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The Gweden report, A story of the story of the stories. |
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Sep 2 2011, 01:28 AM
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Until I complete the other mods, there's not a lot to add to their stories, so I thought I'd tell the tales associated with Gweden while I work on them. That mod's anything but linear, as you can do the individual quests for most of the girls in any order. That meant I'd have to come up with a narrative that links them all together and creates a sequence. Rather than take the easy way out and describe it all from the Player-character's viewpoint, I thought I'd try a different approach entirely. So I'm going to write a story, about a reporter writing a story, about the stories of the girls who work at Gweden. They'll tell them to him one at a time, and there will be a bit of extra narrative added beyond what actually happens when you play through each of the quests they're describing. The Champion is arbitrarily male as before, and of no specific race. Because of the requirements of the mod for some of the quests, he's also the Madgod, Master of the Fighter's Guild, Listener of the Dark Brotherhood, Arena Champion, and Archmage, although I'll try to play those down as much as possible. All of those things are less important to his employees anyway. He's the boss, and he did something special for each of them, or they wouldn't be there. ---- Prologue "Listen up girls," Tsarrina began. "This one expects you've all heard the news by now. The Oblivion Crisis is over, and the Gates are all closed. Martin Septim is no more, and the Elder Council is running things ." "Our boss is now the Champion of Cyrodill, and so everything he does is front-page news in the Black Horse Courier. They're sending a reporter down here to do a story about this establishment of his, in the next few days." "This one doesn't want it to be just another story about the boss. He's getting a bit tired of that himself. This one wants it to be our story. Your story." "We probably won't make the front page, as it appears they're sending a junior down to do the interviews. But that should work in our favor. He'll be young, and you'll all appreciate that. Especially Juliana. This one wants you to be ready if he's really inexperienced. The rest of you are to make the best impression you can. We can get some really good publicity from this." "Should we start shopping for new clothes?" asked one of them, hopefully. "No, you won't be needing those much," Tsarrina chuckled, "but make sure anything you do wear is is the best you have. And by that, this one means the most effective, not the most expensive. Unless it's both. Dark-eyes, get your uniform starched up and crisp. Cybeline, that red velvet number with the plunging neckline that you keep for special occasions. This is a special occasion." Everyone looked at Prizna. She just laughed, and Tsarrina had to grin, too. "This one does not expect you to start wearing clothes now." "This one wants you all to be ready to tell him how you came to be here, and what part the boss played in that. It will keep the stories relevant to his assignment, but they'll be about you as much as they are about the Champion." "We'll make use of the old farmhouse as the interview room. It's nice and cozy in front of the fire there, and we'll put some comfortable chairs either side. We should keep the main rooms in the Lodge open for business. There's no point losing any trade while he's here, after all." "Will he be staying at the Count's Arms while he's here?", asked Maeva. "I can walk up with him in the mornings if he does." "No, we'll keep him here at the farm," Tsarrina decided. "He'll use the main bed in the farmhouse, and this one doesn't want him sleeping in it alone! You'll each get a turn to tell him your story. Make sure you also get a turn to show him what you can do." ---- Future pieces will have each of the women telling her story of how she came to be at the Gweden Brothel, or the reporter putting the report together. I'll add a postscript article from the Black Horse Courier about Cousin Miranu's miraculous potion at the end, which should take a post or two to cover it. I have most of the stories drafted, as they come straight from the mod itself, but I'm still working on the wrapper narrative, and haven't finalized the sequence of the individual tales yet. This post has been edited by ghastley: Oct 7 2016, 04:47 PM
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ghastley |
Mar 13 2012, 12:02 AM
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@Acadian: no Golden Globes this time. WIll Golden curls do?
@Grits: no granny-pants either
@mALX: "Worshipper of Dibella" would only get me confused with my own Warrior Nuns, but I'll probably use most of the others at some time. --------------
Meena
"So," said Darwen. "Do you think you can handle three?"
"We're only little" offered the girl with the long blonde curls. He hadn't met her yet. She looked young, or was that just because she was small, like all the Breton women?
The third was Virgilia, who wasn't exactly little. Not in the important places. But she was a lot shorter than the Daedra women, or the Nords, or Sugar, and definitely smaller than Silanu!
It was just that he was comparing her to a petite Breton and a slender Wood elf. She was probably as young as the Breton, and still as giggly as a schoolgirl. That could just be an act, of course, but he liked it.
She was wearing a dress this time, at least for the moment. That didn't fit the schoolgirl image, as it was cut to emphasise her shape, and show off her breasts. It was a rich velvet, with a deep blue color that matched her eyes, and a texture that invited his hands.
But Virgilia didn't want all of his attention - yet. She wanted to introduce him to Meena, the blonde. Meena was a diminutive of Hermine. Hermine Alliot, of the Harcane Grove. She'd have a special tale to tell him tomorrow, so they wouldn't spoil that now. The only thing they'd reveal was that she learned about sex from watching wild animals, so the others were teaching her all the other ways. He'd help with her education, wouldn't he?
"All the other ways?" he asked "How many are we talking about?"
"More than we have time for, but we can cover the basics tonight, and see how far we get," smiled Darwen, slipping out of her buckskins. "Help Meena with her dress, she's still re-learning buttons, too."
They were round the back, where nobody can comfortably reach for themselves. He'd always suspected they were put there so that help would be required. Women are just so devious! He let Meena undo his buttons in return. She did seem unused to them, but at least she could see what she was doing with these.
Darwen and Virgilia were waiting for them on the bed. They took turns to show Meena what to do, and she copied them. Some of the positions were new to him, so Meena wasn't the only one getting an education.
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As it happened, the reporter's first interview the next day was with Meena, the cute little Breton with the intriguing mystery past they'd alluded to last night. He was eager to have it all revealed to him. Her story, he remininded himself. She'd revealed everything else most thoroughly the night before.
When I met "the Boss" I was a virgin. I didn't have any choice in the matter, I was guarded night and day to keep me that way.
You see, Hircine wanted a Unicorn horn for his collection, and they're rare, to say the least. It's not easy to create a Unicorn, and it takes a long time. You have to start with a white horse, and keep it in close contact with a virgin while the horn grows. That takes years.
I didn't know any of that to start with, or none of my story would have happened. I was maybe ten at the time, travelling with my parents down towards Bravil, when we were attacked by bandits. Someone grabbed me and carried me off, and I lost sight of my parents.
They took me to a shrine in the woods, and showed me a white colt that looked as nervous as I was. They told me they wanted me to look after the horse, and I'd be able to ride him when he got a little bigger. If I wouldn't do what they said, then they had some wolves that needed a meal.
I went over to the horse, and he seemed to calm down when I touched him. Someone handed me an apple to feed him, but no knife to cut it with. It was too big to feed him it all at once, so I had to bite pieces off.
They led us to a little valley in the woods where there was a small stream for water, and plenty of grazing for the horse. I got a bedroll on the ground, and a sack with some bread and cheese in it They left me there with the horse, and walked off, back towards the shrine.
I started to run off after them, but a Minotaur blocked my path! I was terrified, of course, but the creature didn't do anything but stand in the way. I walked back to where the horse was nibbling the grass. The Minotaur watched me, but didn't follow.
Over the next few days I discovered that there were at least three of the Minotaurs patrolling around the edge of the grove. If I tried to leave they'd be there to turn me back. The same for the horse. He couldn't leave either.
Eventually I got up the courage to try running past them. The Minotaur was faster than I was, and carried me back, kicking and yelling to the middle of the grove, where he gave me a beating to discourage any further attempts.
The Unicorn didn't try to escape until much later. He was big enough by then for me to ride on his back, but I wasn't riding when he tried to run off. He'd be faster without me. His horn had started to show too, but it was still just a little bony bump on his forehead, and no use as a weapon. He was quick, but the Minotaurs seemed to know where he was headed, and knocked him down.
He was frightened more than hurt, and ran back to me for comfort. He'd do that many more times in the years we were there. The Minotaurs never did us any real damage, but it always hurt.
I was growing, too, and my clothes were getting worn out and tight. My shoes hurt my feet, so I stopped wearing them, and then I wore holes through my stockings. My blouse wouldn't fasten any more, and my skirt was tprn in several places. Pretty soon, I'd stopped wearing anything.
A fresh sack of food would arrive while I slept each night, and I had hoped that new clothes would come the same way. Apparently I didn't need to wear anything to look after the Unicorn, so I didn't get any.At the rate my hair was growing, perhaps that would cover me soon!
It wasn't just my hair growing. I was starting to change shape, too. And there were other changes. I could see the horse becoming a Unicorn before my eyes. I wondered if I was turning into something else, too.
Just a woman, it turned out. That's a bit scary, if there's nobody to explain what's happening.
I didn't know much about sex, of course. My parents had only told me what I wasn't to let boys do to me. At that age, I hadn't a clue why they'd want to do that anyway. Out here in nature every day, I'd watched wolves, or deer, a few times, so I was starting to get the picture.
The males always seemed to know when the females were ready for them by smell. I could see him sniiffing the air, and he'd go trotting off towards her with, how shall I put this? Increased interest?
My own cycles seemed to cause some sniffing, too. My Unicorn would flare his nostrils, and sometimes he'd scare me with how he reacted. The Minotaurs sampling the air were even more of a worry. as they're half-human. Except that they had nothing to react with. No wonder they were such a bad-tempered bunch!
Riding the Unicorn was making me feel different, too. The more excited it made me, the faster the Unicorn's horn seemed to grow. It was getting quite long now, and he was becoming more aggressive to the other animals around the grove. He was always so gentle with me though.
One day, I found a man's dead body near the edge of the grove. He was wearing leather, and carrying a bow, but they were all useless now. He'd been badly hacked with an axe, it appeared. Just like the Minotaurs were carrying. One of them saw me and drove me away from the corpse, before he picked him up and carried him away.
I was beginning to understand it all now. The Minotaurs weren't there just as jailors for myself and the Unicorn, but also to stop the hunters from taking the prizes before they were ready. One prize was the Unicorn's horn, of course, and another was me.
I sat down and worked it all out. The Unicorn's horn had been growing really quickly recently, so obviously the older we were, the faster it grew. But there had to be a reason why they needed me here. Was it because the horn wouldn't grow if I wasn't with the Unicorn?
And then there was the question of why me, and not any other girl. Perhaps it was hard to find girls who hadn't done it?
And now the horn had grown big enough for the hunters to start coming, why was I still a prisoner? What would happen if they let me out now? Presumably the horn would stop growing, but was that all? Then it struck me. Maybe the horn would fall off and get lost! That had to be it, nothing else made sense.
But it wouldn't just be going away. It would be what I could do if I went away. That's why they kept all men away from me. Why the Minotaurs didn't have everything they were born with.
I wasn't going to let anyone kill my Unicorn, of course. That horn represented several years of my life, and so I didn't want it wasted, either. The two of us had to escape together, and find a way for me to lose my virginity without the horn getting lost in the woods.
The three Minotaurs were more than a match for us, so we'd need outside help just to get away. When another hunter approached the grove and the Minotaur started towards him, we ran over in the opposite direction and drew the other two Minotaurs with us, to stop us escaping. That left the hunter with only one Minotaur to deal with.
One was enough, especially one with an enchanted warhammer to swing. But the tactic was promising, if the right hero turned up.
And of course he did, or I wouldn't be here today. The Minotaurs fell one by one, and My Hero strode into the grove.
Well, limped, actually, because he'd not escaped totally unscathed. Fortunately, I was riding the Unicorn and he'd put away his weapons, so the Unicorn didn't attack. He was quite calm. I was the exact opposite.
My new Hero told me Hircine had sent him for the horn, and I told him everything I knew about it. He agreed with my theory about how it all worked, and said he knew just how to get the horn without harming its owner. I just had to follow him to Anvil.
I didn't know how far Anvil was, or I might not have agreed. We had to travel very carefully as we couldn't get into any fights along the way. He didn't dare draw a weapon because it would provoke the Unicorn, I didn't have any, and we didn't want the Unicorn to run off chasing anyone.
Well, eventually we arrived at the stables outside town. We put the Unicorn in a stall and closed the gate behind it. The man at the stables, Ernest, rented us a bedroll in the next stall so we could do the rest, without getting too far from the Unicorn.
The following morning, there was just an ordinary white horse in the next stall, and a horn lying on the ground. We were neither as unique as we were the day before, but I didn't regret anything. I'd do it all again, especially that last part!
That's when he told me about Gweden. I had a lot of catching up to do, and there wasn't a better place to do it. He had to go back to Hircine's shrine with the horn, but he'd see me there as soon as he returned.
Tsarrina had been told I was coming and had Juliana help me settle in. She even shared her next customer with me. As she put it "He doesn't know you're inexperienced, he's never done it before himself. Just stay one step ahead and lead him." He was a nice lad, eager to please, and exteremely grateful for everything. And why not, when he was getting two for the price of one?
And what happened to the Unicorn? I leave my white stallion down at the stables, and he's making me gold the same way I earn it. Isn't it strange how the stallions make all the money, but the men have to pay us?
This post has been edited by ghastley: Apr 2 2012, 11:37 PM
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That woul... Sep 10 2011, 12:46 AM ghastley Tsarrina
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Nice to hear about Viranus a... Jan 18 2012, 11:27 PM ghastley Acadian: A few references to the vanilla game tied... Jan 24 2012, 02:07 AM mALX GAAAAH !! You've got a thread that I ... Jan 24 2012, 02:20 AM Acadian Nice tie in to the white bears and it was clever t... Jan 24 2012, 02:34 AM Grits Whew, I’m glad that Darwen is now getting senseles... Jan 26 2012, 11:02 AM mALX *
First off, this concept is Awesome & fun, b... Jan 30 2012, 05:58 PM ghastley @Acadian and Grits: More tie-ins in the next epis... Jan 31 2012, 01:05 AM Acadian Falanu’s. . . little. . . er. . . big?. . . sister... Jan 31 2012, 02:49 AM mALX This one had me rolling from beginning to end.
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Nit: Most people only use a single 'i' in... Feb 1 2012, 03:53 AM Grits Silanu puts Alteration and Destruction magic to ex... Feb 2 2012, 03:41 PM ghastley @Acadian and MyCat: Nits duly picked. There seems ... Feb 7 2012, 12:50 AM Acadian I do believe this may be my favorite of the storie... Feb 7 2012, 02:24 AM ghastley I did a quick render from 3DS MAX of the basic out... Feb 7 2012, 03:49 AM mALX GAAAAH !!! Now we know who drove Gell... Feb 7 2012, 05:10 AM King Coin I enjoyed this little story of Cybeline. She think... Feb 7 2012, 05:17 AM ghastley I'm hi-jacking my own thread here, but the bac... Feb 9 2012, 09:18 PM mALX Sorry for the double post :( Feb 10 2012, 12:18 PM Acadian Fact: Uriel's eldest son, Crown Prince Geldal... Feb 9 2012, 09:39 PM mALX
I'm hi-jacking my own thread here, but the ba... Feb 10 2012, 12:53 PM ghastley Thanks for that link, mALX. Following a few leads ... Feb 13 2012, 05:44 PM mALX WOO HOO !! :) Feb 13 2012, 08:55 PM ghastley A quick interlude and Selena's tale. This was ... Feb 14 2012, 12:46 AM Grits The new mod sounds great! Politics and courtly... Feb 14 2012, 02:00 AM Acadian What a great interface and rich tribute you provid... Feb 15 2012, 12:59 AM mALX The beginning of Serena's story where the repo... Feb 15 2012, 01:27 AM ghastley I just realised that I spelled Selena's name w... Feb 20 2012, 05:57 PM Acadian And the crowd roars! This was just a real nic... Feb 21 2012, 01:10 AM ghastley Since posting Freija's story I've created ... Feb 28 2012, 02:43 AM Acadian Great poster for the Arena. :)
Goodness. Gwed... Feb 28 2012, 04:17 AM mALX I was amazed at the detailed background into Sheo... Feb 28 2012, 06:02 PM ghastley That's actually quite simple in GIMP or Photos... Feb 28 2012, 06:27 PM mALX
That's actually quite simple in GIMP or Photo... Feb 29 2012, 07:15 PM Grits These last two stories have been my favorites for ... Feb 29 2012, 03:17 AM ghastley
Are you sure it wasn’t a drunken Nord who embell... Feb 29 2012, 06:54 PM ghastley @Acadian: A Golden Saint? Ask and you shall recie... Mar 6 2012, 12:21 AM Acadian Golden Girl Graces Gweden Gang! Golden Globes... Mar 6 2012, 02:03 AM Grits I’ve resorted to “strumpet” and ... Mar 6 2012, 02:47 AM mALX *
GOLDIE! (donks forehead) [donk] - I s... Mar 7 2012, 01:05 AM mALX Trollop Mar 7 2012, 04:56 AM Acadian What a clever and sweet adaptation of Hircine’s qu... Mar 13 2012, 12:36 AM mALX I loved this !! Like Acadian, I can't... Mar 13 2012, 03:29 AM Grits My one trip through Cyrodiil with the unicorn ende... Mar 14 2012, 03:32 AM ghastley @All: Meena's quest was created because I did... Mar 20 2012, 12:49 AM Acadian In TES, bad boys grow up to be marauders!
I... Mar 20 2012, 01:56 AM mALX I wondered when we'd hear about Maeva the Buxo... Mar 20 2012, 03:58 PM Grits I like this one a lot because it’s a solid tie to ... Mar 20 2012, 04:11 PM ghastley Back to all-new content (except for the back-story... Mar 26 2012, 11:52 PM Acadian How clever to do so much with the Argonian Maid. ... Mar 27 2012, 12:37 AM Grits Oh, so that’s what they’re for. :D
It was neat to... Mar 30 2012, 01:36 AM ghastley @Acadian: I think it must be because Weedum-Ja is ... Apr 3 2012, 12:06 AM Acadian This was fun!
'He wore an old leather c... Apr 3 2012, 12:39 AM mALX Dark Eyes:
BWAAHAA! Ain't it the truth... Apr 3 2012, 05:43 PM ghastley Just an interlude to wrap up the Gweden part of th... Apr 10 2012, 01:51 AM Acadian This was certainly some of your very best writing.... Apr 10 2012, 03:10 AM mALX This had me rolling:
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Gre... Apr 13 2012, 03:55 PM Grits A summary indeed, and wrapped in the young reporte... Apr 16 2012, 03:05 AM ghastley @Acadian: considering that it was a collection of ... Apr 17 2012, 12:09 AM Acadian Potion #9! I love it! :lol:
Nice job... Apr 17 2012, 01:18 AM ghastley @Acadian: - It's probably the green skin that ... Apr 24 2012, 12:03 AM ghastley Oops, double-post. Apr 24 2012, 12:15 AM Acadian My Baldur’s Gate I & II are showing – When I s... Apr 24 2012, 12:19 AM Lady Saga Interesting story, certainly different. I"m u... Apr 24 2012, 06:48 PM ghastley The mod doesn't introduce anything that's ... Apr 24 2012, 07:12 PM Lady Saga Coool. I wasn't implying anything, just curiou... Apr 24 2012, 08:01 PM ghastley @Acadian: Miranu was always intended to be a real ... May 2 2012, 01:03 AM Acadian Cloak, dagger, slippery stuff and potion #9! ... May 2 2012, 02:27 AM Grits I don’t know about the movie, but the song about t... May 6 2012, 09:26 AM mALX Yeah! The Red Dragon Club makes its debut... May 6 2012, 06:27 PM ghastley @Acadian: So you noticed her guns too! Of the ... May 8 2012, 02:08 AM Lady Saga I started this story over because I want to read i... May 8 2012, 03:03 AM Acadian More cloak and dagger. As ever, I love the wonder... May 8 2012, 03:27 AM mALX This mod sounds fun, seeking out new false leads t... May 9 2012, 07:08 PM Grits How funny that Alessia Caro was visiting her mothe... May 11 2012, 11:42 AM ghastley @Lady Saga: The Champion hasn't actually been ... May 15 2012, 12:08 AM mALX You've got a lot of lore in this one between t... May 15 2012, 12:25 AM Acadian Oh dear Enilwen. You’ve simply got to lose those ... May 15 2012, 01:44 AM
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