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Zalphon
post May 4 2011, 01:22 AM
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Prologue

3E 420


“Naïlo,” the Hlaalu Guard asked. “Did Stacey give you the package?” I opened the satchel at my hip and pulled out the box of drakes. I handed it to the Dunmer in Bonemold Armor. He reached for it and nodded.

“Now then, the Hlaalu Guards will turn a blind eye to the Thieves’ Guild activities in Balmora?” I asked. “That is the deal.” The deal had been in place for five years, ever since the Raynil Orayn became the leader of local Hlaalu in Balmora. The truth was simple: he was like every other Hlaalu, a corrupt, greedy thug.

I walked towards the bridge to the South Wall Corner Club. In the alleys, Skooma-addicts smoked away their money. This was Balmora, the real Balmora. It wasn’t uncommon for an outlander to disappear or a Skooma-addict to sell everything he owned down to the clothes off his back for another bottle of those precious crystals.

Habasi smiled as I crossed the bridge. “Did they receive the ‘package’?” she asked inquisitively. With a nod, I saw that smile grow from ear to ear. She patted me on the back and opened the door for me.

“Good job, Naïlo.”

“Sugar-Lips, it’s my duty to the Guild.”

“Sugar-Lips thinks you’re a good kid, Naïlo,” the Khajiit stated as we walked down the stairs. “Stacey would like you to see you, Ashborn.”

I strode over to the door with a sign: “Private Room” and knocked. When the door opened, a Redguard in exquisite clothes answered the door. He had light brown hair that was combed back. “Naïlo, you’ve been with the Guild for a few years now.”

“Y-yes, S-sera,” I stuttered. “I-I have been with the G-guild for some time.” This was the first time I had ever seen Gentleman Jim Stacey in the flesh. I had once received orders from him to deliver a package to the Hlaalu Council House, but only once.

“Relax, kid. I’ve got some good news for you. I’m officially promoting you to Wet Ear.”

“W-what are you serious?” I asked.

“Yes and with your new rank, I’ll need you to travel to Ald’ruhn to take orders from Relam Arinith, our ranking member there. He has needed someone to help him out with a few jobs,” Stacey grinned. “You think you can handle it, Kid?”

“Y-yes I can,” I nodded like an obedient child. “Can you pay for me to take a silt strider to Ald’ruhn?”

The human looked around for a moment then he finally came to a conclusion. “Tell him Stacey said if he gives you free passage to Ald’ruhn we’re even,” he ordered. “The next silt strider to Ald’ruhn is in the morning, so rest up.”

I walked out and the bartender tossed me a loaf of bread. “Have a good trip, Naïlo.” I had to walk forward to grab it; the Imperial never was a good judge of distance. With a hefty bite out of it, I made my way towards my room. The room had a cloth rug, a pillow and a blanket.

I lied down on the rug and put my head on the pillow. “Finally a member of the guild,” I whispered to myself proudly…


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Acadian
post Jun 23 2011, 02:17 AM
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I liked the ability to teleport to selected locations that you gave them. Very handy.

And -
“It’s called illusion. That’s actually a bag of rocks with one the size of your fist. By the time she realizes that, we’ll be long gone. The illusion will wear off after a few hours.” That was brilliant. He turned a bag of rocks into a bag of precious jewels.'
How neat was that?!?

And a new set of great armor!


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Zalphon   Cloak and Dagger   May 4 2011, 01:22 AM
Acadian   Nice to see you back and writing, Z! A new s...   May 4 2011, 01:56 AM
Zalphon   Notice it's set even before the Nerevarine sho...   May 4 2011, 02:11 AM
Lady Syl   Hmm, I'm liking this story. Taking place in Mo...   May 4 2011, 03:17 PM
Zalphon   Hmm, I'm liking this story. Taking place in M...   May 5 2011, 12:10 AM
mALX   WOO HOO !!! Zalphon is BACK !...   May 4 2011, 03:38 PM
Zalphon   Chapter One: Ald’ruhn, City of Untold Mystery ...   May 14 2011, 08:05 AM
mALX   I got the biggest kick out of these two passages: ...   May 14 2011, 06:33 PM
Acadian   Yes, nice detail as Nailo travels to and arrives a...   May 14 2011, 11:43 PM
Zalphon   Chapter One: Ald'ruhn, City of Untold Mystery...   Jun 5 2011, 12:55 AM
Acadian   This was quite enthralling! Rescuing Mira was...   Jun 5 2011, 01:09 AM
Zalphon   Nailo's a good guy, even if he tends to be on ...   Jun 5 2011, 01:42 AM
mALX   ROFL !!! How you come up with thes...   Jun 5 2011, 04:26 PM
Zalphon   Actually, the Rat in the Pot is the local Thieves...   Jun 5 2011, 04:42 PM
mALX   Actually, the Rat in the Pot is the local Thieves...   Jun 5 2011, 04:48 PM
Zalphon   GOTY edition is like $10. Buy it now!   Jun 5 2011, 04:56 PM
mALX   GOTY edition is like $10. Buy it now! ...   Jun 5 2011, 05:01 PM
Zalphon   Chapter One: Ald'ruhn, City of Untold Mystery...   Jun 5 2011, 09:40 PM
Acadian   More thievy adventures of Nailo and Mira. Of cour...   Jun 6 2011, 01:39 AM
Zalphon   I wouldn't call that a Thieving Adventure, mor...   Jun 6 2011, 01:56 AM
mALX   These paragraphs are outstanding !!...   Jun 6 2011, 04:47 PM
Lady Syl   Chapter One This is a very interesting read for m...   Jun 8 2011, 05:49 PM
Zalphon   Chapter Two: The Witch-Hunter Mira was sitting...   Jun 20 2011, 09:47 PM
Acadian   Well done! You had a very nicely done quiet w...   Jun 21 2011, 02:20 AM
mALX   You did an Awesome job on that fight scene !...   Jun 21 2011, 07:33 AM
Zalphon   Chapter Two: The Witch-Hunter - Final Myrth was...   Jun 22 2011, 10:21 PM
Zalphon   http://s1236.photobucket.com/albums/ff452/...ent=e...   Jun 22 2011, 10:27 PM
mALX   Oooh, Zalphon! Did you draw that yourself? G...   Jun 22 2011, 10:29 PM
Zalphon   Alas, I didn't draw it myself. I found it on ...   Jun 23 2011, 12:46 AM
Zalphon   Best set of leather armor money can buy. It is Se...   Jun 23 2011, 03:38 AM


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