Soren of the Dark Brotherhood, The Life of a Courier and Assassin Options

[DarkZerker]

I'm back in the fan fiction thing again. Now that mid-terms have passed, I can redo my original fan fiction buried somewhere around here.

But I'm not going to dabble on about my personal life here. This first post is going to lay down some STUFF before I edit this into a full fledged chapter.

Firstly, Soren Snowe is going to be much like Riden, only more developed with a different back story. And this time, I'm going to follow the main quest line...a little bit. YAY FOR STUFF.

Secondly, I like feedback so please feed me back . But in all seriousness, there's no point in writing if people aren't going to read it and I won't get better that much if I don't know what to correct. So let's go.

Oh and no Bladesong. Sorry, it feels too forced, the quest line.

[Acadian]

'Soren goes through the most hated part of any game. The tutorial -_-. I made it as good as good as I could. But bear in mind if this isn't as good as my last two chapters. I'm pretty much forcing myself to finish this tutorial stage in less than 3 chapters.'
You will recall that Destri Melarg once recommended that you not bad mouth your own work. Being humble is good, but be confident that it is your best effort. If you are not satisfied with it, then rework it until you are. There is no requirement that a fanfic character ever go near the Imperial Prison if it does not suit your purpose.

Now that said, I thought this was fine. You did a good job selecting what to tell, what to show, what to demonstrate via dialogue and what to leave out.

Now, I wonder what Soren's purpose will be for the Amulet of Kings he was just entrusted with? I still haven't completely figured him out yet.