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saqin
post Sep 25 2009, 05:21 PM
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In this thread you will find the first two chapters in the history about the assassin Felisa Serhas, the khajiit scout Sa'Quira and Gasheera, who remembers nothing of his former life. This history tels the tale about how Gasheera came to be one of the greatest heroes of Cyrodiil, and how the trio went about to make it happen. Because when the jaws of Oblivion open, noone ever thinks the thought that the one that's saving them is lying.

Chapter One: Beginning of the End



My head ached as I arose from the hard stone floor. I waited for the dizzines to disapear as I looked around in the room. Just then I noticed it wasn't a room, and the events of the last few days came rushing back at me.

I sank down towards the wall and managed to close my eyes. The stench picking at my nose, and thoughts whirling all around my head. It was indeed cold in the cell, and the only things I'd have any use of in here was a stool, a small table, a bucket and a bedroll. I would have thought they could at least give me some water. For the soreness of my throat was increasing.

A while later a noice from another cell made me open my eyes. Sighing at the thought of how long I'd have to be here, I looked out through the steel bars of the cell and saw another dunmer in the one across.

He had a few wrinkles and his hair was grey. At the moment he was leaning against the bars of the cell door, his red eyes staring almost hysterically, at me. But soon his eyes went back to normal, as if he'd just finished evaluating me. He looked strong, but it was noticeable that he had spent much time in the cell.

"Well that's somethin' ya' don't see every day. What a pretty face." He finished his sentence with a smile, and I returned it carefully. Not yet sure of what to think. I then got up and put my hands on the cell door, looking at him.

"Ya' know, one of those guards owe me a favor, I could maybee get us put in the same cell." He said, still smiling." Ya' know, it gets pretty cold down here during the nights." I rolled my eyes, looking up in the roof before turning my eyes on him again.

"That's all you can think about? Getting someone to spend the night with?" Now I sat down on the floor, feeling how much my strength had been drained during the last hours. Though how many it had been since I fell asleep, I did not know.

"Hmph, you'll find it gets pretty lonely down here. Trust me, in a few months, you'll be asking me." He answered and chuckled. I sighed and tilted my head backwards again.



"Could you maybe tell me what time it is? You see, I don't have a window in my cell." I looked up and saw him watching me. Nodding slightly I arose from the floor and moved the stool to stand beneath the small window. Then I got up on it and looked out.

The sun shone clearly, almost enlightening the trees, and lake Rumare. It was a fine day, and had I been out there, I would probably have taken a swim in the lake. But, as I remembered myself over and over again, I wasn't.

"The sun is high in the sky, so I would say around twelve." When I'd told him I put the chair back and laid down on the bedroll. I was way to pained by the thought of the sun being on the other side of the wall, so I couldn't really stand the sight of it.

"What's your name?" He asked, and it took me by suprise. I hadn't thought he was still looking at me. But I sat up and looked at him across the cell.

"Felisa. Felisa Serhas. That is my name." He nodded and it took a while for me before I continued. "What is yours?"

"My name? It is Valen Dreth."

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A short beginning, I know. But I do not have time to write more today.

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post Jul 2 2011, 07:52 AM
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Chapter three- Because lies are easy

Sa'Quiras' POV

The fire crackled when I put another branch onto it, and I lay down on the soft earth beneath the great pines. Looking up into the sky, I couldn't help but think back to that which had been so long ago, back when I still had a home.

If someone against all odds caught me, I do not think that I'd be welcome back home. I've done to many things that disgrace my family, and besides my parents have another three children. When I look back, I was probably the one they liked the least. They always tried to protect my sister and my brothers. When my two older brothers joined the Manes' army they were very proud, and when word came of the death of my eldest brother my mother cried for days. They were sad when my older sister married and went of to the other provinces.

As children, mother always tried to make sure that they were in what she'd call proper company, but she never had that concern with me. I'm quite certain now that she knew very well of the profession of my friends, but she never opposed it.

“Come on Dar'Quira! Last to get a dagger is a kitten!” M'errunz joyful voice penetrated the girls thoughts, and she bounced of the pavement, her eyes alert. The boy laughed briefly, then set of at a run along the road with the girl at his heels.

They stopped after a while behind a low wall, peering over it to the merchants square where many wagons and stands stood, loaded to the brim with goods. They looked at each other again, and Dar'Quira gave him a dazzling smile, allowing her a head start.

Her silent steps carried her quickly to the edge of the square and the vicinity of a wagon containing weapons and armor. Throwing a last look around her to make sure she wasn't seen, she crouched down by the wagon. It's owner stood many feet away, talking to another merchant about the recent taxes.

Dar'Quira threw a quick glance back at the boy whom were now sneaking towards another merchant. She allowed a smile to escape from her lips as she reached into the wagon, folding her slim hand around a small and thin bundle. Upon uncovering the cloth she was able to confirm that it was a dagger and she spent a moment to marvel over it's beauty. It was made of white or transparent glass, and several sapphires decorated the handle.

Quickly wrapping the dagger into the bundle again, the girl eased her body away from the wagon and walked as casually as possible through the square.

“Thieves! Catch them!” She spun on her heels when someone called out behind her. In the next moment M'errunz had her hand in his and they were running down the street away from the square. Though the merchants were stronger that the children, it did not take long for the young thieves to escape them. Once they had, they sat down by a palm tree to show each other what they'd found, and to laugh about how easy it had been to get away.


Unintentionally my hand reached to my belt and wrapped around the hilt of the dagger sitting there. I smiled slightly of the folly that had occupied me then, and looked at the white and blue blade, casually noting the inscription. “Frostclaw” it said, and I must say the name truly fits it though it's not enchanted.

I put the blade aside, hidden in one of my boots that I've placed by the fire, and close my eyes. Untroubled sleep is all I would ask for if given one wish, but alas it's not possible.

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Dark clouds held the sky in their grasp when I left the site of my camp, pictures from the nights dream were still vivid in my mind. I had the hood up to cover my head, for my senses told me the rain was not far away. My steps continued for no other reason than my own ambitions, and my thoughts flew elsewhere, far away from the ground I threaded for so long.

My face ached from the earlier days, sending me the impulse to pay it back, but I can not fight so many on my own. No, I should have my revenge in another way, I would not give that scum the honour of falling to my bow. Not even to be mutilated by my bow, though that might have been preferable.

I stayed away from the roads as much as I could when the rain began and turned most of them to mud and slippery stones. I knew they'd do nothing but prevent my passing. As such, the day didn't present much trouble, and I passed the road to Cheydinhall when the evening was just falling upon the land. I made my camp beneath some high trees where bushes hid my presence.

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saqin   With Fate Uncertain And Bloodstained Hands   Sep 25 2009, 05:21 PM
Olen   Good opening, we meet the main character and get a...   Sep 25 2009, 08:34 PM
saqin   I'm afraid you're right about me typing di...   Sep 26 2009, 04:43 PM
saqin   Here you've got the next piece of the story. A...   Sep 28 2009, 03:01 PM
Olen   I like your take on Valen Dreth, quite different f...   Sep 28 2009, 03:33 PM
saqin   He, thanks for pointing out that stupid mistake. I...   Sep 28 2009, 05:24 PM
saqin   Soo, here is the next part. ---------------------...   Apr 8 2010, 07:47 AM
mALX   I am so glad you are updating this! You are of...   Apr 8 2010, 05:04 PM
Remko   A fresh look on an old story.. nice! But the l...   Apr 9 2010, 01:24 PM
saqin   Thanks for the comments, it's good to see that...   Apr 12 2010, 03:59 PM
Olen   Good to see you back at this piece. It's a re...   Apr 12 2010, 07:24 PM
mALX   I like the way you are handling this!   Apr 16 2010, 07:01 PM
saqin   Thanks for the great comments. Did I hear someone...   Apr 19 2010, 03:50 PM
Remko   I was afraid that would happen... I liked it! ...   Apr 19 2010, 04:07 PM
mALX   Oh, I didn't see that coming - HUGE! Grea...   Apr 19 2010, 08:23 PM
saqin   One month was the time he gave me. One month to pr...   Aug 8 2010, 01:45 PM
mALX   ARGH! A cliffhanger!   Aug 20 2010, 05:40 PM
Rachel the Breton   Hmmm, this is turning into quite the interesting s...   Aug 25 2010, 01:15 AM
saqin   Well, here there is more! I didn't have ac...   Sep 11 2010, 09:55 AM
mALX   Really Great Chapter! You use a lot of intere...   Sep 12 2010, 05:39 AM
treydog   That is a wonderfully evocative moment. Really...   Sep 12 2010, 12:55 PM
saqin   Thanks ^^ And well, I kind of already had the end ...   Sep 14 2010, 03:05 PM
treydog   Very powerful, especially at the end. You have th...   Sep 14 2010, 09:33 PM
mALX   ARGH! A black widow spider...a praying mantis...   Sep 15 2010, 05:31 PM
saqin   And so the story continues... [b]Chapter two: Why...   Nov 15 2010, 07:38 PM
Remko   Yay, it's continued :) Loved the parallel line...   Nov 16 2010, 11:53 AM
mALX   The interplay between Felisa and Gasheera was AWES...   Nov 17 2010, 01:01 AM
saqin   Should have another piece coming soon, but in the ...   Dec 26 2010, 01:20 PM
mALX   Should have another piece coming soon, but in the...   Dec 26 2010, 02:18 PM
Acadian   What a pleasure to catch up with you on this! ...   Jan 26 2011, 03:41 AM
TheOtherRick   I just read the whole story to date. What a great ...   Jan 26 2011, 08:48 PM
saqin   mALX: It makes sense that you'd want Janus Has...   Jan 27 2011, 08:44 PM
TheOtherRick   I spoke until he closed his eyes, and then I felle...   Jan 27 2011, 09:54 PM
Acadian   Don't underestimate Gahsheera. After all, he ...   Jan 28 2011, 01:27 AM
saqin   TheOtherRick: :D :P I'm not saying anything......   Jan 28 2011, 09:28 PM
Acadian   Despite the entrails spilled, this was actually a ...   Jan 29 2011, 01:14 AM
mALX   GAAAAAH !!!! I thought the ...   Jan 29 2011, 04:42 AM
TheOtherRick   B-B-Q kitty entrails...naaaaas-teeee! :P Th...   Feb 2 2011, 10:03 PM
saqin   It was midday when Shadowmere brought us to Cheydi...   Feb 13 2011, 09:24 AM
Acadian   Some more depth on Felisa's history with the D...   Feb 14 2011, 01:33 AM
TheOtherRick   Definitely an interesting encounter between Felisa...   Feb 14 2011, 04:35 AM
mALX   Great paragraph! The intricate balance of t...   Feb 18 2011, 06:48 AM
saqin   Thanks for the good comments, I had quite a lot of...   Feb 23 2011, 06:38 PM
TheOtherRick   [i]Me? I decided to travel a bit. This caught me b...   Feb 23 2011, 07:20 PM
mALX   Powerful ending to this chapter !!...   Feb 24 2011, 06:11 AM
Zalphon   "Because Sithis told me to", you're ...   Feb 25 2011, 02:42 AM
saqin   TheOtherRick & mALX: Thanks :D Zalphon: A b...   Mar 29 2011, 02:09 PM
Acadian   Quite a scheme Sa'Quira has dreamed up and pit...   Apr 1 2011, 12:27 AM
mALX   Love how you added the links at the bottom to help...   Apr 2 2011, 11:26 AM
saqin   Acadian: :D Sa'Quira is actually, if I get to...   Apr 7 2011, 02:48 PM
mALX   Oooh, what an interesting incident !! An...   Apr 11 2011, 03:03 PM
saqin   Emerging from the forest, our eyes came upon a sma...   May 5 2011, 02:32 PM
saqin   http://archive.pixbox.se/arkivet/synligt_3...20/32...   May 9 2011, 02:40 PM
mALX   Poor Jeelius getting the brunt end of a woman...   May 29 2011, 07:18 AM
mALX   Whew! Really Great Write here! My favori...   Jul 2 2011, 04:06 PM
saqin   Felisas' POV We camped by the road the night...   Jul 25 2011, 09:11 PM
mALX   Great inner dialogue here !!! I lo...   Jul 29 2011, 08:07 PM
Grits   “He'd obviously want to see it. What I was tal...   Aug 1 2011, 03:53 PM
Saquira   Sorry about being so far in between posts. I'v...   Nov 4 2011, 08:05 PM
Acadian   I’m so glad to see you continuing this wonderful s...   Nov 5 2011, 01:19 AM
Grits   It was good of Gasheera to admit how Felisa has be...   Nov 5 2011, 02:01 PM
mALX   I'm getting to this A.S.A.P. - had a week of ...   Nov 6 2011, 12:00 AM
Saquira   Sa'Quiras' POV Approaching Bruma beneath ...   Nov 7 2011, 06:48 PM
Acadian   Another enjoyable update! ’The flames surrou...   Nov 8 2011, 01:48 AM
Saquira   Felisas' POV I made my way through the shadow...   Nov 26 2011, 10:40 AM
McBadgere   Excellent story!!...And I don't like t...   Nov 26 2011, 08:01 PM
Acadian   A nice suspenseful buildup, full of description as...   Nov 27 2011, 01:55 AM
mALX   From Sa'Quiras' foretelling visions to the...   Nov 27 2011, 02:20 AM
Saquira   And there be another part (finally)! I'm h...   Feb 7 2012, 03:46 PM
Saquira   Sa'Quira's POV When the bright light subs...   Feb 8 2012, 03:45 PM
mALX   This last chapter is tremendous from beginning to ...   Feb 8 2012, 05:47 PM
Saquira   Thank you :D ----------------------------------...   Feb 9 2012, 06:45 PM
Saquira   I've finally finished the third chapter! ...   May 3 2012, 02:27 PM
Grits   It’s great to see an update for this story! :...   May 6 2012, 10:22 AM
Saquira   Chapter four- I will do whatever I can to keep you...   Jul 16 2012, 09:22 AM
Acadian   Felisa completes her contract inside Bruma, while ...   Jul 30 2012, 12:57 AM
mALX   GAAAAH! Your chapters are too short, they onl...   Aug 28 2012, 05:46 AM
Saquira   Gosh, it's been so long since I made any kind ...   Jan 15 2013, 08:18 PM
mALX   I'm glad you wrapped the story back around to ...   Jan 16 2013, 01:19 AM


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