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Eastern light brought the city of the Man-God Vivec to life.
I liked this line, it's evocative and gave emotion to th description.
A good opening too, a reminder of the previous episode which really drew me in, and enough explaination for new readers. And some of the rich description I so like about this saga. So Seth has run and intends to hide, an interesting start. I suspect he will be rather adept at it.
As ever I look forward to the next part.
Look behind you and see an ever decreasing number of ghosts. Currently about 15.