 Old Habits Die Hard Part Five, New habits? Or just old ones recycled? |
| haute ecole rider |
 Feb 4 2011, 03:26 PM
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It's now time to start a new thread for Julian of Anvil. Now that she returns to her hometown, it's rather appropriate to start a new thread to celebrate!
Thanks to all who have read and posted input on Julian's story. For those coming in late, if you've got the time, here are links to the previous threads: Chapters One through Seven Chapters Eight through Thirteen Chapters Fourteen through Eighteen Chapters Nineteen through Twenty-two I hope you continue to enjoy this story as Julian works toward the inevitable conclusion! -------------------- |
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| Olen |
Feb 5 2011, 03:42 PM
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 Mouth  Joined: 1-November 07 From: most places |
Thread five... this is long, very long, but it doesn't drag at all. You keep everything flowing well and the development is ongoing which makes the length less noticable, indeed it just means you have more stronger characters.
I enjoyed the bit of backstory, goblins seem to have it in for our Julian. It gives slightly more prespective on what she is now and what lead there. Her comment about home is an interesting one, it goes a long way into her psyche, not so much revealing anyhting but just confirming what was already developed. QUOTE something Olen said waaaay back in Chapter 13 So long ago I have no idea what it was... (nor can I find it). -------------------- Look behind you and see an ever decreasing number of ghosts. Currently about 15.
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haute ecole rider Old Habits Die Hard Part Five Feb 4 2011, 03:26 PM
haute ecole rider @Olen: It’s funny, but Skingrad seemed like a good... Feb 4 2011, 03:41 PM Grits Julian has so much history here - after all, she w... Feb 4 2011, 05:32 PM SubRosa I think someone else mentioned it recently, but it... Feb 4 2011, 06:34 PM Acadian Congratulations on the new thread! Julian is... Feb 5 2011, 01:17 AM D.Foxy Congrats on the New new new (counts on fingers)...... Feb 5 2011, 02:01 AM mALX Congrats on thread five !!! WOO HOO ... Feb 5 2011, 06:09 AM Captain Hammer Ah, I finally get caught up through the end of Par... Feb 5 2011, 06:41 AM Thomas Kaira Got a little behind there for a spell. Not for lon... Feb 5 2011, 10:26 AM haute ecole rider @Grits: You will see Gweden farm in an upcoming po... Feb 6 2011, 07:48 PM mALX GAAAH! Are we finally going to see Julian in ... Feb 6 2011, 08:10 PM SubRosa Wasn't duracell the one that Robert Conrad did... Feb 6 2011, 10:56 PM Thomas Kaira
I see you are serving Italian tonight! How a... Feb 7 2011, 12:01 AM Acadian “Now that’s what I’m talking about!” a brown-d... Feb 7 2011, 01:57 AM Olen She certainly eats well, I might have to take up b... Feb 7 2011, 07:56 PM Captain Hammer Ah, the hometown hero's triumphant return. Wel... Feb 7 2011, 08:23 PM haute ecole rider @mALX: Time for that cold shower again! And ye... Feb 8 2011, 04:48 PM
Captain Hammer Interesting dinner conversation. Finding out that ... Feb 8 2011, 05:23 PM mALX
GAAAAH!!! NO JULIAN !!... Feb 8 2011, 07:17 PM SubRosa Rescuing housecats?
I loved this, because in the g... Feb 8 2011, 09:10 PM Acadian What a wonderful conversational segment - one of m... Feb 9 2011, 02:32 AM Thomas Kaira
This was not a suggestion for the menu in your st... Feb 9 2011, 06:50 AM Olen
Nice line, clever. Introduce what comes alter be... Feb 9 2011, 12:16 PM Grits I really enjoyed this quiet conversation over dinn... Feb 9 2011, 10:30 PM mALX
I really enjoyed this quiet conversation over din... Feb 9 2011, 11:10 PM haute ecole rider @ Cap’n Bam Bam: Yes, tenant clearing will be a li... Feb 10 2011, 03:09 PM SubRosa Cap’n Bam Bam? Sounds like somebody's been wat... Feb 10 2011, 06:35 PM Acadian What a treat this delightful story was! Despi... Feb 11 2011, 01:37 AM Grits Alliteration! :lol:
Little girl Julian ... Feb 11 2011, 03:20 AM Thomas Kaira
Are we contradicting ourselves, now? :P (Sorry, ... Feb 11 2011, 03:44 AM Captain Hammer Cap'n Bam Bam? While a fan of the Flinstones m... Feb 11 2011, 03:52 AM Olen That was quite a bit of building... as said actual... Feb 11 2011, 07:07 PM Thomas Kaira
Is fingerling a word you invented? It's perf... Feb 12 2011, 06:20 AM haute ecole rider @SubRosa: I’m glad you enjoyed that little scene b... Feb 12 2011, 05:01 PM mALX The memories are thick in Anvil, my fave:
Julia... Feb 12 2011, 05:50 PM SubRosa I carried it back to Relas, sticking my tongue out... Feb 12 2011, 08:17 PM Acadian This had a wonderful natural flow to it and was a ... Feb 13 2011, 03:13 AM Thomas Kaira Carahil as I remember her in the game was very sti... Feb 13 2011, 04:26 AM Olen The referances to in game books were great, and ma... Feb 13 2011, 09:34 PM haute ecole rider @mALX: I really enjoyed writing Julian as a child... Feb 14 2011, 03:04 PM Captain Hammer Okay, two posts to comment on, with very different... Feb 14 2011, 06:51 PM ghastley The "two thrones of white ash" struck me... Feb 14 2011, 08:44 PM haute ecole rider
The "two thrones of white ash" struck m... Feb 14 2011, 10:39 PM mALX
The "two thrones of white ash" struck ... Feb 14 2011, 11:25 PM Thomas Kaira Homecoming indeed! I see a future very fitting... Feb 14 2011, 11:06 PM Captain Hammer I always brought Corvus back before getting Allies... Feb 15 2011, 12:32 AM SubRosa you’ll learn more about Jared eventually
What, tha... Feb 15 2011, 12:52 AM Acadian Anvil is beautiful and you present it well! T... Feb 15 2011, 01:52 AM ghastley I don't know about this version of Milona Umbr... Feb 15 2011, 02:07 AM Grits Chapter 23.5:
Again I saw Vigge the Cautious in h... Feb 15 2011, 03:24 AM Olen You show Umbranox in an interesting light, quite b... Feb 15 2011, 12:57 PM haute ecole rider @Cap’n H: Thanks for the kind words. And not to wo... Feb 16 2011, 04:02 PM Olen Another character, and Blanco certainly is one. Y... Feb 16 2011, 07:14 PM Thomas Kaira Well, Carahil is indeed putting Julian's skill... Feb 16 2011, 09:24 PM SubRosa I only meant the Sirens as a joke, as that farm is... Feb 16 2011, 09:38 PM mALX
I only meant the Sirens as a joke, as that farm i... Feb 18 2011, 07:05 AM Captain Hammer Ah, dealing with ye' olde rogue mages. Giving ... Feb 17 2011, 01:38 AM SubRosa
Hm, I wonder if I can trademark that. "Exorc... Feb 17 2011, 02:10 AM Acadian Another great episode with Carahil. I think she i... Feb 17 2011, 02:56 AM Grits “Why would I buy it when I have an equally dilapid... Feb 17 2011, 04:34 PM haute ecole rider @Olen: Yes, I assure you, all the conformation tra... Feb 18 2011, 04:56 PM Olen Clever, I always thought sending a hero to be disg... Feb 18 2011, 07:55 PM Thomas Kaira Very clever flip-flop on that quest, and quite log... Feb 18 2011, 08:49 PM ghastley I'm left a bit confused as to how you're g... Feb 18 2011, 08:53 PM SubRosa Undercover? As myself?
Brilliant!
Julian of ... Feb 18 2011, 10:34 PM Acadian Hmm, I see Arielle's dilemma. Expecting some ... Feb 19 2011, 01:28 AM Captain Hammer
Because Napalm is like an applied version of Wiza... Feb 19 2011, 04:50 AM haute ecole rider @Olen: Yes, I wanted to highlight the fact that Ca... Feb 20 2011, 07:59 PM Grits Paralyzed by the weight of being is a beautiful de... Feb 20 2011, 09:01 PM SubRosa The sun gleamed ruby through a misty sky
This is a... Feb 20 2011, 09:25 PM ghastley That all rings true from the times I've played... Feb 20 2011, 11:04 PM Olen
Interestingly this has never happened to me, and ... Feb 21 2011, 12:21 AM Acadian A nice adaptation of the Anvil guild recommendatio... Feb 21 2011, 02:46 AM Thomas Kaira Very nice, tense fight scene here.
Crushingly eff... Feb 21 2011, 07:42 AM ghastley
I understand you are at complete liberty to chan... Feb 21 2011, 08:26 PM Thomas Kaira
Burden alone seems to just lock one in place, rat... Feb 21 2011, 08:43 PM haute ecole rider @Grits: That phrase you quoted was a momentary fla... Feb 22 2011, 05:03 PM SubRosa Excellent musings about the pros and cons of stall... Feb 22 2011, 06:04 PM Thomas Kaira What a wonderful horse-filled chapter! My two ... Feb 22 2011, 09:54 PM Acadian A lovely day at the beach.
'Again the walnut ... Feb 23 2011, 01:43 AM Olen A good horsey section. Certainly it's an educ... Feb 23 2011, 02:00 AM Captain Hammer Wow. I must say, I never had the problem of the Im... Feb 23 2011, 03:29 AM mALX Thoroughbreds are trained like that for racing, en... Feb 24 2011, 05:51 AM haute ecole rider @SubRosa: I’ll be glad to help you teach Teresa ho... Feb 24 2011, 05:04 PM SubRosa Not a bad life for a male, when you think about it... Feb 24 2011, 06:11 PM Olen Agreed with the A for effort, the hotel room is fa... Feb 24 2011, 08:01 PM Grits Jared, that dirty dog. Waking up in the dark like ... Feb 24 2011, 10:43 PM Acadian Methinks Morvayn is too harsh on Clesa. I think h... Feb 25 2011, 01:35 AM Zalphon
Methinks Morvayn is too harsh on Clesa. I think ... Feb 25 2011, 02:45 AM Captain Hammer And so we meet Jared.
Now, as a man, I find the i... Feb 25 2011, 06:25 AM mALX So wait...because one boy at 17 years old was just... Feb 25 2011, 07:27 AM Thomas Kaira Ugh... what a typical man. Hopefully that will dis... Feb 25 2011, 08:02 PM haute ecole rider @Sage Rosa: Jared wanted privacy in his wooing, an... Feb 26 2011, 09:00 PM SubRosa I was wondering if you were going to work the Sire... Feb 26 2011, 10:17 PM ghastley Interesting shuffle-round of the skills. It's ... Feb 26 2011, 10:50 PM Acadian Don't ever break into Julian's house! ... Feb 27 2011, 03:03 AM mALX
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:O Poor Julian. No wonder she had never h... Feb 27 2011, 03:19 AM Thomas Kaira Happy homecoming Julian! Wow, talk about a wel... Feb 27 2011, 04:13 AM Grits This quest has never made sense to me in the game,... Feb 27 2011, 02:21 PM |
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