Slightly less amateurish?!!...
Dear
Gods man, what the hell are you on?!!...
I've read books by established (and by that I mean published) writers that are
far worse than what I've been reading...
YOU HAVE TALENT MAN!!...It's one thing being modest, but another thing to sell yourself short...
Hell, I'm probably the worst of the writers here and even
I will admit to being impressed by some of the stuff I come out with...

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EDIT...I believe the previous sentence was the sin of foolish pride...

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Don't worry about re-writing it...And I get the thing with time...Believe me...

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This post has been edited by McBadgere: Jan 27 2012, 11:15 PM