@mALX: Yup, there indeed be another plug at the misadventures of Maxical in here. Your kitty is one of the many inspirations to this story, and one of the reasons it continues.
@Acadian: I was actually struggling a bit with how I was going to write that segment, I just didn't know how I could add my own twist to the Falcar quest. Then I thought, "what if we could actually see what happened down there while you were blubbering away?" I then finally had my outline.
@SubRosa: My goal was to have Falcar be your generic villainous arsehole, so I'm glad I got that across.
@haute ecole rider: If only Julian was there...
@Captain Hammer: Welcome, and glad you find the characters endearing, O' good nemesis of Dr. Horrible!
@all:I'd just like to get this out of the way, I am adjusting the lore pertaining to the East Empire Company in this segment. In the game, the company folded after the disaster at Raven Rock, but I'm changing that. Instead, Carnius got fired for corruption and embezzlement and the company sustained heavy losses after Raven Rock went busto. They are compensating by raising tariffs on Morrowind goods. It just didn't seem completely realistic that a company with as much wealth and influence as the East Empire Company would be allowed to just die.
next: Derelas returns from beneath the well, and discovers the immediate fallout of Falcar's dramatic exit...
Chapter 3-3: The Burden of Proof
“What in the name of Arkay are you doing down there?”
The voice of an Imperial rang downwards into my ears, echoing off the damp stone walls.
“Trying… to get… out… of this… thing.” I replied through gritted teeth. Every pull of my arms caused my muscles to scream in protest as if I had an anvil tied around my waist. I had found Falcar’s ring; turns out it was enchanted to make it that much heavier. It also turned out Vidkun had found it too… it was a sight I would rather not see again in my life. His body was pinned to the ground by the ring in his pocket, his arms and legs dangling feebly upwards in a ghostly shadow what was once a once desperate struggle for air. I reached upwards for the next rung on the slippery ladder… but felt my hand slip on the moist metal. Next thing I knew, I had fallen back into the water with a tremendous splash. Thank the Gods Aelwin’s ring worked… I had swallowed quite a bit of it.
“You alright?” The Imperial guard’s voice rang downwards once again.
“Yeah, I’m fine,” I called back upwards, my voice heavy with aggravation now that I had to start that blasted climb all over again.
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As I finally reached the lip of the stone wall, I removed the ring from my pocket and, with immense difficulty, tossed it over the side to ease my burden. It fell with a loud *CLANG* followed by an indignant “Ow!” I had dropped it on the guard’s foot.
“What exactly is that thing made of?” He asked incredulously, kicking the ring off his steel boot with difficulty.
“Brass, I think,” I replied simply, fighting for breath after finally escaping from the well’s depths, “but it’s been enchanted to make it incredibly heavy.”
“I’ll say,” the guard replied bemusedly, rubbing at a brand new dent, “that’s the first time anyone’s managed to stub my toe in these boots. Anyways, would you mind telling me what you were doing down there? It’s dangerous to go swimming in the wells, you know; you could’ve drowned.”
“And it’s thanks to this ring I didn’t, actually,” I countered, holding my left hand up to show him Aelwin’s ring. “Anyways, I think you should know there’s a body in there. He looked like a Nord, went by the name of Vidkun.”
“Come again?” The guard asked, “There’s a body down there?”
“Yes, like I said, his name is Vidkun,” I repeated.
“No wonder the water’s been tasting funny recently…” the guard mumbled. I made a silent note to thank him for giving me a very good reason never to drink anything offered in this town ever again.
“He drowned trying to obtain this ring,” I quickly continued, pointing to the brass loop now twinkling innocently in the midday sun, “and I believe it was the intention of the person who asked me to find it that I follow the same fate….”
“Murder is a very serious accusation, citizen, and not one you should throw around lightly,” the guard cut me off in a rather pompous manner, “I trust you have the evidence to back it?”
Let’s see, there was the fact that the ring was so heavy it kept Vidkun rooted to the floor of the well, completely helpless. Then there was the fact Falcar didn’t even bother to warn me about the ring’s nature; in fact, he didn’t even bother to tell me anything about Vidkun’s disappearance at all. I think I had all the all the evidence I needed, with one exception.
“I might,” I replied once I finished gathering my thoughts, “we just need to get this ring back to the Mages Guild. If my suspicions are true, Falcar has a lot to answer for.”
“I’d better come with you, then,” the guard added, “If you’re right, we best end this as soon as possible.”
And if I’m wrong, less distance for you to travel to reprimand me, I finished in my head.
“Fine,” I finished, heaving the ring into my hands with a grunt.
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“By the Gods, what happened to you, ma’am?!” The guard cried out as Deetsan opened the door. Her appearance was shocking, one of her eyes was swollen half shut and she was clutching at her ribs.
“It was Falcar,” she replied simply, confirming every suspicion in my mind. “He attacked me. He also killed one of our members and just tried to kill this one,” she finished indicating me. I noticed the guard’s gaze turning towards me.
Told you so, I thought.
“I’ll inform the city watch to keep an eye out for him,” the guard quickly recited, “If he’s anywhere around here, we’ll find him.” With that, he hurried off, his boots clanking loudly on the paving stones. Deetsan closed the doors behind me as I returned inside.
“What should I do with this thing?” I quickly asked her, indicating the ring that was now threatening to tear a hole in my hands.
“Oh, just drop it anywhere,” Deetsan replied, “I don’t think Falcar really cared about it, it was probably some sort of sick joke on his part.”
I quickly let the ring go with a sigh. It made an incredible thud when it hit the stone floor and caused an Altmer woman to look up, startled, from her potion brewing.
“Vidkun’s dead,” I told Deetsan. Best get the bad news over with now. Deetsan responded by dropping her gaze and shaking her head. “I’m sorry.”
“Don’t be, I just knew this had happened,” she began, her voice a low hiss of anger, “I should’ve known better than to keep my mouth shut about all this. I should’ve reported Falcar when I had the chance! How could I let this happen under my nose?”
She then made a lengthy pause, which I felt would be best not to break, before turning back to face me.
“I take it your talk with Falcar didn’t go very well?” I inquired once I felt she had straightened herself out. “You look like you’re in a lot of pain.”
“Just my pride,” Deetsan brushed off, unconvincingly clutching at her ribs at the same time, “but no, it didn’t. He just dismissed me like he always does… at least until I threatened to report him to the council for covering up Vidkun’s death,” she broke her gaze with mine, and I noticed her voice was getting higher and starting to shake, “I thought he was going to kill me, he got so angry! I couldn’t even understand most of his ranting, all I could tell was that he screamed that our days were numbered and then he stormed out.”
I shook my head incredulously. It was hard to believe how horrible a person could be sometimes. Killing a highwayman to preserve your own life pales in comparison to trying to murder someone in cold blood… and succeeding. This trip to Cheydinhal was nothing if not gruesomely enlightening.
“Anyways, I don’t think he ever intended to write your recommendation, Associate,” Deetsan then continued, breaking the brief silence, “I am deeply sorry you had to get caught up in the middle of this, but thank you for your help in bringing his crimes to light.”
“It was my pleasure,” I replied, “and I’m sorry about Vidkin.”
“Yes, it’s such a shame,” Deetsan answered quietly, her gaze dropping to the floor once again, “he didn’t deserve to die like that. But, no use crying over it now, it happened and there’s nothing we can do about it.”
“Anyways, with Falcar gone, that leaves me in charge of things here,” Deetsan then revealed to me, “so, if I say so myself, I think you’ve more than earned a recommendation from me.”
“Well, thank you very much, but are you sure the council will acknowledge it?” I asked, handing her the parchment slip that now contained Teekeus’ signature.
“Well, I do need to get a report written up for them about what happened here, so I’m sure they will,” Deetsan answered, grabbing a nearby quill and inkpot. “Now, I have enough time to give you a quick tour of the guild before I have to get to work, so let’s not waste time.”
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“…and this is the basement level. We have some extra public beds in that room over there in case you need them,” Deetsan indicated a small wooden door opposite the entry stairwell, “and over there is the Magister’s quarters.”
“Falcar’s quarters,” I added, suppressing a cringe.
“Well, they technically belong to me now, but yes, that is where Falcar slept.” Deetsan replied, though I had the feeling it would be quite a while before she slept in the same bed as he did after what happened today.
The guild hall was actually rather small, at least smaller than the one in Chorrol. The building was constructed of plastered stone and lined with rosewood, with hard oak floors upstairs and tiled floors downstairs. The ground floor contained several desks in alcoves for private studies, as well as an alchemy booth with several tools an apparatuses. The female Altmer, Eilonwy, whom I had startled when I returned with Falcar’s ring, was still engrossed in her potions there when Deetsan introduced me to her. Next to the stairwell leading to the upper floor was the dining room, which at this point contained several bowls of fresh fruit, including some very strange berries.
“They’re called Comberries,” Deetsan replied when I asked her about them, “they come imported from Morrowind. They’re very popular here in Cheydinhal because of how close to the province we are, though they are a bit expensive thanks to all the tariffs the East Empire Company imposes on them.”
Upstairs was the community dormitory, where I was greeted by a Redguard named Trayvond as I entered. Another High Elf named Orintur was studying in a corner of the room. Most of the windows in the building also opened up to this floor, providing ample light by which to read by, as well as helping to mask the relatively small size of the hall in comparison to the number of people dwelling inside.
“So, that’s about it. It’s not much, but it’s served us quite well over the years,” Deetsan concluded once she had shown me the basement bedroom. “Now, if you’ll excuse me, I need to get started on that report.”
“Do you want someone to clear out Falcar’s things?” I offered. “You know, since he’s obviously not going to be coming back?”
“If you wish to do so, Associate, feel free, but I really do need to get started on that report,” Deetsan finished, closing the basement door behind her with a snap on the way back up.
Falcar didn’t keep much inside his room, just a few changes of clothes in the wardrobe and a couple potions on his desk, but I quickly found myself puzzled by a rather innocent chest of drawers being locked tightly shut. Was Falcar trying to hide something in there? Too bad I didn’t have any lockpicks, I thought, so I guess I’ll need to find the key… if he didn’t take it with him, that is. I decided it might be worth a shot to try under the dresser, though in all likelihood it wasn’t there.
Nope, nothing. Besides, that would’ve been too easy and predictable. Well, maybe I’m just being paranoid, I thought to myself as I flopped down on the bed, he probably was just your run-of-the-mill fetcher who… wait… where is that clinking sound coming from? I quickly sat back up and lifted the pillow I was resting my head on… and there it was; a plain brass key. I quickly snatched it up, thrust it into the dresser’s lock, and was greeted by a satisfying click as I turned it. Now, let’s see what you’ve been hiding in here, Falcar….
This post has been edited by Thomas Kaira: Feb 9 2011, 03:22 AM