Ooooh, excellent stuff!!!...
I do love the Gildergleam/Eldergleam quest...I think that Sanctuary (that in a strange coincidence, my Khajiit character only discovered this morning) is one of the most beautiful locations in the game...But, that's by the by as you haven't gotten there in the tale yet...Ooopsie...

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Aaaaamywho...
*Cough*...
Brilliant writing, loved that bit with Onmund and Kayla's worrying if she should leave him behind or take him as a follower...Loved it...
Another excellent chapter...
Nice one!!...
*Applauds heartily*...