Red Snow, In Skyrim, Only the tough survive Options

[The Solo Rollo]

Well, I'm back with my fixed laptop, and I wanna try out a little thing I've been thinking of for a while. It's only been small scenes I've thought of on the fly, but I'm going to try and form a coherent story around it. It follows the story of a redguard, barely surviving in the province of Skyrim. I'll start with the prologue and see what you all think.

This post has been edited by The Solo Rollo: Jul 1 2012, 08:33 PM

[mALX]

"Always the same story". Elana sighed to herself, a slight smirk on her face. "will he ever stop fantasizing about bandits and thieves?"

This line is my favorite. Elana already shows a spark of personality in that one line.

The looting/robbing - always great in my book.

Not so sure about the mass destruction of towns and killing just to be killing part though - there should be a reason for that kind of rampant destruction and taking of lives if they are going to find joy in it. (IE: taking over a territory, revenge, fued, etc).

Sounds great so far, I'd love to hear more about Elana! Welcome back, and congrats on getting the laptop fixed! Always a great thing, lol.