King Coin: Thank you for kind words AND introducing me to that beautiful piece of music! I re-read my piece whilst listening to it and it added so much to the atmosphere
Lady Syl: I'm very glad that you are happy that Nathaniel isn't, or wasn't, a killer. I am also happy that the chapter had the effect it did with it's most royal reader
Acadian: Hehe, i'm glad you enjoyed the chapter! It can be difficult trying to put the right amount of emotion across through words, but i hope it came across
SubRosa: Haha, you never know! Quill-Weaves next book may be 'Lissa: WTF happened to her?'... though i highly doubt it

i'm glad you enjoyed the little undergarment segment!
PREVIOUSLY: Whilst travelling through the cave Lissa discovered that her father had been offering animals and criminal to a vampire to protect his family. After the vampire killed a Bosmer, Nathaniel cancelled the deal, resulting in the vampire killing him and Lissa killing the vampire.
Also, Lissa and Rhano share their first kiss whilst taling about their losses, and Lissa decideds to leave on her journey early and says a teary farewell to Maelona... but not her mother...
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3. Chapter 1 ~ Hammerfell ~ Part 1
“Welcome to Dragonstar, fellow Redguard! Been in Hammerfell long?”
I was quite overwhelmingly greeted by a friendly man, quite old but still nice. He was also a Redguard and by his attire I could only assume he was a mage of some sort, which was strange… for a Redguard anyway. He wore a blue robe, which was very well made, and he carried a large staff. It was almost as big as me.
“Erm… No, not really. I’ve only just arrived.” I told him. I’d already been travelling for two years, receiving the same greeting everywhere I went. All I wanted was a nice hot bath, and maybe to visit a salon. My hair was awful; it was ratty and greasy, it was just awful.
“Well, I’m suspecting that you are in dire need of some relaxation. Please, come with me. I’ll get you sorted.” The old mage said, wrapping his arm around my shoulder and guiding me through the town. I could see the faces of other members of the town had a hint of disgust towards the mage, which I could understand but didn’t agree with. Everyone is allowed to make their own choices in life and if he chooses to use magic, who cares.
“Thanks, I could use a sit down I guess, you know, treat myself.” I joked. I needed to keep him talking about anything, before he asked me about my travels. They always do. They always ask every little detail. They obviously didn’t realise the amount of effort it took trying to remember-
“So tell me about your travels, young... oh, I don’t know your name, do I? My name is Jakkel Smithin, but please, call me Jak. And yours?
“My name is Maelissa Cristenn, but just call me Lissa. I don’t suppose you have a spring heel or a candlestick, do you?” I said, slightly mocking him, a little joke to myself I hoped he wouldn’t understand.
“Unfortunatley, no.” Jak replied; whether he got the joke or not I didn’t know. “Well, Lissa, let's get you inside and you can tell me all about your travels!” Jak said with delight. He looked at me, smiling, so I forced a smile right back.
Yay…* * *
We sat in Jak’s cottage. It was very homey, I felt very safe. Apart from the stuffed bear head on the wall that stared directly at me, bearing its bloodstained teeth, I felt very at ease.
“So after I left Skyrim I made my way to High Rock, then here. But if I’m honest, Hammerfell has always been my main destination, I wanted to get in touch with my roots, you know?” I told Jak, I had been stuck telling the story of my travels for an hour at least. I was beginning to bore myself.
“Well, you certainly have been around haven’t you?” He said, he looked almost proud of me, for some strange reason. “So, how long are you planning of gracing Hammerfell with your presence?”
“I don’t know. Maybe a couple of months or so, I don’t know. I was hoping to find a mentor for using the bow, but I don’t know whether Hammerfell would have any. Valenwood would be the best bet, wouldn’t it?”
“Hmm… it would be a wise move. The Bosmers are the most skilled in that particular area.”
“Oh, but that means either going back through Cyrodiil…”
A look of confusion appeared on Jak’s face. “But surely that is a good thing? You will get to see your family?”
“True… but I kinda left with a small lie…” I confessed to the old man.
“May I ask what the lie was?” Asked Jak, intrigued.
I didn’t want to tell him; it was too horrible. I just looked at him, praying he would change the subject.
“Well do not panic, you needn’t travel so far to find a teacher,” Jak had a smile spread across his face. “It just so happens that I’m a master of marksman. I could be your mentor if you would like?”
The coincidental revelation stunned me. It has always been very unlikely for a Redguard to be such an expert in marksman, but who was I to turn down his offer? Assuming he was telling me the truth, that is.
“Yeah, that sound great, Jak, thanks. But do me a quick favour first, yeah?”
“Of course I can. What is it?”
“Prove it?” I said, as nicely as I possibly could. If he was telling the truth, I wouldn’t want to anger him. “Please.”
Jak rose up from his seat. He walked over to a cupboard and grabbed a golden bow and a quiver of arrows. He stood by the open window, readied his shot and fired. I jumped from my seat and ran to the window. A perfect hit of a very thin tree, almost 60 feet away. I turned to Jak, with a smile on my face.
“So… When can we start?”
* * *
Another day, another lesson, but I couldn’t complain. I was pretty handy with a bow, I usually managed to hit a tree after a dozen arrows from 50 feet away, and that was pretty good.
“The problem is, Lissa, you don’t seem to have a connection with your bow.” Jak told me
“How do you mean? The bow is in my hands and my hands are connected to my arms which are connected to me!” I joked.
“I like your enthusiasm, but what I mean is you should’t have to concentrate so hard. It should come naturally to you.”
“It’s hard you know, Jak! My brain can’t handle the pressure of ‘arrow, string, pull, release’.” I protested.
“It will get easier in time, I promise-“ Jak was interrupted as a rock flew past his face, a deliberate attack. I turned my head to see a man staring angrily at Jak.
“YOU’RE NOT WELCOME HERE!” shouted the angry guy.
I turned to Jak, confused as to why he just took the abuse.
“Arne’t you gonna say something?”
Jak tried to change the subject.
“Now, if you line up your-“
I didn’t let him finish. I dropped my bow and walked over to the angry guy, slightly enraged.
“That was big of you wasn’t it. Eh? Throwing rocks at an old man! I bet it makes you feel really big doesn’t it. Hm?”
Jak walked over to me, trying to get me to go back to the training ground by putting his hands on my shoulders. “Lissa, lets-“
“No, Jak, this is unacceptable!” I turned back to the angry guy. He was laughing, whether it was at me or Jak I didn’t know, or care. “Oh, go on, laugh it up! What you need to get into your thick, prejudiced head is that Jak isn’t going anywhere, and neither am I.”
I walked closer to the angry guy, even though I was shorter than him I was still pretty intimidating; at least I liked to think I was.
“The next time you decide to throw things at my friend there will be a LOT of trouble, and if you HIT him… you don’t wanna know!” I stared into his eyes. “Now I suggest you run along.”
He did so. If I’m completely honest I was terrified, but the fact that I actually scared him off? Priceless. I turned to Jak, who had a disappointed look on his face.
“There could have been a better way to deal with that situation, Lissa.”
I looked into his eyes. I actually felt some kind of remorse for my actions.
“Sorry”
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“Time for dinner Lissa!” Jak shouted to me from downstairs. He was having a fancy dinner party with his friends; he thought it would be the perfect opportunity for me to get to know some people.
I rushed downstairs and some people sat round the large dining table. On the table was, pretty much, a feast. Vegetables, sweetrolls, wine, meat; it’s a shame I was a vegetarian. Jak noticed me and beckoned me to sit down next to him. As I did so he began to speak.
“Everyone, this is my young protégée, Maelissa…”
“JUST Lissa…” I corrected him.
I’ve been here for months and you still can’t get it right! Haha
A friendly looking Breton woman looked at me, smiling. She began to speak to me, her voice quite soothing.
“My name is Aliss,” she aimed her eyes towards a Breton man sat on her left, “and this is my husband, Kollin.”
“It’s a pleasure to meet you both!” I told them, politely of course.
“Well it’s a pleasure to meet you to. Jak has told us a lot about you.” Kollin told me.
I turned to Jak, “Oh he has, has he.”
Jak winked at me and I laughed.
“You are very beautiful, dear.” said Aliss. “… So I hear you haven’t seen your family in a couple of years?”
Hold up, what is this?It was a rather odd thing for her to say as it wasn’t any of her business, but before I had a chance to answer a middle age female Redguard spoke to me.
“Don’t worry about her. She is one of those types who is more interested in the lives of others than her own.”
I laughed; this woman seemed pretty cool; I liked people who were to the point.
“I’ll bear that in mind!” I said. The woman reached her hand for mine.
“I’m Tristen.”
“Hi Tristen, I’m humiliated! How do you do!”
Tristen laughed at me, or with me.
Time passed, food was eaten and wine was drunk; by Aliss, mainly.
Tristan turned her attention towards Jak.
“No Falvor today?”
“No,” Jak replied, “he is busy with… a client.”
Oooh, dramatic pause. Someone’s hiding something!“Falvor always seems to be busy,” said a miserable looking Nord man sat between Kollin and Tristen.
“That’s because he always is, Gord.”
Haha- Gord the Nord.“Well he should be here!” Gord protested.
“I’ve saved him a seat next to Aliss and me. If he arrives he arrives.”
Gord the Nord snubbed Jak’s comment. Aliss turned to speak to me again.
“So all the females of your family begin their names with ‘Mae’?”
“Only the girls on my dad’s side.” I answered politely.
Aliss didn’t say anything; she gave me a sarcastic looking smile and went back to her food. But, me being me, I couldn’t ignore it.
“What is you prob-” I didn’t finish what I was saying, as I was interrupted by Jak.
“Are you not eating anything Lissa?” he asked, aiming his attention towards the venison.
“Jak, I’m vegetarian, remember?”
Jak had a slight look of panic on his face, as if he made some grave mistake.
“I’m so sorry, Lissa! I completely forgot! I’m so used to you fending for yourself.”
“Jak its fine! There is still stuff I can eat, don’t go all crazy on me!” I joked.
“Jak’s always been like that, Lissa.” Tristen informed me, “It’s best to just reassure him of how useful he
actually is!”
I laughed, “I’ll keep that in mind!” But the laughter was soon gone due to, yet, another question from Aliss.
“So what do you think of Jak’s choice in occupation?”
“I really don’t care. Jak is Jak.” I told her; firmly, but nicely. As nice as I could be anyway.
“But, he is a disgrace to your people?” Aliss replied; strangely calm.
“Aliss, please. Do be quiet.” Tristan warned her.
Silence took over.
Awkward…More time passed, though the peace was soon ruined by Aliss. Again.
“But what about you Lissa? You are an apprentice in Restoration, correct?”
I answered her, even though I knew where this was going.
Seriously, if she even starts on me…
“I am. Yes.”
“But that too is unacceptable within the Redguard community I would imagine? Did your parents raise you wrong?”
I looked at her, fire in my eyes.
Nobody talks about my family with that level of disrespect.“Aliss, you are drunk.” Kollin told her; she had had a few glasses of wine, but that was no excuse.
“Hush down, Kollin, Let the woman have her say!” Bellowed Gord the Nord.
“I’m just trying to understand! Why are you around here when you’re parents have raised such an
abomination!”
“Aliss that is enough!” Jak warned her. Warnings weren’t enough.
“Aliss, please. Kollin take her home.” Begged Tristan. She could see the hate milled anger spewing in my
eyes; although I tried not to show it in my body language. Aliss was showing no sign of stopping.
“The fire is burning in you’re eyes, I can see it. Oleta and Nathaniel made a huge mistake giving you life!”
Before anybody had a chance to speak up I rose to my feet,
“You need to be quiet. Now. Or I WILL NOT be responsible for my actions!”
Aliss just smiled at me, the guest’s looked at her. She also rose to her feet.
“You are a very rude young girl. You shall not get away with talking to me that way.”
I noticed something; Aliss’s hand was glowing. A reddish glow engulfed her palm. She through her hand in my direction and before I could react a small fireball was heading straight for me. Tristan managed to push me out of the way in time, and as I crashed to the floor Kollin pushed Aliss to the floor.
“The fire! IT BURNS! SHE CANNOT LIVE!” Aliss screamed.
Jak cast what I can only assume was a paralyze spell on the insane Breton, silencing her; for now anyway.
“Lissa, are you okay?” Tristan asked. Jak turned to me with a shocked expression on his face. Gord the Nord looked entertained and-
Wait, how did she know my parents name? Not even Jak knew…
How did she?This post has been edited by Rihanae: Mar 10 2013, 10:22 PM