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ghastley
post Sep 2 2011, 01:28 AM
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Until I complete the other mods, there's not a lot to add to their stories, so I thought I'd tell the tales associated with Gweden while I work on them.

That mod's anything but linear, as you can do the individual quests for most of the girls in any order. That meant I'd have to come up with a narrative that links them all together and creates a sequence. Rather than take the easy way out and describe it all from the Player-character's viewpoint, I thought I'd try a different approach entirely.

So I'm going to write a story, about a reporter writing a story, about the stories of the girls who work at Gweden. They'll tell them to him one at a time, and there will be a bit of extra narrative added beyond what actually happens when you play through each of the quests they're describing.

The Champion is arbitrarily male as before, and of no specific race. Because of the requirements of the mod for some of the quests, he's also the Madgod, Master of the Fighter's Guild, Listener of the Dark Brotherhood, Arena Champion, and Archmage, although I'll try to play those down as much as possible. All of those things are less important to his employees anyway. He's the boss, and he did something special for each of them, or they wouldn't be there.

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Prologue


"Listen up girls," Tsarrina began. "This one expects you've all heard the news by now. The Oblivion Crisis is over, and the Gates are all closed. Martin Septim is no more, and the Elder Council is running things ."

"Our boss is now the Champion of Cyrodill, and so everything he does is front-page news in the Black Horse Courier. They're sending a reporter down here to do a story about this establishment of his, in the next few days."

"This one doesn't want it to be just another story about the boss. He's getting a bit tired of that himself. This one wants it to be our story. Your story."

"We probably won't make the front page, as it appears they're sending a junior down to do the interviews. But that should work in our favor. He'll be young, and you'll all appreciate that. Especially Juliana. This one wants you to be ready if he's really inexperienced. The rest of you are to make the best impression you can. We can get some really good publicity from this."

"Should we start shopping for new clothes?" asked one of them, hopefully.

"No, you won't be needing those much," Tsarrina chuckled, "but make sure anything you do wear is is the best you have. And by that, this one means the most effective, not the most expensive. Unless it's both. Dark-eyes, get your uniform starched up and crisp. Cybeline, that red velvet number with the plunging neckline that you keep for special occasions. This is a special occasion."

Everyone looked at Prizna. She just laughed, and Tsarrina had to grin, too. "This one does not expect you to start wearing clothes now."

"This one wants you all to be ready to tell him how you came to be here, and what part the boss played in that. It will keep the stories relevant to his assignment, but they'll be about you as much as they are about the Champion."

"We'll make use of the old farmhouse as the interview room. It's nice and cozy in front of the fire there, and we'll put some comfortable chairs either side. We should keep the main rooms in the Lodge open for business. There's no point losing any trade while he's here, after all."

"Will he be staying at the Count's Arms while he's here?", asked Maeva. "I can walk up with him in the mornings if he does."

"No, we'll keep him here at the farm," Tsarrina decided. "He'll use the main bed in the farmhouse, and this one doesn't want him sleeping in it alone! You'll each get a turn to tell him your story. Make sure you also get a turn to show him what you can do."

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Future pieces will have each of the women telling her story of how she came to be at the Gweden Brothel, or the reporter putting the report together. I'll add a postscript article from the Black Horse Courier about Cousin Miranu's miraculous potion at the end, which should take a post or two to cover it. I have most of the stories drafted, as they come straight from the mod itself, but I'm still working on the wrapper narrative, and haven't finalized the sequence of the individual tales yet.

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post May 8 2012, 02:08 AM
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@Acadian: So you noticed her guns too! Of the course, the reporter is paid to notice all the details.

@Grits: Yes, and the learning is continuing, although with a new subject added. Taminwe can teach him interrogation in ways they don't in school. He's already inquisitive, and she'll be developing his skills to suit her own purposes.

I fixed that link.

@mALX: On the contrary, if the customer doesn't need #9 he'll just take longer and they won't have time for more clients! Tsarrina can be trusted to apply her advantage judiciously. She just has to ask Maeva who needs it, and who doesn't.


Back to the story, and this episode ties in to the mod again with Uriel's cousin. The reporter can't take a role in it, but he does hear about it afterward.

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Taminwe - part 2

Taminwe had a few words for the reporter before he left. "Expect a trip to Leyawiin soon, There's something going on down there and the Champion and I will be paying a visit before long. We'll need you to pick up any ripples from the main splash, if you know what I mean."

The assignment came in on the same day he was due to visit the Red Dragon Club again, so he went there first. Shurgak's greeting told him that he should ask for Miranda's services. and after taking a glass of Tamika's from Tilasa at the bar, he followed Miranda down the corridor to a private room.

Miranda spent the first few minutes dutifully attending to her client before she said anything. The way she grinned like a cat told him she was really enjoying this part of her job, and she didn't stop when she passed on her information. He'd already been told that he was going to the Castle to report on the death of a mysterious stranger in the servants' quarters, but Miranda already knew the truth behind the mystery. The stranger had been a forger, hired to produce a fake document to support the claim of Alessia Caro's cousin to the vacant throne.

The unfinished document, together with the seal they were going to use to make it look authentic, were now in the hands of the Elder Council. The Champion of Cyrodiil had been forced to kill the forger when he attacked him, but Taminwe had got the rest of the story straight from the cousin in Senchal. Having experienced her methods, the reporter could imagine how she did that!

They hadn't been able to pin anything directly on the Countess, so that's why he was needed. If any rumours or clues had been missed, the Council needed to know. The announcement of the plot's discovery in the Courier would help suppress any further attempts along similar lines, so his report there was equally important. The more detailed it was, the better the deterrant.

One more thing. They already knew that the beggars had seen the Countess with the forger, but that couldn't be used in his article. If anyone else had done so, then it was good to print. That made sense to him. The general public wouldn't trust the word of a beggar, but on the other hand, they were a source to be protected because they were so reliable.

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When he got to Leyawiin, he spent most of his time inside the castle. The locals really hadn't noticed the stranger in their town, especially as he'd disappeared into the castle almost as soon as he arrived. The beggars spot strangers right away, as they're more likely to cough up a coin the first time they're approached. Everyone else ignores them.

Only the private areas of the castle seemed to have any guards, and he was able to enter the servants' quarters without challenge. They seemed to have been built for a much larger staff than were currently employed, so it was easy to imagine the stranger finding a vacant room he could use. He had to ask which one it was, and he was shown a small chamber at the end of a corridor, opposite the door to one of the towers.

Apart from a bloodstain on the floor, there was little evidence of the occupant. He'd only left a quill and inkwell on top of an empty crate. The reporter already knew that the document that the forger had been working on was taken by the Champion, along with the fake seal of Pelagius IV that he was going to use on it. He asked if anyone had seen the man alive, talked to him? No, they'd only seen his body, and they might not have found that if the guard hadn't heard the fight. Nobody came down to this end of the place unless they needed something from the stores in the tower, and they couldn't remember the last time that happened.

Further chat with the servants gave him the impression that there was even more to the maze of rooms and corridors beneath the castle than he'd been able to see. There were parts that nobody visited, and rumours of secret passages, and ghosts, and noises in the night. All of which would provide excellent cover for any illegal activities anyone wanted to perform. But nothing told him what, if anything, actually was taking place.

He was able to talk briefly with On-Staya Sundew, the castle steward, and ask her if any official documents had gone missing. After all, a forger might be trying to replace a land grant with a larger one, or something like that. He really wanted to know if there were any documents here that might have born the seal that the forger had copied. She reacted by checking the ones she was concerned about, just as he'd hoped. None of them were old enough to have a seal before Uriel VII's, and most only bore a city or provincial seal anyway.

He'd have liked to talk with Hildara Mothril, the Countess' maid, as well, but Alessia Caro was visiting her mother in Chorrol, and Hildara was with her. Nobody else had access to the private quarters, so he had to leave that part of the castle unchecked.

Back in town, most of the talk related to the background rivalry between the Khajiits and Argonians. That was all at a low level and didn't represent anything significant. They'd always contested the city in the past, and having a buffer of neutral territory now let them jeer at each other without having to do anything serious.

If anything, they now had some common ground. Both sides seemed to resent the Countess and her Imperial ways, but held the Count in better favour, perhaps because he was at least doing something about the bandits. He didn't seem to be as distrusting of other races as his wife. He'd even made that Orc Mazoga a Knight-Errant and had her helping with the bandit problem. The reporter had his own suspicions that the Black Bow Bandits were too convenient as a distraction from other affairs.

Nobody told him anything that related to the forger, or that plot. Either they hadn't noticed, or they didn't think it was that important.

That all left him with a problem of what he could write for the Courier. He had the evidence of the quill and inkwell to confirm a forger at work, but couldn't disclose the nature of the actual document.

He could, however, take all the possibilities and print them, and see which ones provoked further tips from the public. Was the document connected to smuggling, or the Black Bow Bandits, or illegal immigration from Elsweyr and Black Marsh? Was the castle involved, or just a convenient warren for the forger to hide in? A good full-spectrum speculation was the right kind of article here.

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Back at the Red Dragon Club, Taminwe gave him a long and vigorous debriefing. She was delighted at how well he had done in noticing all the little details. She took particular note of his conclusion that the seal had been made elsewhere. The reporter had noticed that the forger had had no materials or tools for creating it, so he must have brought it with him. He'd also need an impression of the real seal on a document, to make the fake seal match. There wasn't one in Leyawiin, as he'd discovered.

Leyawiin castle was the perfect place for the forged document to be "discovered", but that was no clue as to why it had to be created there. Perhaps they didn't want to risk any courier being intercepted by bandits or highwaymen?

Taminwe agreed with him about the article for the Courier. Stirring up talk about all the various issues in Leyawiin was the best way to make use of the current dead end. She had a few other pieces of information to add that he might find helpful.

The Champion had investigated the theft of a painting at Chorrol castle a while back. If the forger had been working there at the time, the investigation might have made him move on in a hurry. It was also possible that the document with Pelagius' seal came from Chorrol. The castle had had other thefts in the past, and the Honorblade had only recently been returned. One of those thefts might not have been what it seemed, especially if it involved a document.

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ghastley   The Gweden report   Sep 2 2011, 01:28 AM
Acadian   This is a fun idea and off to a grand start! ...   Sep 2 2011, 02:03 AM
Grits   I imagine the reporter will need some of Cousin Mi...   Sep 2 2011, 09:29 PM
ghastley   Link fixed. Something defaulted my "org...   Sep 2 2011, 10:23 PM
ghastley   Still just introducing things, I'll get into t...   Sep 8 2011, 11:55 PM
Acadian   What a fun little tour of Skingrad and the road to...   Sep 9 2011, 02:08 AM
Grits   As Acadian said, plenty of smiles here. That woul...   Sep 10 2011, 12:46 AM
ghastley   Tsarrina "So, Madam Tsarrina, is it true tha...   Sep 15 2011, 11:36 PM
Acadian   What fabulously creative twisting you have going o...   Sep 16 2011, 01:28 AM
Grits   I like the licensing issue that causes so much tro...   Sep 17 2011, 03:01 PM
MyCat   Heh heh. I've played the mod but it's nic...   Sep 18 2011, 05:05 AM
ghastley   @Acadian Thanks for the encouragement on the Khaji...   Sep 22 2011, 02:15 PM
Acadian   What a clever and even cute story! Tsarrina ...   Sep 23 2011, 12:29 AM
Grits   Prizna came into the room and and the reporter for...   Sep 24 2011, 01:59 PM
ghastley   @Acadian I didn't know that "disintegrate...   Sep 29 2011, 03:29 PM
Acadian   Ha! What a clever weave in of the everscamp q...   Sep 30 2011, 12:17 AM
Grits   Well, Virgilia’s boots aren’t made for walking, an...   Sep 30 2011, 06:30 PM
ghastley   A mention of Ancondil's warhammer, Persuader, ...   Jan 10 2012, 06:44 PM
Acadian   Quite a collection of working lasses you’re buildi...   Jan 11 2012, 02:28 AM
Grits   She humped him senseless. :lol:   Jan 11 2012, 02:31 AM
ghastley   Our reporter needs a rest. However, he may not get...   Jan 18 2012, 02:50 AM
Acadian   I wondered right up until you announced it whether...   Jan 18 2012, 03:49 AM
Grits   Ambidextrous! :D Nice to hear about Viranus a...   Jan 18 2012, 11:27 PM
ghastley   Acadian: A few references to the vanilla game tied...   Jan 24 2012, 02:07 AM
mALX   GAAAAH !! You've got a thread that I ...   Jan 24 2012, 02:20 AM
Acadian   Nice tie in to the white bears and it was clever t...   Jan 24 2012, 02:34 AM
Grits   Whew, I’m glad that Darwen is now getting senseles...   Jan 26 2012, 11:02 AM
mALX   * First off, this concept is Awesome & fun, b...   Jan 30 2012, 05:58 PM
ghastley   @Acadian and Grits: More tie-ins in the next epis...   Jan 31 2012, 01:05 AM
Acadian   Falanu’s. . . little. . . er. . . big?. . . sister...   Jan 31 2012, 02:49 AM
mALX   This one had me rolling from beginning to end. ...   Jan 31 2012, 03:12 AM
MyCat   Nit: Most people only use a single 'i' in...   Feb 1 2012, 03:53 AM
Grits   Silanu puts Alteration and Destruction magic to ex...   Feb 2 2012, 03:41 PM
ghastley   @Acadian and MyCat: Nits duly picked. There seems ...   Feb 7 2012, 12:50 AM
Acadian   I do believe this may be my favorite of the storie...   Feb 7 2012, 02:24 AM
ghastley   I did a quick render from 3DS MAX of the basic out...   Feb 7 2012, 03:49 AM
mALX   GAAAAH !!! Now we know who drove Gell...   Feb 7 2012, 05:10 AM
King Coin   I enjoyed this little story of Cybeline. She think...   Feb 7 2012, 05:17 AM
ghastley   I'm hi-jacking my own thread here, but the bac...   Feb 9 2012, 09:18 PM
mALX   Sorry for the double post :(   Feb 10 2012, 12:18 PM
Acadian   Fact: Uriel's eldest son, Crown Prince Geldal...   Feb 9 2012, 09:39 PM
mALX   I'm hi-jacking my own thread here, but the ba...   Feb 10 2012, 12:53 PM
ghastley   Thanks for that link, mALX. Following a few leads ...   Feb 13 2012, 05:44 PM
mALX   WOO HOO !! :)   Feb 13 2012, 08:55 PM
ghastley   A quick interlude and Selena's tale. This was ...   Feb 14 2012, 12:46 AM
Grits   The new mod sounds great! Politics and courtly...   Feb 14 2012, 02:00 AM
Acadian   What a great interface and rich tribute you provid...   Feb 15 2012, 12:59 AM
mALX   The beginning of Serena's story where the repo...   Feb 15 2012, 01:27 AM
ghastley   I just realised that I spelled Selena's name w...   Feb 20 2012, 05:57 PM
Acadian   And the crowd roars! This was just a real nic...   Feb 21 2012, 01:10 AM
ghastley   Since posting Freija's story I've created ...   Feb 28 2012, 02:43 AM
Acadian   Great poster for the Arena. :) Goodness. Gwed...   Feb 28 2012, 04:17 AM
mALX   I was amazed at the detailed background into Sheo...   Feb 28 2012, 06:02 PM
ghastley   That's actually quite simple in GIMP or Photos...   Feb 28 2012, 06:27 PM
mALX   That's actually quite simple in GIMP or Photo...   Feb 29 2012, 07:15 PM
Grits   These last two stories have been my favorites for ...   Feb 29 2012, 03:17 AM
ghastley   Are you sure it wasn’t a drunken Nord who embell...   Feb 29 2012, 06:54 PM
ghastley   @Acadian: A Golden Saint? Ask and you shall recie...   Mar 6 2012, 12:21 AM
Acadian   Golden Girl Graces Gweden Gang! Golden Globes...   Mar 6 2012, 02:03 AM
Grits   I’ve resorted to “strumpet” and ...   Mar 6 2012, 02:47 AM
mALX   * GOLDIE! (donks forehead) [donk] - I s...   Mar 7 2012, 01:05 AM
mALX   Trollop   Mar 7 2012, 04:56 AM
ghastley   @Acadian: no Golden Globes this time. WIll Golden ...   Mar 13 2012, 12:02 AM
Acadian   What a clever and sweet adaptation of Hircine’s qu...   Mar 13 2012, 12:36 AM
mALX   I loved this !! Like Acadian, I can't...   Mar 13 2012, 03:29 AM
Grits   My one trip through Cyrodiil with the unicorn ende...   Mar 14 2012, 03:32 AM
ghastley   @All: Meena's quest was created because I did...   Mar 20 2012, 12:49 AM
Acadian   In TES, bad boys grow up to be marauders! I...   Mar 20 2012, 01:56 AM
mALX   I wondered when we'd hear about Maeva the Buxo...   Mar 20 2012, 03:58 PM
Grits   I like this one a lot because it’s a solid tie to ...   Mar 20 2012, 04:11 PM
ghastley   Back to all-new content (except for the back-story...   Mar 26 2012, 11:52 PM
Acadian   How clever to do so much with the Argonian Maid. ...   Mar 27 2012, 12:37 AM
Grits   Oh, so that’s what they’re for. :D It was neat to...   Mar 30 2012, 01:36 AM
ghastley   @Acadian: I think it must be because Weedum-Ja is ...   Apr 3 2012, 12:06 AM
Acadian   This was fun! 'He wore an old leather c...   Apr 3 2012, 12:39 AM
mALX   Dark Eyes: BWAAHAA! Ain't it the truth...   Apr 3 2012, 05:43 PM
ghastley   Just an interlude to wrap up the Gweden part of th...   Apr 10 2012, 01:51 AM
Acadian   This was certainly some of your very best writing....   Apr 10 2012, 03:10 AM
mALX   This had me rolling: ROFL !!! Gre...   Apr 13 2012, 03:55 PM
Grits   A summary indeed, and wrapped in the young reporte...   Apr 16 2012, 03:05 AM
ghastley   @Acadian: considering that it was a collection of ...   Apr 17 2012, 12:09 AM
Acadian   Potion #9! I love it! :lol: Nice job...   Apr 17 2012, 01:18 AM
ghastley   @Acadian: - It's probably the green skin that ...   Apr 24 2012, 12:03 AM
ghastley   Oops, double-post.   Apr 24 2012, 12:15 AM
Acadian   My Baldur’s Gate I & II are showing – When I s...   Apr 24 2012, 12:19 AM
Lady Saga   Interesting story, certainly different. I"m u...   Apr 24 2012, 06:48 PM
ghastley   The mod doesn't introduce anything that's ...   Apr 24 2012, 07:12 PM
Lady Saga   Coool. I wasn't implying anything, just curiou...   Apr 24 2012, 08:01 PM
ghastley   @Acadian: Miranu was always intended to be a real ...   May 2 2012, 01:03 AM
Acadian   Cloak, dagger, slippery stuff and potion #9! ...   May 2 2012, 02:27 AM
Grits   I don’t know about the movie, but the song about t...   May 6 2012, 09:26 AM
mALX   Yeah! The Red Dragon Club makes its debut...   May 6 2012, 06:27 PM
Lady Saga   I started this story over because I want to read i...   May 8 2012, 03:03 AM
Acadian   More cloak and dagger. As ever, I love the wonder...   May 8 2012, 03:27 AM
mALX   This mod sounds fun, seeking out new false leads t...   May 9 2012, 07:08 PM
Grits   How funny that Alessia Caro was visiting her mothe...   May 11 2012, 11:42 AM
ghastley   @Lady Saga: The Champion hasn't actually been ...   May 15 2012, 12:08 AM
mALX   You've got a lot of lore in this one between t...   May 15 2012, 12:25 AM
Acadian   Oh dear Enilwen. You’ve simply got to lose those ...   May 15 2012, 01:44 AM
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