Elder Scrolls III: Legends Options

[davion]

Hey guys im new here but this is somethin i was wanting to do and i didn't see any other topics so i will test it out here. If you have something to say in this topic thats not in char type OOC: then what you want to say before or after you've done your chars story(if you want to do one lol i am though just to show you guys what im aiming at. Other people aren't allowed to control other peoples chars in the story, can only talk about them or interact with them, cant have them do talking and whatnot, have to wait for them to reply. (Ex: I had just arrived at Balmora on the Strider and i saw a strange man walk by, his face was shadowed so i couldn't make it out, but the aura comeing from him was a fright i've never felt before.) like that. you can ask questions and whatnot but cant answer the questions, ya'know what im tryin to get at? well lets test it out see how well it goes over. I wanted to do this to get a feel of all of us interacting with each other insted of the same ol' basic solo-story.

[minque]

[quote=davion]PS: Feedback would be nice just so i know if theres stuff i could do to make it more interesting
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Well I´m not sure what the above really says......

But your story is good , one advice is to use "he" sometimes instead of repeating Davion´s name .....but apart from that:

Go for it...continue by all means, it´s good and I´ll follow it for sure! :goodjob: