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| King Of Beasts |
 Dec 1 2012, 06:47 AM
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| Fiach |
Dec 9 2012, 08:27 PM
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Ooo I like how this story is starting to turn out, some interesting intrigue between the sons of Hircine and Bal :3
I wonder what they're fighting over... You have a pretty solid standard in your prose, and your dialogue does lend a lot to the characters, the only fault I can see is that I find who is saying what a bit confusing.. adding something as simple as 'whispered Rex' or 'said the Breton' would lend itself great to enhancing the story  Great work with this! Kudos with the regular updates, shall be following this |
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King Of Beasts Nuh uh :) Dec 1 2012, 07:06 AM mALX WOO HOO! I love this! Westley was truly ... Dec 1 2012, 07:10 AM
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WOO HOO! I love this! Westley was truly... Dec 1 2012, 07:14 AM mALX GAAAAH! You added to it - a werewolf! MO... Dec 1 2012, 07:19 AM King Of Beasts Can't delete a thread so gonna yeet this out o... Dec 1 2012, 10:29 PM King Of Beasts Adios :) Dec 1 2012, 10:39 PM Acadian Welcome to Westley the Werewolf and I'm glad t... Dec 3 2012, 01:14 AM mALX Oooh, nice transformation scene! Awesome descr... Dec 3 2012, 04:14 AM King Of Beasts Acadian: Thanks for reading and I'm glad you e... Dec 6 2012, 01:52 AM King Of Beasts Running out of things to say! Dec 6 2012, 03:23 AM Acadian Betrayed by Rex and rescued from a desperate fight... Dec 8 2012, 01:12 AM Elisabeth Hollow
Betrayed by Rex and rescued from a desperate figh... Dec 8 2012, 09:01 PM mALX I'm coming to read this tomorrow KOB, too tire... Dec 8 2012, 01:12 PM mALX *
LOVE the title of this chapter!! Woo,... Dec 8 2012, 10:38 PM King Of Beasts I fixed the format so it's easier to read... Dec 9 2012, 01:35 AM mALX
I fixed the format so it's easier to read... Dec 9 2012, 01:56 AM King Of Beasts Acadian: I really want to thank you for the constr... Dec 9 2012, 04:57 PM King Of Beasts ������... Dec 9 2012, 04:58 PM King Of Beasts Gosh diddly darn emojis are censored now Dec 9 2012, 05:32 PM King Of Beasts
the only fault I can see is that I find who is sa... Dec 9 2012, 10:37 PM Lycanthropic-Legend As a big fan of werewolves, I have to say I am lov... Dec 9 2012, 09:19 PM Acadian " No. You're not my boss, I'm not li... Dec 10 2012, 01:18 AM mALX Loved the dialogue in this chapter, had me rolling... Dec 10 2012, 07:08 AM King Of Beasts Fiach: thanks for reading. I'm Glad to know y... Dec 11 2012, 05:41 AM King Of Beasts We out here taking out the trash B) Dec 11 2012, 08:10 AM mALX *
Cattle prod ...SPEW!!!! ROFL ... Dec 11 2012, 11:14 PM King Of Beasts
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Cattle prod ...SPEW!!!! ROFL ... Dec 13 2012, 12:15 AM King Of Beasts mALX: Thanks for reading! I wonder where every... Dec 14 2012, 05:41 AM King Of Beasts No :) Dec 14 2012, 07:49 AM mALX
ROFL!!! I will try to keep up with... Dec 14 2012, 06:59 PM King Of Beasts I've rewritten the ending of this chapter beca... Dec 16 2012, 01:19 AM Acadian What a pair the two vampires make with all their a... Dec 17 2012, 01:19 AM King Of Beasts mALX: Thanks for the advice! I hadn't thou... Dec 18 2012, 01:07 AM King Of Beasts Absolute disgust B) Dec 18 2012, 02:48 AM King Of Beasts Wish I could delete threads I started Dec 18 2012, 03:02 AM Elisabeth Hollow SWEEEET, they're gonna go kick Vokun's but... Dec 18 2012, 05:46 PM mALX I loved both the Hircine screens/pictures - especi... Dec 18 2012, 06:02 PM Acadian That was a well-done meeting with Hircine. Im gl... Dec 18 2012, 07:58 PM King Of Beasts Elisabeth Hollow: Thanks for reading and congrats ... Dec 21 2012, 11:55 AM King Of Beasts Why is this so long Dec 21 2012, 01:39 PM Acadian " Please don't snap animals in half, I... Dec 22 2012, 12:37 AM Elisabeth Hollow Poor ben D: Dec 22 2012, 06:21 AM King Of Beasts Acadian: a 'Do Not Break The Bears sign'? ... Dec 25 2012, 11:00 PM King Of Beasts Hope this thread gets locked tbh Dec 26 2012, 02:05 AM Elisabeth Hollow Punch Vokun in the MOUTH. Dec 26 2012, 03:41 AM Acadian I was so busy watching everyone else that I didn... Dec 26 2012, 07:53 PM Elisabeth Hollow LOL Acadian! That's my solution to everyth... Dec 26 2012, 11:48 PM Grits Yep, Vokun is due for a thorough mouth-punching. ... Dec 27 2012, 03:24 PM Elisabeth Hollow
Yep, Vokun is due for a thorough mouth-punching. ... Dec 28 2012, 03:01 AM King Of Beasts Elisabeth Hollow: Evil vampire lord obsessed with ... Dec 28 2012, 08:58 PM King Of Beasts Adios post Dec 28 2012, 10:31 PM Acadian Ah, the quest for a shirt. :P
I imagine it was... Dec 29 2012, 03:11 PM Elisabeth Hollow There better be some gods-damned mouth punching so... Dec 29 2012, 06:27 PM King Of Beasts Get rid of this Dec 31 2012, 11:04 PM King Of Beasts Pls no ban idk how else to dispose of this Jan 1 2013, 07:09 AM mALX ** Reread from beginning to get back on track wit... Jan 1 2013, 10:21 PM Elisabeth Hollow The dead mouse bit made me laugh so hard...reminds... Jan 2 2013, 06:46 AM Acadian It was a great idea, and perfectly timed, to give ... Jan 2 2013, 03:34 PM King Of Beasts mALX: Welcome back, and I hope 2013 will be a bett... Jan 3 2013, 02:45 PM King Of Beasts Whys there 9 pages Jan 3 2013, 04:25 PM Elisabeth Hollow
Really, Hjalfi? REALLY?? Westley don't want ... Jan 4 2013, 05:45 AM mALX ** I hope you nabbed Glathir's keys and broke... Jan 4 2013, 09:22 AM Acadian I had to laugh at Imbel trying to groom Fjola for ... Jan 4 2013, 02:07 PM King Of Beasts Elisabeth Hollow: Hjalfi actually knows that Westl... Jan 7 2013, 09:12 PM mALX
Yes, this story is all part of my plan to destroy... Jan 7 2013, 10:28 PM King Of Beasts 2013 was a cursed time period Jan 7 2013, 10:51 PM Acadian That was quite the tooth and claw fight, but Im g... Jan 8 2013, 01:25 AM Elisabeth Hollow
Drama queen. Jan 8 2013, 02:35 AM King Of Beasts
Drama queen.
Lol. He's actually more like... Jan 10 2013, 02:51 AM mALX I loved the discussion about Hunting for Hircine... Jan 10 2013, 03:04 AM Elisabeth Hollow
I loved the discussion about Hunting for Hircine... Jan 10 2013, 05:12 AM King Of Beasts Acadian: It's a pretty bad idea to buy spell... Jan 11 2013, 12:11 AM Elisabeth Hollow Your story is giving me lots of entertainment :] I... Jan 11 2013, 12:49 AM King Of Beasts Perhaps I'll do something else in this section... Jan 11 2013, 01:47 AM mALX Cut back on salt if your blood pressure is up. Al... Jan 11 2013, 02:24 AM Elisabeth Hollow I am beginning to wonder what they're gonna do... Jan 11 2013, 04:07 AM Acadian A road trip! And wow, Westley almost drowned.... Jan 11 2013, 08:55 PM Elisabeth Hollow
Well, after getting the arguing vampires sorte... Jan 12 2013, 06:25 AM King Of Beasts mALX:
It's nice to know he actually has a pe... Jan 12 2013, 05:05 PM King Of Beasts Lock thread pls Jan 12 2013, 07:03 PM Elisabeth Hollow Hastrel is such a BABY lol Jan 12 2013, 09:04 PM Acadian Yes, those cave roots are amazing. Very tough, un... Jan 13 2013, 01:47 PM mALX What a cool twist with thinking Vokun had used sp... Jan 13 2013, 03:45 PM Grits
:lol: I love it! How funny that they got tang... Jan 14 2013, 07:43 PM King Of Beasts Yay, free time! I can post the next chapter :D... Jan 16 2013, 03:07 AM King Of Beasts Let's get rid of this illegal story Jan 16 2013, 03:09 AM King Of Beasts Oh, and if anyone can get me a screen of count Ski... Jan 16 2013, 03:25 AM mALX
Oh, and if anyone can get me a screen of count Sk... Jan 16 2013, 03:59 AM King Of Beasts Thanks mALX. Your help is appreciated :) Jan 16 2013, 04:05 AM Elisabeth Hollow At least Hassildor is on their side now! Jan 16 2013, 05:39 AM mALX Oh, I most def see Hassildor decking Hastrel befor... Jan 16 2013, 06:12 AM Acadian I enjoyed learning more about the vampires in West... Jan 16 2013, 03:46 PM King Of Beasts
I enjoyed learning more about the vampires in Wes... Jan 17 2013, 01:20 AM King Of Beasts Free time! This weekend is solely devoted to h... Jan 19 2013, 07:00 AM King Of Beasts Almost done Jan 19 2013, 07:01 AM Elisabeth Hollow
I literally threw my arms up in the air and shou... Jan 19 2013, 08:09 AM mALX This fight with Vokun had me in hysterics! Es... Jan 19 2013, 08:47 AM Acadian This continues to be a delightful romp across Cyro... Jan 19 2013, 08:05 PM |
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