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I knew what I would do. “I’m going to find the man who attacked me and put a bullet through his brain. See how he likes it.”
If I remember correctly, that was exactly my attitude when starting out in Fallout: New Vegas. Though, admittedly, with the addendum of 'And get that sweet, sweet suit for myself.'
This is a great start, so far, and I'm looking forward to seeing where this goes; New Vegas is one of my favourite games, and I always love reading a good story set in the Mojave Wastelands. I'm loving the mixing up of game dialogue and your own stuff, by the way; I always find it a tad boring to read word-for-word rewrites of game dialogue, and it was a nice way to spice things up a little.