The journal of a simple scholar., First attempt at a "fic", be gentle! Options

[Fawkes]

Hello, I have been writing for a little while now, and have been enjoying it immensely, this journal is located in livejournal, due to the format of that website being well more "journal" friendly. This journal will have interviews, IC postings, as well as journals from ages past, among many things..
There are various characters, some of which I still do not write about.
I'm not a writer, and I'm not very good at it, but I am learning bit by bit and trying my best! so be gentle!

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[Fawkes]

King Coin Awww! Thank you!! I'm really glad people enjoy my writings ^^, also that Pus monster thingi was real, it's a Sload, so it does have teleportation abilities
My writing skills are still sort of low, so I might skip till the last part of the battle, or I might just skip it entirely

Grits Friendly? After a 1000+ years of being a mage's toy I don't think it can even rationalize! Haha!

Anyway, I'm posting because I want to ask if you guys are alright if I change the writing style, what I mean it's to be more of a First Person narrative like seen in most of the fics here, the reason why I kinda want this change is because when I'm writing its rather hard to explain some things or even write about other things because "Wait why would someone write that in their journal!" among other smaller things.
Of course I'm still slowly improving my writing so don't expect a master piece!

[mALX]

Anyway, I'm posting because I want to ask if you guys are alright if I change the writing style, what I mean it's to be more of a First Person narrative like seen in most of the fics here, the reason why I kinda want this change is because when I'm writing its rather hard to explain some things or even write about other things because "Wait why would someone write that in their journal!" among other smaller things.
Of course I'm still slowly improving my writing so don't expect a master piece!

Write in whatever style is most comfortable for you. As far as not writing well, I am still bowled over by your first chapter! That first chapter clearly shows you are a gifted writer !!