I've had a rather busy week this week and only managed to squeeze in posting this, I will be sure to read your stories ASAP
Acadian: I'm glad you see the importance of Constance in Valentine's life right now. It's important she has a close friend at this particular time. I'm so thrilled you liked the sunshine segment. It's wonderful that Valentine got such comfort and strength from it. She'll need it
mALX: Thank you so much

What an amazing compliment, one I am very pleased to get
Previously on Valentine: Valentine accepts the death of Arthur and tries to grieve.
After the funeral she thinks about ending her life, but a sudden burst of sunshine convinces her that Arthur thinks it is a bad idea.
3. I know who killed me.
"Are you sure you're ready to return to work?" Constance asked me as we wandered through the market place.
I nodded, "Yeah, I think so. It's been a month now. I've grieved all I can and apart from this scar I'm all healed and tip top fabulous. As far as I'm aware there's no reason not to go back."
Constance had a look of uncertainty on her face. "Okay... well if you're sure-"
She was interrupted by
Maven, who barged right through us to head to the castle, Mistveil Keep.
Gotknockeddownarthurblockedattack"Woah..." I said, touching my head as my head began to rush.
"Are you okay?" Constance asked me.
"Yeah i-i'm fine. Just had a flashback of... you know."
I looked at Maven as she walked. "C'mon, lets go see the Jarl."
We continued to Mistveil keep, and once we were inside, We approached
Jarl Laila, with Constance keeping her distance.
"Captain Valentine, how wonderful it is to see you up and about!" Greeted the Jarl.
"Thank you, Ma'am. I've come to bring you good news," I smiled. "I'm ready to re-join the guard."
The Jarl's face dropped. "Oh... I see..."
I smiled, yet was terribly worried at the same time, "Is everything okay?"
"Um..." The Jarl struggled to come up with the words to say.
As if from nowhere, Maven appeared from behind the Jarl and approached the seat next to the Jarl's. "Unfortunatly that position has already been filled, but you're more than welcome to be an underling."
"Position? what position?" I asked. She was confusing me with what she was saying.
"With you being out for so long we were forced to replace you. He is arriving from solitude and should be here-"
I interrupted the uncaring Maven, "Hold on, Miss, what are you saying?"
Maven gave me a look which could kill, "You are no longer needed Miss Valentine."
She continued to glare at me. Shocked I looked at the Jarl. She looked so apologetic, yet refused to do anything.
Then it happened. My head began to hurt again, but this time it was worth it.
Ithoughtitwasthatblackbriarwomanthathiredus...blackbriarhiredusblackbriarhiredusBLACKBRIARBLACKBRIARASSASSINS!In that moment, looking into Mavens pasty eyes i managed to remember that the men were assassins; and that they were hired by Maven.
I glared at her, all the anger I had bubbling away like stew, causing my body to leap off the ground and lunge for Maven. "YOU DID THAT! YOU HIRED THOSE ASSASSINS TO KILL ME!"
I grabbed her by the collar and pinned her to the floor. Everyone began to scream in panic; but no-one actually did anything straight away. Every one probably enjoyed the fact that Maven was getting what she what everyone had thought about doing; but only for a moment.
"What are you doing?!" The Jarl screamed.
I turned to her. "Maven tried to kill me!" Then back to Maven. "YOU KILLED ARTHUR!"
Suddenly the guard dragged me off Maven and held me against the wall. Maven stood up and brushed herself off.
Maven then glared at me, "You better think carefully before you accuse me of such lies." she said. I saw a sly smile.
I tried to break free from the guards grip but failed miserably. The Jarl then looked at Maven and then slowly approached me.
"Are you telling me that Maven set up for you to be killed the day of your attack?" She asked.
"Yes, she did." I smiled. The Jarl believed me, I knew it.
"Why do you think she wanted you dead?" The Jarl asked me.
I knew the answer right away. "Because I don't take any of her garbage. I don't respect her and she hates it. She hates that I’m the only person in Riften she has absolutely NO control over."
The Jarl then walked away from me and headed toward Maven. "Maven..." she started. I smiled at Maven, she was getting her comeuppance. "I'm sorry you've been accused of such outlandish lies."
"WHAT?" I bellowed.
The Jarl turned to me. "Without a shred of proof this is slander. It is a crime of honour and I will not have a silly little girl destroy the reputation of a good woman. Now, either you apologize to Maven, or I will be forced to exile you from Riften until you do. You won’t leave a criminal, but you WILL leave an enemy."
I looked at the Jarl in disbelief. She was useless. She trusted the judgement of a civilian rather than her trusted friend.
I sighed and then looked at the guards, MY guards, then back at the Jarl. "Fine."
The Jarl gave them a hand gesture and they let me go. I approached Maven and the Jarl. I didn't say anything for a while.
I looked the Jarl in the eye, "I guess I'll be leaving Riften then."
The Jarl said nothing.
Maven looked at me, victory showing in her subtle smile, "I think that's wise."
I turned around, bumping into the guards that stood directly behind me, they attempted to grab me again, but I stopped them, "Okay Mr Macho, I'm leaving."
I brushed past them and headed for the castle door, Constance following close behind.
Before I opened it I turned to say my final piece. "You're making a huge mistake, Laila. I hope you realise that."
***
I sat by Arthurs grave, looking at the tombstone.
"Hey honey." I started. "I'm sorry I haven’t visited more often. Lots of things have been going down. You know how it is; someone tries to kill you, everybody loves them."
I placed some flowers on his grave.
"I have to go away for a while. I don't know when I'll be back, or even if I will be back. Seeing as Maven's turned everyone against me I very much doubt I'll be welcomed back anytime soon."
I continued to stare at his grave stone. I then stroked it gently,
"I wish you were still here. Now more than ever. I don't know what I'm going to do. I've never been on my own before..."
I then reached into my pocket and took out the engagement necklaces I forgot we had until I found them at home that day. I took the amethyst one and put it on his grave. I put my Garnet one around my neck.
I then stood up. "I'll come back soon my love."
I turned to slowly walk away, only to literally bump into Constance.
"Oh, Constance, hi. You made me jump!" I said to her.
"Sorry." She laughed.
We looked at each other a moment. I then nodded and walked past her, heading home to get whatever I needed, despite that fact I had no idea what I would need. I'd never been exiled before.
"Are you really going?" She asked me, following me to my home.
I nodded, "I'm not about to apologize to that murderous hound anytime soon."
"Are you certain that it was her that killed Arthur?" Constance asked me.
I had to be honest. "About ninety-eight per cent. One of the assassins said he was hired by the 'Black-Briar woman'. There are only two Black-Briar's in town and I highly doubt it was Ingun... unless she's still bitter about the fact I stole her doll when we were five."
There was a short silence before Constance spoke up. "Maybe you should say sorry..."
I knew what she meant, but I decided to make a joke. "I'm sure Ingun's over it by now... although, saying that, she was very close to that doll..."
Constance didn't appreciate the joke.
"Seriously Honey, maybe you should, even if you don't mean it." Constance suggested. "At least you'll get to stay?"
I laughed at her, "No. That is NEVER going to happen. I'd rather have a mace to the face- OH wait! She's done that already."
We continued to walk to Honeyside, when I saw a sight that filled me with utter shock and incredible rage.
Guards were throwing all of my stuff from Honeyside into the murky water that the city rested upon. Everything I owned was being tossed away. I ran toward the Guards, but they wouldn't let me get into my house.
"Bertha?" I said to the guard by the door. "What are you doing?"
"I'm sorry Capt- I'm sorry Miss Valentine, but it is by order of the Jarl that we take ownership of your house."
"But... it's MY house? It's nothing to do with the Jarl! I bought it with MY money!"
Bertha didn't seem to have a response; only another order she repeated. "We've also been ordered to escort you out of the city the next time we saw you; which I suppose would be now." She grabbed my arm, "I'm sorry."
She led me to the city gate, Constance trailing behind arguing with Bertha.
"Surely you can let her take a few things? All she has is her Chapel dress and shoes! That can't be appropriate attire for the harsh weather outside-"
Bertha stopped walking and turned to Constance, "Unless you want to be executed for stalling the removal of a criminal, I suggest you go home."
I looked at Bertha, horrified. "Criminal? The Jarl told me I wasn't a criminal!"
"She's had a change of heart." She told me.
She means Maven managed to get her own way again.
Bertha continued to drag me out of the city. I looked humiliated as citizens that once respected me gawped and laughed. I was a joke. Everything I'd worked for had turned to nothing. Just as Bertha opened the city gate i heard Constance shout at me.
"GO TO SHOR'S STONE! FIND SYLGJA, MY FRIEND! SHE'LL HELP YOU!"
Before I had a chance to reply Bertha literally threw me to the ground outside the city gate. I struggled to get back on my feet. Once I did i turned to see the city gate firmly shut.
I stood and looked at the gate for a while.
"I suggest you take Constance's advice and find Sylgja." spoke an unknown voice.
I turned to look at the speaker, but there was nobody there. I brushed it off as my imagination. Until she spoke again.
"You won't see me. I'm not of physical form. I'm a Guardian spirit, you see. I’m all ethereal."I looked at my necklace. Madesi told me that the garnet was a Guardian Stone. It must have granted me the ability to speak to my guardian spirit. It was odd, but I was too angry to be freaked out.
I turned away from the city gate and looked in front of me. The landscape of the Rift looking mighty and open; all the possibilities waiting for me. But I didn't want possibilities. I wanted my old life back.
"But that's never going to happen.""... I know."
There was a moment of silence as I continued to stare at the mass of land. I'd never gone further than fort greenwall before. Whatever was waiting for me was going to be new. Terrifying. Exciting.
"What's your name?" I asked my guardian spirit.
"My name?" She said.
"My name is Alice."I didn't reply. I only smiled. Although my life was over, it had only just begun.
My only wish was that it could begin with Arthur at my side.
This post has been edited by Rihanae: Jul 27 2012, 04:17 PM