Incredible descriptive passages throughout- enhanced by the lovely screenshots. You capture Seth's growing doubts and weariness perfectly, along with Pene's attitude.
The Clockwork City is grueling, frightening, bewildering... And you get all of that in, while still moving toward the final discovery.
And now- Alma is home- so to speak.
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The dreams down here aren't broken, nah, they're walkin' with a limp...
The best-dressed newt in Mournhold.
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