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post Nov 12 2011, 12:15 AM
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post Jan 14 2012, 03:09 PM
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What a lovely situation to find- I "go away" for a week and return to all these posts! Woo Hoo!

As ever, a true rendering of the "good parts" would simply mean reposting the whole thing, so let me see if I can be a BIT more subtle than that...

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It was my nature to uproot, and leave behind. I stalked and kept hidden to the shadows. I threatened lives with my very nature.


The entire extended metaphor of Seth with his Birthsign is brilliantly handled. And, as many have done before him, he perhaps takes circumstance for prophecy.

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It didn't mean she wasn't waiting for me in some shadow though. Former lovers could put such a spring in the step. In the sense that you were more paranoid than you were to begin with.


Noted without comment- but with a certain rueful laughter.

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Those that waive the option to allow me to retire will face the full scope of my skill.


Translation- you do not get to be Grandmaster by being shy or backward. And you especially do not get to retire by begging.

The quick way he dealt with Sabine- and yet also seeks to teach her… yes, that is pure Sethyas.

Even more so was his knowledge of Ashlander ways, which allowed him to fill the power vacuum without tearing the Tong apart.

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"With this you take the mantle. Lead well, and do not try to find me." I said as I left the Morag Tong behind for the last time.


Wow.

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After all, the survivors pass down the best techniques.


Still love that quote.

Simply wonderful throughout. I feel my own scalp beginning to tingle- perhaps I should dash off 1000 words or so and get Athlain up that dratted mountain.


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Black Hand   Memoirs of a Morag Tong Assassin - Solstheim   Nov 12 2011, 12:15 AM
treydog   And as I was last on the prior thread (for now)- I...   Nov 12 2011, 12:41 AM
Grits   I am so incredibly happy to see this story, Black ...   Nov 12 2011, 12:57 AM
Acadian   Welcome back! Wonderful blending of dream, ...   Nov 12 2011, 01:36 AM
Athynae   First and foremost THANK YOU!!!! I...   Nov 12 2011, 01:37 AM
McBadgere   I know exactly what you mean... I won't pre...   Nov 12 2011, 07:24 AM
Olen   I liked this line, it's evocative and gave em...   Nov 13 2011, 01:13 AM
Zalphon   Yet the rocking motion of the Silt Strider throug...   Nov 13 2011, 04:36 PM
minque   Blackie! I'm speechless! uh...actually...   Nov 13 2011, 10:26 PM
Black Hand   Deleted.   Nov 15 2011, 04:53 PM
Athynae   What a lovely way to start the day!!!...   Nov 15 2011, 05:09 PM
McBadgere   Excellent!!... :D ...Oooh, maybe I should ...   Nov 15 2011, 08:26 PM
Black Hand   Deleted.   Nov 15 2011, 09:25 PM
Acadian   I smiled all the way through this. I love episode...   Nov 16 2011, 01:34 AM
McBadgere   Fair dues... :D ...I do like a good seducer... :P ...   Nov 16 2011, 05:17 AM
Olen   I was hungry before I started reading... That sou...   Nov 16 2011, 07:04 PM
minque   Sweet! Yeah I must admit I have wondered about...   Nov 17 2011, 01:17 AM
Grits   Pene got Seth’s breakfast away from him easily eno...   Nov 17 2011, 02:30 AM
treydog   The description of the morning in Vivec was simply...   Nov 19 2011, 02:10 PM
Black Hand   Deleted.   Nov 25 2011, 09:05 PM
Athynae   "Some is good but more is better." Yes, ...   Nov 25 2011, 10:36 PM
Olen   I liked that part, it fitted in nicely and you dev...   Nov 26 2011, 12:19 AM
Black Hand   Deleted.   Nov 26 2011, 06:04 AM
McBadgere   *Applauds Ambulance men everywhere*...Top man... ...   Nov 26 2011, 08:08 PM
Athynae   And we come to it, the reason Seth is looking for ...   Nov 26 2011, 08:55 PM
treydog   Must go on a quote-fest first- and these are only ...   Nov 26 2011, 09:31 PM
Black Hand   Deleted.   Nov 27 2011, 08:23 PM
Athynae   Ok now I am just holding my breath..... ...   Nov 27 2011, 09:36 PM
Olen   Some heavy stuff there. So Sethyas plans to truly...   Nov 27 2011, 10:11 PM
minque   Ok....so that's what Seth needs the Duke for? ...   Nov 28 2011, 11:36 PM
Grits   Statue of Peyrite, that made me smile. I’m glad t...   Nov 30 2011, 01:45 AM
Black Hand   Deleted.   Dec 4 2011, 07:25 AM
Olen   Some good musing on immortality, and on Seth. Tha...   Dec 4 2011, 06:19 PM
Athynae   Mental musings that bring much to the forefront of...   Dec 4 2011, 09:18 PM
Colonel Mustard   Ah, Sethyas, I remember you, you old rascal. Hav...   Dec 4 2011, 11:27 PM
minque   No longer Lord of Bal Isra huh! Ok Sethyas, I ...   Dec 6 2011, 12:20 AM
Grits   Sounds like retiring from the guild could be more ...   Dec 6 2011, 03:44 AM
McBadgere   I am in a slight rush here but had to finish the s...   Dec 6 2011, 02:23 PM
mALX   Looking at the date this thread was started tells ...   Dec 7 2011, 07:27 PM
treydog   As has been true throughout- the heart in this new...   Dec 18 2011, 03:30 PM
Black Hand   Deleted.   Jan 9 2012, 02:15 AM
Athynae   So sad, I really wish he didn't feel he had to...   Jan 9 2012, 02:28 AM
McBadgere   There was ever a doubt? :huh: ...Manly hugs red...   Jan 9 2012, 07:06 AM
treydog   As if there is ever any question that a new post f...   Jan 9 2012, 01:09 PM
Olen   Short but heavy (in a good way). There's a lo...   Jan 9 2012, 05:45 PM
mALX   I had to quote this section for your stunning ab...   Jan 10 2012, 01:08 AM
Black Hand   Deleted.   Jan 10 2012, 09:15 AM
mALX   This line has to be quoted for its sheer brillia...   Jan 10 2012, 10:20 AM
treydog   Oh my. Perhaps, one day, if I practice diligently...   Jan 10 2012, 01:10 PM
Athynae   Just wrap quotes around all of it..... Amazing.   Jan 10 2012, 02:08 PM
minque   What Athynae just said! This Seth makes me s...   Jan 10 2012, 11:44 PM
Grits   Wow, achingly beautiful. Pene’s mannerisms make a ...   Jan 11 2012, 03:05 AM
McBadgere   *Applauds*... If we all keep telling you how bril...   Jan 11 2012, 04:42 AM
Black Hand   Deleted.   Jan 11 2012, 06:44 AM
Athynae   Your little comment at the beginning doesn't r...   Jan 11 2012, 11:19 AM
mALX   * Whew! Somehow it doesn't feel over, no...   Jan 11 2012, 05:05 PM
Olen   Two updates! Lucky me. Good ones too, his mu...   Jan 11 2012, 05:42 PM
McBadgere   Late...Eyes...Burning...Urgh... :wacko: ... Slow ...   Jan 11 2012, 10:25 PM
Black Hand   Delete.   Jan 12 2012, 04:36 AM
Athynae   We'll take 'em however we can get 'em,...   Jan 12 2012, 04:50 AM
Black Hand   Deleted.   Jan 12 2012, 04:59 AM
mALX   We'll take 'em however we can get 'e...   Jan 12 2012, 05:02 AM
McBadgere   If certain individuals don't keep up with the...   Jan 13 2012, 02:37 PM
Colonel Mustard   A couple of nicely reflective chapters here, Black...   Jan 12 2012, 10:36 AM
Black Hand   Deleted.   Jan 12 2012, 11:35 AM
Colonel Mustard   Ah, okay. Probably better than my own idea of ...   Jan 12 2012, 11:42 AM
Athynae   I am going to, for lack of a better defense, blame...   Jan 12 2012, 02:02 PM
Black Hand   Deleted.   Jan 13 2012, 01:33 AM
Athynae   No McB he's referring to Minque, the writer fo...   Jan 13 2012, 06:02 PM
Black Hand   Deleted.   Jan 13 2012, 09:42 PM
Athynae   The letter of resignation was very professional an...   Jan 13 2012, 10:07 PM
Black Hand   Deleted.   Jan 14 2012, 12:20 AM
Black Hand   Deleted.   Jan 14 2012, 02:35 AM
Athynae   THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU!!!!...   Jan 14 2012, 03:41 AM
Black Hand   Deleted.   Jan 14 2012, 04:08 AM
McBadgere   With words that will mock everything I said about ...   Jan 14 2012, 04:37 AM
Black Hand   Deleted.   Jan 14 2012, 05:29 AM
mALX   With words that will mock everything I said about...   Jan 14 2012, 05:38 AM
Black Hand   Deleted.   Jan 14 2012, 06:22 AM
mALX   Heh. I stand corrected. It would appear my subc...   Jan 14 2012, 07:51 AM
McBadgere   Muahahaaa!!... :D ... Cheers mALX...Thoug...   Jan 14 2012, 07:14 AM
Athynae   I read the last one last night but wanted to read ...   Jan 14 2012, 01:14 PM
mALX   * I apologize, this weekend was too hectic to get...   Jan 19 2012, 10:45 PM
minque   Holy CRAP! HOW could this be? I missed several...   Jan 20 2012, 12:42 AM


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