We didn't speak much during the rest of the day, only when I gave him instructions on how to put his feet to balance the energy loss better or how to angle his blade. As a matter of fact, I think a whole week had walked past when he spoke to me again.

“I need to take care of some things, it shouldn't take more than a few days, but it's quite urgent.” He said from his spot in front of me. We were eating dinner, having just finished the days training. I looked up at him, his eyes were stuck on my face, determination took up the majority of his. I nodded slowly, swallowing the last piece of meat.

“What is so important that you've got an excuse not to train? I'm not finished with you yet.” I got up from the ground, checking the edge of my blade, but my mind didn't leave his facial expression.

“Saving the world..?” He sounded determined, sarcastic and... Wait, was he actually asking? Gods, he really was asking for my permission!

“You're on a mission to save the world? Right...” How could he be chosen to save the world? When I met him, he barely knew anything about fighting. Why, if he was drawn into a pub brawl he'd be the one that ended up in the bottom and got all of his teeth's knocked out!

“Well, the emperor tasked me with finding his lost son and that son in turn wants my help with fighting back an invasion from Oblivion. Should I have disagreed?” What did I say, all brawns, no brains. So typical for fighters. Heck, he should make sure he knows more about it before he takes on a mission that could kill him! Not that I care about him, but it's stupid. And that's exactly what I told him. I couldn't stop him from going though, and he decided to leave the next morning after he'd gathered supplies. Me? I decided to travel a bit. Maybe do a bit of hunting, work some if I got the opportunity. Simply just following my desires for once.


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saqin   With Fate Uncertain And Bloodstained Hands   Sep 25 2009, 05:21 PM
Olen   Good opening, we meet the main character and get a...   Sep 25 2009, 08:34 PM
saqin   I'm afraid you're right about me typing di...   Sep 26 2009, 04:43 PM
saqin   Here you've got the next piece of the story. A...   Sep 28 2009, 03:01 PM
Olen   I like your take on Valen Dreth, quite different f...   Sep 28 2009, 03:33 PM
saqin   He, thanks for pointing out that stupid mistake. I...   Sep 28 2009, 05:24 PM
saqin   Soo, here is the next part. ---------------------...   Apr 8 2010, 07:47 AM
mALX   I am so glad you are updating this! You are of...   Apr 8 2010, 05:04 PM
Remko   A fresh look on an old story.. nice! But the l...   Apr 9 2010, 01:24 PM
saqin   Thanks for the comments, it's good to see that...   Apr 12 2010, 03:59 PM
Olen   Good to see you back at this piece. It's a re...   Apr 12 2010, 07:24 PM
mALX   I like the way you are handling this!   Apr 16 2010, 07:01 PM
saqin   Thanks for the great comments. Did I hear someone...   Apr 19 2010, 03:50 PM
Remko   I was afraid that would happen... I liked it! ...   Apr 19 2010, 04:07 PM
mALX   Oh, I didn't see that coming - HUGE! Grea...   Apr 19 2010, 08:23 PM
saqin   One month was the time he gave me. One month to pr...   Aug 8 2010, 01:45 PM
mALX   ARGH! A cliffhanger!   Aug 20 2010, 05:40 PM
Rachel the Breton   Hmmm, this is turning into quite the interesting s...   Aug 25 2010, 01:15 AM
saqin   Well, here there is more! I didn't have ac...   Sep 11 2010, 09:55 AM
mALX   Really Great Chapter! You use a lot of intere...   Sep 12 2010, 05:39 AM
treydog   That is a wonderfully evocative moment. Really...   Sep 12 2010, 12:55 PM
saqin   Thanks ^^ And well, I kind of already had the end ...   Sep 14 2010, 03:05 PM
treydog   Very powerful, especially at the end. You have th...   Sep 14 2010, 09:33 PM
mALX   ARGH! A black widow spider...a praying mantis...   Sep 15 2010, 05:31 PM
saqin   And so the story continues... [b]Chapter two: Why...   Nov 15 2010, 07:38 PM
Remko   Yay, it's continued :) Loved the parallel line...   Nov 16 2010, 11:53 AM
mALX   The interplay between Felisa and Gasheera was AWES...   Nov 17 2010, 01:01 AM
saqin   Should have another piece coming soon, but in the ...   Dec 26 2010, 01:20 PM
mALX   Should have another piece coming soon, but in the...   Dec 26 2010, 02:18 PM
Acadian   What a pleasure to catch up with you on this! ...   Jan 26 2011, 03:41 AM
TheOtherRick   I just read the whole story to date. What a great ...   Jan 26 2011, 08:48 PM
TheOtherRick   I spoke until he closed his eyes, and then I felle...   Jan 27 2011, 09:54 PM
Acadian   Don't underestimate Gahsheera. After all, he ...   Jan 28 2011, 01:27 AM
saqin   TheOtherRick: :D :P I'm not saying anything......   Jan 28 2011, 09:28 PM
Acadian   Despite the entrails spilled, this was actually a ...   Jan 29 2011, 01:14 AM
mALX   GAAAAAH !!!! I thought the ...   Jan 29 2011, 04:42 AM
TheOtherRick   B-B-Q kitty entrails...naaaaas-teeee! :P Th...   Feb 2 2011, 10:03 PM
saqin   It was midday when Shadowmere brought us to Cheydi...   Feb 13 2011, 09:24 AM
Acadian   Some more depth on Felisa's history with the D...   Feb 14 2011, 01:33 AM
TheOtherRick   Definitely an interesting encounter between Felisa...   Feb 14 2011, 04:35 AM
mALX   Great paragraph! The intricate balance of t...   Feb 18 2011, 06:48 AM
saqin   Thanks for the good comments, I had quite a lot of...   Feb 23 2011, 06:38 PM
TheOtherRick   [i]Me? I decided to travel a bit. This caught me b...   Feb 23 2011, 07:20 PM
mALX   Powerful ending to this chapter !!...   Feb 24 2011, 06:11 AM
Zalphon   "Because Sithis told me to", you're ...   Feb 25 2011, 02:42 AM
saqin   TheOtherRick & mALX: Thanks :D Zalphon: A b...   Mar 29 2011, 02:09 PM
Acadian   Quite a scheme Sa'Quira has dreamed up and pit...   Apr 1 2011, 12:27 AM
mALX   Love how you added the links at the bottom to help...   Apr 2 2011, 11:26 AM
saqin   Acadian: :D Sa'Quira is actually, if I get to...   Apr 7 2011, 02:48 PM
mALX   Oooh, what an interesting incident !! An...   Apr 11 2011, 03:03 PM
saqin   Emerging from the forest, our eyes came upon a sma...   May 5 2011, 02:32 PM
saqin   http://archive.pixbox.se/arkivet/synligt_3...20/32...   May 9 2011, 02:40 PM
mALX   Poor Jeelius getting the brunt end of a woman...   May 29 2011, 07:18 AM
saqin   [b]Chapter three- Because lies are easy [b]Sa...   Jul 2 2011, 07:52 AM
mALX   Whew! Really Great Write here! My favori...   Jul 2 2011, 04:06 PM
saqin   Felisas' POV We camped by the road the night...   Jul 25 2011, 09:11 PM
mALX   Great inner dialogue here !!! I lo...   Jul 29 2011, 08:07 PM
Grits   “He'd obviously want to see it. What I was tal...   Aug 1 2011, 03:53 PM
Saquira   Sorry about being so far in between posts. I'v...   Nov 4 2011, 08:05 PM
Acadian   I’m so glad to see you continuing this wonderful s...   Nov 5 2011, 01:19 AM
Grits   It was good of Gasheera to admit how Felisa has be...   Nov 5 2011, 02:01 PM
mALX   I'm getting to this A.S.A.P. - had a week of ...   Nov 6 2011, 12:00 AM
Saquira   Sa'Quiras' POV Approaching Bruma beneath ...   Nov 7 2011, 06:48 PM
Acadian   Another enjoyable update! ’The flames surrou...   Nov 8 2011, 01:48 AM
Saquira   Felisas' POV I made my way through the shadow...   Nov 26 2011, 10:40 AM
McBadgere   Excellent story!!...And I don't like t...   Nov 26 2011, 08:01 PM
Acadian   A nice suspenseful buildup, full of description as...   Nov 27 2011, 01:55 AM
mALX   From Sa'Quiras' foretelling visions to the...   Nov 27 2011, 02:20 AM
Saquira   And there be another part (finally)! I'm h...   Feb 7 2012, 03:46 PM
Saquira   Sa'Quira's POV When the bright light subs...   Feb 8 2012, 03:45 PM
mALX   This last chapter is tremendous from beginning to ...   Feb 8 2012, 05:47 PM
Saquira   Thank you :D ----------------------------------...   Feb 9 2012, 06:45 PM
Saquira   I've finally finished the third chapter! ...   May 3 2012, 02:27 PM
Grits   It’s great to see an update for this story! :...   May 6 2012, 10:22 AM
Saquira   Chapter four- I will do whatever I can to keep you...   Jul 16 2012, 09:22 AM
Acadian   Felisa completes her contract inside Bruma, while ...   Jul 30 2012, 12:57 AM
mALX   GAAAAH! Your chapters are too short, they onl...   Aug 28 2012, 05:46 AM
Saquira   Gosh, it's been so long since I made any kind ...   Jan 15 2013, 08:18 PM
mALX   I'm glad you wrapped the story back around to ...   Jan 16 2013, 01:19 AM


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