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ghastley
post Sep 2 2011, 01:28 AM
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Until I complete the other mods, there's not a lot to add to their stories, so I thought I'd tell the tales associated with Gweden while I work on them.

That mod's anything but linear, as you can do the individual quests for most of the girls in any order. That meant I'd have to come up with a narrative that links them all together and creates a sequence. Rather than take the easy way out and describe it all from the Player-character's viewpoint, I thought I'd try a different approach entirely.

So I'm going to write a story, about a reporter writing a story, about the stories of the girls who work at Gweden. They'll tell them to him one at a time, and there will be a bit of extra narrative added beyond what actually happens when you play through each of the quests they're describing.

The Champion is arbitrarily male as before, and of no specific race. Because of the requirements of the mod for some of the quests, he's also the Madgod, Master of the Fighter's Guild, Listener of the Dark Brotherhood, Arena Champion, and Archmage, although I'll try to play those down as much as possible. All of those things are less important to his employees anyway. He's the boss, and he did something special for each of them, or they wouldn't be there.

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Prologue


"Listen up girls," Tsarrina began. "This one expects you've all heard the news by now. The Oblivion Crisis is over, and the Gates are all closed. Martin Septim is no more, and the Elder Council is running things ."

"Our boss is now the Champion of Cyrodill, and so everything he does is front-page news in the Black Horse Courier. They're sending a reporter down here to do a story about this establishment of his, in the next few days."

"This one doesn't want it to be just another story about the boss. He's getting a bit tired of that himself. This one wants it to be our story. Your story."

"We probably won't make the front page, as it appears they're sending a junior down to do the interviews. But that should work in our favor. He'll be young, and you'll all appreciate that. Especially Juliana. This one wants you to be ready if he's really inexperienced. The rest of you are to make the best impression you can. We can get some really good publicity from this."

"Should we start shopping for new clothes?" asked one of them, hopefully.

"No, you won't be needing those much," Tsarrina chuckled, "but make sure anything you do wear is is the best you have. And by that, this one means the most effective, not the most expensive. Unless it's both. Dark-eyes, get your uniform starched up and crisp. Cybeline, that red velvet number with the plunging neckline that you keep for special occasions. This is a special occasion."

Everyone looked at Prizna. She just laughed, and Tsarrina had to grin, too. "This one does not expect you to start wearing clothes now."

"This one wants you all to be ready to tell him how you came to be here, and what part the boss played in that. It will keep the stories relevant to his assignment, but they'll be about you as much as they are about the Champion."

"We'll make use of the old farmhouse as the interview room. It's nice and cozy in front of the fire there, and we'll put some comfortable chairs either side. We should keep the main rooms in the Lodge open for business. There's no point losing any trade while he's here, after all."

"Will he be staying at the Count's Arms while he's here?", asked Maeva. "I can walk up with him in the mornings if he does."

"No, we'll keep him here at the farm," Tsarrina decided. "He'll use the main bed in the farmhouse, and this one doesn't want him sleeping in it alone! You'll each get a turn to tell him your story. Make sure you also get a turn to show him what you can do."

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Future pieces will have each of the women telling her story of how she came to be at the Gweden Brothel, or the reporter putting the report together. I'll add a postscript article from the Black Horse Courier about Cousin Miranu's miraculous potion at the end, which should take a post or two to cover it. I have most of the stories drafted, as they come straight from the mod itself, but I'm still working on the wrapper narrative, and haven't finalized the sequence of the individual tales yet.

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post Feb 14 2012, 12:46 AM
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A quick interlude and Selena's tale. This was the first sub-quest I wrote for the mod, and it's a bit simple, even more so as she has to relate it without having seen it happen. Go there, kill everything, report back. So she'll talk more about Kvatch, from her point of view.


Selena

The second night at Gweden was just starting for the young reporter from the Black Horse Courier. His room was full of all the women he'd already interviewed, and he had a good idea what they had in mind.

They told him that Sugar had a pair of Orc brothers come in from Chorrol, and she was taking both on at once. With just one customer, it was like a cross between a rodeo and a wrestling match, so two was going to be a real spectacle. Tsarrina was selling tickets to watch, and she'd sent all these women over to him, so there would be more room for the men.

"So where would you like to start?" asked Virgilia, as innocently as she could.

He tried to avoid choosing. "Isn't there anyone here whose story I haven't heard?" But Tsarrina had sent those women upstairs over at the Lodge. She was controlling who he talked to, and when. He looked around the room, hoping for a way he wouldn't have to pick between them.

It must have been the way his gaze didn't linger any longer than it had to on Prizna that provoked her. "Come on now", she said. "You know you want to look. Start being honest with yourself!" Prizna was a tall, strong Dremora, and she had a lot of her colleagues backing her up. In seconds, he was lying naked on the bed, and Prizna was making him take a very close look.

That solved his problem with choosing, but now he had to deal with Prizna. He only saw one option, but he wasn't complaining. Prizna was moaning, but it didn't seem to be a complaint.

Inevitably, the others weren't going to just stand and watch. He couldn't see who was doing what, all he could see was Prizna. Sugar was busy, so he knew she wasn't one of them. He just hoped they'd be more gentle with him than she would.

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"What did Juliana mean by 'silver-tongued Imperial'?" Tsarrina asked with a mischievous grin on her face. He groaned at that one, for more than one reason.

Tsarrina guessed he hadn't had a lot of sleep. She decided he should hear Selena's story next, as it wasn't too complicated.

Selena was a Redguard who'd survived the Siege of Kvatch. She came in and started to tell her tale.

Kvatch was a good town for a prostitute before the Daedra came. There was an Arena there, and a big market, and several taverns. Plenty of merchants and adventurers passing through, who might want a bit of fun while they were in town. The Count ran things with a light hand. Taxes weren't too high, the guard were forgiving, and business of all kinds was encouraged.

I worked for Garanil. He was an Altmer who owned a large house with private rooms that he rented out to us. He'd also solicit for us at the Arena, while we worked the taverns. I was making a good income, and didn't mind giving him a share. He took care of us, had a big Orc for a bouncer at the door to stop any trouble, and dealt with the law when we needed it.

But when the Oblivion Gate opened up outside the city, he ran away. He headed for a hideout in Salted Mine, to the north of Kvatch. We begged him to take us with him, but he told us we were on our own. The Orc bouncer didn't turn up, so we couldn't get any help from him, either.

We scattered, figuring we had a better chance of escaping individually. I climbed over a part of the city wall where a pile of rubble made a ramp, and made my way to the South. I found a campsite on the road. They told me Captain Matius had put up barricades to stop the Daedra coming out of the city, so it should be safe enough there. But they wanted to know where I'd got out, so they could guard there too.

I waited in the camp for the others from Garanil's house. None of them arrived, and nobody among the refugees had any news of them getting out. I guess I was the only one who made it.

A refugee camp's not a good place for a prostitute to do any business. There's just nowhere private enough. Most of us slept on bedrolls in the open, and the few tents were used by the healer, the smith, and others who had a proper job to do. We all pitched in to forage for food, but I had no hunting skills, and I wasn't good at finding the right plants either. I helped tend to the wounded, but I don't know any healing spells, so I still felt useless.

I was still hoping Garanil would return. He'd know what to do, and we'd start getting back to normal. But he didn't come. I was certain he'd got out of the city, so where was he now?

When the adventurer that I now know as the boss came to the camp, I asked him if he could help me find Garanil. I told him where Salted Mine was. That was the only place I knew where he might be. I was still hoping that Garanil would help us rebuild, and I could get back to my old job.

Salted Mine was on the other side of Kvatch, to the North. He asked me if he could go through the city to get there. I told him there was only one city gate, at the end of the road through the camp, and that one was blocked by an Oblivion Gate. Nothing could enter the city until that was shut down.

He strode off up the road anyway, to talk with Captain Matius at the barricades. The following morning a number of people came down the road telling tales of how the Oblivion Gate had just been closed. They'd not seen anything of the fighting, but had been sheltering in the Chapel of Akatosh until help arrived. The chapel had been damaged in the siege, but for some reason the Daedra were unable to enter it, and they'd been spared.

Brother Martin and Oleta, the healer from the chapel, were there, and so were Guilbert Selone, the gardener from the Arena, and a woman called Lenka Valus, whom I didn't know well. None of my sister prostitutes had reached the chapel, and nobody had seen Garanil. I asked Tierra, the guard who'd escorted the new batch of refugees from the city, but she hadn't seen him either.

She had seen my new adventurer friend, though. Captain Matius had told her that he was the one who closed the Oblivion Gate after the guards had failed. He'd rescued Ilend Vonius from the Deadlands too. They were calling him "The Hero of Kvatch" now.

She told me they'd all be trying to retake the Castle as soon as she returned to the city.

Just then a squad of legion men came into camp. They'd seen the smoke from the Gold Road and come to investigate. They followed Tierra back up the hill to Kvatch. I didn't see any of them come back down in the next few days, so I guess there was more fighting in the city.

The Hero came back a day or two later to tell me that he'd found Vampires in Salted Mine. They'd made Garanil a Vampire, too, and he'd had to kill them all. So Garanil wouldn't be coming back, ever.

He told me what the destruction in Kvatch was like. I'd seen some of it myself, but it got even worse after I escaped. He'd been with Captain Matius when they retook the Castle, and he'd found the Count's body himself. Matius was determined to rebuild, but that wasn't going to be happening soon. It would be years before there was a city on the hill again. Years before there would be a proper brothel in Kvatch. He asked me if I'd come here and help Tsarrina, instead. He'd see me here later, but he had to speak to Brother Martin first.

The three of us walked down to the Gold Road, but we went in opposite directions when we got there. I don't know where they were headed. The Hero thought it was best if he didn't reveal his plans. He and Brother Martin had something special they needed to do, and they didn't want to get me involved.

None of us knew back then who Brother Martin really was, and what would come to pass in the following months. I knew that the man I'd agreed to work for was now the Hero of Kvatch, and I had a feeling that he'd not stop there. Of course you know he became the Champion of Cyrodiil and more.


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ghastley   The Gweden report   Sep 2 2011, 01:28 AM
Acadian   This is a fun idea and off to a grand start! ...   Sep 2 2011, 02:03 AM
Grits   I imagine the reporter will need some of Cousin Mi...   Sep 2 2011, 09:29 PM
ghastley   Link fixed. Something defaulted my "org...   Sep 2 2011, 10:23 PM
ghastley   Still just introducing things, I'll get into t...   Sep 8 2011, 11:55 PM
Acadian   What a fun little tour of Skingrad and the road to...   Sep 9 2011, 02:08 AM
Grits   As Acadian said, plenty of smiles here. That woul...   Sep 10 2011, 12:46 AM
ghastley   Tsarrina "So, Madam Tsarrina, is it true tha...   Sep 15 2011, 11:36 PM
Acadian   What fabulously creative twisting you have going o...   Sep 16 2011, 01:28 AM
Grits   I like the licensing issue that causes so much tro...   Sep 17 2011, 03:01 PM
MyCat   Heh heh. I've played the mod but it's nic...   Sep 18 2011, 05:05 AM
ghastley   @Acadian Thanks for the encouragement on the Khaji...   Sep 22 2011, 02:15 PM
Acadian   What a clever and even cute story! Tsarrina ...   Sep 23 2011, 12:29 AM
Grits   Prizna came into the room and and the reporter for...   Sep 24 2011, 01:59 PM
ghastley   @Acadian I didn't know that "disintegrate...   Sep 29 2011, 03:29 PM
Acadian   Ha! What a clever weave in of the everscamp q...   Sep 30 2011, 12:17 AM
Grits   Well, Virgilia’s boots aren’t made for walking, an...   Sep 30 2011, 06:30 PM
ghastley   A mention of Ancondil's warhammer, Persuader, ...   Jan 10 2012, 06:44 PM
Acadian   Quite a collection of working lasses you’re buildi...   Jan 11 2012, 02:28 AM
Grits   She humped him senseless. :lol:   Jan 11 2012, 02:31 AM
ghastley   Our reporter needs a rest. However, he may not get...   Jan 18 2012, 02:50 AM
Acadian   I wondered right up until you announced it whether...   Jan 18 2012, 03:49 AM
Grits   Ambidextrous! :D Nice to hear about Viranus a...   Jan 18 2012, 11:27 PM
ghastley   Acadian: A few references to the vanilla game tied...   Jan 24 2012, 02:07 AM
mALX   GAAAAH !! You've got a thread that I ...   Jan 24 2012, 02:20 AM
Acadian   Nice tie in to the white bears and it was clever t...   Jan 24 2012, 02:34 AM
Grits   Whew, I’m glad that Darwen is now getting senseles...   Jan 26 2012, 11:02 AM
mALX   * First off, this concept is Awesome & fun, b...   Jan 30 2012, 05:58 PM
ghastley   @Acadian and Grits: More tie-ins in the next epis...   Jan 31 2012, 01:05 AM
Acadian   Falanu’s. . . little. . . er. . . big?. . . sister...   Jan 31 2012, 02:49 AM
mALX   This one had me rolling from beginning to end. ...   Jan 31 2012, 03:12 AM
MyCat   Nit: Most people only use a single 'i' in...   Feb 1 2012, 03:53 AM
Grits   Silanu puts Alteration and Destruction magic to ex...   Feb 2 2012, 03:41 PM
ghastley   @Acadian and MyCat: Nits duly picked. There seems ...   Feb 7 2012, 12:50 AM
Acadian   I do believe this may be my favorite of the storie...   Feb 7 2012, 02:24 AM
ghastley   I did a quick render from 3DS MAX of the basic out...   Feb 7 2012, 03:49 AM
mALX   GAAAAH !!! Now we know who drove Gell...   Feb 7 2012, 05:10 AM
King Coin   I enjoyed this little story of Cybeline. She think...   Feb 7 2012, 05:17 AM
ghastley   I'm hi-jacking my own thread here, but the bac...   Feb 9 2012, 09:18 PM
mALX   Sorry for the double post :(   Feb 10 2012, 12:18 PM
Acadian   Fact: Uriel's eldest son, Crown Prince Geldal...   Feb 9 2012, 09:39 PM
mALX   I'm hi-jacking my own thread here, but the ba...   Feb 10 2012, 12:53 PM
ghastley   Thanks for that link, mALX. Following a few leads ...   Feb 13 2012, 05:44 PM
mALX   WOO HOO !! :)   Feb 13 2012, 08:55 PM
Grits   The new mod sounds great! Politics and courtly...   Feb 14 2012, 02:00 AM
Acadian   What a great interface and rich tribute you provid...   Feb 15 2012, 12:59 AM
mALX   The beginning of Serena's story where the repo...   Feb 15 2012, 01:27 AM
ghastley   I just realised that I spelled Selena's name w...   Feb 20 2012, 05:57 PM
Acadian   And the crowd roars! This was just a real nic...   Feb 21 2012, 01:10 AM
ghastley   Since posting Freija's story I've created ...   Feb 28 2012, 02:43 AM
Acadian   Great poster for the Arena. :) Goodness. Gwed...   Feb 28 2012, 04:17 AM
mALX   I was amazed at the detailed background into Sheo...   Feb 28 2012, 06:02 PM
ghastley   That's actually quite simple in GIMP or Photos...   Feb 28 2012, 06:27 PM
mALX   That's actually quite simple in GIMP or Photo...   Feb 29 2012, 07:15 PM
Grits   These last two stories have been my favorites for ...   Feb 29 2012, 03:17 AM
ghastley   Are you sure it wasn’t a drunken Nord who embell...   Feb 29 2012, 06:54 PM
ghastley   @Acadian: A Golden Saint? Ask and you shall recie...   Mar 6 2012, 12:21 AM
Acadian   Golden Girl Graces Gweden Gang! Golden Globes...   Mar 6 2012, 02:03 AM
Grits   I’ve resorted to “strumpet” and ...   Mar 6 2012, 02:47 AM
mALX   * GOLDIE! (donks forehead) [donk] - I s...   Mar 7 2012, 01:05 AM
mALX   Trollop   Mar 7 2012, 04:56 AM
ghastley   @Acadian: no Golden Globes this time. WIll Golden ...   Mar 13 2012, 12:02 AM
Acadian   What a clever and sweet adaptation of Hircine’s qu...   Mar 13 2012, 12:36 AM
mALX   I loved this !! Like Acadian, I can't...   Mar 13 2012, 03:29 AM
Grits   My one trip through Cyrodiil with the unicorn ende...   Mar 14 2012, 03:32 AM
ghastley   @All: Meena's quest was created because I did...   Mar 20 2012, 12:49 AM
Acadian   In TES, bad boys grow up to be marauders! I...   Mar 20 2012, 01:56 AM
mALX   I wondered when we'd hear about Maeva the Buxo...   Mar 20 2012, 03:58 PM
Grits   I like this one a lot because it’s a solid tie to ...   Mar 20 2012, 04:11 PM
ghastley   Back to all-new content (except for the back-story...   Mar 26 2012, 11:52 PM
Acadian   How clever to do so much with the Argonian Maid. ...   Mar 27 2012, 12:37 AM
Grits   Oh, so that’s what they’re for. :D It was neat to...   Mar 30 2012, 01:36 AM
ghastley   @Acadian: I think it must be because Weedum-Ja is ...   Apr 3 2012, 12:06 AM
Acadian   This was fun! 'He wore an old leather c...   Apr 3 2012, 12:39 AM
mALX   Dark Eyes: BWAAHAA! Ain't it the truth...   Apr 3 2012, 05:43 PM
ghastley   Just an interlude to wrap up the Gweden part of th...   Apr 10 2012, 01:51 AM
Acadian   This was certainly some of your very best writing....   Apr 10 2012, 03:10 AM
mALX   This had me rolling: ROFL !!! Gre...   Apr 13 2012, 03:55 PM
Grits   A summary indeed, and wrapped in the young reporte...   Apr 16 2012, 03:05 AM
ghastley   @Acadian: considering that it was a collection of ...   Apr 17 2012, 12:09 AM
Acadian   Potion #9! I love it! :lol: Nice job...   Apr 17 2012, 01:18 AM
ghastley   @Acadian: - It's probably the green skin that ...   Apr 24 2012, 12:03 AM
ghastley   Oops, double-post.   Apr 24 2012, 12:15 AM
Acadian   My Baldur’s Gate I & II are showing – When I s...   Apr 24 2012, 12:19 AM
Lady Saga   Interesting story, certainly different. I"m u...   Apr 24 2012, 06:48 PM
ghastley   The mod doesn't introduce anything that's ...   Apr 24 2012, 07:12 PM
Lady Saga   Coool. I wasn't implying anything, just curiou...   Apr 24 2012, 08:01 PM
ghastley   @Acadian: Miranu was always intended to be a real ...   May 2 2012, 01:03 AM
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mALX   Yeah! The Red Dragon Club makes its debut...   May 6 2012, 06:27 PM
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