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post Jan 15 2012, 07:04 AM
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Olen
post Apr 15 2012, 10:58 PM
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Lovely pics as usual and some nice details. Do I see some sort of side plot developing with Veresa Alver? You managed to build her flawlessly into the section and lay out history and some details then move on before I'd really noticed, great bit of writing.

Nice change of pace too, from the frantic disappearance on the mainland to a sleepy time in a growing colony with nothing to dramatic happening (yet...). I suspect that might change soon though.


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Black Hand   Memoirs of a Morag Tong Assassin - Solstheim   Jan 15 2012, 07:04 AM
Athynae   The forum wandering insomniac wakes to the treat o...   Jan 15 2012, 08:20 AM
McBadgere   Fairly dues...Excellently done... For some reason...   Jan 15 2012, 01:25 PM
Olen   That could complicate things... Pene becoming mo...   Jan 15 2012, 06:13 PM
Grits   I love how the common ground between mortals and D...   Jan 15 2012, 06:55 PM
minque   Hmmm odd I'd say! Both Athynae and McBadge...   Jan 16 2012, 12:59 AM
treydog   I believe- whether he desires them or no- complica...   Jan 17 2012, 01:42 PM
Black Hand   Deleted.   Jan 19 2012, 06:49 AM
Athynae   I do wonder how he's going to feel when he loo...   Jan 19 2012, 12:36 PM
minque   Yup! What Athynae just said!....And nice...   Jan 19 2012, 09:17 PM
Olen   I like what you did with Ponius. He came across a...   Jan 20 2012, 12:03 AM
mALX   * Quoted both of the above for the deep insight...   Jan 20 2012, 12:58 AM
McBadgere   Most excellent matey... Dunno, I've only be...   Jan 20 2012, 05:03 AM
mALX   Most excellent matey... Dunno, I've only b...   Jan 20 2012, 05:45 AM
Black Hand   Deleted.   Jan 20 2012, 06:46 AM
McBadgere   Nope, you're right, I didn't know... :D .....   Jan 20 2012, 06:54 AM
Black Hand   Deleted.   Jan 21 2012, 06:14 AM
McBadgere   Blimey...Lady appearing-in-everyone-else's-sto...   Jan 21 2012, 07:10 AM
Olen   Nice touch. The interlude to see what he's le...   Jan 21 2012, 03:52 PM
mALX   Ooh, a crossover Athynae !! Awesome Write...   Jan 21 2012, 05:57 PM
treydog   Made me snicker there. The “domestic bliss” int...   Jan 21 2012, 06:01 PM
Athynae   Thank you first to Black Hand for allowing me the ...   Jan 21 2012, 07:39 PM
Black Hand   Deleted.   Jan 21 2012, 08:41 PM
mALX   @mALX The Stain is in the Apartment in Vivec, n...   Jan 21 2012, 09:55 PM
treydog   Seth's vagueness as to why he chose not to say...   Jan 21 2012, 08:56 PM
Athynae   It is odd being in the position I am now in, there...   Jan 21 2012, 09:41 PM
McBadgere   Fair dues...Nice little chapter here... The Khaji...   Jan 21 2012, 10:56 PM
Olen   You really captured S'virr from the game in th...   Jan 22 2012, 04:30 PM
mALX   Seth trying to explain humor to Pene was my favori...   Jan 23 2012, 06:16 PM
Black Hand   Deleted.   Jan 24 2012, 04:03 AM
McBadgere   Ooooh, pretty pictures...*Slack jawed*... :blink...   Jan 24 2012, 04:46 AM
Athynae   I liked the look into Seth's thought process a...   Jan 24 2012, 04:52 AM
Black Hand   Deleted.   Jan 25 2012, 02:13 AM
Athynae   Right, good, at least if someone DID need to fin...   Jan 25 2012, 03:18 AM
McBadgere   Yes, I know what you mean... :blink: ... Cool.....   Jan 25 2012, 05:08 AM
treydog   Love the parallel to the Morrowind opening- and ...   Jan 26 2012, 03:27 AM
Grits   Ooh, pictures! :) I enjoyed Seth’s thoughts...   Jan 26 2012, 10:49 AM
Black Hand   Deleted.   Jan 28 2012, 02:44 AM
Athynae   Sounds like Seth is already feeling positive about...   Jan 28 2012, 04:13 AM
Darkness Eternal   Solshteim=werewolves. I will be following this st...   Jan 28 2012, 05:29 AM
McBadgere   Oh-ho-hooo yes!!... Don't know where ...   Jan 28 2012, 06:57 AM
treydog   Always a helpful skill on Solstheim. Here now...   Jan 28 2012, 04:29 PM
Olen   Hmm I think I know which side Seth- Dralas will ta...   Jan 28 2012, 08:01 PM
Black Hand   Deleted.   Jan 29 2012, 11:30 PM
minque   It's impossible....I just can't ....I mean...   Jan 30 2012, 01:03 AM
Athynae   Just a feeling but I think Dralas and Falco will b...   Jan 30 2012, 01:29 AM
McBadgere   Niiiice... :D ... Nice quiet scene building... I...   Jan 30 2012, 06:10 AM
Olen   Good part. I like the little observations of char...   Jan 30 2012, 11:23 PM
Darkness Eternal   Dralas is a sexy name. And Pene is a funny one. Ye...   Jan 30 2012, 11:52 PM
mALX   * ROFL !!! Loved that !! ...   Feb 2 2012, 11:05 PM
Grits   I think that returning to a simpler life will be g...   Feb 2 2012, 11:52 PM
treydog   It was a treat to watch "Dralas" and Pen...   Feb 4 2012, 06:48 PM
mALX   Me- oh- I um--- kill people for a living. And- m...   Feb 4 2012, 07:04 PM
Black Hand   Deleted.   Feb 7 2012, 10:10 AM
mALX   Pene picks up on the slapstick, lol. Loved that...   Feb 7 2012, 01:56 PM
Athynae   Mine too! Wow that was the coolest thing...I...   Feb 7 2012, 01:56 PM
treydog   Enjoyed this part- especially Pene's nonchalan...   Feb 8 2012, 03:34 AM
Darkness Eternal   Love Carnius, my kind of guy. And I liked the part...   Feb 8 2012, 05:22 AM
McBadgere   YES!!...Immortals that can be killed!...   Feb 8 2012, 05:52 AM
Black Hand   Deleted.   Feb 8 2012, 06:21 AM
Darkness Eternal   Freaked out, I bet. Hehe, love that part right...   Feb 8 2012, 06:35 AM
minque   hehe....very interesting! ROFL...So typical...   Feb 8 2012, 09:42 PM
Athynae   Seems Pene may be a pain huh? At times anyway Li...   Feb 8 2012, 10:04 PM
McBadgere   Ooooh, that was niiiiice... :D ... Creepy Barrows...   Feb 9 2012, 06:53 AM
Olen   More Seth :) A pleasure as always. I loved this...   Feb 9 2012, 10:40 PM
treydog   I see your occult Seducer abilities, and raise y...   Feb 18 2012, 01:03 PM
Black Hand   Deleted.   Apr 4 2012, 12:47 AM
McBadgere   He's Baaaack!!!!... :D ... An...   Apr 4 2012, 04:34 AM
Athynae   Reading in bed on the tablet but will comment appr...   Apr 4 2012, 05:14 AM
Olen   Loved it. Falco's soluton is great and made m...   Apr 5 2012, 08:26 PM
Athynae   Ok, finally....RL is a bit stinky of late. It was ...   Apr 7 2012, 05:38 PM
treydog   Choking on laughter. Not saying ANYTHING. Nope....   Apr 7 2012, 06:00 PM
Colonel Mustard   I see this has been updated, realised I missed ano...   Apr 8 2012, 09:06 AM
minque   Ahhh this is GOOD! I liked Falco's way of ...   Apr 9 2012, 12:07 PM
Black Hand   Deleted.   Apr 12 2012, 10:20 PM
McBadgere   Excellent stuff!!... The pictures were ex...   Apr 13 2012, 04:18 AM
Athynae   All of this was wonderful but the last was the bes...   Apr 16 2012, 12:54 PM
Grits   I especially enjoyed this update, and I can’t real...   Apr 16 2012, 01:40 PM
Black Hand   Deleted.   Apr 17 2012, 10:11 PM
Athynae   I just love a good Dralas...Seth, fight. Seems to ...   Apr 18 2012, 02:15 AM
McBadgere   Oooh, be this romance for young Seth?... :D ... E...   Apr 18 2012, 01:39 PM
Black Hand   Deleted.   Apr 19 2012, 12:48 AM
Athynae   I really don't like Carnius...careful of that ...   Apr 19 2012, 11:38 AM
McBadgere   Fantastic chapter, as ever... Love it!!.....   Apr 19 2012, 05:25 PM
Black Hand   Deleted.   Apr 19 2012, 08:11 PM
McBadgere   *Does dance...Possibly disco-esque...Behold my gli...   Apr 20 2012, 06:14 AM
Colonel Mustard   *Does dance...Possibly disco-esque...Behold my gl...   Apr 20 2012, 04:22 PM
Athynae   Surely the glitter is uncomfortable McB...never mi...   Apr 20 2012, 11:56 AM
Olen   Wow this has expanded suddenly. Great stuff as ev...   Apr 21 2012, 12:54 PM
Black Hand   Deleted.   Apr 22 2012, 06:12 PM
minque   Ohhh Post machining again are you? Well the first ...   Apr 22 2012, 07:16 PM
Olen   But that type of arrangement breeds drama like no...   Apr 22 2012, 10:29 PM
McBadgere   "Put those things away! *Presents Sharpen...   Apr 23 2012, 03:47 AM
Athynae   And Olen addressed every question that cruised thr...   Apr 23 2012, 04:03 AM

 

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