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Riften
post Nov 2 2011, 11:30 PM
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Joined: 15-October 11
From: Tamriel



I have completely revamped my character Riften.

I'd like to think of Riften as a Tamrielic version of Jack Sparrow, at least in personality.
He is a very charming Altmeri who is obsessed with the bow but he also is amazingly skilled in the arcane arts but doesn't tend to reveal his powers to people, he would only show his powers to his dearest of friends.

He is in love with lush forests, flowing waterfalls and deep lakes. He is a great Alchemist who collects a variety of ingredients from wherever he can find them. He can also make the deadliest of poisons for his arrows and the healthiest of potions for when he is in need.

Back in his younger days in Summerset Isles, he was fascinated by anything to do with Daedra, whether it be magic, Princes, Oblivion. Just before he left to start a new life in Cyrodill, he was studying the gates of Oblivion and how to open and shut them.

He is never racist in anyway he generally is easy to befriend but if you do anything to his friends, he would probably pierce an arrow through your heart, literally.

He has also studied a lot about Cyrodill and the people there, He has heard about an Archery Tournament where Cyrodills best archers gather all round. He has heard a lot about the winners of the tourney, some of which live in the town of Bravil which he is eager to visit and meet the winners.

I'll be posting Chapter 1 tomorrow then I will stick to my old timetable and update the Journal on Mon | Wed | Thu

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post Nov 3 2011, 03:03 AM
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Chapter 1 - Aboard The Dominion


In this chapter the witty Riften is dragged aboard the Thalmors pride and joy "The Dominion"
And make a deal with the good Captain.


The shadowy clothed men hustled me ahead to the boat, long flowing sails thrashed in the wind, the bustling crewmen preparing to set sail. The men shuffled me across a sturdy wooding bridge leading to the luxurious ship which was layered with solid shining gold handles and the primary was a deep sea blue. You could tell that these guys meant business.

The crew stared at me from a distance as the men dragged me into what seemed like the Captains quarters.
A double bed with the most beautiful silk material and rich furniture with a gigantic round table fulled to the brim with Tamika, Mutton, Vension.... you name it.

They sat me down at the same table the Captain was sitting.

"You two! leave! me and our little friend here is going to have a talk"

The two men departed the room and the captain gazed at me with his pure green eyes.

"We know who you are...but you don't know who I am do you?"

Before I could even start to talk he interrupted me.

"Let me introduce myself...The name is General Fainde"

"I am the General of the Aldmeri Dominion or in other words, Thalmor. I am also Captain of this ship which I'm sure you already know."

"Well....Mr.Fainder...was it? Is there any particular reason your crew bust my front door open and dragged all the way to this bloody ship?!"

He chuckled at me and his face led a faint smile then that smile slowly faded into a frown and sneered at me.

"My king has taken notice of your talents and told me to take you here so It wasn't my fault, I had nothing to do with it so hold your tongue boy or I'll have it taken out!"

"Look, your going to become one of our agents whether you like it or not. You can go about it the simple way and we will give you a bed to sleep on or you can go about it the complicated way to which we will torture you until you have nothing left but to join us"

"If you still refuse to join us.....well, we will behead you and launch your body overboard!"

"Fine, I'll join under two conditions. One, you drop me off at Cyrodill. Two, You must give me complimentary equipment If I'm going to be one of your so called "Agents"

Please, as much feedback as you guys can. Tell me how it compares to my old thread.

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