Another very good part, and it's good to see Sethyas back on form with stealthing it up. Like a bawss.
QUOTE("Black Hand")
Just like a few years prior, when I was a Journeyman Thief and sent too Sugar-Lips Habasi at the Imperial Spymaster, Caius Cosades behest, to further my stealth skills, I wandered through the fort at dusk.
You might want to reword that sentence, as at the moment it's rather clumsy and awkward to read. Aside from that, though, an excellent read, and I'm looking forward to seeing what's coming next (I never actually played this part of Bloodmoon).