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Serene of Cyrodiil, her true story, chapter 1 |
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minque |
Feb 26 2005, 11:52 PM
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Wise Woman

Joined: 11-February 05
From: Where I can watch you!!

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Ok so at last I came round to do it.....posting my story that is! I must thank all of you who have encouraged me to do it (oh yes you know who you are!)
Special thanks to Treydog who has helped me with editing and also for being a sounding-board, and thus kept me writing.
I now start with the prologue of my story just to see if you think you like it and want to read more
Enjoy!
Dedication
This work is dedicated to Treydog, whose enthusiasm encouraged me to really write this story.
Prologue.
Alone at last, I close the door behind me as I enter the small room which serves as my private library. I’m proud to say that I probably have the most complete collection of books in Vvardenfell these days, though it has taken me the last seven years to get it.
As I tucked my daughter into bed a while ago, I decided that now the time had come to write down my story. Mostly for her sake, but also for me; I need to get it off my mind, in order to continue with my life and to be able to fulfill the tasks that lie before me. Then there are the numerous questions asked by the little girl lying in the next room, unaware of the fact that she’s a miracle of the Age. . Questions about why there are so few children around and why they all seem to be nearly the same age, that is, age 5 and lower. Questions about why everyone she meets looks at me, her mother, with admiration and respect. Questions about why there is a non-ending row of visitors who want to see me and so keep me from being with her, like a normal mother would be.
I know the answers to her questions, but providing those answers means I will have to tell her the whole story, the story about me, Serene of Cyrodiil, a legionnaire’s daughter of uncertain heritage, who has become one of the most powerful and famous people in Vvardenfell….
So there it is......feel free to comment, it´s a short one I know but I have to start somehow.....
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Chomh fada agus a bhionn daoine ah creiduint in aif�iseach, leanfaidh said na n-aingniomhi a choireamh (Voltaire)Facebook
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minque |
Mar 14 2005, 12:41 AM
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Wise Woman

Joined: 11-February 05
From: Where I can watch you!!

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We ate our meal in silence. Almina helped herself to the crab-meat , but even more energetically to the wine…..I found this a bit odd, not the fact that the imperial woman ate and drank heavily, that was common knowledge, but the fact we got wine, now that was odd! We never had that before at all.
I just tasted the wine, and did not eat very much either; I had this uneasy feeling that something was very wrong, the little food I had just lay like a lump in my stomach and I struggled to hold back the urge to vomit. So the guard came back for our dirty dishes…..When he turned his back on us to exit the cell I felt a paralyzing fear, and at the same moment Almina rushed towards him and hit the back of his head with a bottle……the bottle we had just emptied a while ago. At the blow the bottle broke, and its knife-sharp ends dug deeply in the soft flesh of the young imperial guard, who slowly sank to the floor, severely bleeding from the deep cut. Almina ran incredibly fast down the corridor outside our cell, while Leila let out a terrifying scream that would certainly be a call-out for every guard within the prison. A quick glimpse of a faint movement from the wounded man caught my eye and then I took action; I slapped Leila’s face to get her out of the catatonic state she was in and then grabbed both her hands and put them directly on the gaping wound of the guard.
“Hold tight”, I hissed and held my hands over hers while I concentrated on the bleeding wound. Leila was immediately quiet and just stared at me with horror all written on her face, yet still she kept her hands, guided by mine, holding tight to the back of the guard’s head. His blood flowed freely over our hands; but soon enough I sensed it diminish. I closed my eyes and concentrated to merge my healing energy through Leila’s hands into the deep cut. My entire body shivered, drenched in cold sweat. From far away I heard the footsteps from several guards approaching….Then I finally was aware of the wound slowly closing, the heavy blood-flow stopping. Leila opened her mouth as to say something, and I cautioned her,
“Shhhh, hold tight and concentrate on the wound.”
I removed my hands from Leila’s and fell trembling to the side, panting heavily as tears started running down my face. During my training, Marthona had told me that there was a price to be paid for a major healing; for the first time, I understood what she had meant. I was more exhausted than I had ever been in my life.
“WASS´UP” three guards, fully armoured, stood in the doorway, staring angrily at the strange scene in front of them; one imperial guard lying on his belly, a young Breton girl whose blood-stained hands held his head where the deep cut was slowly closing itself up, and one imperial girl sitting against the wall, crying. Leila’s face was remote, totally emptied of feelings, just calm and silent. I watched her through a mist of tears and knew that I most certainly had triggered the healing-powers that dwelled deep inside her.
“She saved this man’s life,” I sobbed, “he was dying!” I cried fiercely now, the last minutes had been too much for me, I had simply “crossed the border.”
“Aye, look´ere Curio, e´s cumin´te his senses.” One of the guards bowed over the wounded one, who moved his head from one side to the other.
I just leaned against the wall and watched from a distance as the three guards helped their comrade to his feet. His uniform and armour were blood-stained but there was no cut in the back of his head any more; it was healed. The guards looked warily at Leila and me, and Sonya, who had been stunned with fear during this breakout, now cleared her throat and addressed the guards;
“Nah, see, yer mate would´ave been a stiffie if the lassie ´ere ´adn´t put them ´ands on´is ´ead.” It was obvious Sonya had grasped the situation …..
The guard named Curio turned to Leila and asked for her name and her sentence.
“Aye, Breton, you apparently saved young Telemachos´ life, and that shall not be unnoticed.”
With these words the prison-guards left our cell.
When we were alone Leila burst into tears, and I put my arms around her and we sat like that for a while. Sonya stared at me as if I was some kind of Cyrodiilic witch…
“Ye shud ´ave seen yerself, Serene,” she said, and shook her head, “them luk in yer eyes….creepy t´was….creepy, all tremblin´an´shakin´….sweatin´all over…….Wha´ are ye reely?”
I looked back at her and explained about my newly discovered healing-powers. Then we overheard some shouting and yelling from the corridor…..
“Almina!” I had completely forgotten about her, whose actions directly triggered this chain of events. A premonition came to me, telling that Almina´s life was over, then a terrible scream…… abruptly cut off…..and it was over.
We did not sleep very well that night, as Leila experienced the healing over and over again in her dreams, and so yelled and cried in her sleep. Sonya merely sat on her bed trying to figure out if I was a witch or just an ordinary lunatic or perhaps a mage.
As for myself, I had another date with Azura……
“Serene! Justice has been shaped,…..A life for a life…..Your path has been established, do not fear, for I shall be watching you. A release will come...”
And a release came, though not mine, for in the afternoon two guards came to us and told us about the death of Almina; it was young Telemachos and Curio, and they addressed us with great courtesy, which did not surprise me- men tend to respect women with exceptional powers. Especially when one of those women has saved a life.
“Killed during attempted escape,” they said.
“Leila of Jehanna; you shall follow me; General Vantinius wishes to see you.” Curio’s words tore my soul to pieces, and I crouched in the corner of my bed, buried my face in the pillows and let the tears come. I would never get over the loss of my family; just hearing them being mentioned caused me to break down completely.
Leila leaned over me and kissed my wet cheeks, “ I owe you my life, Serene. If I ever can do anything to repay you, let me know!”
Then she was gone…….I didn’t think I would ever meet her again, but oddly enough I did……but that’s another story.
Telemachos was one kind of a guard….he was kind and compassionate, as I found out on that gruesome Sondas afternoon in The Imperial Prison.
“Serene, there now, drink this and you will feel a lot better.”
I turned around and found a mug filled with hot comberry wine handed to me. Telemachos’ brown eyes looked at me almost tenderly. He handed me a piece of cloth to wipe my nose and dry my face with. As I took the cloth from his hand I noticed he had a badly treated wound on his thumb; it was watery and green pus oozed out from it. The bandage was dirty and did not even cover the wound properly. I asked him how he got it and he said it was a horse-bite.
Obviously Telemachos would run the risk of losing his thumb due to acute infection if the wound was not treated and quickly.
I took his hand and gently removed the bandage; the smell that now emanated from the poor man’s hand made Sonya rush to the bucket and get rid of her lunch.
First I did not even feel it, but after examining Telemachos thumb with my fingers I noticed a rise in temperature in my hands, a tickling sensation in my fingertips…..The pus dried into small flakes and the red inflamed flesh took a healthier pinkish colour, as I held his hand.
I looked straight into his eyes and then saw there, that he now knew who really had saved his life the day before….
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Chomh fada agus a bhionn daoine ah creiduint in aif�iseach, leanfaidh said na n-aingniomhi a choireamh (Voltaire)Facebook
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minque Serene of Cyrodiil, her true story, chapter 1 Feb 26 2005, 11:52 PM General Edor Crespin It's rather short, but I am looking forward to see... Feb 27 2005, 12:23 AM minque It's rather short, but I am looking forward to see... Feb 27 2005, 12:41 AM Alexander well I've said it before minque. excellent work :g... Feb 27 2005, 01:54 AM OverrideB1 And you were worried about posting this... why?
... Feb 27 2005, 10:29 AM Elongar It's not that hard after all, is it? I'm not sure ... Feb 27 2005, 11:26 AM minque Thank you all for your kind comments....I´ll soon ... Feb 27 2005, 11:52 AM treydog After much anticipation, we finally get to see the... Feb 27 2005, 09:45 PM Soulseeker3.0 great job minque to bad i didn't see this earlyer.... Feb 27 2005, 09:56 PM minque Ok so here you are then.....the first part about S... Feb 27 2005, 10:46 PM minque Just want to show some more pictures of Serene...
... Feb 27 2005, 11:01 PM Alexander excellent work minque. really off to a great start... Feb 27 2005, 11:55 PM jonajosa Good job. I liked it. Keep it up. Feb 28 2005, 01:40 AM Soulseeker3.0 way to go Minque! one question though, she whent ... Feb 28 2005, 02:37 AM minque yes..she was ..her life was totally upside down an... Feb 28 2005, 02:40 AM Soulseeker3.0 oh well like i said, and everyone else that posted... Feb 28 2005, 04:27 AM treydog One of the things I really enjoy about this story ... Feb 28 2005, 03:11 PM OverrideB1 Like Treydog, I think it's great that you're givin... Feb 28 2005, 09:42 PM Soulseeker3.0 hey minque i wanted to ask this yesterday but forg... Feb 28 2005, 10:37 PM minque Ehh noo I cant say I did..in fact I do not even kn... Feb 28 2005, 11:24 PM Soulseeker3.0 oh nothing its just i'm reading the searies and in... Feb 28 2005, 11:40 PM jonajosa Alittle of topic but did you use mods to create yo... Feb 28 2005, 11:52 PM Ze Milanio I haven`t red the story (yet) but since I`ve seen ... Feb 28 2005, 11:53 PM Soulseeker3.0 I haven`t red the story (yet) but since I`ve seen ... Feb 28 2005, 11:54 PM minque Alittle of topic but did you use mods to create yo... Mar 1 2005, 12:15 AM jchamber
Ok.. so the prologue showed that Serene in fact ... Feb 12 2006, 02:50 AM Elongar I'm afraid I can't enlighten you but I can tell yo... Mar 1 2005, 06:45 PM Ze Milanio OK... first, sorry for the late reply - I red the ... Mar 1 2005, 07:01 PM minque OK... first, sorry for the late reply - I red the ... Mar 1 2005, 11:28 PM minque As I slowly walked along the Nibenay River I thoug... Mar 3 2005, 01:44 AM Soulseeker3.0 wow good job minque i fell sorry for the dunmer, a... Mar 3 2005, 02:08 AM Ze Milanio I feel... sorrow. Sorrow and rage, the two compani... Mar 3 2005, 12:26 PM treydog Moving scenes- I have always said that "art" is so... Mar 3 2005, 02:29 PM General Edor Crespin Nice job, minque. Two thumbs up. Mar 3 2005, 02:40 PM Elongar :goodjob: :goodjob: :goodjob: Make that three th... Mar 3 2005, 07:02 PM minque The next time I opened my eyes I encountered darkn... Mar 5 2005, 02:29 PM OverrideB1 This is excellent Minque. I'm really enjoying this... Mar 5 2005, 03:02 PM Ze Milanio GRRRR :evil5: I feel like munching on some sewered... Mar 5 2005, 05:17 PM treydog I like the fact that we have an "enemy" to focus u... Mar 6 2005, 05:32 AM jonajosa Amazing. Your characters personalitys are done rea... Mar 6 2005, 03:55 PM Soulseeker3.0 i liuke your characters, well, not her uncle Varus... Mar 6 2005, 06:04 PM Elongar More please.
Encore, encore! :goodjob: :goodj... Mar 6 2005, 06:07 PM Magefire This has the potential to be something wonderful -... Mar 7 2005, 11:56 PM minque I was left alone in my cell again, sitting on the ... Mar 8 2005, 11:20 PM Soulseeker3.0 wow great minque!! i like the parts were Serene is... Mar 9 2005, 03:37 AM treydog Enjoyed the trial scene- also the way we get a sen... Mar 9 2005, 02:15 PM minque I opened my eyes, and sat up in my bed, still shiv... Mar 11 2005, 09:52 PM Oozae A professional writer you are my young padawanhttp... Mar 12 2005, 05:04 AM treydog I like the way you make the cell-mates individuals... Mar 13 2005, 02:26 AM Ze Milanio The scenes and events are almost alive in my head,... Mar 14 2005, 11:35 PM Elongar Let's hope she gets to wield a DDK sometime then! Mar 15 2005, 03:06 PM jchamber ah thank you lots
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V V Feb 12 2006, 04:26 AM minque Aye..she will....in due time, but now the last par... Mar 16 2005, 11:14 PM Soulseeker3.0 great story Minque! i just read the last three par... Mar 17 2005, 02:26 AM minque great story Minque! i just read the last three par... Mar 17 2005, 08:46 AM Elongar If not, I'll start a petition to get him back!
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lol just have fun... i feel like an adult talki... Mar 18 2005, 11:34 PM jonajosa I wrote alot at your story at ES so if you wanna k... Mar 20 2005, 02:23 AM Elongar Copy an' paste? Mar 24 2005, 05:23 PM jonajosa um you have to forgive a slow person of his mistak... Mar 24 2005, 07:08 PM Tellie DDK= a Daedric Dai Katana. It's one of the mor... Feb 12 2006, 11:15 AM Daedroth That was great! I'll be reading more from ... Feb 28 2008, 09:03 PM SubRosa I just finished reading Chapter 1. Serene is a ver... Mar 28 2010, 08:32 AM minque @SubRosa! I'm very flattered you took your... Mar 28 2010, 06:25 PM SubRosa In the words of Kid Rock, it's not bragging if... Mar 28 2010, 10:37 PM minque Ah yes...the hair-mod I used hadn't the exact ... Mar 29 2010, 09:23 PM mALX I have been amazed and hooked by this story - and ... Apr 4 2010, 11:58 PM minque mALX, Thank you for your kind words, I really appr... Apr 5 2010, 12:42 AM Remko Just finished reading chapter one. I like it! ... Apr 7 2010, 04:09 PM mALX I have to admit I cried when she was sentenced and... Apr 7 2010, 11:38 PM minque mALX, Remko! i'm so glad you like my story... Apr 8 2010, 11:08 PM Grits Wow, Serene has had a rough start! I’m enjoyin... May 12 2011, 03:44 PM
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