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The Gweden report, A story of the story of the stories. |
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ghastley |
Sep 2 2011, 01:28 AM
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Until I complete the other mods, there's not a lot to add to their stories, so I thought I'd tell the tales associated with Gweden while I work on them. That mod's anything but linear, as you can do the individual quests for most of the girls in any order. That meant I'd have to come up with a narrative that links them all together and creates a sequence. Rather than take the easy way out and describe it all from the Player-character's viewpoint, I thought I'd try a different approach entirely. So I'm going to write a story, about a reporter writing a story, about the stories of the girls who work at Gweden. They'll tell them to him one at a time, and there will be a bit of extra narrative added beyond what actually happens when you play through each of the quests they're describing. The Champion is arbitrarily male as before, and of no specific race. Because of the requirements of the mod for some of the quests, he's also the Madgod, Master of the Fighter's Guild, Listener of the Dark Brotherhood, Arena Champion, and Archmage, although I'll try to play those down as much as possible. All of those things are less important to his employees anyway. He's the boss, and he did something special for each of them, or they wouldn't be there. ---- Prologue "Listen up girls," Tsarrina began. "This one expects you've all heard the news by now. The Oblivion Crisis is over, and the Gates are all closed. Martin Septim is no more, and the Elder Council is running things ." "Our boss is now the Champion of Cyrodill, and so everything he does is front-page news in the Black Horse Courier. They're sending a reporter down here to do a story about this establishment of his, in the next few days." "This one doesn't want it to be just another story about the boss. He's getting a bit tired of that himself. This one wants it to be our story. Your story." "We probably won't make the front page, as it appears they're sending a junior down to do the interviews. But that should work in our favor. He'll be young, and you'll all appreciate that. Especially Juliana. This one wants you to be ready if he's really inexperienced. The rest of you are to make the best impression you can. We can get some really good publicity from this." "Should we start shopping for new clothes?" asked one of them, hopefully. "No, you won't be needing those much," Tsarrina chuckled, "but make sure anything you do wear is is the best you have. And by that, this one means the most effective, not the most expensive. Unless it's both. Dark-eyes, get your uniform starched up and crisp. Cybeline, that red velvet number with the plunging neckline that you keep for special occasions. This is a special occasion." Everyone looked at Prizna. She just laughed, and Tsarrina had to grin, too. "This one does not expect you to start wearing clothes now." "This one wants you all to be ready to tell him how you came to be here, and what part the boss played in that. It will keep the stories relevant to his assignment, but they'll be about you as much as they are about the Champion." "We'll make use of the old farmhouse as the interview room. It's nice and cozy in front of the fire there, and we'll put some comfortable chairs either side. We should keep the main rooms in the Lodge open for business. There's no point losing any trade while he's here, after all." "Will he be staying at the Count's Arms while he's here?", asked Maeva. "I can walk up with him in the mornings if he does." "No, we'll keep him here at the farm," Tsarrina decided. "He'll use the main bed in the farmhouse, and this one doesn't want him sleeping in it alone! You'll each get a turn to tell him your story. Make sure you also get a turn to show him what you can do." ---- Future pieces will have each of the women telling her story of how she came to be at the Gweden Brothel, or the reporter putting the report together. I'll add a postscript article from the Black Horse Courier about Cousin Miranu's miraculous potion at the end, which should take a post or two to cover it. I have most of the stories drafted, as they come straight from the mod itself, but I'm still working on the wrapper narrative, and haven't finalized the sequence of the individual tales yet. This post has been edited by ghastley: Oct 7 2016, 04:47 PM
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Mods for The Elder Scrolls single-player games, and I play ESO.
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ghastley |
Jan 18 2012, 02:50 AM
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Our reporter needs a rest. However, he may not get much. --- Juliana GalenaTsarrina decided that it was getting a bit late for more interviews, and the reporter should have a quick tour of the place before he turned in for the night. First, she took him across the yard to the main Lodge, so he could pick up a snack in the dining room and meet some of the customers. They were all busily engaged chatting with the women, so he just took an apple from the table, and followed Tsarrina into the next room and up the stairs. The upper floor was one big dormitory, where the women could sleep, eat a quiet meal and generally relax between clients. Each of them had a well-appointed bed, and a chest for her personal possessions. Few of them were locked, and Tsariina showed him a few of the momentos they kept. Prizna's held a solitary Daedra Heart. Was it Kothet's? Virgilia's held that skimpy armor she'd told hiim about. Tsarrina's own room was on the same floor, with a double bed in it. But they were just looking right now, and she quickly closed the door, and took him back downstairs. Nobody was using the bed in the main room, but a lot of negotiating was in progress. A Bosmer girl was dancing in one corner, and attracting quite a lot of attention. She might have just taken something off, as there were approving sounds coming from the crowd. He wished he could see better. They left the women to their haggling and went back over to the farmhouse. "This is the original building this one bought when she came to Anvil," Tsarrina told him. "At first there was just one level of basement, with three beds. That was quickly filled, even with Maeva sleeping at her own farm, and the boss had a second level dug out beneath it." They'd gone down to the first level while she was telling him that. It was just a single room with the beds around the walls, and a few tables and chairs around. The beds weren't as plush as the ones in the newer building, but they looked comfortable enough. Each had its private chest, and there was maybe a little more space for each of them over here. Tsarrina told him that many of the women preferred the coziness of the old place, even if the new one was a bit better furnished. The lower level was just a little larger, with four beds in one room and a big stone bathtub in another. The tub looked large enough for two. There was a chest against the opposite wall to keep clothes dry in case there was any water splashed around. The damp floor suggested that happened a lot. There was a drain in the corner, and several buckets of water, some with steam rising from them. A table with some candles, and some bars of soap, one of which had a rather suggestive shape. Tsarrina led him back upstairs, where he found a very pretty Breton woman sitting on his bed waiting for him. Tsarrina introduced her as Juliana Galena, and then left them alone together. Juliana wasn't wearing much, just a thin wisp of lace blurring her details, and some ribbon to keep it in place. Juliana waits"I'm pleased to meet you," she said brightly. Then a huge grin broke out on her face. "And I can see you're pleased to see me." He tried to explain to her about professional detachment. How he wanted to keep himself out of the story he was writing, and not form any personal opinions. "Looks to me like it's not working," she giggled, pointing. Juliana then showed him her idea of detachment, detaching all his clothes, and hers. "It's the same for us," she told him. "Most of the men who come here need to pay for it, because they're not likely to get it for free. We have to put our opinions aside and act like professionals, too. "So when we get someone like you coming here, it's a welcome change. We can forget the business side, and have fun. Why don't you just do the same?" He had to agree that she was making a compelling argument. And there was no way he could put this in his article for the courier anyway! --- --- If you want to learn to swim in a hurry, dive in where it's deepest.He had second thoughts about those words as soon as he wrote them. It was an accurate description of his experiences the previous evening, but perhaps in more ways than he'd intended. This morning was full of double-entendres . He'd said he felt like a new man. "I want one, too," she'd said before pouncing on him. He liked Juliana. Apparently it was her special task to start things off with a new customer, or something like that. And he was a customer, even if he wasn't handing over any gold. They were getting repaid with a favorable story in the Black Horse Courier. An honest one, he reminded himself, these girls really were that good, at least Juliana was. He'd leave last night out of the story, he decided. The girls' own tales were interesting enough and nobody needed to know about him. But back to Juliana. She was on top of him now, and if she didn't quit doing that, he'd never get any reporting done. He reached over for his notebook, and announced that if she was going to do her work, he'd do his too. She didn't exactly stop, but she slowed down enough that he could write legibly. He crossed out that first line and started again, just writing down what she told him in her story of the Champion of Cyrodiil. I was working Chorrol at the time, dividing my time between the Grey Mare and the Oak and Crosier. Most nights, if I didn't have a customer, I'd sleep at the Grey Mare.
I'd eat my meals at the other place, just because I like the spicy dishes Talasma serves. They remind me of the food in the south, where my sister and I come from. Luciana didn't get any further North than Bravil, and works in a tavern there, behind the bar. She's probably doing other work, too. A bar's a good place to do business.
One evening, while I'm eating in the Oak and Crosier, Modryn Oreyn comes over to me. I'm a bit surprised, because he's not the type that needs to pay for it. But it's not for himself, it's a new recruit to the Fighter's Guild. Now that makes sense, because I do have a reputation for being good with the first-timers.
This new recruit turns out to be Viranus Donton, the younger son of the Guildmaster, and Oreyn's trying to "make a man of him". He thinks a session with me will make a difference. Well, he was right about that, but it wasn't quite the difference he had in mind.
For a start, Viranus turns up at my room with another young man. He and Edouard are both ambidextrous, or whatever the term is, and I'm getting double-duty tonight. I don't think I showed them anything they hadn't already tried, but I learned a few new tricks from them!
I wasn't complaining. Not only was that more fun than I'd had in months, I got paid triple! Each of them paid me and I got another payment from Oreyn afterwards.
Well, it wasn't all good news. Just after that, I noticed an itchy rash down there. No idea when I picked it up, but there was a good chance Viranus and Edouard had it too. I decided discreet was the watchword, so I didn't take it to the chapel healer. I got a recipe from a book and made up a cure myself.
I wanted to let Viranus have some of the potion, but I couldn't get near him. His mother keeps him in the house most of the time, except when they're both over at the Fighters Guild. I needed someone else to act as a middle-man.
By the time I found someone, the potions had gone off, and I needed to make up another batch. I didn't have any more of the ingredients, either. Dreugh Wax and Ogre's Teeth aren't easy to get, unless you're Fighters Guild, maybe, and I couldn't ask them for obvious reasons. Aloe Vera's plentiful in the South, but there wasn't any left for sale in Chorrol.
Well, you can guess who agreed to help me. We're in his establishment now. He was a Fighters Guild member himself, and had all the access he needed to Viranus. Plus, he was travelling south on a contract, so he could look out for the ingredients. How's that for convenient!
It was a while before he came back with the bad news. He had all the ingredients for me. He'd killed the Ogres and Land Dreugh himself. But there wasn't any point in making up the potion, because he'd found Viranus and Edouard dead in Forsaken Mine.
It wasn't the Itchy Pox that took them, either. They'd been killed by Trolls, or possibly by the Blackwood Company, who'd interfered in their contract. His next job was to find out which it was.
I was devastated. Those two fine young men dead! I couldn't stay in Chorrol now. There was too much there to remind me of those two boys. So at his suggestion, I came down here to Gweden.
I love it here! No itchy pox, and such nice customers! Especially you.He put his pen down and asked her "Off the record, can you show me some of those new tricks you mentioned earlier?" "Only if you've got two" she giggled. He opened a drawer beside the bed and took something from it "We can improvise." ----------- In the game, there are two ways the player can complete the quest to recruit Juliana. One is to give her the ingredients, wait a day for her to brew it, and then deliver it it Viranus. The other is the one she tells here, if he's died in Forsaken Mine. This one makes more sense of why she'd join.
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Mods for The Elder Scrolls single-player games, and I play ESO.
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ghastley The Gweden report Sep 2 2011, 01:28 AM Acadian This is a fun idea and off to a grand start! ... Sep 2 2011, 02:03 AM Grits I imagine the reporter will need some of Cousin Mi... Sep 2 2011, 09:29 PM ghastley Link fixed. Something defaulted my "org... Sep 2 2011, 10:23 PM ghastley Still just introducing things, I'll get into t... Sep 8 2011, 11:55 PM Acadian What a fun little tour of Skingrad and the road to... Sep 9 2011, 02:08 AM Grits As Acadian said, plenty of smiles here.
That woul... Sep 10 2011, 12:46 AM ghastley Tsarrina
"So, Madam Tsarrina, is it true tha... Sep 15 2011, 11:36 PM Acadian What fabulously creative twisting you have going o... Sep 16 2011, 01:28 AM Grits I like the licensing issue that causes so much tro... Sep 17 2011, 03:01 PM MyCat
Heh heh. I've played the mod but it's nic... Sep 18 2011, 05:05 AM ghastley @Acadian Thanks for the encouragement on the Khaji... Sep 22 2011, 02:15 PM Acadian What a clever and even cute story! Tsarrina ... Sep 23 2011, 12:29 AM Grits Prizna came into the room and and the reporter for... Sep 24 2011, 01:59 PM ghastley @Acadian I didn't know that "disintegrate... Sep 29 2011, 03:29 PM Acadian Ha! What a clever weave in of the everscamp q... Sep 30 2011, 12:17 AM Grits Well, Virgilia’s boots aren’t made for walking, an... Sep 30 2011, 06:30 PM ghastley A mention of Ancondil's warhammer, Persuader, ... Jan 10 2012, 06:44 PM Acadian Quite a collection of working lasses you’re buildi... Jan 11 2012, 02:28 AM Grits She humped him senseless. :lol: Jan 11 2012, 02:31 AM Acadian I wondered right up until you announced it whether... Jan 18 2012, 03:49 AM Grits Ambidextrous! :D
Nice to hear about Viranus a... Jan 18 2012, 11:27 PM ghastley Acadian: A few references to the vanilla game tied... Jan 24 2012, 02:07 AM mALX GAAAAH !! You've got a thread that I ... Jan 24 2012, 02:20 AM Acadian Nice tie in to the white bears and it was clever t... Jan 24 2012, 02:34 AM Grits Whew, I’m glad that Darwen is now getting senseles... Jan 26 2012, 11:02 AM mALX *
First off, this concept is Awesome & fun, b... Jan 30 2012, 05:58 PM ghastley @Acadian and Grits: More tie-ins in the next epis... Jan 31 2012, 01:05 AM Acadian Falanu’s. . . little. . . er. . . big?. . . sister... Jan 31 2012, 02:49 AM mALX This one had me rolling from beginning to end.
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Nit: Most people only use a single 'i' in... Feb 1 2012, 03:53 AM Grits Silanu puts Alteration and Destruction magic to ex... Feb 2 2012, 03:41 PM ghastley @Acadian and MyCat: Nits duly picked. There seems ... Feb 7 2012, 12:50 AM Acadian I do believe this may be my favorite of the storie... Feb 7 2012, 02:24 AM ghastley I did a quick render from 3DS MAX of the basic out... Feb 7 2012, 03:49 AM mALX GAAAAH !!! Now we know who drove Gell... Feb 7 2012, 05:10 AM King Coin I enjoyed this little story of Cybeline. She think... Feb 7 2012, 05:17 AM ghastley I'm hi-jacking my own thread here, but the bac... Feb 9 2012, 09:18 PM mALX Sorry for the double post :( Feb 10 2012, 12:18 PM Acadian Fact: Uriel's eldest son, Crown Prince Geldal... Feb 9 2012, 09:39 PM mALX
I'm hi-jacking my own thread here, but the ba... Feb 10 2012, 12:53 PM ghastley Thanks for that link, mALX. Following a few leads ... Feb 13 2012, 05:44 PM mALX WOO HOO !! :) Feb 13 2012, 08:55 PM ghastley A quick interlude and Selena's tale. This was ... Feb 14 2012, 12:46 AM Grits The new mod sounds great! Politics and courtly... Feb 14 2012, 02:00 AM Acadian What a great interface and rich tribute you provid... Feb 15 2012, 12:59 AM mALX The beginning of Serena's story where the repo... Feb 15 2012, 01:27 AM ghastley I just realised that I spelled Selena's name w... Feb 20 2012, 05:57 PM Acadian And the crowd roars! This was just a real nic... Feb 21 2012, 01:10 AM ghastley Since posting Freija's story I've created ... Feb 28 2012, 02:43 AM Acadian Great poster for the Arena. :)
Goodness. Gwed... Feb 28 2012, 04:17 AM mALX I was amazed at the detailed background into Sheo... Feb 28 2012, 06:02 PM ghastley That's actually quite simple in GIMP or Photos... Feb 28 2012, 06:27 PM mALX
That's actually quite simple in GIMP or Photo... Feb 29 2012, 07:15 PM Grits These last two stories have been my favorites for ... Feb 29 2012, 03:17 AM ghastley
Are you sure it wasn’t a drunken Nord who embell... Feb 29 2012, 06:54 PM ghastley @Acadian: A Golden Saint? Ask and you shall recie... Mar 6 2012, 12:21 AM Acadian Golden Girl Graces Gweden Gang! Golden Globes... Mar 6 2012, 02:03 AM Grits I’ve resorted to “strumpet” and ... Mar 6 2012, 02:47 AM mALX *
GOLDIE! (donks forehead) [donk] - I s... Mar 7 2012, 01:05 AM mALX Trollop Mar 7 2012, 04:56 AM ghastley @Acadian: no Golden Globes this time. WIll Golden ... Mar 13 2012, 12:02 AM Acadian What a clever and sweet adaptation of Hircine’s qu... Mar 13 2012, 12:36 AM mALX I loved this !! Like Acadian, I can't... Mar 13 2012, 03:29 AM Grits My one trip through Cyrodiil with the unicorn ende... Mar 14 2012, 03:32 AM ghastley @All: Meena's quest was created because I did... Mar 20 2012, 12:49 AM Acadian In TES, bad boys grow up to be marauders!
I... Mar 20 2012, 01:56 AM mALX I wondered when we'd hear about Maeva the Buxo... Mar 20 2012, 03:58 PM Grits I like this one a lot because it’s a solid tie to ... Mar 20 2012, 04:11 PM ghastley Back to all-new content (except for the back-story... Mar 26 2012, 11:52 PM Acadian How clever to do so much with the Argonian Maid. ... Mar 27 2012, 12:37 AM Grits Oh, so that’s what they’re for. :D
It was neat to... Mar 30 2012, 01:36 AM ghastley @Acadian: I think it must be because Weedum-Ja is ... Apr 3 2012, 12:06 AM Acadian This was fun!
'He wore an old leather c... Apr 3 2012, 12:39 AM mALX Dark Eyes:
BWAAHAA! Ain't it the truth... Apr 3 2012, 05:43 PM ghastley Just an interlude to wrap up the Gweden part of th... Apr 10 2012, 01:51 AM Acadian This was certainly some of your very best writing.... Apr 10 2012, 03:10 AM mALX This had me rolling:
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Gre... Apr 13 2012, 03:55 PM Grits A summary indeed, and wrapped in the young reporte... Apr 16 2012, 03:05 AM ghastley @Acadian: considering that it was a collection of ... Apr 17 2012, 12:09 AM Acadian Potion #9! I love it! :lol:
Nice job... Apr 17 2012, 01:18 AM ghastley @Acadian: - It's probably the green skin that ... Apr 24 2012, 12:03 AM ghastley Oops, double-post. Apr 24 2012, 12:15 AM Acadian My Baldur’s Gate I & II are showing – When I s... Apr 24 2012, 12:19 AM Lady Saga Interesting story, certainly different. I"m u... Apr 24 2012, 06:48 PM ghastley The mod doesn't introduce anything that's ... Apr 24 2012, 07:12 PM Lady Saga Coool. I wasn't implying anything, just curiou... Apr 24 2012, 08:01 PM ghastley @Acadian: Miranu was always intended to be a real ... May 2 2012, 01:03 AM Acadian Cloak, dagger, slippery stuff and potion #9! ... May 2 2012, 02:27 AM Grits I don’t know about the movie, but the song about t... May 6 2012, 09:26 AM mALX Yeah! The Red Dragon Club makes its debut... May 6 2012, 06:27 PM ghastley @Acadian: So you noticed her guns too! Of the ... May 8 2012, 02:08 AM Lady Saga I started this story over because I want to read i... May 8 2012, 03:03 AM Acadian More cloak and dagger. As ever, I love the wonder... May 8 2012, 03:27 AM mALX This mod sounds fun, seeking out new false leads t... May 9 2012, 07:08 PM Grits How funny that Alessia Caro was visiting her mothe... May 11 2012, 11:42 AM ghastley @Lady Saga: The Champion hasn't actually been ... May 15 2012, 12:08 AM mALX You've got a lot of lore in this one between t... May 15 2012, 12:25 AM Acadian Oh dear Enilwen. You’ve simply got to lose those ... May 15 2012, 01:44 AM
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