Aftermath, When one crises ends, another shall rise Options

[King Of Beasts]

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This post has been edited by King Of Beasts: Jun 30 2018, 08:25 AM

[Acadian]

Ah, the quest for a shirt.

I imagine it was very difficult for Westley to return to The Imperial City in ruins. After all, as the Champion of Cyrodiil, he had not that long ago saved the Empire. And it seems Vokun has now exploited the vacumn to take control of the White Gold Tower.

‘I needed a new tactic. Throwing random stuff at the window obviously wasn't going to work.’
Yup. Good thinkin’.

’My fur was spiked straight up.’
After that wild escape and slide for life down the tower, I can imagine! This gave me a fleeting image of mALX's dear Maxical with her fur similarly spiked after a similar fright.

So Vokun still lives – with his mouth unpunched even. And now Hjalfi’s missing as well!

I did have a writing question for you. Why do you begin almost every bit of dialogue by putting a blank space between the opening quotation mark and the first word of dialogue? It would seem both easier and more correct to forego that convention. Just sayin’

This post has been edited by Acadian: Dec 29 2012, 03:14 PM