Yay, congratulations!!
Oh, I love his happy mouse noise! Why does Wasabi think Maxical is a cruel master? At the end it looks like Alix the Mouse has his own smaller pet mouse. Maxical’s house looks so peaceful and friendly with Vilja asleep, the crackling fire, and the mice making their soft little squeaks. I imagine it gets quite lively when they’re all walking around. If Maxical whips out a sweetroll and tosses it between Vilja and Alix, there could be a fight!!

Maxical’s voice suits her so well, and now Alix is following her. I love seeing your story come to life!