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saqin
post Sep 25 2009, 05:21 PM
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In this thread you will find the first two chapters in the history about the assassin Felisa Serhas, the khajiit scout Sa'Quira and Gasheera, who remembers nothing of his former life. This history tels the tale about how Gasheera came to be one of the greatest heroes of Cyrodiil, and how the trio went about to make it happen. Because when the jaws of Oblivion open, noone ever thinks the thought that the one that's saving them is lying.

Chapter One: Beginning of the End



My head ached as I arose from the hard stone floor. I waited for the dizzines to disapear as I looked around in the room. Just then I noticed it wasn't a room, and the events of the last few days came rushing back at me.

I sank down towards the wall and managed to close my eyes. The stench picking at my nose, and thoughts whirling all around my head. It was indeed cold in the cell, and the only things I'd have any use of in here was a stool, a small table, a bucket and a bedroll. I would have thought they could at least give me some water. For the soreness of my throat was increasing.

A while later a noice from another cell made me open my eyes. Sighing at the thought of how long I'd have to be here, I looked out through the steel bars of the cell and saw another dunmer in the one across.

He had a few wrinkles and his hair was grey. At the moment he was leaning against the bars of the cell door, his red eyes staring almost hysterically, at me. But soon his eyes went back to normal, as if he'd just finished evaluating me. He looked strong, but it was noticeable that he had spent much time in the cell.

"Well that's somethin' ya' don't see every day. What a pretty face." He finished his sentence with a smile, and I returned it carefully. Not yet sure of what to think. I then got up and put my hands on the cell door, looking at him.

"Ya' know, one of those guards owe me a favor, I could maybee get us put in the same cell." He said, still smiling." Ya' know, it gets pretty cold down here during the nights." I rolled my eyes, looking up in the roof before turning my eyes on him again.

"That's all you can think about? Getting someone to spend the night with?" Now I sat down on the floor, feeling how much my strength had been drained during the last hours. Though how many it had been since I fell asleep, I did not know.

"Hmph, you'll find it gets pretty lonely down here. Trust me, in a few months, you'll be asking me." He answered and chuckled. I sighed and tilted my head backwards again.



"Could you maybe tell me what time it is? You see, I don't have a window in my cell." I looked up and saw him watching me. Nodding slightly I arose from the floor and moved the stool to stand beneath the small window. Then I got up on it and looked out.

The sun shone clearly, almost enlightening the trees, and lake Rumare. It was a fine day, and had I been out there, I would probably have taken a swim in the lake. But, as I remembered myself over and over again, I wasn't.

"The sun is high in the sky, so I would say around twelve." When I'd told him I put the chair back and laid down on the bedroll. I was way to pained by the thought of the sun being on the other side of the wall, so I couldn't really stand the sight of it.

"What's your name?" He asked, and it took me by suprise. I hadn't thought he was still looking at me. But I sat up and looked at him across the cell.

"Felisa. Felisa Serhas. That is my name." He nodded and it took a while for me before I continued. "What is yours?"

"My name? It is Valen Dreth."

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A short beginning, I know. But I do not have time to write more today.

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post Feb 13 2011, 09:24 AM
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It was midday when Shadowmere brought us to Cheydinhall. The sun had hidden behind a cloud, and more, darker clouds was coming towards us. As her sleek body came to a stop outside the gate, I skipped of her back, still holding a hand on her neck. She snorted at me, less humiliating this time and I put my head against hers. Then I took the saddle of her back and slid the bridle of from her head, putting them in the little stable.

”I'll be back later, you just take care of yourself, okay?” I said, looking into her eyes, and she shook her head up and down. She was fully aware that later might just mean a few hours later, but it could also mean a day later.

Now, you might be wondering why I didn't go to the sanctuary next, but it's simple. I just couldn't stand being near Gogron or M'raaj-dar. I didn't feel like being made fun of and insulted several times on the same day. True, Vicente is a gentleman and I've always found him charming, but he just isn't enough.

The guards that had seen me with Shadowmere gave me odd looks as I entered through the gate and the horse set of in a trot to the south east. I had no reason to be worried about her, after all she'd been in these forests much more than me.

When I came in through the gate, the captain of the guard was standing a few feet away, talking to some of the other guards. I pointed my eyes at the ground and made sure that the hood covered my head properly. Then, I walked to the inn.

The Newlands lodge is a small and cosy tavern. Their beds don't cost much, and best of all, the proprietor is a dark elf. When I walked in, the place was quite crowded, though it seemed as if though most of the people were locals. I'd just bought some wine when I heard my name being called with the tell tale khajiit accent. Yes, Gasheera had by some very strange coincidense gone to the same city as me. And, apparantly he wouldn't leave me alone. That's why I went over to his table, and managed to soak it in wine.

Next to Gasheera, sat a very small and wide-eyed khajiit. A female khajiit in a black and green raiment. Oddly, the first thought that crossed my mind was; how did she get here before me? And then I got angry. By angry I do not mean however that I attacked her, a person of my profession can't afford that since even though she's a bandit, the guards would in the case of a fight need to interrogate me which would almost certainly get me a one way ticket to jail.

“Seen a ghost eh, elf?” Gasheera laughed out loud at his own exclamation, and if it hadn't been obvious that he was drunk earlier, then it was now. “Have a seat. Scoot over pretty.” The female gave him a quick look, then plastered her eyes on me again and didn't move an inch.

“That's not necessary.” I said, sitting down on the chair on my side of the table. Gasheera looked at the female then, and back at me.

“You two know each other?” He said, slurring slightly.

“We've met. Never properly introduced however.” I said, a strained smile when I looked at the khajiit whose name I did not yet know. Gasheera snorted, and the female went stiff when the realisation hit her that he was about to tell me her name. She'd seen my dark brotherhood raiment, she knew that I was an assassin. But she knew just as well as I did that if one of us were caught, so would the other.

”Well, this is Sa'Quira, though she calls herself Saqin. Saqin, this is Felisa, she have been training me in sword fighting for the last week.” He took another mouthful of his beer as soon as he finished.

“Well met Sa'Quira.” I said, realizing that the glee I felt were showing on my face, Gasheera was however, to drunk to see it.

“Felisa.” The pronunciation of that word said a lot about her, and she realised it as soon as it escaped her mouth. She feared me and she was a very young woman whom probably hadn't come of age yet. I realised then that whatever she was, she wasn't a threat. If I wanted to I could use her, and she knew that I could kill her in a matter of minutes.

Gasheera of course didn't notice our quiet exchange and I turned to him. “So, what brings you to Cheydinhall?”

“House cleaning.” When his answer came, my drink suddenly left my mouth.

“Wh-what?” Was all I could get out, and he snorted.

“Some people needs some trash cleaned up in a house northwest of here, I'll tell you more about it tomorrow when I'm sober.” He said putting an arm around the girls shoulders. I just sat there. Housecleaning, why would he do that?

Oh right, bandits can be reffered to as thrash, forget that I said anything. Anyway, I spent the remainder of the evening with them and it turned out that Gasheera could be quite funny, for a khajiit that is. And at the same time, it became very evident that he had no idea of the girls real proffesion.

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I've been planning for some time to write a story about Sa'Quira, but I've decided to just incorporate her into Felisas' story. It'd be way to much work to begin a new one, and besides I think I could work out a way to tell her story up to the point when she comes to Cyrodiil.

Almost thought someone would recognise my description of the raiment, but that doesn't matter. That was just a small hint. tongue.gif


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saqin   With Fate Uncertain And Bloodstained Hands   Sep 25 2009, 05:21 PM
Olen   Good opening, we meet the main character and get a...   Sep 25 2009, 08:34 PM
saqin   I'm afraid you're right about me typing di...   Sep 26 2009, 04:43 PM
saqin   Here you've got the next piece of the story. A...   Sep 28 2009, 03:01 PM
Olen   I like your take on Valen Dreth, quite different f...   Sep 28 2009, 03:33 PM
saqin   He, thanks for pointing out that stupid mistake. I...   Sep 28 2009, 05:24 PM
saqin   Soo, here is the next part. ---------------------...   Apr 8 2010, 07:47 AM
mALX   I am so glad you are updating this! You are of...   Apr 8 2010, 05:04 PM
Remko   A fresh look on an old story.. nice! But the l...   Apr 9 2010, 01:24 PM
saqin   Thanks for the comments, it's good to see that...   Apr 12 2010, 03:59 PM
Olen   Good to see you back at this piece. It's a re...   Apr 12 2010, 07:24 PM
mALX   I like the way you are handling this!   Apr 16 2010, 07:01 PM
saqin   Thanks for the great comments. Did I hear someone...   Apr 19 2010, 03:50 PM
Remko   I was afraid that would happen... I liked it! ...   Apr 19 2010, 04:07 PM
mALX   Oh, I didn't see that coming - HUGE! Grea...   Apr 19 2010, 08:23 PM
saqin   One month was the time he gave me. One month to pr...   Aug 8 2010, 01:45 PM
mALX   ARGH! A cliffhanger!   Aug 20 2010, 05:40 PM
Rachel the Breton   Hmmm, this is turning into quite the interesting s...   Aug 25 2010, 01:15 AM
saqin   Well, here there is more! I didn't have ac...   Sep 11 2010, 09:55 AM
mALX   Really Great Chapter! You use a lot of intere...   Sep 12 2010, 05:39 AM
treydog   That is a wonderfully evocative moment. Really...   Sep 12 2010, 12:55 PM
saqin   Thanks ^^ And well, I kind of already had the end ...   Sep 14 2010, 03:05 PM
treydog   Very powerful, especially at the end. You have th...   Sep 14 2010, 09:33 PM
mALX   ARGH! A black widow spider...a praying mantis...   Sep 15 2010, 05:31 PM
saqin   And so the story continues... [b]Chapter two: Why...   Nov 15 2010, 07:38 PM
Remko   Yay, it's continued :) Loved the parallel line...   Nov 16 2010, 11:53 AM
mALX   The interplay between Felisa and Gasheera was AWES...   Nov 17 2010, 01:01 AM
saqin   Should have another piece coming soon, but in the ...   Dec 26 2010, 01:20 PM
mALX   Should have another piece coming soon, but in the...   Dec 26 2010, 02:18 PM
Acadian   What a pleasure to catch up with you on this! ...   Jan 26 2011, 03:41 AM
TheOtherRick   I just read the whole story to date. What a great ...   Jan 26 2011, 08:48 PM
saqin   mALX: It makes sense that you'd want Janus Has...   Jan 27 2011, 08:44 PM
TheOtherRick   I spoke until he closed his eyes, and then I felle...   Jan 27 2011, 09:54 PM
Acadian   Don't underestimate Gahsheera. After all, he ...   Jan 28 2011, 01:27 AM
saqin   TheOtherRick: :D :P I'm not saying anything......   Jan 28 2011, 09:28 PM
Acadian   Despite the entrails spilled, this was actually a ...   Jan 29 2011, 01:14 AM
mALX   GAAAAAH !!!! I thought the ...   Jan 29 2011, 04:42 AM
TheOtherRick   B-B-Q kitty entrails...naaaaas-teeee! :P Th...   Feb 2 2011, 10:03 PM
Acadian   Some more depth on Felisa's history with the D...   Feb 14 2011, 01:33 AM
TheOtherRick   Definitely an interesting encounter between Felisa...   Feb 14 2011, 04:35 AM
mALX   Great paragraph! The intricate balance of t...   Feb 18 2011, 06:48 AM
saqin   Thanks for the good comments, I had quite a lot of...   Feb 23 2011, 06:38 PM
TheOtherRick   [i]Me? I decided to travel a bit. This caught me b...   Feb 23 2011, 07:20 PM
mALX   Powerful ending to this chapter !!...   Feb 24 2011, 06:11 AM
Zalphon   "Because Sithis told me to", you're ...   Feb 25 2011, 02:42 AM
saqin   TheOtherRick & mALX: Thanks :D Zalphon: A b...   Mar 29 2011, 02:09 PM
Acadian   Quite a scheme Sa'Quira has dreamed up and pit...   Apr 1 2011, 12:27 AM
mALX   Love how you added the links at the bottom to help...   Apr 2 2011, 11:26 AM
saqin   Acadian: :D Sa'Quira is actually, if I get to...   Apr 7 2011, 02:48 PM
mALX   Oooh, what an interesting incident !! An...   Apr 11 2011, 03:03 PM
saqin   Emerging from the forest, our eyes came upon a sma...   May 5 2011, 02:32 PM
saqin   http://archive.pixbox.se/arkivet/synligt_3...20/32...   May 9 2011, 02:40 PM
mALX   Poor Jeelius getting the brunt end of a woman...   May 29 2011, 07:18 AM
saqin   [b]Chapter three- Because lies are easy [b]Sa...   Jul 2 2011, 07:52 AM
mALX   Whew! Really Great Write here! My favori...   Jul 2 2011, 04:06 PM
saqin   Felisas' POV We camped by the road the night...   Jul 25 2011, 09:11 PM
mALX   Great inner dialogue here !!! I lo...   Jul 29 2011, 08:07 PM
Grits   “He'd obviously want to see it. What I was tal...   Aug 1 2011, 03:53 PM
Saquira   Sorry about being so far in between posts. I'v...   Nov 4 2011, 08:05 PM
Acadian   I’m so glad to see you continuing this wonderful s...   Nov 5 2011, 01:19 AM
Grits   It was good of Gasheera to admit how Felisa has be...   Nov 5 2011, 02:01 PM
mALX   I'm getting to this A.S.A.P. - had a week of ...   Nov 6 2011, 12:00 AM
Saquira   Sa'Quiras' POV Approaching Bruma beneath ...   Nov 7 2011, 06:48 PM
Acadian   Another enjoyable update! ’The flames surrou...   Nov 8 2011, 01:48 AM
Saquira   Felisas' POV I made my way through the shadow...   Nov 26 2011, 10:40 AM
McBadgere   Excellent story!!...And I don't like t...   Nov 26 2011, 08:01 PM
Acadian   A nice suspenseful buildup, full of description as...   Nov 27 2011, 01:55 AM
mALX   From Sa'Quiras' foretelling visions to the...   Nov 27 2011, 02:20 AM
Saquira   And there be another part (finally)! I'm h...   Feb 7 2012, 03:46 PM
Saquira   Sa'Quira's POV When the bright light subs...   Feb 8 2012, 03:45 PM
mALX   This last chapter is tremendous from beginning to ...   Feb 8 2012, 05:47 PM
Saquira   Thank you :D ----------------------------------...   Feb 9 2012, 06:45 PM
Saquira   I've finally finished the third chapter! ...   May 3 2012, 02:27 PM
Grits   It’s great to see an update for this story! :...   May 6 2012, 10:22 AM
Saquira   Chapter four- I will do whatever I can to keep you...   Jul 16 2012, 09:22 AM
Acadian   Felisa completes her contract inside Bruma, while ...   Jul 30 2012, 12:57 AM
mALX   GAAAAH! Your chapters are too short, they onl...   Aug 28 2012, 05:46 AM
Saquira   Gosh, it's been so long since I made any kind ...   Jan 15 2013, 08:18 PM
mALX   I'm glad you wrapped the story back around to ...   Jan 16 2013, 01:19 AM


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