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post Jan 29 2010, 11:23 AM
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post Jun 16 2011, 09:47 PM
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Incredible descriptive passages throughout- enhanced by the lovely screenshots. You capture Seth's growing doubts and weariness perfectly, along with Pene's attitude.

The Clockwork City is grueling, frightening, bewildering... And you get all of that in, while still moving toward the final discovery.

And now- Alma is home- so to speak.


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Black Hand   Memoirs of a Morag Tong Assassin: Mournhold Volume   Jan 29 2010, 11:23 AM
Olen   I'm glad to see this start again. I read it a...   Jan 29 2010, 06:17 PM
minque   This made my day! An update, a new chapter, co...   Jan 29 2010, 10:39 PM
Black Hand   Deleted.   Feb 7 2010, 09:47 AM
minque   Ooookay..on we go, right Seth? farewell simple lif...   Feb 8 2010, 01:22 AM
Black Hand   Deleted.   Apr 29 2010, 07:34 AM
Olen   :) Good stuff, I'm glad you had the time to u...   Apr 29 2010, 09:47 AM
minque   Ohhh! You just made a dull depressing day to a...   May 1 2010, 05:57 PM
Black Hand   Deleted.   May 9 2010, 09:46 AM
Black Hand   Deleted.   May 9 2010, 10:36 AM
Olen   Wooo more Seth! Great as ever, I like reading...   May 9 2010, 10:44 AM
Black Hand   Deleted.   May 9 2010, 11:07 AM
minque   YAYYY.....The Postmachine is back! Been away f...   May 9 2010, 10:40 PM
Black Hand   Deleted.   May 10 2010, 10:34 PM
Olen   The list was great. Very Seth. These were brill...   May 11 2010, 03:45 PM
canis216   Ooh, good to see this story resumed. I wonder who ...   May 12 2010, 06:37 PM
minque   Yessssss....more Sethyas! Humorous, brilliant ...   May 13 2010, 01:11 AM
Black Hand   Deleted.   May 14 2010, 09:03 AM
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Black Hand   Deleted.   May 15 2010, 01:08 AM
minque   The things he went through! The nightmares.......   May 15 2010, 02:32 AM
Olen   I like it :). I'm not sure what else to say.....   May 15 2010, 11:00 PM
Black Hand   Deleted.   May 16 2010, 07:27 AM
Black Hand   Deleted.   May 16 2010, 10:51 AM
minque   NOOOOO! Not a cliffie....NOW!!! Ho...   May 16 2010, 10:48 PM
Olen   And we meet the seducer... I want to know what hap...   May 17 2010, 09:32 AM
Black Hand   Deleted.   May 17 2010, 09:56 PM
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Black Hand   Deleted.   May 18 2010, 12:21 AM
Olen   Ooooh a new character. Novel idea too. I wonder ...   May 18 2010, 06:17 PM
minque   OMG! three updates...heh you are the post mach...   May 21 2010, 09:19 PM
Black Hand   Deleted.   May 24 2010, 08:14 AM
minque   Oh la la...So the lil' seducer helped out in t...   May 24 2010, 10:38 PM
Black Hand   Deleted.   May 24 2010, 10:40 PM
minque   Ahhhhh!!! She's a telepath!...   May 24 2010, 10:54 PM
Black Hand   Deleted.   May 25 2010, 06:06 AM
Olen   The post machine is gathering momentum again :D A...   May 25 2010, 03:21 PM
Black Hand   Deleted.   May 27 2010, 10:39 PM
minque   Lovely! beautiful....The interactions between ...   May 28 2010, 11:07 PM
Black Hand   Deleted.   May 31 2010, 09:45 PM
minque   ah, the clockwork city....well I've never seen...   May 31 2010, 10:19 PM
Olen   Woo good stuff, I haven't commented for a whil...   Jun 3 2010, 08:02 PM
Black Hand   Deleted.   Jun 5 2010, 10:34 AM
Olen   Great stuff, using their own traps against them is...   Jun 5 2010, 09:46 PM
minque   Ohhh excellent writing! So good descriptions o...   Jun 11 2010, 12:10 AM
Remko   And then..... nothing...... aaaaarrgghhhhh I love...   Jul 20 2010, 02:02 PM
Black Hand   Deleted.   Jul 21 2010, 05:20 AM
Remko   What do you think? Of course I read the whole thin...   Jul 21 2010, 09:55 AM
Black Hand   Deleted.   Jul 21 2010, 06:40 PM
Remko   An update soon? YAY!! :D :D   Jul 22 2010, 11:32 AM
minque   OMG!!! Ehhh....well I'll better....   Aug 10 2010, 08:50 PM
Doommeister   Argh cliffie!! Please, more? And if your r...   Nov 6 2010, 09:49 AM
minque   Argh cliffie!! Please, more? And if your ...   Nov 9 2010, 01:14 AM
Black Hand   Deleted.   Feb 16 2011, 10:40 PM
minque   Iiiyaaa! Darling Seth is back! AND managed...   Feb 17 2011, 10:01 PM
Black Hand   Deleted.   Apr 26 2011, 06:13 PM
minque   Whoops! Was messing around with my new phone....   Apr 29 2011, 10:09 PM
Black Hand   Deleted.   Jun 6 2011, 12:02 AM
Burnt Sierra   First up - great to see this continuing. And nice ...   Jun 7 2011, 12:25 AM
Olen   What he said about the continuance of this. I lik...   Jun 7 2011, 11:35 AM
minque   Handsome, handsome! Mmmmm Sethyas looks soooo ...   Jun 9 2011, 07:56 PM
Black Hand   Deleted.   Jun 11 2011, 01:24 AM
treydog   Sethyas- with pictures! Woo-Hoo! Sorry- ...   Jun 12 2011, 12:09 PM
minque   YIKES! What Treydog just said...Evil, thy name...   Jun 12 2011, 10:48 PM
Black Hand   Deleted.   Jun 13 2011, 05:19 AM
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Olen   Great stuff. The screenshots look fantastic, well...   Jun 14 2011, 09:23 PM
minque   Yay! She's come for him! Or what? Can...   Jun 14 2011, 11:42 PM


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