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Ryden294
post May 16 2005, 03:06 AM
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I have been thinking of a way to add a nice twist to the story, something to catch the readers by surprise and make them want to read more. I may have it here. Read part one of chapter two and tell me what you think. Enjoy biggrin.gif


CHAPTER 2



"Stop bleeding on my floor!"

Odyssius was screaming at the man he had just hit in the face with a bottle of flin. They were in his shack just outside ebonheart and had been discussing the price on an adamantium helm when the seller went too high and angered Odyssius.

"Get up you old fool, out of my house!"

"You will buy the helm!" screamed the old man, holding up a fancy silver plated dagger.

"Put that silver plated sissy scraper away before you hurt yourself. I will not have you spilling more blood on my floor waving a butter knife around."

"Buy the helm or i'll kill you!"

"Ignorant old man, do you wish to die?"

"Do you arrogant child?"

Odyssius sighed and picked up an iron broadsword which was laying on the table to his right.

The man lunged for Odyssius, who dodged to the left and countered with a swing of the iron sword. The blow hit the old man in the back with almost enough force to cut him in half. He fell to the floor, dead before he hit it.

Odyssius turned and grabbed the adamantium helm off the table. He then walked over to his dresser which had the rest of his adamantium armour in it. He took it all out and strapped it on. He then turned to a small chest, opened it, and pulled out a belt with a pouch on it, a restore and health restore fatigue potion, a bottle of flin, a divine intervention scroll, a messenger scroll, his lucky iron dagger, and some crab meat. He then reached under his bed and pulled out his pride and joy. A sword he had gotten off the dead body of a crazy orc outside suran. Umbra Sword.

He then turned and pulled a note off the table. It read:

Odyssius

I have a favour to ask of you. One of my dear friends, Seth, has gone missing. He went into the sewers to seek protection for me and hasn't returned after two weeks. I fear the worst. I have done for you what no one else could do, please return the favour. I ask you to go into the sewers and into the old manor distict to search for Seth. Come to me first.

King Hlaalu Helseth


Odyssius folded the note and put it into his pouch. He then sheathed umbra on his side and opened the door to the outside world. He turned back around and picked up the old man, flung him over his shoulder, and walked out, on his way to the coast to dispose of the body.

Odyssius arrived at the beach and threw the body of the old man into the water. He watched for a moment as it drifted deeper into the sea before turning and walking the short distance to ebonheart.

When he arrived at ebonheart, odyssius went up into the battlements and into the grand council chambers where he spoke with asciene rane and asked for transport to mournhold.

When Odyssius came to his senses he went up the stairs of the reception area of the royal palace and into the throne room where Helseth was talking with delitian, captain of his royal guard.

"We cannot send a drunk into the sewers in search of your friend." said delitian

"Why not?" asked Helseth

"Because he will get himself killed and we will accomplish nothing."

"What do you care if he dies or not? It is worth a try and Odyssius is more than a drunk."

"Yes, he is a smart a**."

"Do not insult me with profanity. He is going to search for Seth and you are not going to stop him. He is a great warrior and a great man. Even if he does enjoy a few bottles of flin here and there."

Delitian didn't say anything more. He just backed away and stood stiffly.

"Odyssius, I didn't see you. Welcome."

"Hello, Helseth."

Odyssius heard delitian mutter something about addressing the king more formally but he didn't pay attention.

"I suppose you recieved my letter?"

"Yes. I will search for this man, only because I owe you."

"Alright. As I said in the note, he should be in the manor discrict of the sewers as he was meeting the night mother of the Dark Brotherhood to ask for some men to guard me."

"Spare me the details. I just want to get this over with. I will return soon."

With that, Odyssius turned and exited the throne room.


It was rather short. My posts seem to be getting shorter and shorter. Expect the next part to be very long, another sewer adventure. I am aware that I spelled Odyssius wrong, but I did it to make the name different. I hope you enjoyed part one of chapter two.


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"I may not agree with what you say, but to the death i will defend your right to say it"

"Man is free at the moment he wishes to be"

"Anything that is too stupid to be spoken is sung"

"What most persons consider as virtue, after the age of 40 is simply a loss of energy."

-Voltaire
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Ryden294
post May 21 2005, 08:08 PM
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When Odyssius came to his senses he was strapped to a bed and a dunmer woman dressed in exquisite clothing was looking at him in a rather curious way. Odyssius didn't think much, he just thought he had drank too much.

"How much flin did I drink? No need to go further, woman, i'm sober now. Undo these chains." he said

"This is not what you think it is, imperial. You are my captive"

"Stupid woman, I said i'm no longer drunk, now take off these chains before I rip them off as well as your limbs!"

"Hold your tongue you ignorant fool. I am the night mother of the dark brotherhood. You are trespassing in my manor. The only reason you still breath is because I am curious as to why you are here and how you got past my guards."

"Take off these chains and I shall tell you."

"Tell me and I shall remove the chains."

"Fine."

"Well?"

"Ok, I was told that you have a friend of king Helseth captive in here and was asked to investigate. I came and killed your guards, which by the way was very easy since they were extremely stupid. Anyway I killed them and followed a moan to the double doors. That is all I remember. Now remove these damn chains."

"In a moment. I have another question for you. Helseth...what did he pay you for this mission?"

"Nothing...I owe him a favour."

The night mother muttered something and everything went black.


When Odyssius woke he was chained to a wall beside a dark elf. He instantly began cursing.

"Shut up! Apparently you do not have a very large vocabulary or you could think of something else to say!" screamed the dunmer.

At this point Odyssius noticed him.

"Who are you?"

"I am Seth. Who are you?"

"Odyssius. I was sent to rescue you."

"You did a fine job."

"Do not mock me."

"Lets stop bickering before you end up dead. We must get out of here."

"How?"

"Hold on a moment."

Seth looked around. They were in a small dark room. The wall they were on was barely large enough to hold the 2 of them. There was a small table near the door and on it was a note. Seth tried to see what was written from where he was but he couldn't. It was too dark and he wasn't wearing his ring(the ring of azura).

He then looked at the locks on the shackles that held him. A simple level 40 lock, but his things were over in the corner by the table.

"Odyssius." he said

"What?"

"Do you see our things by that table near your feet?"

"Yes."

"If I used a spell to unlock the shackles on your feet do you think you could get my pouch?"

"Yes."

"Ok, hold on."

Seth had enough reserves to cast 2 of his unlock spells. He had regenerated his magicka since he was put in here and was ready to cast. He did so.

In a flash of purple light the shackles at Odyssius' feet were unlocked. Seth cast the spell again, this time targeting the shackle on his left arm.

Odyssius reached out with his foot and managed to grab hold of Seth's pouch. He raised his foot and flung the pouch at Seth, who caught it with his left hand.

Seth struggled to keep hold of the sack and reach into it at the same time but managed to withdraw a lockpick before dropping it. First he unlocked his right shackle and then his feet. He then went to Odyssius and freed him. They quickly put on thier things and walked to the door. Seth extended a hand and turned the knob. As he opened the door he saw a sleeping guard in a chair next to it. He drew Keening and slit the guard's throat.

"These Dark Brotherhood assassins are clumsier than I thought."

"Yes...there on your armour."

Odyssius pointed at a hole.

"What happened?"

"The night mother beat me in a fight. She made sure I was unconsious before she healed me and threw me into that room."

"I don't like women period but she has some problems that need to be dealt with."

"Lets go."

They began to walk down the hall and shortly came to the double doors that led to the night mother's quarters.

"I am going to eat her heart for dinner tonight. You with me?"

"I'd rather just kill her."

"Fine. You help kill her and I'LL eat her."

"Ok..."

They both pushed hard on the door but it wouldn't budge. After a few moments they quit trying.

"You have done good so far but your journey ends here."

Came a voice from behind them. They turned to see the night mother. She was dressed in a full set of glass armour and was wielding an adamantium shortsword. She was ready for action.


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"I may not agree with what you say, but to the death i will defend your right to say it"

"Man is free at the moment he wishes to be"

"Anything that is too stupid to be spoken is sung"

"What most persons consider as virtue, after the age of 40 is simply a loss of energy."

-Voltaire
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Ryden294   The Shadow of Nerevar-Chapter 2   May 16 2005, 03:06 AM
MerGirl   Ooh, can't wait! :) Ah, the sewers. I remember t...   May 16 2005, 08:50 PM
minque   yes....a very nice twist it was...really good. So ...   May 16 2005, 08:54 PM
jonajosa   What she said. :goodjob:   May 16 2005, 10:14 PM
Ryden294   Thank you all and yes, expect another part sometim...   May 17 2005, 08:18 PM
jonajosa   Good i await impatiently... Hurry!   May 18 2005, 02:55 AM
Ryden294   Sorry I didn't post last night. I broke my ankle :...   May 18 2005, 09:08 PM
Ryden294   Sorry for the delay, too many things to do and not...   May 20 2005, 08:47 PM
MerGirl   *claps* Yay! :) Please continue soon, 'kay? :D   May 20 2005, 09:05 PM
jonajosa   Yes please keep it coming. :goodjob:   May 20 2005, 09:41 PM
Ryden294   Odyssius slowly walked forward. There was silence ...   May 21 2005, 07:17 PM
jonajosa   Im glad the next part came. I was waiting for it t...   May 21 2005, 07:20 PM
Ryden294   Im glad the next part came. I was waiting for it t...   May 21 2005, 07:27 PM
jonajosa   Ready....   May 21 2005, 07:39 PM
minque   seconded i´m ready as well, good writing here........   May 21 2005, 07:42 PM
MerGirl   Yay! :D Keep up the good work! :goodjob: The...   May 21 2005, 08:29 PM
jonajosa   Yay! :D Keep up the good work! :goodjob: The...   May 21 2005, 10:34 PM
Ryden294   Thank you for the complements and yes, I will star...   May 21 2005, 11:55 PM
minque   you´re brave, not everyone can take criticism you ...   May 21 2005, 11:57 PM
Ryden294   you´re brave, not everyone can take criticism you ...   May 22 2005, 02:56 AM
jonajosa   Make sure this new thread will be nothing but your...   May 22 2005, 03:01 AM
Ryden294   Seth drew Keening from his right thigh and crouche...   Aug 5 2005, 12:37 AM
minque   Ahh! Nice to see this one updated.....good wor...   Aug 7 2005, 08:37 AM
Ryden294   Seth had met a few more assassins on his way out o...   Oct 2 2005, 11:06 PM
Ryden294   Seth waited in the courtyard for Helseth who arriv...   Oct 4 2005, 01:33 AM
Ryden294   Seth left the dead assassin lying in the dirt as h...   Oct 5 2005, 04:43 AM
minque   I can´t believe I haven´t posted here for so long...   Oct 5 2005, 07:01 PM
Ryden294   Thank you, minque. I'm sorry I haven't bee...   Oct 5 2005, 10:27 PM
Ryden294   “Wake up…wake up!” Seth yelled at Helseth “Wh...   Oct 6 2005, 12:05 AM
mplantinga   Just found this story, and already you've suck...   Oct 6 2005, 07:20 PM
Ryden294   Thank you. I don't think i'm near as good ...   Oct 6 2005, 11:32 PM
Ryden294   “Before we go anywhere,” Seth said, “You need to g...   Oct 6 2005, 11:42 PM
mplantinga   An interesting update. Thadeus certainly is packin...   Oct 7 2005, 07:41 PM
D7Unknown   Just finished reading the story from the beginning...   Oct 9 2005, 05:30 PM


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